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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2017 4:49 am Title: Chapter 9 - Murder, Anyone?

I was afraid Justin wouldn't leave his mother.

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Date: Dec 11, 2017 6:58 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Craig’s Version of Crazy Day

The only easy way to get rid of Craig is to make Jennifer aware of his infidelities or to ruin him before Justin is outed.

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Date: Dec 11, 2017 8:28 am Title: Chapter 3 - No Regrets?

Crap

Author's Response:

Very succinct and apt. Lol. TAG

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Date: Dec 11, 2017 7:49 am Title: Chapter 2 - Business as Usual

Scary but thanks for the warning

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Date: Dec 11, 2017 7:29 am Title: Chapter 1 - The Night Before the Morning After

Poor stupid confused Brian

Author's Response:

Lol. Good description of our hero! TAG

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Date: Dec 10, 2017 7:12 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Crazy Happy Day's Disastrous End

Great day, great fun, great poking at Michael!

The part with Craig was not fun at all, but the result is that Justin might move in.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2017 6:33 pm Title: Chapter 6 - I’m Pretty Sure I AM Crazy - Why Won’t They Believe Me?

It's great that Brian is getting real fun as any kid would have. I think there is a part, hidden very deep, that is the childhood he didn't have. Maybe if he tries to live some funny moments, he would be less bitter and less sarcastic, therefore nicer to Justin.

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Date: Dec 06, 2017 7:05 pm Title: Chapter 5 - No Way Out

Yes! He did it! He found the good balance and a reliable way to get back to the morning after THE night.

He finally was able to experience the scarfing without interruption, though he prefers the bus to go back in time. Less hot, but efficient.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2017 8:13 pm Title: Chapter 4 - I'm Pretty Sure I'm Not Crazy

Poor Brian: he has a very long way ahead. He has all wrong either with Justin or Daphne; none of them could trust him. He is not very subtle.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2017 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 3 - No Regrets?

Very funny! Brian is begging Justin to stay and take a shower! He better be careful or it will look like he's stalking Justin.



Author's Response:

I always love writing stories where the tables are turned. LOL. TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2017 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Business as Usual

The bashing is one of the key moments of Britin. Now Brian knows it wasn't his fault, but Justin's death might be.

I wonder how Brian will deal with Kip.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2017 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 1 - The Night Before the Morning After

I'm quite sure I already read this story, but I can't find any of my comments.

It's an amazing and intriguing beginning; it reminds me of "Groundhog Day" with Bill Murray.

I can't wait to see how you will manage this travel back in time with Brian and his favorite twink, until he gets it right.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it again and reviewing. I’m afraid Brian’s going to have to really work at getting this one right... TAG

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2017 7:58 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Prince and The Palace

What a great story with the perfect "Happy Ending".   Terrific writing.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 9:41 pm Title: Chapter 21 - The Prince and The Palace

I really like the ending and I liked this story even though it was hard for me to read at times. I have no idea why. Maybe it's because I'm not into spirituality at all. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Zen and The Art of Twink Maintenance

I hope these two will be happy this time around. They deserve it. 

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Date: Jun 12, 2017 8:19 pm Title: Chapter 19 - The Reverse Bashing

I think Ben might be right. 



Author's Response:

I think so too . . .  TAG

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 11:18 am Title: Chapter 18 - The Hobbs Variable

This could end up,worse than before. 

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Date: Jun 12, 2017 5:02 am Title: Chapter 17 - Almost Perfect?

Damn. I was so sure it would work this time. 

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Date: Jun 12, 2017 4:55 am Title: Chapter 16 - Operation Convince Craig - The Justin Variation

So far so good. I was hoping they could escape Hobbs this time. 

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Date: Jun 11, 2017 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Operation Convince Craig

I have no idea how to get past Craig. It seems impossible at this point. 

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Date: Jun 11, 2017 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 14 - A New Plan

Hopefully their plan will work. I just want them to be happy  

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Date: Jun 11, 2017 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Who Is This Guy?

Maybe fucking 24/7 will work. It seems like a very enjoyable solution. 



Author's Response:

Seems like as good an idea as any, right? LOL. TAG

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Getting Back to The Living

I like where this is going. But you are right. This isn't the right Brian. 



Author's Response:

It's just too OOC for our Stud. He can't be THIS whimpy. Besides, I don't think Justin would like a Brian that wasn't . . . well, Brian . . . Right? LOL. TAG

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Date: Jun 11, 2017 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 11 - How To Ruin a Perfectly Good Funeral

Maybe this time they will admit him to the looney bin. But I don't think that's the right way. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 8:20 pm Title: Chapter 10 - R.I.P. Craig

I'm pretty sure they will catch Brian. Or Chris will help Justin to get better. 

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