Date: Oct 18, 2016 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
This might be better than the first. We already know Michael is a shit and everyone hates him.Yay!
Author's Response:
Oh wow thanks! Yeah Michael is eau de excremente and a stupid one at that!
Hope you enjoy the rest.
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2016 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Brian surprising Cynthia like that was funny and just what was needed before we had to deal with The Gruesome Twosome.
Michael suing Alice is so dumb and as usual has backfired cause now he has been served, Mel needs to seriously consider getting her and the kids away from Lindsay.
Lindsay honestly thinks she can take on Zee girl better wake up and face reality before Zee twists her like a pretzel, Lindsay isn't woman enough to handle Faal who wants to share the rest of his life with a Goddess, not the sluggish slut peeping in through the window.
Michael and Lindsay couldn't get out of a paper bag even if you punched holes in it for them, The Petersens really don't wanna be apart of this story cause I bet they have secrets they don't want others to know. (Of course having the Petersens humiliated in front of all their friends would just be WONDERFUL!!)
I can't wait for Lindsay to try to hit on Faal again I want to see what Zee is going to do and Jennifer's follow-up.
I just love stories when Michael and Lindsay get what's coming to them :)
Author's Response:
I love reading anti-Michael and Lindsay stories too - they were the most annoying characters ever though sometimes Mel did run them close.
Lindz as ever doesn't grasp the concept of the word no, she can't understand why Faal would brush her off...and stupidly tries again. And I do believe Zee will be saying sluggish slut at one point during this fic!
Hoepe you enjoy the rest as much
Nicole
Date: Oct 18, 2016 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loved the beginning with Cyn, Ted and Brian. knowing that there is more than likely a fair amount of angst to come, it was a wonderfully light hearted, fun and rather sweet beginning. Cyn's reaction was a riot! :) Justin asking Ben to be an usher was nice too. I can just imagine Michael's reaction to that little tidbit. Even more "betrayal" as far as he's concerned.
Oh Michael.......What a delusional character he is. I will never understand his thought processes or rather lack there of. He really doesn't have a leg to stand on legally. But dear lordy...to try to serve Alice with a suit? does he really expect to live through that? Oye! He's such a mindless fool. It's going to be the entire family against him. Not a hope in hell. Even Lindsey will have to be cautious if she hopes to keep Brian from shutting his pocketbook. As it stands her intereference is going to cause more problems than shoe could ever imagine! He seems to think that Lindsey is going to be supporting him. Fight for him. She's only in it for herself. Will be pretty humerous when he figures that out. Mind you, it will more than likely be too late by then. YAY!! hehehe.
I love how Ben and Steve are really takign things slowly. Friends first. they have Jenny's blessing, which by the way was so very sweet. I agree with Deb. I hope that Michael hasn't done too much damage. I think though, that Ben knows the difference between Steve adn Michael. Let's face it....there's a HUGE difference!!
Ok...now Deb's reslove had better NOT crumble! she needs to stand firm! I know she's his mom, but she needs to let him deal with his own shit. Thank goodness for Kiki!! I hope Michael didn't sense her weakening!
Lindsey's last parting remark..."once people know their place.: Oooooooooooooh boy! she should take a lesson in that herself. Man oh man! she doen't have a hope, but all her efforts will surely be entertaining. lol
Fantastic chapter!!!!!! I am really looking forward to more of this. It's going to be such fun!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Elaine. Yep Kiki to the rescue, had to be done. Michael, for all his niavete exterior, is a shark when it comes to his mother and he's beginning to smell blood. But he doesn't see how Lindz is going to cast him aside in her quest of Brian's checkbook or Faal's attention - yep she tries again. And you're not the only one who is irked by her "know their place" comment, that surely comes back to bite her on her ass.
Ben and Steve are going to be a bit schmoopy it has to be said, we had Hunter and Matt in WAALAAS time for dad to get what he deserves.
Glad you are enjoying it
Nicole
Date: Oct 18, 2016 5:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to see what Zee has in store!
Author's Response:
And Daphne, don't forget she's yet to come...
Date: Oct 18, 2016 4:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
Lindsay is such a delusional bitch and she plays right into Michael's idiocy. 'Justin has always been jealous of you...' and 'Once people know their place, everything will be fine...' really got under my skin. But my real question is how is Michael's broke ass paying for the new place? Surely Lindsay isn't going to take from their household funds to support that grown baby! Mel better start playing hardball before she ends up broke too through no fault of her own....SMH what a MESSY Mitch and Bitch!
As for Lindsay thinking she can take on Zee...BRING IT ON WITCH! I think she will not only be jealous of Zee because of Faal but because Zee is perfectly capable of snapping her WASPy neck with or without using her hands (although I would definitely prefer Zee do it physically, LOL). Add Jennifer into the mix and I think Lindsay's takedown will be as legendary as Michael's.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Nichelle,
I had a feeling her comments about jealousy and place would irk some folk. Michael still has some money left from the loan he got from Brian and Justin and hopes to get money from Ben in the divorce...oh what a foolish foo-foo fool!
Ah yes, the plot bunny is working on the Lindsay takedown...Zee doesn't even chip a nail!
Happy reading
Nicol
Date: Oct 18, 2016 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok Lindsay you really digging your own grave..always putting your nose in someone elses business but who cares anyway,just remember regret doesn't comes first...And that whiny brat that he is,i think just a little piece of brain does he even have??
looking forward for the next chapter...Good luck MissMerlot!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Little Miss Primcess doesn't know what's going to hit her.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 18, 2016 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well twiddle dumb and twiddle dumber are really starting to dig a hole for themselves.
Author's Response:
Yep all the way to hell....
Date: Oct 18, 2016 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's on!!! Lindsay would be a smudge on the side of the road if Zee handles her. And Mikey, it's called karma yours is here to bite you in the a**.
Tough Ted is adorable.
Author's Response:
Oh yeah!! I think when the time comes, Zee will leave a speck, a smudge would be too kind. Karma is gonna take a chunk and serve it to him to eat!
Ted gets tougher.
Hope you enjoy the rest
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2016 6:10 am Title: Chapter 2
Aaagh. Michael trying to sue Alice. With everything Brian's got that is so not going to work. He's losing everything including his daughter and still he doesn't believe any of it. Love everything about this chapter.
Author's Response:
What can I say, the man is an idiot, but it's not just Brian Alice has...Faal is gunning for him, in the nicest legitimate kinda way obviously!
Happy reading!
Nicole
Date: Oct 18, 2016 6:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Pretty exciting to see your second story up already! Keep up the great work! TAG
Author's Response:
Thanks TAG. Had to be done, no amount of merlot was keeping the bunny quiet.
Hope you enjoy!
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2016 1:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Everyone had a very good time last night, thank goodness they only do that every month lol
Michael really can't believe that everyone is not going to just forgive him and go back to the status quo, I would say grow up but Michael never learned to be an adult so why should he start now, all his stuff is gone, his marriage is over, he only has one person on his side and yet he still won't believe that any of this is his fault.
What are they going to do with that stupid statue? I say carve it up and send a piece to Michael lol
Lindsay really needs to watch her back cause first Jennifer is gonna kick her ass, then Zee is going to make her disappear if Faal doesn't do it first.
David actually turned out to be a decent guy who has a wonderful partner who is going to be more interesting as the story progresses.
Lindsay falling in the pool was so pathetic but I love when that ghost pepper attacked her, Jennifer told her off and everyone changed seats.
I can't wait for the next chapter, I could use more laughs from The Gruesome Twosome and their stupid antics.
Author's Response:
Yeah can you imagine the state of their livers is that was more than once a month!
Michael is so used to being forgiven for all his mistakes that he can't see how this is any different. Statue issue has been addressed now, as tempting as it would be to carve it up, this methinks was so much better.
As per Princess Buzzkill she hasn't got a clue and only sees the white picket fence picture...Faal is too much of a gentleman to deal with her the way she deserves, Zee has no such qualms and neither does Jennifer.
I was going to write David as a continued bad guy but changed my mind, and Charles is going to be very interesting indeed.
Hope you enjoy reading the rest.
Nicole
Date: Oct 17, 2016 5:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Normally I have little sympathy for those with hangovers, but everyone deserved to tie one on the night before. Definitely a night worthy of celebration.
Is Lindsey bi polar or just such agood WASP that she's able to turn shit on and off so quiclky and smoothly. Does she really think she's not obvious or doesn she just not care? does she think she's some kind of catch? The pool thing...another brilliant move on teh writer's part. Had to see it coming when Faal mentioned needing pool shoes. I was looking forward to it! LOL. I'm wondering how long it will take for her to get a clue? what kind of machinations she will attempt and what the repercussions will inevitably be. So lookiing forward to he r making a comoplete ass of herself! lol. Her attempts were utterly pathetic!
Michael thinking it was all a joke....LOL!! well, reality is hitting home adn it's hurting!! YAY!! It's definitely no joke!!
Excellent start to the sequel. thank you for starting it so soon.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Elaine. Thanks.
Yep the gang got well and truly tied that night.
Lindsay is Michael's sister from another mister and doesn't think her actions and deeds are anything bad. But she forgets that she's not the only wasp.
Michael does what Michael does best...and he does it badly.
Hope you enjoy reading the rest
Nicole
Date: Oct 17, 2016 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Michael seriously thought it was all a joke??? how imbecilic!
and Lindsay better catch on soon, or she will lose Gus, Mel and Jenny and only have Michael and that is a HUGE punishment lol
Author's Response:
Indeed he did and indeed he is. He and Lindsay deserve everything that's coming to them...it might take a while to get there but they will get it.
Hope you enjoy.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 9:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Intriguing. Looking forward to more:)
Author's Response:
Thanks. Working on C2 as we speak.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 9:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Lol lindz is so obvious lol good chapter can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
She is indeed. And obviously stupid because she is a persistent wasp.
Happy reading
Date: Oct 17, 2016 6:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I so adore you. I love this story.my for continuing it.I am looking forward to Mikey and Lindsey getting the smack down. Ty for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I am basking in adorableness, so happy you like it.
Happy reading.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 6:33 am Title: Chapter 1
LMFAO!!!! Dealing with Lindsay is already a TRIP! Someone really needs to turn the hose on her hot ass! I vote for Zee!
Michael is still trying instead of going off to slink in the gutters...SMH! Some people are just hard learners! Ted calling him and telling him that it isn't a joke had me snickering. How dare he think that people were 'joking' with his sorry good-for-nothing ass after what he did? And of course, his whiny twin sister from another mister, is fixing to join him on that hard bed he's made for himself. It is definitely going to be BIG FUN to watch Lindsay take her gambles and lose it all. Maybe they can be roommates in the not-tell motel where Michael is staying...LOL
AWESOME START!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Thanks Nichelle!
Whilst Zee doesn't need to do anything, she will fight for her man, and will be like a lion mamma when it comes to other members of her family. And of course then there's Jen who believes in the mantra it takes a wasp to kill a wasp. Whilst Daphne will deal with Mikey in her own sweet and deadly way...
Happy reading
Hugs
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2016 3:36 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG! You've made an excellent start. Poor Faal having to put up with Lindsay. Poor Mel, same thing. Will Lindsay's opinion change once she's told all the Michael has done. Speaking of. Does he honestly think he can get away with pretending that nobody meant what they said. Love the prat fall into the pool. And the hot wings. Charles meeting with Michael was right on the money.
Author's Response:
Oh thanks!
Yep there is only one woman for Faal and it's not Lindz, despite her comehitherness. Yes, Michael really does think that and of course it doesn't change Lindz's opinion because as per he will spin it so that he looks like he's the victim. Watch for Charles, there is only so much imbecile he can take.
Happy reading.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 3:17 am Title: Chapter 1
I really loved Whispers and am really looking forward to seeing where you go with this one.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope you like Buzz.