Date: Mar 11, 2017 10:23 am Title: Chapter 42 - Broken Record and Just 'Broken'
What a chapter!
Ethan's plan went to the drain. Craig got what he deserved.
The letters of apology were not remorseful at all. The cabin is becoming a key place for Brian. And what happens in the cabin stays in the cabin.
Date: Mar 11, 2017 3:07 am Title: Chapter 24 - What?!
That was quick and decisive of Mel - I didn't see it coming, not that quickly or acutely. Awesome!
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2017 2:02 am Title: Chapter 66 - Pot-Stirrers over Pot-Stickers
My my what are you up too?? Sooo Love this story
Author's Response:
Kicking the M&L entitlement express into the buffers. I hope you enjoy the rest. So much mendacity to come!
MissMerlot
Date: Mar 11, 2017 1:19 am Title: Chapter 66 - Pot-Stirrers over Pot-Stickers
Sandrine and Terez are EVIL but if they were to join forces with Slick sooner they would have been Unstoppable lol
I love the fact that Lindsay's green eyed monster comes out every time Terez is all over Michael, I swear if she wants Michael she had many opportunities to let Michael All Up In It!! ( I just threw up in my mouth)
Dinner was fantastic I especially liked when Justin was introduced as the artist who could help Lindsay with her doodles rofl
I wonder what Catherine and France going to do to Lindsay and Michael though I did enjoy Catherine saying Michael could continue his fun with Terez at her place.
The nerve of Michael and Lindsay trying to treat Emmett like he was the help I hope they enjoy the payback when they next come to the diner.
I so want to know what happened the next day and how Ben takes care of Michael's greedy Ass, it does seem weird that both of them have a bottomless bank account??
How is that possible considerin how much they owe and how much they spend???????
Loved this chapter, so needed to laugh :)
Date: Mar 11, 2017 12:21 am Title: Chapter 15 - Painful
“True. You see this is why I can talk to you about Brian. We know him better than most. We’ve got that history that binds us together.”
Perfect Mikey-logic voice. And now Ben is going to hold his feet to the fire. :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2017 12:19 am Title: Chapter 66 - Pot-Stirrers over Pot-Stickers
Lord a mercy. Just what is going on. Michael and Lindsay overreaching themselves by helping theirselves to somebody else's wine. Michael and his big mouth saying things that should have gotten him smacked. Can't wait to find out what you have planned.
Date: Mar 11, 2017 12:14 am Title: Chapter 66 - Pot-Stirrers over Pot-Stickers
Oh my sweet Lord,
Such an evil, wicked but extremely hilarious chapter.
First there is Terez in her wiggle dress for I guess that is what she was wearing. From the way you describe her she's a latina pin-up girl. I've seen and worn wiggle dresses and know how tight they can be but to actually creak while worn it must be a very tight fit. The disaproving look of Lindsay towards Mickey not being able to keep his eyes of the infamous cleavage is dripping with envy. Can't wait to see how Mickey is going to escape from Terez's exquisite torture. Her and Claire? The dastardly devious dames. What's not to love about them.
And then that dinner!! OMG you wicked woman! All Lindsay's and Mickey's enemies all in one room? I was howling with laughter all through that scene. I will defenitely need to reread this one again and again.
And there is more to come? Please, please, pretty please make it soon. Can't wait to see how this ends. (guessing in tears of laughter)
Thank you for making my sides and my stomach hurt with laughter.
XOXO
Meriam
Date: Mar 10, 2017 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 66 - Pot-Stirrers over Pot-Stickers
Aaaaaamazing chapter! And so lovely and long! Thank you.
Nearly peed myself reading about the dinner. Dear lord that was hilarious! Loved the parts when Emmet, Justen etc were able to escape for a gigglefest in the kitchen.
Terez, well f me. She is a riot! Michael must be dying! will he switch? Realize he's bi? I'm trying to wrap my head around that.
Brian...BNM. LMFAO! only way to keep a straight face.
Introdicing Justin to Lindsey as someone who could possibly help her. France's comment about her maturity...
That whole part. (pardon my french here) Absofuckinglutely fucking hilarious! Seriously..stitches here!!!!
Michael is still trying to make excuses. Still trying to get out of paying anybody anything. Still getting pissed because nobody will talk to him and assuming they should. He really is such a stupid stupid man.
To say I loved this chapter is an understatment.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 10, 2017 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Truth
For me, I have a lot of trouble sometimes getting into OC's and keeping them straight, so-to-speak. I really like Slick - I don't have any trouble envisioning her - great work!
And wine-kisses?! Oh, my...
Date: Mar 10, 2017 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Contact
“Dish!” I demand and fold myself into her couch. “I want to know everything and I swear I will try and keep it quiet.”
Perfect Emmett - yay! You make everyone else love him also.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Faint
Hey there, Nicole! I'm just beginning this epic of yours, and I'm snagged from the outset. I just *love* that first kiss scene - I don't know when I've been moved more. I'm looking forward to the journey!
Author's Response:
Hey there! Nice to see you! It was tprather sweet wasn't it. Hope you enjoy as it goes on. Nicole xx
Date: Mar 10, 2017 5:30 am Title: Chapter 41 - Afterthoughts and Machination
Justin is still blushing and embarrassed so easily! And Brian is not helping at all!
Ethan verbally bashed by Kiki was funny.
So happy Brian wants Justin in Gus' life.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 5:11 am Title: Chapter 40 - Twitterpated and Trouble
Dumber strikes again: now his precious comic is worth nothing.
Justin can be so easy to read sometimes!
Ethan still in "love"... Eww!
Date: Mar 09, 2017 8:50 pm Title: Chapter 65 - A Small World
Is anyone else squicked out by Terez interactions with Michael? LOL. I know she's doing it on purpose...the imagery is.....a bit disturbing! LOL. Mind you, anyone flirting or coming on to Michael is disturbing don't you think? ;) Lindsey is acting a bit strangely though. Is she thinking that Terez should be paying attention to her? or that Terez is taking Michael's attention away from her?? who exactly is she jealous of I wonder?
Have to say, I'm getting great enjoyment out of Terez's and Sandrine's schemes!
Wow! so, Twinkle is a Wasp huh?! Did not see that coming!! Interesting twist!!
Lindsey and Michael are going to come to blows at this rate! Such fun!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 09, 2017 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 39 - Consequences
The end was kinky!
Michael dares saying he was hurt by Hunter first; he is in for another suit, which he can't win.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 4:27 pm Title: Chapter 65 - A Small World
From being comrads in arms to being each other worst enemies: The story of Lindsay and Michael. Can't wait to see who delivers the first punch. I guess it will be Mickey when he realises he can't get to his precious toys.
And Brian and Justin: they have to be the reason there is global warming! Those two are way beyond hot....
Thanx for sharing!
Looking forward to the next update.
XOXO
Meriam
Author's Response:
Welcome darling girl.
Happy reading.
Nicole xxx
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 2:44 pm Title: Chapter 65 - A Small World
Justin appears to be having a great time. Lindsay and Michael not so much.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 5:52 am Title: Chapter 65 - A Small World
You know for a gay man Michael is totally fascinated by Terez's tits!! lol
And Lindsay is green with envy because Michael isn't gazing at her tits the way he is at Terez's, well maybe if she had some he would stare at them all day and give her ego a boost?? rofl
Sandrine getting Lindsay up and jogging is good perhaps it will help her flat Ass?
I was expecting her to hulk out any moment and start smashing buildings the way her Green-Eyed monster was behaving.
Sandrine and Terez are going to have fun putting these two brats in their place, can't wait for the welcome party on Thursday bet it is going to be a hoot.
Lindsay is punishing Michael in her own way for his stupid actions and his whining, I just hope they don't destroy Claire's sister's house before they are tossed on their Asses.
Brian and his surprises got slightly one upped by Justin and dinner which sounded delicious and sinful at the same time lol
Those Two Are The Reason The Polar Ice Caps Are Melting!!! <fans self> WOW!!!
Really Enjoyed This Chapter :)
Date: Mar 09, 2017 5:14 am Title: Chapter 38 - Showdown
Emmett and Hunter are so much fun!
Brian is so relax, but still sharp with his repartee.
Date: Mar 08, 2017 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 37 - Stupidity, Love and Lust
Ha ha ha, Ethan in love with Craig! I want to see the face of Craid if Ethan dares telling him how he feels!
Kyle and Slick are so in synch to trash the evil duo.
So happy Mel is doing the right thing for once!
Date: Mar 08, 2017 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Protection
Ah, Brian's feet... He was always bare feet in his loft and it was always a great pleasure to watch.
Ethan working for Craig: that's surprising; a fag with a homophobe; can't wait to see what you have for him in the future.
Finally, Dumb and Dumber are arrested and in front of the Liberty family! Poor kids; even with an explanation, it must be difficult to digest to see parents taken.
Date: Mar 08, 2017 8:07 pm Title: Chapter 35 - Reality Bites
This is so good! I don't know if it's a real thing as the law in general is a black box, especially the US law, but I hope this kind of protection exists.
Date: Mar 08, 2017 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 34 - Fall Out
The horny octopus!!! Hilarious!
So happy they are filling against Craig and the evil duo.
Date: Mar 08, 2017 5:11 am Title: Chapter 33 - Honesty and Payback
Kapow!!! Take that leech!
Daphne and Hunter never miss an occasion to bash them.
Date: Mar 06, 2017 9:46 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Repercussions
Brian and Justin's relationship is building strongly with lots of fun and trust.
Gus is a very nice kid.