Date: Dec 06, 2016 3:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Yaaaaa excited for the next chapter!!Sounds interesting,a feisty,fighter,little devil in a good way Justin is always my favorite!! You better watch out triple idiots here comes ur worst nightmare😈😈😈
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Love how you start this. We still have Gus, but Ted is the one who told Brian not to sign over his rights. His meeting with Justin is changed but I bet it's for the better. In one paragraph we go from meeting to spending time together to their getting married. Then we find out that Justin is wealthy and he and Brian have two kids of their own. I'm glad to see that Deb is on Brian's side. Emmett is no longer flaming and Brian doesn't want to support someone elses kid, when Melanie and Michael should be doing it. They got away with things for five years and I can't wait to see what troubles you come up with that Justin is going to fix. Loving this.
Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:55 am Title: Chapter 2
Mel is such a BITCH!!!! WHOO-WEEE I wanted to punch her in the mouth but Justin handled that harridan. And next up will be BITCH the sequel and MITCH! <in my announcers voice> Gladiators ready?? Contestants Ready?? The FIGHT is ON!!
Gladiators= Brian, Justin and all their allies
Contestants= The FOS trio
WRITE On Star!!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Star you have me hooked again! I love kickass!Justin stories. Mikey and Lindsey won't know what hit them.
Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:36 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm sooooo LOVING this already!! I abolutely adore it when Brian and Justin's relationship is their own and well established before the machinations of Michael and Lindsay start! I already know this is going to have me looking like I'm Coo-Coo for Co-Co Puffs yelling obscenities at my computer screen!
WRITE On Star!!!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay a new story!!! I was so sure your double post meant that you were gone for the holidays, but no, we ha a *new* story. Yay!!!
The setup is so ripe with potential for good and bad. Justin as a successful confident wealthy man is going to want peace for Brian and he us not going to accept the "gangs" antics. Brian as a father who has shielded his family from crazy is probably not going to stand for it either. I can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooo a new story and a very interesting chapter.
Mel, Lindsay and Michael are going to wish they had never been born!
Can't Wait For The Next Update :)
Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooohhh! I cannot wait. What is the husband going to do.
Very strong beginning, you are spoiling us. One hit after another, I cannot get over how different each story is.
Date: Dec 06, 2016 1:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay a new going to be brilliant story...on bokshelf and am kitten/puppy dog eyeing you for quick updates....please and thank you
Date: Dec 06, 2016 1:42 am Title: Chapter 1
You've sucked me from the beginning once again! I love this already and am excited to read more. Awesome first meeting of our boys!! It's hard to believe been the trolls took so long to figure them out! Same old Michael and Lindsay!
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2016 1:29 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving this story! I can't wait to see where you are taking us!
More please :)
Amy