Date: May 25, 2021 7:27 am Title: Chapter 11
I wish I knew as well. Here was her perfect opportunity to spend time with her family, at Christmas, and she still turned away. Joan has no one to blame but herself.
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2020 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 11
Too bad for Joan, but she would have ruined the mood, even with the money Brian gave her. Justin is really brilliant with his assignments: Cynthia is almost as efficient as Justin to make Brian move forward when he is too stubborn to do it alone.
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2020 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
That's some humiliation! Will she dare asking Brian for the money?
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2020 5:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
Finally, Brian got an illumination! Well done!
The beginning was very Brianesque: "You gonna lead me around by the balls or should I say ball, all weekend long?....Do I make myself clear?! As a crystal dick!".
I love when Justin gets assertive and Brian follows.
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2020 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
This is excellent: "She had no idea how homosexuals celebrated Thanksgiving or Christmas or anything else. They probably had some sort of weird or depraved rituals that they followed." Poor Joan, so narrow-minded.
Claire seems to have had a better interview with the social services compared to Joan. The "No fucking way" from John must have hinted his state of mind.
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2020 5:17 pm Title: Chapter 7
Debbie and her big mouth! No wonder Michael is always putting his foot in his mouth with such an example!
I'm trying to remember how this story started and why Lindsay and Melanie seem to be living apart: I guess it was after the "Sam" incident and before the bombing as they reconciled just after this event.
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2020 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
I hope the family lawyer will be Melanie, so she will be aware of what Joan has in mind for Gus.
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2020 4:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
The end is promising; the will should be somewhere and if not, maybe the letters might help.
This is excellent: " "You heard me. Roll the fuck over. It's my turn for some mindless sex and you owe me." Brian stared at Justin in shock.". That was indeed very assertive!
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2020 4:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
Joan is going for the gold and the lawyer she found is doing the same thing.
More interesting information about JABK and his lover. Maybe there are other paintings hidden elsewhere. Justin is not at the end of his quest.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2020 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
Joan really is vindictive! Like Mel, I don't think she will get the kids, but she could have a say in the paintings and deed.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2020 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Joan learned too many things for the family's sake!
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2020 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
And here comes Joan!!! I fear big trouble with this harridan. Kudos to Lindsay for her speech; that won't stop Joan, but it allowed some timeout at the gallery. Father Tom is very patient!
Date: Jan 27, 2019 1:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
good one. Joan did not deserve that check
Author's Response: Joan doesn't deserve much, but Brian deserves better.
Date: Jan 24, 2018 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 11
I was kind of hoping Joan would accept the invitation. It was nice of Brian to ask her anyway.
Author's Response: Joan is still holding her old prejudices.
Date: Jan 24, 2018 3:47 pm Title: Chapter 10
I wonder if she will have the guts to ask Brian for the money.
Author's Response: That's a good question.
Date: Jan 24, 2018 10:25 am Title: Chapter 9
Woohoo. I'm so glad they found it. I almost feel sorry for Joan here. It sucks to be all alone.
Author's Response: Yes it does.
Date: Jan 24, 2018 10:25 am Title: Chapter 9
Woohoo. I'm so glad they found it. I almost feel sorry for Joan here. It sucks to be all alone.
Date: Jan 24, 2018 9:38 am Title: Chapter 8
How could she think that Claire would want to celebrate thanksgiving with her? She must be absolutely delusional.
Author's Response: Could be.
Date: Jan 24, 2018 9:11 am Title: Chapter 7
They just have to find that will. Brian's reaction to Debbie surprised me but in a positive way.
Author's Response: Sometimes we like to surprise.
Date: Jan 24, 2018 9:02 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh Debbie. How could you be so careless? Brian is going to have a fit for sure.
Author's Response: You mean a queen-out? LOL
Date: Jan 23, 2018 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
They have to find that will. It would be so great.
Author's Response: Agreed.
Date: Jan 23, 2018 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
That was so romantic. The conflicted way he talked about Patrick. It must have been really hard to be true to his feelings.
Author's Response: Yes, I would imagine so.
Date: Jan 23, 2018 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
I don't think anyone would give Jian the children. I'm more concerned that she will try to take the money back from the farm.
Author's Response: She seems greedy enough to do that.
Date: Jan 23, 2018 3:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
It sucks that no one noticed her. What is she thinking she can accomplish by spying on everyone?
Author's Response: It is her family, even if she doesn't deserve them.
Date: Jan 23, 2018 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Please don't ever let Joan find out about Gus. She is such a bitch.
Author's Response: She certainly has been.