Date: Mar 06, 2017 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 64 - Neighbourhood Watched
Michae lis still trying to mess with the wedding. He'll continue to hit road blocks at every turn I'm sure. wondering just what else Michael "Norris" is up to. How many more tiems will we come across this name. good thing claire was able to overhear that particular conversation. Clair is a hoot! Am really enjoying her character. I really liked how she gave the cold hard truth to Deb. She really laid it out there. Thankfully Deb accepted it, espeically since slick had told her the same thing.
Claire is so mischevious! So looking forward to all her schemes comign to fruition with the dumbass duo. their time on Shadyside is goong to be hilarious if the first few minutes were any indication. Claire's friends are obviously in on it as well. I nearly died laughing at Terez's interactions with Michael!!! Oh man alive. Too bloody funny! MEanwhile she's actually getting involved with Claire. Oh the plans those 2 can make dyring their down time should be fun!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Especially when you find out a bit more about Sandrine...
Happy reading.
Nicole
Date: Mar 06, 2017 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 31 - When?
These puppies are to die for! Even Cynthia is falling. It was funny to read how she suggested they were put in the break room and be watched by Kinnetik workers.
As for the last part, I have an idea how Craig was able to find Justin; how mean can he be; mean isn't strong enough; I hope he will get some payback soon!
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2017 12:59 am Title: Chapter 64 - Neighbourhood Watched
Claire You Wicked Woman!! lol
I do believe Michael and Lindsay are going to love being in Shadyside they already have new acquaintances in Sandrine and Terez who are going to enjoy making them both so welcomed.
By the time their stay is up no one is going to want them to leave, bet all the neighbors will be standing on the lawn chanting that they never leave because they have been a joy to be around. (That Hurt my side to write because I was laughing so hard :))
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)
Date: Mar 05, 2017 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Bears
Ha ha ha, Baloo and Bagheera: genious names for dogs!
Date: Mar 05, 2017 7:54 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Unashamed
Brian daring say loudly that Justin topped him is quite amazing. I loved Brandon trying to get his turn too.
Daphne to the rescue is always funny to read.
Slick has some ways to get Justin back on earth.
Date: Mar 05, 2017 7:17 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Unwanted/Wanted
So many things are happening in this chapter!
Drunken Mel is funny, even if it was not entirely real.
Another treason from Lindsey and Micheal and this one hurt Bran more than the previous one. Happy that Justin didn't let him shutdown. At least, Brian has ammunition for his petition.
The silly part was silly and Brian did let himself go and that was the goal.
As for the end, it was not fake, and really hot, short, but it was quite obvious they wouldn't last. Can't wait for the next time!
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2017 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 64 - Neighbourhood Watched
New characters for you to play with. This keeps getting better and better.
Date: Mar 05, 2017 1:04 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Idiocy
Ha ha ha, Daphne and Hunter playing peekaboo and Micheal thinks she's with Ben!
Molly and Jenny together are something interesting. They are both sharp and smart.
I thought in a previous chapter that Justin topped Brian, but it was a fake to get to Michael?
Author's Response:
Yes it was fake to get Michael and boy did they get him! So glad you are reading
MissMerlot
Author's Response:
Yes it was fake to get Michael and boy did they get him! So glad you are reading
MissMerlot
Date: Mar 05, 2017 8:02 am Title: Chapter 26 - Showing
The way you describe Brian relationship with Lindsay and Michael is interesting: they are happy when he does what they want, but can't be when he does what makes him happy.
Slick is making her way into Michael and Lindsay's life and it won't be pretty.
Gus is really smart to escape the way he did.
Date: Mar 04, 2017 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Focus!
So many hot arguments here! And not in a life affirming way...
The eviction of the Dynamic Evil Duo has begun.
Date: Mar 04, 2017 9:11 pm Title: Chapter 24 - What?!
Bravo Mel!!! Well done!
Only Brian could get topped just before the rest of the family arrived.
Date: Mar 04, 2017 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Genuflection
Mel is going to have to step up very soon or the dynamic evil duo will continue to push his way to Britin.
I love how she is nice to Brian; maybe she understands that he isn't a bad person.
Date: Mar 04, 2017 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Passion
Poor Daphne, I hope she didn't try to erase what she had seen in the backroom.
Jenny must be so happy to have replied to Lindsay's phone; at least, she knows what Michael thinks of Justin and Slick, if she had any doubt.
Date: Mar 04, 2017 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Dance
The family is expending with interesting people.
I loved Daphne's comment (beginning of) about the backroom... I bet she has memories for her old days!
Date: Mar 04, 2017 4:05 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Nerves
I would have love to see a video of Craig being put down by Daphne and Jennifer. It must have been entertaining!
Slick just knows how to irritate Michael and she's loving every minute of it.
Date: Mar 04, 2017 3:53 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Home
Ben is so right to block Michael from his house.
So happy Brian and Justin finally took another step forward.
Molly and Justin's reunion: I bet he doesn't think anymore she's a bacteria he would get rid off.
Date: Mar 04, 2017 6:41 am Title: Chapter 18 - Soothe
I love how Hunter puts Michael down with vocabulary!
Date: Mar 03, 2017 9:36 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Truth
Oh the treatment Craig received!!! It was so good and so deserved.
As for the treatment Brian received, it was a new step that will lead to the first time...
Poor Ben; he was quietly eating when the Whiner struck one more time; luckily, Ben called Brian.
Date: Mar 03, 2017 5:37 am Title: Chapter 16 - Remembering
Go for it Ben, get him what you need to hear!
Slick has such a way with the boys. I hope Brian will see the light and drop the boxer!
Date: Mar 03, 2017 5:11 am Title: Chapter 15 - Painful
The big reveal and one key question: will Michael dare to answer?
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2017 12:28 am Title: Chapter 63 - And You Are Out
Michael and Lindsay have hopped out of the frying pan and into the fryer they are walking on eggshells with everyone on Liberty Avenue, I don't see the next two months at Claire's sister 's place as a reprieve they think it will be.
Yeah Claire will be working under Emmett this should go a long way to improving her chances of not being a repeat offender.
Justin is moving further up in the art world while Lindsay can't get anyone to sneeze on her drawings, I wonder if she and Michael plan on attending the showing in New York?
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 63 - And You Are Out
I should be working on my writing, but I'm reading this and need more. This is great.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Aww thank you!
- Nicole
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 63 - And You Are Out
Oh no. They got a 2 month repreive? I'm kinda lost. Where is Claire going to be living now?
Author's Response:
She's going to be staying with either Debs or Emmy. This was a ruse by Claire and Slick to get them out of the apartment and not have them suspect Claire like Michael is. And that reprieve isn't as great as they think...
Hope that clarifies things.
MissMerlot
Date: Mar 02, 2017 9:43 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Reunion
Poor Brian, he should buy a bunch of underwear since he is going to make some damages with Justin.
The lionesses are in full protective mode!
Date: Mar 02, 2017 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Disbelief
Yeah, Daphne is here!!!
Michael will have a stroke when he will discover why Justin is in NY with Brian. Justin might have one too when he sees his ladies.