Date: Dec 12, 2016 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 13
The story Ryder told Jenny was just the sweetest ever!
Drunk Michael. just what they need tonight. He still seems to be on the "Hit on Ted" train. He really is a pathetic little mad isn't he? But oh my goooooooooooooodness!! Ryder done good! As much as I had imagining Michael is his "near nothings", I have to say, it's something I still would've loved to have seen. Remember underoos? Yup...those. Perfectly pictured in my head. Made my ightreading that! So perfect! and runnign into the diner to boot. Brilliant!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 12, 2016 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 12
Wow...You did a shit load of updates this weekend. Brilliant and thank you! So very appreciated and am enjoyng every chapter!!!
Gus, like Jenny, is a smart little thing. while talking with Ryder about the fort,all of then are fully aware that they're discussing the girls.
Oh dear. Now Jen is coming as well as Daphne.
I officially need eye bleach! O>>>M>>>>G!!!!!!!!!! What the F were you thinking!??! UGH! Michael coming onto TED like that! Jeeeez. the visuals! Blech! blake handled it well enough. I get the impression that Ted was in more of a state of shock as he didn't say much.
Mels is hearing virtually the same thing from all different sides. It finally took talking to dust to stop making excuses. To stop kidding herself that Jenny and Gus are fine. Now what though. Is she really willing to do anything about it. does she really love the kids enough? Does she love GUS enoughto do anything for him or will she only concern herself with jenny?
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 12, 2016 5:45 pm Title: Chapter 10
The whole fort vs. castle dialogues lately are a hoot adn a half! Once again, you bring out humour in it's simplest form, but one that is just so gosh darn enjoyable.
Justin adn Mel's chat proved to be intersting and slightly humerous. Justin's continued testing with Brian throughout, proved how little interest he has in Mel's excuses. Sorry, but what she said about Brian's history of abuse...I wanted to reach through and rip her head off. Mel, like Brian, isn't one to take threats lightly. justin's ultimatum...wondering if she will take it seriously. IF she doesn't, well, she has no idea what shes' up against. Not really. she gets he has $$, but she thinks herself so important, she may assume she's on teh same playing field as Daphne. Can i just say BAHAHHAHAHA to that. :)
Michael Michael Michael...wow. that mouth if his is just mind boggling. It's like there's ZERO connectivity between his logical brain and his mouth. No filter. As much as I hurt for Ben, I'm glad he over heard what Michael said. Now he knows for sure. Michael, like Lindsey and Mel is a selfish little asshole.
Like in all your stories...I can't wait till these three get theirs. They deserve every bad thing that happens to them.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 12, 2016 5:30 pm Title: Chapter 11
So glad that our beloved Emmett is back to being himself again. I don't think Calvin is going to let it end like that, but whatever....Not like he can do anything with Emmett surrounded by Ryder, Drew and the rest. In fact...bring it on!! LOL!!
I am absolutely LOVING Ryder! (am enjoying how you are using names fron canon and just makingentirely new characters.)
Jenny is pretty smart isn't she. What a great analogy as well for a relationship. Nothing is going to get by this girl and lord help them all when she's a teen! HAHA. Nice to see her comfortable enought to talk and interact with everyone rather than just Gus.
omg......my heart continues to break for Gus. Those so-called Mothers need to be drawn adn quartered. So wrapped up in themselves....so fucking self-involved that they don't see what they're doing to their children. Mel's attitude towards Gus is beyond disgusting! she's allowed her hatred for Brian to influence her feelings for Gus! Oh I hope she gets nailed to the wall for that! she and Lindsey both. I hope teh kids get taken away from them, at least until they sort themselves out, but in all honesty, I'm not sure they can. They are both too selfish for that.
Date: Dec 12, 2016 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 14
I appreciate Mel making the effort, I hope she means it!
Date: Dec 12, 2016 2:47 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ryder is a pisser!!! LMAO! I enjoy his character so much! I'm glad that Justin's words to Mel, coupled with Dusty and Ben's, have seemingly made a difference in how Mel thinks and processes her actions in regards to the treatment of the kids. Perhaps with Ben's advice and assistance, Mel will be able to find her way back to happy so that she can become an effective parent instead of the emotionally-abusive one she's been. As for her personally, I think she needs to take a page out of Ben's book and leave Lindsay. She has to see that all of her emotional baggage begins and ends with the harridan. At least she's recognizing that Brian has done nothing to encourage Michael or Lindsay in their delusions. That's a start, I suppose. Do I trust her fully? A snowball chance of becoming an icicle in hell has a greater probability but I remain cautiously hopeful that she means every single words she's saying.
As for Ryder's joke on Michael last chapter...OMG!!! OMFG!!!! ROFLMAO!!!! That!! THAT was EPIC!!!! Michael and Superman underroos standing in the middle of the Diner was classic!! Drew's reaction had me hiccuping with both horror and laughter by turns. That will be gossip fodder for the Queens of Liberty for many years to come! And Blake.... WHOO, a forceful Ted and equally forceful Blake are just freaking HOT! The crowbar..... Now THAT was a man after my own heart right there!
Thoroughly enjoying this story Star!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Dec 12, 2016 7:15 am Title: Chapter 14
What the heck Mel is doing,trying to make up with kids but to go through the master bedroom's window?well if she's sincere enough why not..I liked Ryder's character,hoping he will listen to Justin and go outside and meet Ben,who knows they will click the moment they saw each other..
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2016 6:00 am Title: Chapter 14
Yes! Mel's seen the light.
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2016 5:46 am Title: Chapter 13
Love Ryder. He's so sweet with Jenny. Michael got just what he deserves. So funny.
Date: Dec 12, 2016 3:52 am Title: Chapter 13
great fairy tale Ryder
That will teach you Michael... Superman underwear LOL
Date: Dec 12, 2016 12:44 am Title: Chapter 12
Unbelievable! Mikey deserves a smack with a crowbar!
Mel is at least reflecting on the problem. Time will tell if she truly wants to fix it or if she just wishes she hid it better from Brian.
Daphne and Jen are on their way, it's on!
Date: Dec 12, 2016 12:25 am Title: Chapter 12
Hopefully Mel changes love her
Date: Dec 12, 2016 12:14 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow, another Fabulous fic. Just read the first 13 chaps. Fantastic!
Can't wait for next update, thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Date: Dec 11, 2016 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
Drew and Em are too cute! I loved when Drew said you take your time with eye candy, lol. Ryder is a stitch.
Justin's meeting with Mel was perfect! Mel just talked and talked and Justin then laid down the law.
Gus and Jenny make sense esp. if the home is truly desolate. Linds and Mel seemed to want kids for the wrong reason and per cannon have no clue about relationships.
Poor Ben. Mikey is such a piece of work.
Date: Dec 11, 2016 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's too bad that Jenny isn't biologically Brian's instead of Michael's, like if Lindsay, at the last second before inseminating Mel, had switched out Michael's material for Brian's, then Brian could take both kids from the girls Mel might have a shot at redemption , but Michael and Lindsay are lost causes. And I'm so glad Emmett is back to his old self!!!! And Daphne is on the way !!!! The terrible trio better watch out!!!!! All kinds of excitement coming our way, I can't wait !!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 12
You are such a fast writer. I have to say that Drew, Emmett and Ryder are becoming fast favorites in this story. Little Jenny is very smart. The we get into unreality with Michael. I spit out my coke when he started to make a play for Ted in front of Blake. Wasn't he just whining about how could he keep Ben? Blake and Ted are tops in my book.
Date: Dec 11, 2016 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh, how sad. Poor Gus and Jenny. I'm glad she's speaking more. But what happens when she goes home to her poor foundation?
Couple chapters back I forgot to say how perfect Ben breaking up with Mikey was. I loved when the dummy muttered too loud.
Date: Dec 11, 2016 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 12
I hope Mel finally gets her priorities right and realizes, she doesn't have to like Brian (but she should because he is awesome lol), but he isn't the devil incarnate!
Date: Dec 11, 2016 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hahaaha i can picture out the whiny's face while Blake dragging him to his car..meaning he's just all whine and talk shit bcoz Blake was smaller than him and he scared him by locking himself in the car😅😅😅😅HOT Blake on the road,Ted must feel a million bucks for being Blake's husband at the moment!!🤗🤗
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 12
Mel better think of someway to fix what is wrong with her home life or she will lose her children, Daphne is coming along with Jennifer and Molly, it is time for her to take this situation seriously because if this is taken to court she won't like the outcome.
Blake put Michael in his place beautifully I especially like the line that Ted wouldn't want him even if his dick was on fire and Michael's salvia could put it out, that had me rolling, Michael is such a whiny little baby who wants a boy for a husband or partner when they could have a man?
Ben is smart enough to see the problems in his marriage and he is taking some time to figure out what he wants and what he is not willing to accept anymore.
I took think Ben should meet Ryder, Emmett had already found his flame and if he is lucky it will stay lit Forever.
Another Great Update:)
Date: Dec 11, 2016 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh Melanie just what you & Lindsay done to poor Gus?Now that he talk to daddy Justin,you both just unleashed the beast side of Sunshine...!You better watch out now!!
Date: Dec 11, 2016 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
Justin just let Dahp deal with them...wished Ben can meet Ryder soon,i think they will be perfect for each other...
Date: Dec 11, 2016 5:11 pm Title: Chapter 11
poor Gus, I want to cry for him and slap the shit out of Lindsay and especially Mel for not caring enough about the daughter she loves so much... why the hell would she have a problem with Deb seeing Jenny... wtf?
Date: Dec 11, 2016 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG, how does Melanie say her diatribe about it really being issues with Lindsay, but still want to blame Brian.. um, jealous much???
Insensitive and fucking idiotic Michael, how hurtful can he be saying what he did AND Ben hearing it!
[Report This]Date: Dec 11, 2016 2:37 pm Title: Chapter 11
Looks like you had the same idea I had. Sic Ryder on Mikey. Like how he tells things. Jenny has really come out of her shell, which makes Gus happy. But what happens when she goes home? So sad that she doesn't think much of her dad with reason.