Date: May 27, 2024 8:09 am Title: Chapter 18
I love how you are addressing this. I was thrilled when Brian punched Michael and Cannon, and it always bothered me that no one else ever found out about it and they just stayed mad at Brian.
Date: May 26, 2024 6:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really enjoyed the Brian/Mel banter????
Date: May 26, 2024 5:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Did not see Mel as the mother coming!
Date: Oct 19, 2023 12:48 am Title: Chapter 6
Mikey = Clueless
Date: Aug 02, 2021 3:36 pm Title: Chapter 41
This was great from start to finish; I loved it!!
Date: Jun 10, 2021 5:49 am Title: Chapter 41
Love this story - thank you
Date: Aug 11, 2020 3:26 am Title: Chapter 41
did read it again
Date: Jun 27, 2020 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 41
I enjoyed the story.
lah
Date: May 16, 2020 3:30 am Title: Chapter 18
Deb...clueless idiot as always. No wonder Michael is a total troll!
Date: May 16, 2020 1:55 am Title: Chapter 8
I really REALLY dislike Mikey!
Date: Jan 30, 2019 1:14 am Title: Chapter 41
Just love it. Thank you
Date: Jan 29, 2019 9:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
hope Brian gets rid of Debbie ad Michael and never speaks to them again to those 2 assholes
Date: Oct 22, 2018 11:14 am Title: Chapter 41
I read this while on vacation in Pittsburgh - great easy fun read. Thanks for writing! TAG
Date: Sep 11, 2018 9:38 pm Title: Chapter 40
Just read this story, and have to tell you how much I really liked it. I so badly wanted to write reviews, but since the story had been finished, I didn't really see the point. I love anti-Michael and anti-Lindsay fics, but really don't like them to have happy endings for them. I also love post-513 stories where Brian shows such growth. When I got to chapter 40, and was reading, from Brian's POV regarding the road trip, you said, standing there while he kissed me, I wasn't so sure about that statement. I haven't watched QAF for probably nine years, except for videos which I watch frequently. So I decided to watch that part of the episode. I was right. Brian initiated that kiss, so Brian kissed Michael. I watched as Brian DEEPENED that kiss, unlike the usual peck on the mouth. Michael had just been talking about how Dr Dave cuddled with him after they came still sticky with cum. And here was Brian, going after his twink pseudo-boyfriend who had run off to New York, kissing Michael for all his worth. Michael had such a dreamy expression on his face, and couldn't even open his eyes for a moment. So, watching this made me almost hate Brian, although I loved his character. Maybe after reading so much, I forgot how much of a shit he had been in the QAF show. Talk about mixed messages. No wonder Michael was so screwed up. So, after watching, I was happy Michael got his happy ending. It was hard to refocus on the father/Brian in chapter 41. Brian also called Michael his BEST FRIEND in chapter 41. Shouldn't Michael have been his 'oldest friend', because I thought Justin was his Best Friend.
All-in-All, I loved the camaraderia of the characters. Brian and Mel's friendship, Justin becoming a father, Drew and Emmett becoming parents (nice touch), and Deb and Carl getting married (icing on the cake). You did so well with this story. Thank you for writing and sharing it with of all us. I look forward to continuing reading all your WIP's. I reread "He's Mine" after your last update, because I thought I was forgetting a large portion of the story, which I found out I was. So, keep writing,and I for one, will keep reading. You're an excellent author.
Hugs, Cathy
Date: Sep 05, 2018 10:01 am Title: Chapter 41
Amazing story thanks for sharing
Date: Sep 03, 2018 1:59 am Title: Chapter 41
Wow, what a great story. Just love the picture of the girls. Great writing.
Date: Aug 28, 2018 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter. Just know that this is going to be a good story.
Date: Aug 27, 2018 7:15 am Title: Chapter 41
Was this changed or re-uploaded for a reason. I have this story saved on my favorites file on my compter from 8/5/18, has there been a change? I would want to re-upload in my file??
bec
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2018 12:43 am Title: Chapter 41
Sorry to see this one end, but you ended it on the right note.
Date: Jul 09, 2017 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a great story! Thanks for sharing it with us.
Date: Mar 07, 2017 8:35 pm Title: Chapter 41
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us!!
Date: Mar 05, 2017 9:00 am Title: Chapter 28
Great story. I hope Michael will finally listen to his mother.
Date: Feb 28, 2017 5:01 am Title: Chapter 6
I love this story. Can't wait how Michael will react on the girls.
Date: Feb 01, 2017 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 41
What an amazing ending. Thank you so much for sharing your story with us.
Date: Feb 01, 2017 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 40
Great middle names. Michael is really growing up.