Date: Dec 22, 2016 4:58 am Title: Chapter 28
Get Her Ryder!!! Make the Cow Go Fetal!! :)
Date: Dec 22, 2016 4:29 am Title: Chapter 28
Can't wait to see how Ryder makes Lindsay's life miserable. Keep these chapters coming.
Date: Dec 22, 2016 3:29 am Title: Chapter 14
I love your creation of Ryder.... he cracks me up..."Daddy Bear" and “The force is strong in this one.” Ryder tells us and grabs Gus to tickle him.
just great!
Date: Dec 22, 2016 12:43 am Title: Chapter 27
Fantastic!
Ben and Ryder, Ben was always too good for Mikey ( never understood their relationship even inthe series).
Let's hope Linz and her fiance get what they deserve, a big fat zero.
Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next update!
JoAnn
Date: Dec 21, 2016 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 27
YEAH!!!! Ben and Ryder!!!! I'm so excited for this couple.
Thanks for the update. The thought of Lindsay and Craig together is so repulsive. They kinda belong together though.
I have faith that everything will work out.
Date: Dec 21, 2016 5:02 pm Title: Chapter 27
All bets are off now for Craig. Can't wait. Wonder how Lndsey's parents are going to feel about her being "engaged" to someone their age, never mind having to possibly bail him out of jail. LOL.
Michael was thrown a curve ball. Good!! Now let's see what he's going to say and do. What excuses will Lindsey make to him? How far will both of them go to keep trying to manipulate Brian and Justin? will either of them figure out that they can't win? I kind of hope not, cause it makes for very enjoyable reading!! lol.
Ben and ryder aer going to GET IT ON!!!!!!!! Yahoooooooooooooo!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 21, 2016 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 26
Jaw is currently on the floor. Woah! Did not see that one coming at all. Completely side-swiped.
1st off, Lindsey is a complete and utter idiot. We all know she goes both ways. She's already tried the marriage for convenience thing with The frech dude, Gui. Now she's tryingit again with Craig. Even if it goes to court, any judge worth his/her salt will see the correlation between Justin and Craig. A 7 year old is able to put 2 and 2 together. Mind you, with Lindsey and Craig, they probably came up with 5. Now Craig is going to be facing criminal charges for trying to pull this shit off. Did he really think that everyone would just let him get away with it? That they'd just ignore the agreement made earlier? Not only that, but the fact that Lindsey also took money out of an account that she shouldn't have....well, I'm assuming that some for of legal action will be taken there as well. And trying to take custody of the other 2 kids is unbelievable. What gaul!
Nothing better than seeing a pissed of Lindsey! she just digs her self deeper and deeper into a big pile of shit. Her little show of hystrionics was very telling of her emotional state never mind her true intentions. I mean, here she is, sitting with her *cough* "fiance" *cough*, and screaming out about how she should have the life that Justin does with Brian. She wants Brian and that life, and Craig wants access to money. both are greedy beyond belief. That greed will be their ultimate downfall.
Intense and brilliant chapter!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 21, 2016 4:18 pm Title: Chapter 27
Oh, is Lindsay getting caught in her multiple layers of stories to different people... Mikey doesn't seem happy at what he's heard
and yes more of Ben and Ryder!!!!
Date: Dec 21, 2016 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 27
Glad that Ryder and Ben are about to get a little Freaky-Sneaky going on....LOL It's about time! I doubt Peen-less, Ass-less Michael was satisfying. And Michael was just vicious for mentioning Ben's condition so blase like that. I probably would have slapped him down simply on general principle. Classless cunty bastard! But I love that Ryder was there to shine the light on the idiocy of the imbecile and really question his intelligence for his continued loyalty to that conniving, self-important shrew Lindsay. I'm also glad that Ben thought about Brian before telling Michael where he could stick his supposed blackmail. Perhaps it's better to just file the paperwork and let the chips fall where they may. Michael will be too busy chasing after Brian and nipping at Lindsay's heels to make fruitless plans that he'll be too preoccupied to read the paperwork. No contest divorce anyone??
As for TweedleleDUMB.... Lawd....SMH I would almost pity him except the way my feelings are set up.... Nope not possible! He was stupid for a few reasons: 1) I can't imagine a grown ass man- or even one that's supposed to be a grown ass man- wanting someone to take care of them. I mean really Michael...how old are you?? 2) Thinking that Ben was just going to wait around for him to make up his mind of whom and what he wanted was just DUMB... Even the most docile dogs get tired and eventually will bite their owner. Guess Ben's day has come and gone. 3) Why on God's green and purple earth would he trust the ONE person who wants Brian more than he does? BITCHZilla has more going for her in terms of entrapping Brian than he does. She even has more balls than Michael does and that's saying a whole lot since he was supposed to be born with his own set of them. Can we now officially change his name to DUMBZilla?
Now back to his Wonder Twit Twin Lindsay: OMG!! Soooooo this Trick is switching Teams simply to reacquire Gus to fill her coffers. Not only that but she's willing to become engaged to Craig Taylor...aka Sperm Donor to do it thinking that ANY judge won't see through all that Maybeline? First, if she thinks that Justin is going to give ANY money that may go to support his deadbeat Dad, she was sorely mistaken. Since Brian and Justin's assets are joined, Justin would definitely have to agree to that.
Secondly, Daphne was freaking fabulous. First she dogged Lindsay and her motives, then she goes ahead and reminds Craig that he is in direct violation of a settlement to avoid prosecution. I love the fact that he was so damn arrogant that he thought Daphne and Justin wouldn't bring up that he isn't even supposed to be in the same room- let alone have ANY contact- with Justin.
Their third mistake was to try and petition the court to take custody of JJ and Julia. WHAT THE HELL?!!!!! I wouldn't trust a pack of AA batteries to these nitwits let alone children. By way of Lindsay's rant and spewing of the real reason she is trying to gain custody of Gus, she clearly showed herself as unstable and a hypocrite to boot. Then Craig thinking that he could taunt Justin about his lifestyle when he tried to make said homosexual financially support him was just plain ludicrious. Something tells me that Jennifer is not only going to see Debbie as she says. I think there will not only be a visit to Craig but probably in the company of some police officials as well. Read the fine print jackass....Read the fine print!
WHOO-WEE!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Dec 21, 2016 11:24 am Title: Chapter 27
Ben you slut, lol. Ok so Ryder could get in these skivvies too. He's adorable! Michael is a complete idiot. I can't phathom saying what he said to Ben to anyone. Seriously, he'd hate that AIDS is not the death sentence it once was. And as Ryder said, what is the end game here? Brian will never be with Mikey, ever!
Can't wait for more.
Date: Dec 21, 2016 11:07 am Title: Chapter 27
Lindsay and Craig?!?! Oh, no looks like Craig didn't read the fine print, lol. Lindsay better get prepared for conjugal visits, lol.
Court is going to be a trip! Go Daphne!
Date: Dec 21, 2016 5:20 am Title: Chapter 27
Aaaah here we go,Lindsay's stupid twin on action too with his own reality but still more stupid than her...He's all expecting and waiting for Lindsay's plan to get Brian support them but he has no idea than her beloved lesbian is double crossing him...
Hhhhmmm Ryder is so cute playing innocent one...ðŸ˜
Date: Dec 21, 2016 5:06 am Title: Chapter 27
Yeah Ryder gets some naked time with Ben, ALRIGHT!!! lol
So Michael would try blackmail to get Brian alone to try to get him to toss Justin aside, too bad Ben actually has Integrity and wouldn't put Brian through such an indignity just to get a divorce.
So what does Lindsay really want from Brian that she is willing to use Gus, The Sperm Donor and Captain Dumbass to get it??
Ben explained to Michael why Ryder is the kind of father he could never be but alas unless it is in comic book form Michael didn't understand a word. SMH
If Ryder is bored maybe he should prank Michael that could be fun for a few days? ;)
Let Lindsay throw Brian's past out there I bet her deeds now are worse than his five years ago, I especially would like her to explain her sudden change to a hetero lifestyle and her need to look down at same sex couples raising kids in front of a judge. :)
Date: Dec 21, 2016 5:05 am Title: Chapter 26
Wow Lindsay can be so dense and stupid without an effort from her..and now she looks like the the biggest cunt ever in the land of motherhood..She didn't even realize that she's spouting her real reason of her dislike of Justin in front of everyone,wow!!!And as for you sperm donor just wait until Justin's family's done with you,you'll wished you never been born or try crossing them..
Date: Dec 21, 2016 4:59 am Title: Chapter 27
What is Lindsay's agenda? What is it she really wants? Why does Mikey think she's helping him? Love this chapter. Looks like Ryder just got lucky.
Date: Dec 21, 2016 4:06 am Title: Chapter 26
Wow, I did not see the fiancé twist coming!
Date: Dec 21, 2016 2:07 am Title: Chapter 26
OMG Craig and Linz toooo much.
Fantastic update. thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Date: Dec 21, 2016 12:35 am Title: Chapter 26
Now that was a surprise. Lindsay and Craig. Good thing Lindsay opened her mouth. That was enough to get the judge to sign against her.
Date: Dec 21, 2016 12:33 am Title: Chapter 26
Lindsay yelling at the mediator was stupid but bringing Craig Taylor and announcing your engagement was pathetic, Craig moron that you are and always will be, Lindsay occasionally like dick but the only one she wants between her revolving door legs is Brian Kinney, wasting what little money you have left to help Lindsay and get back at Justin is so sad.
Especially since you aren't man enough for her (Ain't Woman Enough Either!) and you don't have enough money to fight Justin, bet when Jennifer and the others find out you are going to be wishing for a one way ticket to another galaxy.
Another moron who signed paperwork without reading it hope you like jail :)
Lindsay should have stuck with Mikey at least he has <scratches head>what The Hell does Michael have to help Lindsay? <shrugs>
Bring It Lindsay!
Just hope your packing more than stones because it is about to rain boulders on your head. :)
Date: Dec 20, 2016 1:37 am Title: Chapter 25
Oh, poor Gus. They had to know they were scaring the kids. Ugh, parents can't live with em can't live without 'em. At least the damage can be repaired.
Date: Dec 20, 2016 1:33 am Title: Chapter 24
Seriously Ryder is perfect! Lines had better look at compromising. She's going to get squashed.
Date: Dec 20, 2016 1:20 am Title: Chapter 23
Ryder is perfect and Jenny will be ruined for all men, lol.
Lindsay stealing from poor Jenny is just sad.
Date: Dec 19, 2016 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 25
Fantastic, but very emotional.
Hope Linz and Mikey are left with nothing ut themselves.
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Date: Dec 19, 2016 7:13 pm Title: Chapter 25
Am catching up from teh weekend so all will be in 1.
The audacity of Michael and Lindsey is outrageous. Had to laugh at Michael when he thought Brian was actually going to meet with him at Woody's. Brian lockign him out was a great move! HE shouldn't have been there at all. He has no say in either Gus's nor Jenny's lives. He only has visitation with Jenny and has nothing what so ever to do with Gus. And lindsey. well heinous bitch doesn't even come close. Gus is only a means to an end for her and sadly he is fully aware of that, as is evryone else!
I simply adore Ryder! As much as he's a child at heart at times, his heart knows no bounds! He is determined to look out for Gus and Jenny. Jenny is his princess and will treat her as such, and he can aleviate Gus of his burden of being the strong one. the one who needs to look after her. He will ensure that Gus is allowed to be the child.
Terrific chat between Brian and Ben. Love how open Brian is in this. both of them have had their eyes wide open when it comes to Michael and Lindsey sadly. Gald that Ben is open to something with Ryder. I think these 2 will eventually make a terrific couple given the chance. Ben may be aprehensive to start anything too quickly, but I'm confident that between everyone dropping enough hints and suggestions, he'll be more open to the idea as time goes on. I doubt he'll play at being and old version of Brian, but for the time being he can have some fun. Ryder will wait I'm sure.
Am lovign how Deb is standing up to Michael and Lindsey. Her priority are the kids, not those who are behaving like kids. Jen's conditions are very interesting. She's definitely holding all the cards, and it seems neither Lindsey nor Michael aer going to play nicely. hehehe. Should be very entertaining!
Not overly concerned about Lindsey's threat of bringin in the sperm donor. He'd be a fool to take on Jen adn Justin. They are Lloyds and he simply wouldn't survive. Would be something else to watch though!! :) Will he be foolish enough to get involved? Seems like Jen and Daph have a hell of alot on intel on teh guy. Seems they could seriously take the guy down.
So, the money Lindsey wanted...was it really for a trip to Europe or what? did she justwant $$ on hadn for her endless need to shop? and my goodness! Stealing from Jenny!!! Completely unforgivable. Mind you, she doesn't seem to think Jenny is important. She cares only for Gus, as Gus is her "in" to Brian and his $.
Gus has a lot to say and I'm so glad he did. Glad he felt comfortable enough to talk to the doc. He really needed to do that. He's going to need to continue it as well. He's carried such a heavy burden for so long. It's totaly heartbreaking!
Nice to see that Mel is ligitimately trying. That she's taking this all seriously. Actually impressed that Gus managed a smile at her. And Justin is willing to give her a bid of a break. A tenuous one anyway. As long as she keeps putting the kids first, he'll continue to work with her. But....if she ever strays back to her old ways, she's in for a shit storm!
Brillinat weekend of chapters!
Looking forward to more of course. :)
cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 19, 2016 3:42 pm Title: Chapter 25
I'm so glad Gus can finally be a kid again... he is so much like his dad!!!