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Reviewer: MissMerlot Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 5:04 am Title: Chapter 1 - Cold

This is for Lorie...I meant C56 not C38, it's early in he UK!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 4:30 am Title: Chapter 55 - Devil Makes Work for Idle Hands...both Good and Bad

Looks like whatever Lindsay and Michael are up to is going to be messed by Claire.  Justin is getting sneaky where he conned Brian into going off with him.  Too cute.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2017 3:48 am Title: Chapter 54 - QPM, Notices and Them!

I'm so glad to see that Brian and Justin made up.  Also that Lindsay didn't get the money she'd squirreled away.  You are not going to let them get away with trying to ruin Justin's show I hope.



Author's Response:

Oh no, not by a long chalk.

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 55 - Devil Makes Work for Idle Hands...both Good and Bad

I need more, please write fast.

Lorie~



Author's Response:

Working on C38 write [see what I did there] now.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Kateeni Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 55 - Devil Makes Work for Idle Hands...both Good and Bad

I love this story.  I am wondering though, the trip to Maryland and The Inn at Perry...that wouldn't happen to be The Inn at Perry Cabin in St. Michaels would it?  That place is gorgeous and about a 20 minute drive from where I live in Easton, MD.....I was just curious, lol...saw the named and kinda did a happy dance...someplace I know in a B&J story 😎



Author's Response:

A new reviewer is always nice and I'm glad you're loving the story.  And yes that's the place, I always try and use real places in my stories...it really does look gorgeous and that fireplace outside.  Glad you're dancing!

Hope you keep reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 55 - Devil Makes Work for Idle Hands...both Good and Bad

TEd, you sly devil you. Well played!! :) Brian certainly didn't seem too put out by his little scheme mind you. Both B&J indulged in so pretty hot backseat sex.

Michael adn Lindsey's plans seem to be typical of them. Interested to see how far they get. contacting the caterers to get wedding dates etc is not that bad of and idea. No idea what they plan to do with the information once they get it mind you. As for the show, well, seems to me that at the very least Sydney would follow up with the gallery I would think and be able to get to the bottom of it. If not him at least someone would be able to figure out that the 2 idiots had something to do with it. they really aren't very smart are they. Wonder what legal actions Justin & Brian could take. Oh man....such fun times ahead. So may possibilities for angst.

Not, for Calire meeting up with Jennifer. Well, I was a bit concerned when I read they were talking. Wasn't sure we could trust Claire in all of this, however, seems like Claire's eyes are now wide open. With everything that she's told jennifer, I'm sure Lindsey is in for even more trouble. Claire is going to teach Lindsey a few important lessons. LOL!

cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 8:07 pm Title: Chapter 55 - Devil Makes Work for Idle Hands...both Good and Bad

Brian getting swept off his feet by his prince was delightful and just what they both needed to not feel so overwhelmed by the wedding plans and work.

Claire being in town and talking to Jennifer about Justin and clearing up all of Lindsay's lies is going to make Lindsay wish she had left town.

Mel put both the Whiny Brats in their place about Gus and Jenny who are moving on without them with the family they want.

When Slick finds out what they are up to they are going to wish for a plane to get them out of town quickly.

I can't wait for the next chapter I hope someone figures out what the Dumbass Duo are up to so they can plan accordingly :) 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2017 7:54 pm Title: Chapter 54 - QPM, Notices and Them!

Glad to see that B&J are able to work out their little tantrum maturely and so quickly. I get Justin's frustrations with what was going on. Too bad Brian got the brunt end of it, adn of course had to beak off too. typical behavior for both of them. I'd probably do teh same thing. lol. Their affection and more importantly their respect for each other is so great, that something as simple as a slight queen out won't do any harm at all. If nothing else, it get the "make up sex" even better! ;)

So the dimwhitted duo are coming up with yet another plan. Unfortuately, they are actually thinking and planning this scheme out, not just going off half cocked. I can't see them getting too far in it, but any shit they cause I know will come back on them ten fold. No doubt their plans will inevitably go tits up, but watching that happen as always will be entertaining.

Mel...I have to say I was in stiches reading that part. "How was prison?" Fuck me that was funny! LOL!!! then nailing Lindsey about the secondary account. HA! She's got nuthin' now! Beautiful!!

Not surpised that Gus and Jenny now want nothing to do with her anymore. She's brought it all on herself, however, will no doubt fight this tooth and nail. Her usual MO and of course blame everyone else for everything that goes wrong in her life. Oh woe is me.... Pffffffffft whatever bith.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 6:40 am Title: Chapter 53 - Apology, Notice, Trouble and Surprises

Back to crying my eyes out here.

~Lorie

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 5:35 am Title: Chapter 51 - Permission, Celebration and Disclosure

Love it.

~Lorie

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 4:54 am Title: Chapter 50 - Rules, Portrait, Prison 'Break' and Brook Benton*

Beautiful chapter.

~Lorie

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 4:40 am Title: Chapter 49 - Confusion, Cessation and Confession

Just imagining the weasel dressed as Justin is hysterical. Great story.

~Lorie

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 3:06 am Title: Chapter 54 - QPM, Notices and Them!

Yeah that was a bad Queen Out for both of them but in the end they came to each eventually to heal the hurt, mend the pain and get to the root of the problem so they could deal with it and move on, yeah with these two their will be more QPMS but they are strong enough to get through it as long as they remember to listen and communicate :)

Now as for GoldieBitch and Whiny Brat Bear them trying to sabotage Justin's show and Sydney Bloom should hopefully go splat like a wet towel, they are so arrogant that it never even occurred to them that Emmett would be the one catering Brian and Justin's wedding <SMH>

Lindsay really should have planned hiding her money better didn't Mommy  teach her how to be sneaky? lol

Michael and Lindsay really shouldn't be shocked by Gus and Jenny's reactions their first thought when getting out was Brian not their children, Gus and Jenny didn't even register on their radar they just rushed down to Liberty Avenue to be near Brian they needed a hit of their favorite drug, even after being out for days their main focus is still Brian and only Brian.

Michael and Lindsay will whine about not seeing their kids for about a minute then back to their evil plotting.

Looking forward to more :)

 

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 2:49 am Title: Chapter 48 - Bad Idea

Hilarious.

~Lorie

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 2:30 am Title: Chapter 47 - Hoisted by their own Petard

LMFAO at what the bitch did to the weasel. 

Great job.

~Lorie

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 1:21 am Title: Chapter 46 - Cracking

Happy, funny chapter. 

~Lorie

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 1:02 am Title: Chapter 45 - Twinkle

More crying.

Still loving the story.

~Lorie

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2017 12:00 am Title: Chapter 44 - Resolution and Realisation

Okay, after three chapters of crying stuff, could you put up 'tissue warnings' when needed. 

LOVE Justin getting in the last comment before shutting off the screen. Best SACRIFICE ever.

Great job.

~Lorie

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2017 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 43 - Talking and Coventry

Loving this story. More tears, of course.

~Lorie

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2017 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 42 - Broken Record and Just 'Broken'

So good. I was In tears reading this. First about Twinkle being so scared and then Brian and Justin and the broken condom. Great Chapter.

~Lorie

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2017 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 53 - Apology, Notice, Trouble and Surprises

That was very sweet.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2017 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 53 - Apology, Notice, Trouble and Surprises

What a wonderful chapter.  Lindsay is fast losing faith with Michael.  But the best part is Twinkle and how everyone feels for him and now he and Grim are getting married.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2017 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 53 - Apology, Notice, Trouble and Surprises

I love Grim and Twinkle!!!

and yes I totally agree about Justin and seeing Brian dancing!!!! it is totally coming!

Can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2017 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 53 - Apology, Notice, Trouble and Surprises

Michael should consider himself extremely lucky. He got off easy with Grim and the rest. At least Lindsey understood the possible ramifications and warned him. He didn't listen or understand mind you. His mouth is bigger than his brain as usual. Naturally he tries to get to Brian. His level of stupidity is something that legends are made of. (grateful for it as it's just so freaking amusing!) Slick is finally able to kick them out. Now where are they going to live I wonder...perhaps a hostel somewhere? Perhaps in Greenland? ;) I guess that money is from the sale of the comic. Loved Slicks reaction...that will be a great source of amusement for everyone I'm sure. 

Grim's evening for Twinkle was adorable!! and teh proposal..so heart warning. Big tough guy on teh outside, a big mound of fluff in the inside when it comes to his Twinkle. Like I said, Michael got of lucky! 

cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2017 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 53 - Apology, Notice, Trouble and Surprises

Michael's mouth is writing a check Lindsay's flat Ass can't cash, they both got off lucky with Grim and all he wanted was just a written apology cause he could have gotten them sent back to prison for that threat against Twinkle, Michael must miss the swirlies because he obviously wants to get sent back.

Lindsay must think Slick is an idiot!

No way in Hell is she leaving her info for Lindsay to snoop through and use whatever the mood hits her, Lindsay should be more worried about Brian's anger and how much money she has left?

Slick is waiting for just the right moment to let Michael know what Lindsay did with his comic book that reveal is going to be Hilarious!

Grim and Twinkle are getting Married!! I am so happy for them!

Brian really does know Slick well now she and Daphne will look just as good as the grooms lol

The next should be very interesting :)

 

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