Date: Apr 05, 2017 7:48 pm Title: Chapter 16
So firstly, the sex in this chpt was so very very hot. Ridiculously hot, in fact. Had to get that out there straight away.
I loved all the 80's pop culture references. Major nostalgia.
The description of brian's abuse was beautifully and sensitively done. My heart broke for him.
I'm so looking forward to the next chpt.
Kearney
Author's Response:
Firstly, thank you for leaving such a wonderful review. I can't tell you how much I appreciate it. I was so nervous about posting this chapter and the feedback I have received has been amazing!
I felt it was about time you guys got to witness their hot sexytimes, and poor guys have been waiting a while to get it on LOL!!! But seriously, I knew what I wanted to happen in this chapter and felt that because of the ending, you all deserved something happy and HOT in this chapter.
Thanks for the feedback on Brian's abuse. That was so hard to write, but I was so happy with the outcome :)
Date: Apr 05, 2017 2:04 pm Title: Chapter 16
so much in this chapter...
first of all, where you there when Chris and I had one of our Goonies conversations???? We own it and he's still never seen it... but I finally got him to watch Dirty Dancing (very recently... he DIDN'T like it!!!! ugh)
the sex was so smoking hot in this chapter... like burn down a house hot!!!!
the flashback was awful, and painful, and disgusting and I want to hunt down that coach and shove a cone up his ass, but a full size traffic cone...
I love that Brian admitted that he fantasizes about bottoming... and I do love Bottom Brian with Toppy Justin, but in an even mix... we can't have Brian be a full on bottom now LOL... he is a damn hot top!!!!
GREAT chapter Sally... hurry up and write the next one :) <3
Author's Response:
Thank you thank you thank you, your opinion on this chapter means a lot.
Firstly, I did NOT know this about Chris. He may have just lost himself a wife (on not liking DD or not seeing The Goonies) tell him I am disappointed LOL!
Wasn't the sex just ridiculously hot in this??? Even I was impressed. Don't worry, he won't be a full on bottom, if anything, they'll end up versatile. I just wanted to show that if that god awful thing hadn't have happened to him, he'd be a hell of a lot more confident and comfortable bottoming. And I think from a young age he would have thought about what that felt like as opposed to what it would feel like fucking a guy - but that mother fucker ruined everything for him. It's a huge part of who he is now, so Justin has a lot of damage control to do. Let's just say I don't think he'll be treating that asshole anymore.
Thank you again my cookie, you don't know what your reviews mean to me *hugs*
Date: Feb 05, 2017 7:53 am Title: Chapter 15
What a delightfully long chapter! I saved it for my birthday to satisfy my reading craving - after meeting the need to write and beta. :)
Wow! I wonder how long Brian will be able to suppress memories of his coach after the creep reared his ugly head. That jerk had to have a very traumatic impact on Brian's life - I think this is the first story I've read to explore that. Well done
I really like the way you're building the romance in this story <3 I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
~Karynn
Author's Response:
Hoooo, a belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY, to you my darling. I'm glad this was able to satisfy your reading cravings (or at least I hope it did LOL)
Thank you so much for reviewing. I cannot wait for you to read the next chapter now. I would say I am about 3/4 done and it's hot and steamy and full of wonderfully romantic moments (I hope ;))
xx
Date: Feb 02, 2017 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 15
Can't get enough of this Brian and Justin chemistry. Justin accepts Brian's faults, but expects him to have at least some courtesy... doesn't allow him to just be an asshole.
They can be playful, and Brian even gets bashful, which is awesome!
That ending though.... HOT I want a tubbie (with them preferably) NOW LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you, darling. I promise, the tubbie will be SOON... and if you're good, maybe I'll work in a way for Kathy to get her hands on Brian LMAO
Date: Feb 01, 2017 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for coming back. They seem to have had a good time, hopefully more to come.Ha ha.
Author's Response:
I can promise this won't ever be abandoned, it just takes me a while LOL. Thank you for reviewing. They definitely had fun and you know, I can assure you LOTS MORE fun is to follow ;)
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2017 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 15
Well worth all the work! Great job. TAG
Author's Response:
Thanks, lovely, and I'd never have got there without you!
Date: Feb 01, 2017 9:17 pm Title: Chapter 15
That was awesome! Some hysterical parts, some touching parts, their adorable! Their going to finally have sex now right? Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks you, I am so glad you enjoyed it. And Mayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyybe ;) My aim is to get this next part out much sooner, so send me some good writing vibes hehe x
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2017 8:23 pm Title: Chapter 15
Haha. I loved the Facebook bit. I can sooooooo see Brian being all dodgy about his personal info - haha. Poor Brian is so tortured. Makes me feel so sad to see him struggling so - both physically and with the demons of his past. The dialogue in the car was such fun. It flowed perfectly. This was a great long update. I loved every moment of it... and excited to read even more.
Thanks for the update. *Hugss* Janet
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing, and glad you liked the long update. I can't believe I almost hit 9000 words. That is my longest chapter yet. But you all deserved it for waiting a decade for me to update hehe.
Don't you just want to hug, Brian? So much has happened to him and he deserved none of it.
So happy you enjoyed the car dialogue. I always get so nervous about my writing and you have just made me feel super powerful LOL
Thanks again x
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2017 4:10 pm Title: Chapter 14
This story has long been on my list of much wanted 'things to do'. I don't have a lot of time for reading, but when I read your Facebook post, I couldn't resist any longer. So... this morning I decided to lounge in bed and pulled the story up on my phone. I couldn't stop clicking 'next' at the end of each chapter. I am HOOKED! The detail is amazing, and the emotions simply pour from the page. This story is such LOVE for me, and I can't wait for more.
*Hugss*
Janet
Author's Response:
Coming from YOU, you do not know how happy that makes me *does a fangirl dance*
Your writing is... well, I aspire to be an awesome writer like you. SO THANK YOU <3
Date: Jan 31, 2017 1:10 pm Title: Chapter 14
Are you still sitting at the computer with that face??? Lol
love the playfulness they get... its hot and makes me smile!
Author's Response:
Yes, no wonder my face hurts LOL.
Love that you enjoy this. Thank you for reviewing. x
Date: Sep 23, 2016 1:42 am Title: Chapter 14
Perfect scene and dialogued expression of Daphne and Justin's friendship...so true to how I picture them together.
Can't wait to see how things heat up between Brian and Justin!
Good stuff!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for the review. Sorry it's taken me forever to respond lol
Date: Sep 18, 2016 10:58 am Title: Chapter 14
Hopefully for both "the end of an era and the beginning of a new one"!!!
Thanks Sally, for the update van my favorite story. Xoxo
Date: Sep 17, 2016 9:49 am Title: Chapter 14
I loved everything about this chapter: Justin's conversation with Dowager, his stalking of Brian via the Kinnetik FB page - perfect the way Cynthia 'tattled' on Justin, his evening with Daphne, Brain's apologetic explanation about Adam, and - last but not least - the growing romance between the boys. â¤ï¸
It looks like the slow burn is heating up, so I'm already shamelessly begging for the next chapter. LOL
Date: Sep 09, 2016 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter again. I'm happy Brian told Justin the truth about his ex. Can't wait for your next chapter.
Date: Sep 08, 2016 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 14
Thanks for coming back. I missed this story. I'm glad Brian and Justin talked right away.
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2016 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 14
Hahaha. Loved this chapter with the cat, Daphne and the pics. The story was great too.
Date: Sep 08, 2016 11:54 am Title: Chapter 14
Loved it! So cute Justin stalking him on Facebook and that last picture...omg so funny! Gale is such a goofball! lol
Now that they both know where they stand...time for some sexy time! woohoo!
Date: Sep 08, 2016 5:08 am Title: Chapter 14
Yayya your back I'm so freaken excited I was waiting very patiently for an update that pic though I wasnt expecting that pic got a fright lol
Date: Sep 08, 2016 12:32 am Title: Chapter 14
LOL!! Loved to see an update from you AND this picture at the end of it!! How adorable! Now for the story: I love that you gave Justin every possible reaction that we all tend to go through when faced with our significant other's Ex. I adored his shock at Brian not having a FB page...LOL OH the travesty! I'm glad that Daph agreed to come over and do what a best friend does- listen, tell him he's being an idiot and veg out with an endless supply of munchies. I'm also happy that Brian chose to personally disabuse Justin of some false notions running around in his head (I still want to kick Adam into the middle of another storyline, LOL). Now that Justin knows where he stands with Brian, they will be making some significant moves toward a relationship and the Freaky-Sneaky!! Can't wait for MORE!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
P.S. Be encouraged!! Believe it or not, sometimes having a bout of Writer's Block helps to renew an author's passion for it. Keep up the good work!!
Date: Sep 08, 2016 12:12 am Title: Chapter 14
LMAO @ the pic. I truly enjoyed this one....welcome back sweet Sally Mae
Date: Sep 07, 2016 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 14
Hi,
I love the update and I can't wait for more. It was really cute reading Justin being worried about where he and Brian stand. It's really funny how well Daphne knows Justin. I love that Brian came to see Justin. I think Brian still doesn't know how to deal with the strong emotions. I'm giving Brian credit to for not taking anything out on Justin. Please post more soon!!!
Date: Jul 12, 2016 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
On my road to recovery myself... fighting a nasty summer cold/sinus infection.... I REALLY need some more od your lovely tale..... hope you are doing well
Edda
Date: Jun 29, 2016 3:44 pm Title: Chapter 13
Hate Adam for ruining the moment! >:(
Can't wait to see what happenes next
Author's Response:
Working on it now :) Thanks as always for the review x
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2016 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 13
I love this story so much... like your others... only more...
Date: Jun 04, 2016 3:02 pm Title: Chapter 13
I am happy that you're back. An amazing chapter.