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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 7:59 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Realisation

Oh no, Michael missed the big news!

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Date: Mar 02, 2017 6:40 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Disingenuous

Justin finally meets Gus and they seem to get along.

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Date: Mar 02, 2017 5:21 am Title: Chapter 10 - Disapproval

Drama is bubbling and Lindsey is just waiting to put more pressure.

I love the relationship you created with Brian and Emmett: still some pocking, but it's more teasing than before.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2017 12:29 am Title: Chapter 62 - Tease, Taste and Tell

It's great that Claire is getting a second chance to better her life and that Emmett is willing to give it to her.

Michael and Lindsay took all their chances and flushed them down the toilet, yet they still expect to be given more just because they're Brian's Best Friends and know him better than anyone.

Hell even the judge gave them a second chance and they took it and threw it back in the judge's face by trying to sabotage Justin, Slick and ruin the wedding.

Stupid only gets so many chances before they are kicked to the curb for insulting the word stupid.

Michael was warned the truck would be moved I don't know why he is acting all surprised, he might want to go check his stuff is still there and add a new place he can be a nuisance.

Can't wait for the remodel to be done so Michael's head can swell up right before it explodes lol

Reviewer: Lorie Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 62 - Tease, Taste and Tell

Please write fast. Can't wait to see what the idiot duo do next.

~Lorie

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Defence

What a nightmare for Ben to live with this obnoxious bug. How could he embarrass himself and his entourage like this?

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Date: Mar 01, 2017 8:15 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Mixing

Mel must be patient as Lindsey won't back down until Jenny asks her father to forgive her, which she won't. And Britin isn't for the leeches!

Idaho should try to read between the lines...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 7:27 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Meeting

A great mix of fun and mean things. Justin is meeting the gang and is starting to build some strong relationships. Micheal is starting to understand that Justin is in for long.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 7:01 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Truth

It's nice to have them discovering each other slowly, but surely.

I can't wait to see how Brian will react to the gossip Michael started.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 6:56 pm Title: Chapter 62 - Tease, Taste and Tell

I am loving how the gang is always manipulating situations so the stupid twins "overhear" stuff. It's a great source of entertainment. they have these two by the short and curlys, and they have no idea that they are being lead around by the nose. LMAO!! that Slick owns the impound yard is even funnier. That Lindsey in particular is in panic mode is funny too. Oh the visuals I have running through my head...again...LMFAO!

Kyle and Brandon huh? Ooooooooooh Me like! Nice paring and Kyle deserves this! He's really turned his life around.

Twinkle and Grim and so incredibly cute! 

Also liking how the gang is giving Claire a chance. She's getting a new lease on life. she's proving herself a good addition.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Foundations

It's a good thing Michael is banned form Slick's buildings.

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Date: Mar 01, 2017 6:30 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Contact

I agree with Slick, Emmett just wants Brian and any other of his friends to be happy. He really is a good person and a true friend.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Warm

Some interesting facts here and also some funny exchanges between Brian and Justin. They are both "damaged goods" and they are sharing intimate things without sexual theme yet.

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 5:18 pm Title: Chapter 62 - Tease, Taste and Tell

I love the way Slick has the Dastardly Duo dancing on her strings. She is like a spider in an ever growing web. And still Blondy and Whiney are not aware of how far Slick's strings reach. 

Grim and Twinkle: Awww they are so adorable.

Claire getting a second chance. Go girl, you deserved it.

And the new couple on the block? Kyle and Brandon: hot, hot, hot.

Eagerly awaiting the next update.

Love you with hot fudge and whipped cream on top. 

XOXO

Meriam

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 3:44 pm Title: Chapter 62 - Tease, Taste and Tell

Loved how they are messing with the twin asshat. ..And is there anything else that Slick doesn't own??

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 62 - Tease, Taste and Tell

Kyle is doing a fine job and he got his reward.  Claire is also having her fun and getting a second chance.  Grim and Twinkle are too cute.  Slick must be worth millions.  Michael should be hyperventalating with his truck missing.  Brian and Justin are just happy.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2017 12:32 am Title: Chapter 61 - Denial, Tasting, Emmy's Machinations and Now They Begin

Claire and Slick are very good they have Michael and Lindsay on a string and the two idiots are dancing.

I hope Kyle and Brandon make a go of it they seem like they would be great together.

Michael is going to be so hurt when he finds out he will have to find somewhere else to sleep.

Perhaps whatever Michael had in prison with him he should keep close since he is on his way back there soon :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2017 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Faint

Immediate attraction, with little and soft first contacts.

Funny how Justin thinks aloud. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2017 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Cold

Hilarious this ending!!!

The rest is very promising.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2017 2:28 pm Title: Chapter 61 - Denial, Tasting, Emmy's Machinations and Now They Begin

Oooh I'm so loving every minute and chapter of this one...

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2017 2:09 pm Title: Chapter 61 - Denial, Tasting, Emmy's Machinations and Now They Begin

My goodness.  I can't wait to see when Michael gets back to the decorated apartment and finds his room is an office.  So Brandon and Kyle are a couple?  Lindsay is the practical one but I can't wait for Claire to stick it to her.

Reviewer: April_Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2017 7:20 am Title: Chapter 60 - Babylon, Suspicions, Howdy Neighbour and Voyeurism

Can't stop laughing from the stupidness of those two😅😅😅That's what you called a bachelor party,totally a blast...!!!💥💥💥

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 60 - Babylon, Suspicions, Howdy Neighbour and Voyeurism

I nearly threw up in my mouth a bit at the internal visual I had of Michael in the thong and mesh top. Can we all just say Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew!! Pretty sure Lindsey had teh same reaction as well. lol. Ugh...

The idea of having Justin upstairs! Hilarious! Omgoodness. that is going to be torture for M&L! Going to be most entertaining trying to not cross paths. I almost have an old black adn white silent movie style going through my head. ;) 

The entire scene at Babylon was great! Again, very entertaining. I love how I can visualize everything in my head when you write it. Michael is being his tyical suspicious self. rightfully so  mind you, but that's besides the point. Lindsey is to the point of having had enough of it. His behavior is going to get them into even more hot water I'd imagine. But...the piece de resisence...being cast as Grim and Twinkle's subs...BWAHAHAHAHA! and the whole mix up. then, on top of it all, getting put in their places by Claire. My she covers herself well doesn't she.

Last but not least...Michael listening in on B&J. Ugh! at least he was called on that as well.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 1:41 am Title: Chapter 60 - Babylon, Suspicions, Howdy Neighbour and Voyeurism

Ewwww Michael was getting off on listening to Brian and Justin have sex!!

Disgusting Little Troll!!!

Ha! I love that they were humiliated at Grim and Twinkle's Stag-Do Michael and Lindsay are so stupid they make termites look like geniuses.

I bet everyone was cracking up at their humiliation and their outfits.

Claire is very good at playing Michael and Lindsay off each other I especially like when she makes both of them look very foolish.

Slick taking the upstairs apartment and turning it into a studio for Justin is a good idea simply because it will drive them crazy to have to leave and not come back until Justin is gone, but knowing that Justin is up there creating masterpieces will drive Lindsay completely batty :)

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2017 1:38 am Title: Chapter 60 - Babylon, Suspicions, Howdy Neighbour and Voyeurism

Looks like Grim and his twink had a fabulous batchlor party.  Now Justin has his studio and a place for Brian over the gruesome twosomes apartment.  Can't wait to find out what you have planned.

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