Date: Nov 22, 2016 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
ahhhh, I feel better now that the boys have at least talked...
I really hate Michael, Mel and Lindsay right now. Michael for being a jealous bitch, Mel for being a hateful, jealous shrew, and Lindsay for being weak and letting the others get away with it... some friend!
Date: Nov 22, 2016 4:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am literally yelling at my computer for Justin to shut up and let Brian tell you what happened... ugh lol
Date: Nov 22, 2016 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, so I've started this and am hooked instantly... all of this is misunderstanding between Justin and Brian and I hope they can work thru it quickly and deal with everything else TOGETHER... they are always stronger together!
Date: Nov 22, 2016 8:51 am Title: Chapter 22
Thanks for the update. I'm liking John. He seems like a nice enough guy. I do hope he just stays as a friend and doesn't try to come between Brian and Justin.
Loved that Brian bottomed for Justin. :)
Date: Nov 22, 2016 8:18 am Title: Chapter 22
Fantastic update!
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Date: Nov 22, 2016 7:37 am Title: Chapter 22
I like John . He seems like a real friend to them both.
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2016 12:30 am Title: Chapter 22
I like John. He's like a breath of fresh air. He's nothing like Michael and wishes that he could find someone like Justin who cares for his kids. I'm surprised that Michael only slipped up once.
Date: Nov 21, 2016 5:25 pm Title: Chapter 21
I like the idea of John coming into the picture. I'm sure Michael will use him to try to undermine Brian and Justin's relationship. fortuately we all know it won't work. Justin actually likes John and knows about their history already.
Glad Michael had a momentary sense of maturity with Jenny. He seemed to actually listen to Justin re: Jenny. I hope he figures it all out soon, without Jenny getting hurt over it all. Either that or Jenny realizes what a putz her father is relatively soon. He'll never be father of the year, but it'd be nice to see him put his daughter ahead of anyone else. Have her be the priority over his own feelings.
Interesting idea of John and Ben, but I have to agree with John. The fact that Ben stayed with Michael for so long must make one have doubts. lol. Will Ben try to cause problems between Brian and Justin in NY? Will he be angry or disappointed in Justin? (tough shit) or will he accept justin's decision?
Looking forward to next update. sorry I missed a few reviews. Had a fairly busy weekend. enjoyed all the chapters posted though!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Nov 21, 2016 5:25 am Title: Chapter 21
Fantastic update. Hope John isn't going to be a problem for Justin and Brian, especially with him moving in with them.
Thanks for sharing, always looking for more.
JoAnn
Date: Nov 20, 2016 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 19
Aww, sleepy Justin breakfast is adorable! Frozen waffles exist but of course they shouldn't, actually, I like Eggos. I like that they are listening to the children and trying to work with their expectations. Brian coming home for dinner can go a long way.
Lindsay is the poster child for delusional. She must know the quality of Kinnetic work and yet she submitted something she had to know was subpar. Her days of entitlement are over, poor thing. When she goes to report Brian it is awesome. She's told off as she deserves to be, her son felt unloved, shame, shame.
Date: Nov 20, 2016 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 18
The sweet warm love couple and family moments in the chapter are so beautiful and to juxtapose that with a complete breakdown of a couple and a family -- nicely done!! Lindsay is the perfect flawed inconsistent character here showing the worst side of a mother. Mel is about the same but her move to put Jenny with Justin redeems her some.
Thx!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2016 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 21
We have Ted, Emmett, Drew, Blake, Brian and Justin getting together with John? Michael is supposed to be spending time with Jenny? It's nice that John is impressed with Justin the artist. He's missed out on the commotion that followed Gus' running away. I know Brian's home is big, but is it that big? Everyone is going to New York and Justin is thinking of matchmaking John and Ben. The problem is John knows that Ben used to be with Michael and isn't impressed. I like John. Then we have Michael who is supposed to be with Jenny, but just drops her back at Deb's because she called Justin Dad. Grow up Mikey. Love how Justin told Michael off. I wonder just what Mikey was doing with Jenny that would make her happy to be with him?
Date: Nov 20, 2016 2:09 pm Title: Chapter 20
Fantastic updates. Brilliant fic, can't wait for more.
Thanksfor sharing.
JoAnn
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Date: Nov 20, 2016 9:10 am Title: Chapter 20
They need to trust each other if this is going to work. I'm so glad they are going to get married soon. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Date: Nov 20, 2016 6:53 am Title: Chapter 17
I swear Mikey is like trying to shake shadow. His perception and motivation are always odd. It would be cruel to drive off with anyone else trailing you, but somehow its appropriate for escaping the M.
Em and Justin are good together as friends which will help because three kids is a lot.
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2016 3:09 am Title: Chapter 20
Poor Brian. He's so afraid that Justin will misinterput what happened. And Ted didn't help, he only reinforced it. But Justin didn't see what Ted thought he saw. The weekend in New York is going to be busy and crowded. LOL.
Date: Nov 19, 2016 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 19
Lindsay is so delusional.
I'm glad that Justin and Brian are getting the hang of having all 3 kids.
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2016 5:13 am Title: Chapter 19
Lindsay is Crack?!? How the Hell does she even think her drawing could compare to anything Justin's does?
Her drawings aren't even amateurish they are just bad and you can't spend years not drawing any then pick up a pencil to draw expecting greatness, she is dreaming so hard I think her little universe cracked open to reveal the crazy woman at the wheel.
So Mel had $20,000 in an account for Jenny that Lindsay desperately needs too bad all she can think about is the money cause she never once asked about Gus.
Who wears club clothes to a job interview, did she eat an onion bagel as well and did her hair look unkempt and greasy???
She is beyond self-absorbed and is believing her own hype perhaps Brian's old firm can hire her? lol
[Report This]Date: Nov 19, 2016 5:11 am Title: Chapter 19
Love how you start off the day with a good meal. Now I want waffles. Jenny Rebecca was so surprised. She's not use to a warm meal. Then Lindsay shows up at Kinnetik and thinks Brian's going to hire her? Now that was funny! I'm happy to see that Melanie has put a good bit up for Jenny and Lindsay can't get to it. Love Brian's comment about raising the kids the opposite of the munchers.
Date: Nov 19, 2016 12:43 am Title: Chapter 18
Fantastic updates!
Looking forward to more.
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2016 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 18
How could I forget to mention that Emmett is pregnant? He's going to make a fabulous dad. But the queen outs!
Date: Nov 18, 2016 9:51 am Title: Chapter 18
We need more social workers like Diana in this world.
I'm glad Brian and Justin are starting to talk about things. That's the only way it's going to work this time.
I'm so happy for Emmett and Drew!
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2016 3:02 am Title: Chapter 18
I like this social worker. She's looking out for Gus' interest. Lindsay is only worried about having money to spend on herself.
Date: Nov 17, 2016 9:59 am Title: Chapter 17
Damn Deb! I'm so glad she's not caving to Michael's antics. Thanks for the update.