[Report This]Date: Sep 30, 2021 4:19 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
I really enjoyed this!
Date: Jan 28, 2020 1:56 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
I don't reread stories, but this is the exception. The use of shifting perspective and 2nd person POV are categorically my favourite techniques. The whole story has an Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close vibe and I love it. You wrote in canon but the characters had time apart to grow which made it more realistic. I also like that you didn't write anti anyone. Interesting study into the complexities of human beings. I love this, and feel so connected to the characters. I want more but will settle to reread it! Thanks for your dedication in writing this. x
Date: Feb 04, 2019 9:11 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
i get so confuse, you jump all over the place
Date: Oct 03, 2017 4:11 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
Amelia and the pool: what a great part!
Brian and Justin still have some issues to deal with, but they seem to be able to manage without too much drama.
Date: Oct 02, 2017 7:00 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
Hot, funny, sad, business oriented... Another great chapter!
The part regarding Babylon's business and constraints is amazing: so much to check and to secure.
Amelia is adorable and funny, with her mimicking of Brian.
Date: Sep 27, 2017 6:28 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
Amelia and Brian: what a great pair! I loved the M&M's game they had and the nap she took on his shoulder.
Craig congratulating Justin is quite unsettling: far too late and kind of profiteer; maybe does he hope he could get a free painting?
Date: Sep 20, 2017 7:07 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
Once again, a great chapter!
I loved Harper's speech with Amelia's interventions.
Daniel and Gabe? That should be fun to see what they could become.
The idea to mix Alan's ashes with paint is genius! If the project helps Justin to paint again, that's even better.
Date: Sep 12, 2017 7:45 pm Title: Framed
God I loved this so much... It was so passionate and downright hot, but also witty, wry and funny... Your usual trademark blend. I read the stories in the wrong order, but enjoyed them all nevertheless, this one being my favourite of the series. Please keep writing! Thank you.
Date: Sep 12, 2017 6:58 pm Title: Embark
I love your version of B and J... Feels totally authentic to me. Thank you for continuing to write... You're my favourite writer on here and when I feel too sad that there's no more QaF I return to your stories for my fix. Thank you. X
Date: Sep 11, 2017 9:31 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
I love all "clarity" moments you wrote and also Alan and Danny together, watching what is happening. Richard is a smart guy, sensitive too.
Date: Sep 11, 2017 3:11 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
Difficult hours for Brian and Justin, but they seem to have come to an understanding.
Difficult background of Alan, while he was young and the months before his death: what a life he had. The only lights he had were his sister and his niece, as well as Justin and Daniel.
Date: Sep 06, 2017 6:18 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
This chapter is so dense on emotions.
The way this story is built is amazing. Brian's dream is once again really weird, but it has a purpose, I guess.
The way you wrote the relationship between Danny and Daniel is beautiful, with great ideas.
Sam's way of preparing Amelia's breakfast is very entertaining.
Brian and Justin are still following the rough path to the recovery.
Date: Sep 01, 2017 6:25 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
Amazing chapter! So many great things; it's difficult to list them all.
I loved when Justin was trying to explain Gus' behavior to Brian.
Amelia also had quite funny moments.
The main part being "the talk"! Finally! And Brian listened with respect, no smirk or innuendo. Huge step for them.
Date: Aug 30, 2017 4:07 am Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
The light is not far; the darkness and rain are going to disappear, finally! Thanks to Jon.
Date: Aug 29, 2017 6:11 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
Great analysis of what happened long time ago.
The only light in this chapter is Amelia playing doctor and making her show. The key point being the bracelet she actually stole.
Date: Aug 28, 2017 8:13 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
The scene at Macy's was funny as Amelia didn't panic and continue to "shop".
Brian seems so out of his usual self. So sad.
Date: Aug 26, 2017 6:53 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
They are not there yet, but seem better.
Date: Aug 26, 2017 4:20 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
What a mess! What a night!
I hope they will work this out soon.
Date: Aug 26, 2017 11:15 am Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
I don't understand clearly what's going on between Justin and Brian; why does Justin want Brian to go back to Pittsburgh?
The story of Sam and Harper is endearing: the labels are a great idea to tell without talking.
The part with Daniel revealing Justin's background is funny because of the priest presence.
Date: Aug 25, 2017 4:46 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
So, Cody's dead and Chris' wife has a new love interest. The cleaning is still going on.
The AfterDeath is starting to get crowded.
The dream at the beginning is so weird.
Amelia is so amazed by Brian, it's quite funny.
Date: Aug 25, 2017 4:02 am Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
Interesting back story from Justin, funny for some parts.
Jack being shut by Leo was great.
Date: Aug 24, 2017 6:35 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
Amazing ideas: Al, Leo, Chris, Jack, ... All of them dealing with unfinished topics, while watching the living actors of their past life.
Amazing pictures as well.
Amazing story!
Do the tunnels exist as you describe them?
Date: Aug 24, 2017 5:31 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
It's great to have some back story from Zeek.
I loved these lines from Justin and Brian:
“You need to have your head examined,” you told him a little while later as the two of you were entering the bank.
“You might be right,” Brian responded. “But I’m not taking my pants off right now.”
Date: Aug 23, 2017 7:57 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
Hard time for everyone, except Zeek who had some fun (hot fun) with the barmaid.
I hope Sam is not leaving Harper after they come back from the underground.
Date: Aug 22, 2017 8:16 pm Title: Beyond the Yellow Brick Road
Poor Alan: he lost his mother in a horrible way, his father ignored him and the society rejected him. He only had his sister, Stich, Zeek and Justin, part time and his death wasn't peaceful; until the end he must have felt not wanted.