Date: Oct 24, 2024 7:01 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
You are amazing and thank you for not giving up on any of your stories.
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2024 9:01 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
How come it seems like every chapter, we find another disgusting element to Michael? Lord knows, I'm not complaining. LOL... But if this keeps up, well, are you aware that both Pennsylvania and California have the death penalty? Because I just can't imagine that there could be a level of punishment better suited for him. Just saying...
I had to think for a minute who Nate was, before remembering he was the escort person. With the mention of his name, I'm wondering if we'll find some more hidden information.
Good chapter. Moving things along. But the highlight of this story will be the court cases. I think. I'm not sure I'm ready for the LONG, LONG lists of charges. Also learning just who all the people involved are, and just how they were played by Michael and Lindsay.
Thank you so much for the chapters you posted tonight.
Hugs ~Cathy
Date: Jul 29, 2024 12:44 am Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
I can’t wait until we get to the trial portion where everyone can know everything, and how all the puzzle pieces fit together!
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2024 9:37 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
I just thought of something... When Brian and Justn were having that television interview - the one where Debbie was so pissed she wasn't invited to - since Joan and the Petersons were there, Justin excused himself to make a phone call, was it the senator that Juston called?
I'm not sure where to find this, so I thought you might know, offhand.
Wouldn't it be great if there would've been a season 6, and this was story??? :D
Cathy
Author's Response:
Hey Cathy! Yes, it was the Senator he called, who also used his considerable clout to execute the raid on the Sap's house and Babylon. Like Brian, Justin has always struck me as a quiet storm. You never know just what he knows until it can have the most impact. He also has the ability to see life as a both a chess game, and oddly the game of basketball, allowing him to keep himself several moves ahead, or pivot when necessary to protect all he holds dear. And most of all that's Brian. So Melanie was absolutely correct when she told Brian that he hadn't fully learned who his partner is. I LOVE writing Justin's character this way, which is how I've always seen him; the other side of the same coin as the incomparable Brian Kinney.
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2024 8:23 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
It doesn't strike me that the elite are just as ruthless, if not more so, than the cartel. You could also link the Mafia to the same group. Money flows plenty in the elite. Their wealth can buy anybody to do the dirty, or find out any information.
You did it again... another little piece in the puzzle. Just why does the senator need to see Justin?
I also hope that Brian and Justin level with each other on every secret they have... it might become beneficial. Neither one needs to be blindsided.
XOXO,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2024 7:51 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Oh, hell's bells!
When I first started reading this chapter, I was thinking there was buried bodies down there - (which there still might be.) I can't believe how I forget about the human tafficking angle mentioned a few chapters back, and how they planned that for Justin. If a few select women ever get loose on some of the culprits, they better hide. Women are much more vicious than men.
Are all the people who have been arrested so far, involved?
I think Hunter was right about Justin having knowledge of this. Justin's always a fount of information. How he finds all the stuff out, is beyond me. He's very resourceful.
Well, on to chapter 100. If you keep executing all these angles, you could probably reach 200! :D
Thanks for updating; I've really been missing this story!
Hugs, Cathy
Date: Mar 10, 2024 4:56 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2024 1:15 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
My eyes need bleach... so does my mind. I almost thought I need a bucket too.
I wonder if Lindsay might have thought IF she could get pregnant (a bucket again) by Jack, could she try to blame it on Brian? (same DNA.) Granted, it would have had to happen around the time Brian was with her, at least within a couple of weeks, give or take.
Did I miss something? How could Lindsay have heard the conversation between Sheila and the guys. Isn't she in prison?
The part about Justin's meeting with Lindsay... was that back when Mel wore her new red suit? At first thought, I was wondering if we could be privy to it, but that's the only time I can think of.
There are still way too many secrets floating around. My mind is going in circles with what Brian might know abot Gardner. Ooh, I'm anxious!
On a side note, I guess I never asked what you were taking in college, and what your goals are. I hope your life turns out the way you would like. You deserve it!
XO ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2024 11:45 am Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Deb's gone off her rocker!
It would be funny if they allowed Deb to see part of the tape of Michael's madness that we got to view, with Michael sitting in the house in CA. and his cackling glee. ALSO, she should be allowed to see MIkey in his mankini. Do you think bile would make its way up her throat? And come on, just because Rita put Hunter into the hustler situation, that doesn't mean Michael didn't rape him! (You have me so worked up! LOL) (Are you sorry? I hope not!)
You wrote Blanche so well! Everything she said, I was putting Michael in the same perception. Talk about mirroring people.
I'm looking so very, very forward to the trial.
Thanks for the updates. I'm coming in a little late. My computer hasn't been on too much. Not feeling up to par. So this is a triple treat!
XO ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2024 7:22 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Lindsay sleeping with Jack Kinney?!
Ewwww!!!!
And sadly possible she was Hell Bent on Brian marrying her.
That Whore Really Got Around!!!
Hew Twat had had more cocks than Greyhound has buses.
Deb would have went to.prison for life and Lucy would have laughed all the way back to California.
Brian and Justin new to hear the truth so they can figure out how best yo handing it without losing each other.
Yes they will need tons of therapy along with everyone else.
Getting more insight into Lindsay and Michael while scary takes away all the cards they had yet to play and robs them of the power to manipulate the situation to a jury.
Gotta show the Monsters True Face for the world to see.
[Report This]Date: Mar 05, 2024 7:06 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Hope You Achieve All Your Dreams!!
This Chapter was worth the wait next despite knowing sons of the charges against Michael she was still defending him and looking for an excuse to blame others.
And she is still mad everyone including Vic chose to save themselves and left het behind.
Michael really did learn his baby from Deb and it sadly makes you wonder if she would have killed to keep Michael happy?
I meat he killed and tortured to gain his fantasy and Deb was his enabler using her words to beat down anyone who hurt het baby and didn't keep him happy like she would have done for the rest of her life, while arranging for even else to carry on after her death, while ignoring their own happiness and dreams.
This could be the beginning Deb finds to break the Ties That Bind from Michael.
Whether the others can forgive her is their choice to make And Only Theirs!!
Deb still had to learn of the other charges against Michael and what he had planned for Justin, Gus and the prison for Brian in that House of Evil and Delusion.
Thanks For The Update????
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2023 8:34 am Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
I am loving this story. It gets better and better especially since I am so Anti- Michael! This story is in my top 3 Anti- Michael. Please finish it up if life gives you the chance to.
[Report This]Date: Aug 01, 2023 1:10 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
OMG! Now you have me wondering if Michael is really a serial killer and if he is going to try and say that the videos were all just bits of fantasy and that Lance must have killed everyone. This story is amazing! Can't wait for more.
*Hugs*
Deb
Date: Jul 25, 2023 7:50 am Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Oh my goodness I'm loving this. It's qaf, law and order and criminal minds rolled into one epic story. Thank you
Author's Response:
OMG!!!! Thank you so much, MieMie! What a compliment!
HUGS,
Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2023 4:22 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Okay, lady. I've been pushing myself to get through this story... I just skimmed areas, and it helped me remember where we were. I would have had it done sooner, but we’ve had three days of severe thunder and lightning storms, and I didn’t want to chance my computer and internet. I swear, Dell laptops hate me!
Now that I’ve caught up, man I have questions… literally things I didn’t remember thinking about when you were really posting this heavily. So I’m attaching questions. If those things - or IF - they are coming, just let me know. Maybe it’s just something I missed.
Michael (the word makes me want to vomit.) … I’m really wondering how he amassed such a HUGE amount of money. So, he paid about a million for the California house and had about 100k in glass cases and collectibles, and money from Lance for stuff from the loft robbery. I know Debbie and he had money over the years from Brian (although it couldn’t be thousands of dollars.) Then there’s Justin’s Rage profits and Ben’s 80k life insurance. Did he get any money from Craig, Sap, or Spahn? And did he get any more money from Lance?
He also has a massive amount of cash on hand and numerous drugs. (How did he get all that transferred from Pittsburgh?)
With this last chapter, we’ve learned about the four people who’ve been discovered in one of the rooms, so more should be coming on that. Although, I’m quite curious as to how he had Brian-lite continuing to come to the house many times. (The neighbor lady.) How or what could he say or do to keep getting the guy to keep coming back? And he must have had some major plastic surgery done to his face, to resemble Brian so closely. Because if Johns’ didn’t recognize the head... Ooh, unless Johns’ is not to be trusted. Oh, not another one.
And let’s not forget about the dungeon under the bed. I do hope we get to know what’s down there.
Questions, questions, questions. Just hoping I didn’t miss anything. Oh, and it was pure genius to have Hobbs’ brother/son, whatever, doing the remodeling.
Needless to say, this story that you’ve graced us with, should actually be turned into a novel for sale. This is far better than a lot of books I’ve read. And believe me when I say I’ve got HUNDREDS of them. You can’t collect them for fifty years, and not have lots.
So, signing on to KD for this last chapter, I was absolutely horrified to see only one review. That is so not good. Especially when all it takes is a few seconds to say ‘Thank You’ or ‘Enjoyed this.’
One last thought... I’m sure you’ve seen The Green Mile. Maybe Brandon could get a few of the trusted cops, get the cameras paused, (like Speed), and take Mikey outside for a private talk with Justin and Brian – oooh, or maybe Daphne. There wouldn’t be any witnesses, and maybe Mikey in his anger, kept pounding his head against the bars.
Aren’t I a comic? It’s strange while reading your stories, I get all these ideas as how to kill someone. ????
On to the next...
Mucho Hugs,
Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2023 9:35 am Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Fantastic chapter. I have hated Michael from the first moment, so making him this evil is wonderful. Your writing amazes me.
Author's Response:
Hey Darling!!! This one is...WHEW! That's all I can say about it. For a story that was only originally supposed to be a quick 40k words, it sure has grown beyond my initial expectations. And although it's been on pause due to me hitting Burnout and then work commitments, it's quickly hitting its stride again (as are my other WIPs) and I'm so grateful for that!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2022 7:42 am Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Good Morning, Nichelle! A strange, funny thought just entered my brain. In this chapter, Mikey is posing in his one-piece sexy green bodysuit... Shouldn't those two pictures be donated to the prison for the guys to have a new dartboard??
(This is what happens when I have too much time on my hands just sitting and taking it easy.) *SMIRK*
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2022 11:17 am Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
My heart bleeds for Hunter. Is possible to hate Michael worse than ever before? I sure hope Debbie is sitting front and center in court so she finds out what her 'widdle boy' did to Hunter over and over. Something to take her down so low that she will finally see how evil Michael really is. And will Rita eventually be arrested too? She needs to go where rest are going.
The punishment of the wicked dead in hell is described throughout Scripture as ‘eternal fire’ - Matthew 25:41; ‘unquenchable fire’ - Matther 3:12; ‘shame and everlasting contempt’ - Daniel 12:2; a place where ‘the fire is not quenched’ – Mark 9: 44-49; a place of ‘torment’ and ‘fire’ - Luke 16: 23-24; ‘everlasting destruction’ - 2 Thessalonians 1:9; a place where ‘the smoke of torment rises forever and ever’ – Revelation 14:10-11; and a ‘lake of burning sulfur’ where the wicked are ‘tormented day and night forever and ever’ – Revelation 20:10.
Have so much fun, all you wicked, wicked people!
I look so forward to see how you are going to proceed with the rest of this story. Both in California amd Pittsburgh.
Thanks so much,
Hugs, Cathy
Date: Aug 24, 2022 12:11 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Thanks for the update Nichelle, will always read no matter how long it takes you. Real life has to come first.
Date: Aug 20, 2022 7:27 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Now I understand why Craig hated Justin being gay. He knew who he is and Craig couldn't make up his mind.
What did Brian and Justin ever do to these people?
Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: Aug 19, 2022 11:32 am Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
This is one rabbit hole full of sinister people who enjoy pulling the innocent down with them to satisfy their own petty behavior, greed and need for dominance. Henry and DeMarcus are doing a Excellent Job for putting the pieces together while also finding out who all the players are and how much dirt they have on their hands.
All these schemes and machinations just to control people who were better than them and are succeeding where they failed, The Survivors are thriving are the villains are getting ready to pay for their crimes.
Love and Hate is the basis all of this.
They each took what they deemed as love to drive them to hurt others but it was actually hate that was the driving force because despite so much pain Brian, Justin, Christian, Hunter and Everyone Else are Thriving!!!
They Are All Going To Become The Best People They Can Be!!!
Thanks for the updates to your stories the wait is always worth it????
Date: Jun 06, 2022 8:34 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
I can't believe there's no more.
Date: May 30, 2022 3:59 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Ok I'm re-reading the entire story. Is there an ending yet to be? Please come back to us.
I do love how much you loath and despise Michael, I'm right there with you.
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2021 8:32 am Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
Hi, would dearly love more on this story.
Date: Jan 14, 2021 11:42 pm Title: JUST THE TWO OF US
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