Date: May 20, 2016 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I said in on MW and now I'll say it again here, the Brian/Justin dynamic in this story is just fantastic. You've knocked some of Brian's rough edges off but that is in keeping with a Brian who's been in a relationship and been let down. It's a more compassionate iteration of Brian which doesn't diminish his original appeal.
I can't wait for the next update but no pressure. I can't really complain as I'm a complete snail as a writer.
Kearney
Author's Response:
Firstly, THANK YOU so much for reviewing. I really appreciate it. And it's nice to know I am not the only slow writer out there. I don't know what my problem is LOL. But seriously, I am so happy with what you said, it's exactly what I was going for. I wanted to keep Brian who he was, but soften his edges a little - and you got that, so YAY :) I am almost done with the next chapter xxxx
Date: May 18, 2016 10:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Hi SunshineSally
I really like this story. It is very good. I like it when they build up their relationship slowly.
Please when are you going to uppdate it. I can not wait any longer. I have waited so long allready. You can not end it like that and not continue. It's teasing.
This was my very first review. So you should be proud. I hope i did not write anything stupid. If so, it was not my intention.
Cesku
Author's Response:
Hi Cesku
Thank you so much for your review - and the fact that I was your first makes me so happy. I PROMISE I won't leave you waiting too much longer. I am actually working on the next chapter now. Sorry for being such a slow poke :) But I am SO happy you are enjoying it, thank you xxxx
Author's Response:
Hi Cesku
Thank you so much for your review - and the fact that I was your first makes me so happy. I PROMISE I won't leave you waiting too much longer. I am actually working on the next chapter now. Sorry for being such a slow poke :) But I am SO happy you are enjoying it, thank you xxxx
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2016 3:57 am Title: Chapter 12
Noooooooo! You're not going to leave me on this narrow, crumbly cliff are you! Please hurry and write the next chapter and save me! Please! TAG
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2016 3:33 am Title: Chapter 11
“But kissing is underrated and a great healing tool.” Listen to your PT, Brian! You definitely need more kissing! Lol. Loved that part. TAG
Date: May 10, 2016 7:06 pm Title: Chapter 12
I read this wonderful story in one shot and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
I love the teasing between Brian and Justin.
And the dream was quite interesting, so well written.
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I am working on the next chapter now, so hopefully you won't have too long to wait for the next one :) I cannot wait to hear what you think of the new chapter and all that I have planned :) Thanks again for your review x
Date: May 08, 2016 4:14 am Title: Chapter 12
Hi SunshineSally,
I'm absoluty in love with this stor. I've read it all the way through for the second time. I love this chapter. I feel bad for Brian he really wanted to see Justin and is use to seeing him for his psyhchial threapy appoinments. I know Brian was going to act bad with another threapist. I think Jessica did hurt him, but Justin is the only one he will admit pain too. I'm wondering why Justin called out. Is everything alright? Did Brian do something wrong? Oh I love Gus in this story and how protective he is over his papa. I don't really care Mel. I'm wondering if Brian is going to start pulling away from Justin because he is hurt. I hope Gus can fix this for his papa because Gus is just as attached to his papa as he is Justin. Gus would be very sad if Justin went away. Really Great job. Please update soon.
Michelle
Author's Response:
Aw thank you. I am so glad you enjoy it so much. I am hoping to have an update out VERY soon. Poor Jessica didn't really stand a chance with Brian, did she? LOL.
I can't wait for you to see what happens next. Thanks again for reading and reviewing x