Date: Mar 20, 2017 6:23 pm Title: Chapter 72 - The Artistic Touch, Saying Goodbye and the Truth is Out
Have to roll my eyes at Michael's assumed self importance. Really?? Offering to Casper his "knowledge" of comics? AS if Casper needs assistance in writing comics. sheesh!
That scene in the cemetary...gut wrenching! cleansing as well, but my heart was breaking for them both. thankfully they have the love and support of family. I love Carl more and more all the time!
Had to laugh at how Michael finally found out the reason behind all the "Thank-you's" Mind you, so does Lindsey. Their plan to go to New York is going to flop BIG TIME! lol. Can't wait. They get carted off again I'm assuming. Love it!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 19, 2017 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 64 - Neighbourhood Watched
Ha ha ha, Michael in straight WASP conversion therapy with a bumpy nympho who is gay! That sounds very promising.
As for Lindsay, she will have to sleep in a room with Justin's paintings: she's going to have some nightmares or wet dreams ... especially if the paintings are about Brian.
Date: Mar 19, 2017 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 63 - And You Are Out
Michael is too dumb to go and buy some clothes! I bet he can't wait to put his "twink" outfit. He will have to get them first.
Or maybe he won't if the police find some weird things in his truck.
Date: Mar 19, 2017 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 62 - Tease, Taste and Tell
Slick also owns the impound? That sounds like another fun step for Michael if he wants to get his stuff back.
Date: Mar 19, 2017 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 61 - Denial, Tasting, Emmy's Machinations and Now They Begin
I loved the boys helping Deb while Michael did nothing to help. This was also very funny: "A leather bear sighs. “Our table is next. Don’t rush Kiki!”"
Too bad they missed the punishment cages; it would have been fun to read! Yet, it was hilarious just the way they had to go without the masks.
Brian's laugh is rare, but what a treat!!!
I bet the truck belongs to Michael.
Date: Mar 19, 2017 4:22 pm Title: Chapter 60 - Babylon, Suspicions, Howdy Neighbour and Voyeurism
Brain bleach please!!! Michael and Lindsay at Babylon is a traumatic image for my imagination, but so hilarious! As the butler-subs idea. How do you come up with such ideas? Excellent!
Date: Mar 19, 2017 2:40 pm Title: Chapter 59 - The Con, The Warden and A Night at the Opera
Kinky the night at the Opera!
Author's Response:
At the risk of sounding impatient...read faster!
Happy reading still!
MissMerlot
Date: Mar 19, 2017 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 58 - Dumbass No 2 Envy? Really? and Sunday Bloody Sunday!
Ha, take that Michael, your stupid plan exploded in your face!
Date: Mar 19, 2017 7:47 am Title: Chapter 57 - Junior B-Squad Go-Go-Go and Dumbass No 1 Stop-Stop-Stop!
Daphne is too much fun! She has the best ideas to mess with Michael!
Even the youngest are scheming for the good cause.
Author's Response:
Oh I can't wait for you to read Chapters 63-67 if you think she's fun, wait till you meet....
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Mar 19, 2017 6:45 am Title: Chapter 56 - Happiness and Sabotage
This squad is to die for!
[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2017 12:12 am Title: Chapter 72 - The Artistic Touch, Saying Goodbye and the Truth is Out
LOVE LOVE
[Report This]Date: Mar 18, 2017 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 72 - The Artistic Touch, Saying Goodbye and the Truth is Out
Michael and Lindsay must really want to go back to prison for a longer stay this new stunt pretty much guarantees that they will be there soon.
New York is going to be so interesting :)
Date: Mar 18, 2017 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 72 - The Artistic Touch, Saying Goodbye and the Truth is Out
Two offenses means real jail time right? Hope, hope, hope...
Author's Response:
Well the judge said if they committed a crime whilst on parole they would serve the rest of their original sentence plus whatever on top...question is are they going to coattail on Slick and if they do think she won't notice and if she does will do squat?
[Report This]Date: Mar 18, 2017 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 71 - Thank You
Michael is just making friends wherever he goes smh
So Terez is giving Michael the silent treatment which he doesn't like but Lindsay enjoys, I get the feeling Michael is going to wish he had been a lunch nicer to Terez and Lindsay is going to wish she had kept her mouth shut.
I think everyone in the squad thanking Michael is going to drive him crazy.
Lindsay plans on sabotaging Justin being at MoMA? Can't Wait For That To Go Splat!
I can't wait for New York and everything else that follows :)
Date: Mar 18, 2017 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 71 - Thank You
Lol this was great thank you. As always I love when Mikey or Lindsey get it. Till next chapter.
Date: Mar 18, 2017 1:01 pm Title: Chapter 71 - Thank You
Hahaha it must be hell thinking about all those people thanking you for something you don't even know..
[Report This]Date: Mar 17, 2017 3:32 am Title: Chapter 70 - Decisions, Announcements and Honesty
Sidney's comments to Lindsay were perfect.
Brian and Justin's interlude was hot.
weasel is the skanky bitch, not Slick.
Great writing.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Seriously that from you = happy dancing.
MissMerlot
Date: Mar 16, 2017 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 55 - Devil Makes Work for Idle Hands...both Good and Bad
Mel is as strong as Deb: she keeps pushing Lindsey every time she lies.
And now, Claire is also after her; and maybe soon, the WASP community will know what she has done.
Author's Response:
Oh you are going to love the WASP stings in the following chapters...
Date: Mar 16, 2017 9:55 pm Title: Chapter 70 - Decisions, Announcements and Honesty
Sidney's tongue lashing was EPIC! that's the type of thing you wish you had popcorn and a front seat to! And what the hell is she up to? Hasn't she figured out by now that all her schemes end in utter disaster? Michael's too for that matter?
I don't think I even have words for what Michael said to Hunter. Glad Robin was there to hear it. thrilled that everyone else knows now too.
Davina was a wonder! I had to laugh when Michael was buying some of his own stuff. LOL...he thought he wsa doubling up HAHAHA!
cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 16, 2017 9:41 pm Title: Chapter 69 - Rights, Ripeness and Recognition
HAve to admit, Mel was pretty funny with the whole good news bad news.
LO!! Lindsey's art class was a freaking RIOT! We all know she thought she was teaching, and I was ddefinitely wondering what was going on there. to have her as a nude model..OMFG that was beyond priceless!
what an amazing opportunity for Justin!! Oh maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan...Lindsey must be frothing at the mouth! wondering what the hell she's smiling about though. A bit nerve wracking.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 16, 2017 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 54 - QPM, Notices and Them!
Yeah, the bitch's slapping continues! Well done Mel!
Date: Mar 16, 2017 9:07 pm Title: Chapter 53 - Apology, Notice, Trouble and Surprises
Whoa, two weddings coming up! Emmett is going to be busy!
Date: Mar 16, 2017 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 52 - Brandon Does What?!
Deb is so strong and determined in this story, not that she isn't in other, but the way she acts with her son is amazing.
I can't believe Lindsey is daring asking her ex-boss if he's sure about Justin, and if she shouldn't be a better choice! What a fool and pretentious bitch.
Poor Emmett having to deal with two obtuse women! Good luck with that Em!
Date: Mar 16, 2017 7:30 pm Title: Chapter 51 - Permission, Celebration and Disclosure
It's moving fast forward! They had both the same question to ask at quite the same time. Happy Justin got to ask first.
I'm not so sure about the rings: I don't see Brian wearing diamonds.
I loved the way the dynamic duo discovered what happened while they were in jail.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2017 7:18 pm Title: Chapter 70 - Decisions, Announcements and Honesty
Sydney telling off Lindsay was priceless he blew her away with one shot.
Divina and Slick give it to Michael with both barrels right in his comic book loving, greedy little heart.
So if Michael is about to be wiped out how are they getting to New York? And what has Lindsay come up with to sabotage Justin now?
After what Michael said to Hunter I wish I was in the story because I would be kicking his Ass all up and down Liberty Avenue for everyone to see and record.
So now that everyone knows what Michael said to Hunter what are they going to do to the little whiny Bitch???
I wish the next chapter was up already cause I want to know if Michael's hair turned white? lol :)