[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2016 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
OMGAWD I SO LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!
It had so much going on and Lindsay comes off looking like a shrew and an incompetent Host, seems the Lady Of The Manor could use some pointers at planning a party.
I so wanted Emmett to tell her off but that menu switch was hilarious I was cracking up so much when I read that, I especially loved when Jennifer was being so helpful the whole thing had me rolling.
How could Lindsay not have a car service for her guests Brian and Justin always have one and so do Zee and Faal.
I felt for Zee when Deb started yelling at her she has now experienced Deb when she acts before she thinks, I hope Deb doesn't do that again cause unlike everyone else I think Zee will tell her off and make Deb go fetal.
Lindsay was more of an Ass than a Gracious Hostess.
An avant-garde party? Sounds boring which it was. Thankfully Emmett and Zee where able to save the night or else everyone would have been asleep before midnight.
The karaoke battle was hilarious and I think everyone won that night.
Michael was his usual charming self just like Lindsay was her poised and polished self the whole night.
Love that Leda has shown up she was a better match for Mel who needed someone to challenge her, Lindsay just wants a doormat who will let her get away with her antics and take care of her.
Mel married the female wasp version of Mikey! Eewwwwwww!!!
The day after is going to be Amazing.
Curious as to why Emily was going after Lindsay maybe I missed something due to laughing, guess I will have to read the chapter over again ;)
I bow to the prowess of Emmett, Daphne and Jennifer they put Lindsay in her place and knocked her on her Ass.
You Astound Me With Your Evil Mind lol
Thank You So Much :)
Author's Response:
Whoop, I am really pleased youl liked it.
Yep the Lindsay Saboteurs Club got her good. As usual Lindsay only sees what is front of her and that's generally herself in a mirror whilst preeniing.
Deb, for once, realised the mistake she made and immediately went to make amends, not normal Debs behaviour you have to admit.
I loved writing the karaoke battle...namely for Brian to really let go.
You didn't miss anything in Emily needling Lindsay in this chapter it is covered in the next...brace for impact.
My mind is about to get a bit more evil.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 28, 2016 3:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
So...I was just settling down for bed. Ready to put something on to watch as I fell asleep when I thought, Hmmmm I'm gonna check KD. Lo adn behold what do I see? This! Like I can even contemplate doing anything else but reading. It's the cocktail party for heaven's sake! And I must say it lived up to and surpassed my hopes. LOL. Nothing like trying to fall asleep with visions of Linsey wet from the pool, wine on her dress, looking frantic and what a mess her party was. Oh! and her more than likely animosity towards Emmett and Zee for taking over. So that's what the troops were planning! I mean they had everything covered didn't they! That was a bloody brilliant chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So many details you add. Down to Michael having to google Avande Garde! LOL! And the fact he ended up looking like a waiter...bwahahah! He derserves every single piece of crap he gets in life!! What he was thinking about Ben...:In a way I do miss him........." wanted to hurt him! BADLY!
As does Lindsey of course. This party is only the beginning! She's going to run around and blame Zee for it all. when let's face it, everyone had a fabulous time! She's making the wrongkind of enemy out of Zee. She really seems to think she's all that, when really, she ain't none of that! Deb also learned a quick lesson. Hopefully she DID learn it. She's still getting her nose into things, and her idea of "talking" has something to be desired. Hopefully Carl will keep her a bit more calm adn realistic when it comes to things.
Party is getting in full swing. Seriously....whee the HELL did you come up with the menu idea?!!! I very nearly peed myself! My daughter came into my room to find out why I was laughing so hard. :) Naturally I had to tell her and I think she wants to write the idea down. (should I worry? ;) ) I must say though... I make Nasi goreng alot. I'm not sure I'll ever be able to make it without this in my head. LOL
Thansk for this! It made my night. Really really enjoyed every word of this.
Cheers!
Elaine
Author's Response:
Elaine,
I am so glad you liked it. And of course Mitchell had to play too.
Lindz is too busy fighting a war with Zee, that she's not going to win anyway, that she isn't seeing anything else, whatever it is she wants from Brian [not telling yet] or Britin she's forgotten in her quest for oneupmanship with Zee. And Deb has learned and if she needs reminding Zee will do so adn then if there is anything left of her Carl and Faal will have at it.
Ah the menu, I have to admit that came out of nowhere, especially the nasi dish.
Happy reading
Nicole
Date: Oct 28, 2016 2:53 pm Title: Chapter 11
Even without the "help" of Em, Daph and Jen, I don't think Lindsay would have been successful... and having Leda back makes me smile for Mel!!!!!
Author's Response:
True enough but it wouldn't have been half as much fun.
Yep Leda is back,but only for a bit...she will return though.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2016 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 11
You throw the best parties. Lindsay was such a bitch and even her 'friends' saw it. Nice to see Leda showing up. Loved all the little thing that Emmy Lou and Dapne came up with. But Michell! Gotta love him. Emmett and Zee saved the party on so many occasions. Love Mikey falling in the pull and wonder who pulled him out. A good time was had by all, except Lindsay.
Author's Response:
Why thank you, I try my best. Ah yes, Mitchell had to get him some payback.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 28, 2016 3:07 am Title: Chapter 10
I love it- so evil- jsut hope michael wil sign the papers and let Ben on wth his life
Author's Response:
Hi
Thanks for reading, I am a great fan of your fics!
I know, you wouldn't think those 3 innocent looking lovely people could be so mean...but
Michael would have to be selfless to do that, you know care about someone other than himself...so no not yet not until he's forced to.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2016 12:45 am Title: Chapter 10
I truely love this chapter. You've caught Lindsay perfectly, from wanting to have a party and expecting everyone, meaning Emmett, to do the work. Emmett handled her better than I could have. Love the fact that the kids are going to be there. It should be fun with Ben and Steve along with David and his significant other.
Author's Response:
Thanks. She's always been a princess so naturally expects people to bow and scrape. Emmy Lou is a southern boy, so there is a iron fist in that velvet glove. Hope you enjoy the rest.
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 27, 2016 7:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gus has just about had it! I'm sure he's just waiting with baited breath to turn 18 so he can get the hell out that house! (wherever it's going to be) He's right that Lindsey says one thing yet expects another when it comes to her. Anyone else and I'm sure she wouldn't have said a word, but when he actually challenged her.......well!! She get herself into a self righteous snit. What a frigging hypocrite she is.
I have GOT to ask.........what the hell is Michael thinking?! does he really think he's capable ot taking care of Jenny?! Does he really think that Jenny is going to even WANT to go there for the week? She's old enough to make up her own mind at this point. At least the courts would take her feeling into consideration at this point, if it ever came to that. At least Mel has an inkling of what a disaster this is all going to be. Am I terrible for REALLY looking forward to that blow out!?! lol. Now that he's seeing the value of what his store could be, the value of what Rage could be, he wants Justin back in. Not likely!!
As for Lindsey and her party plans. she really thought Emmett was going to just do the whole thing for her? so presumptuous! WOW! I'm with Faal on this. She's up to something. mind you, so is everyone else apparently. LOL. I absolutely can't wait for this party to happen!
Brilliant lead up to a much anticipated cocktail party. Very excited!!
Cheers,
Elaine!
ps. Jen is awsome as always!! LOL! she almost always has me in stitches. So innocently devious! the most brilliant Wasp ever! :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2016 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
Holy Smokes You Got Me on The Edge of My Seat About This Party!!
I am so curious about what Emmett, Daphne and Jennifer have planned to embarrass Lindsay, I so want to know right now but the waiting builds up my anticipation for her humiliation.
She honestly thought Emmett was going to do the catering he offered his and Drew's home, not his services, besides she couldn't afford him anyway.
How could she plan a party and not invite the kids? They have never been excluded from a celebration before?
I hope everyone out shines Lindsay with their outfits especially Zee I want Lindsay to be pissed that Zee is getting more compliments than her.
The ideas they came up with for the comic book store is brilliant and will make it more profitable than when Michael ran it, plus his collectibles are being auction off makes me giggle.
I see Lindsay is trying to dig in her heels and stay in the brownstone she just keeps underestimating Zee who would love to pull her out by her hair. (I would pay to see that)
What is in the paperwork that Lindsay is going to try to use to get into Britin. I am with Faal I want to know what that Cow (Sorry Cows don't mean to insult you) is up to?
I wish the chapter was up already, I gotta know how bad this will be for Lindsay and I'm thinking Michael too. (45 guests with cellphones, this is going to spread so fast lol)
You Are Driving Me Nuts and I Love It!!
Author's Response:
I really hope you enjoy C11, it was fun to write.
As Faal and Mitchell have said, she wants to be lady of the manor but comes up short especially, when faced with people who just want others to have a good time.
She can dig her heels in as much as she wants...I might just put in a bit of hair pulling, just for you!
That had to chafe Michael's ass about the comic book store especially when it was Matt's idea and when Justin blew him out of the water wanting to restart Rage.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 27, 2016 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
Omg what on earth do they have planned for Lindsey's cocktail party? This should be epic! Lol
Author's Response:
Glo,
Read on and enjoy, I hope.
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 27, 2016 2:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love this... can't wait to see how this party is such a big success... (Insert sarcasm here lol)
Author's Response:
Thanks cookiebun, hope you really enjoy Chapter 11!
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 25, 2016 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 9
<singing> DING DONG the Captain's dead no more body, no more head! DING DONG Captain Astro's DEAD!!! Now he will have a real purpose...FIREWOOD! Yes, I was laughing loud and long as everyone took a turn at shredding the useless wooden caucas of Captain Astro. I hope Justin sends the video footage to Michael, LOL I know, I'm insanely cruel. I should feel bad about my mean streak but....NAH!!! LOL And after those pathetic, selfish and thoughtless gifts he bought for Jenny and Hunter, whatever sympathy he may have incurred to mourn his now bundle of sticks has officially gone up in flames....along with the Captain! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Yeah, I'm still laughing!! $15K of firewood is bound to last quite a long time, much longer than Michael... or Lindsay for that matter.
As for that walking the THOT named Lindsay (for those that don't know what THOT means the definitions or acroymn stands for 'That Ho Over There'), she really needs to sit in an ice bath to cool the hell down. Don't nobody want her. I'm glad that she peeped Zee and Faal so that she would maybe get an understanding of what love and passion really look like (two emotions that she doesn't inspire in anyone unless they love to HATE her or are passionate about being RID of her). The idea of her trying to outdo ANYONE with her cooking and party-throwing abilities is laughable. Michael just inflated her ego, talking about how Zee is not as classy as Lindsay. But then again what would the mmanchild without basic table manners, devoid of simple etiquette and with limited intelligence really know about the effortless elegance that Zee has. Again that is what makes Zee a woman with everything and keeps Lindsay being nameless, tasteless, faceless THOT when it comes to Faal.
I won't lie...I'm looking forward to the next round of ass-whoopings to be meted out to Lindsay and Michael. Just like that dumb ass Astro, Dumb and Dumber do not have staying power. It's going to be an absolute blast to watch it all play out!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Don't feel bad about the meanstreak...are you a mind reader by the way?
THOT and Capt PITA are in for a very bumpy ride, there are areas of smoothness for them but in the end they will lose...NYE party is going to be fun to write, Michael really does get to see another side of Brian he never knew was there...
Off to write ass-whoopings.
Happy reading
Hugs
Nicole
Date: Oct 25, 2016 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
Fantastic chapter!!!!!!!!! Was grinning like a fool through parts of it.
Great family time on boxing day. Hangovers galore mind you. Justin having fun in teh kitchen. Just from the way you've described it, I want to be in there too! :)
Lindsey and Michael though. Completely blind to their own faults. The don't see that they've done anything wrong. When will the figure this shit out!! Had to giggle when they assumed the driver was there to pick them up, only to just be handed their phones, lol. Everything about them is just so maddening! So full of themselves! Michael actually saying that Lindsey has more class...more deserving of Faal! Yeah right!!!! PML!!! Michael's ideas of gifts is nuts. There's no way he put any thought into it. I mean really. He has all this money stashed away supposedly, and spend $10 on stupid thoughtless gifts. Even for Jenny. who btw I was absolutely heartbroken for in this chapter. She wants what is expected of a father, but it's all in vain. I think she's finally figured it out. she held onto a bit of hope for a bit, but sadly, I do believe those hopes are finally dashed. We'll just have to see. I'm curious also as to what Michael has up his sleeve. He seems to think that both he and Lindsey will get what they want....but what is it really? What does Michael want? I don't belive for a second that he really loves Ben. He doesn't have a hope in hell with Brian. they're barely friends. I really want to know where you're taking us with this!
Lindsey got an eyeful! will this prompt her to try even harder for Faal after seeing that? I also had to laugh at her idea for the party. Does she really think she can even come close to Zee in hosting abilities? Is she hoping to impress Faal enough that he'd what....leave Zee because Lindsey throws better parties? BAHAHA! not that she could of course, but the very idea is a riot!
The captain is finally gone! for real this time! Excellent! Loved that even Mel got in there with the axe. Brilliant idea you had there.
Looking forward to what comes next!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
L&M are the victims of course...not! Michael is a mean spirited and fisted little snit. He doesn't want to spend the money on anyone but himself and collectibles.
Sorry but a heads up more angst fro Jenny to come.
Michael wants to be back with Ben simply so that he's not with Steve any more, but Ben isn't going to fall for that. And Lindz wants to be lady of the manor or the treehouse whichever she can get...
Oh yes the Captain is gone, I had to get Lizzie on him...it just popped in my head and I thought a fitting demise for that annoying thing.
And of course Lindz hasn't got a present from Brian so there's that moan to come...unless of course Mel agrees to share hers...
Happy reading
Nicole
Date: Oct 25, 2016 12:32 am Title: Chapter 9
Lindsay just will NOT get it, I know she thinks she is the ultimate WASP, but she will be outwitted... EASILY!!!
and Michael is a dimwit.. just in general lol
Author's Response:
Indeed they are and indeed they won't.
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2016 12:25 am Title: Chapter 9
Sadly Lindsay and Michael seem to think they did nothing wrong and feel that apologies are owed them! After a morning spent by most getting over too much liquor consumption, Zee talks Ben and Hunter into chopping up Capt Astro, with help from most everyone. Justin finally gets around to cooking Keeping up to Zee's standards could not have been easy. Mikey actually got the kids gifts, cheap one, couldn't have cost over $10. I am surprised that Mel is letting Lindsay come back to the brownstone. Then Lindsay has the nerve to want to throw a party there. Why is Emmett being so nice and allowing her to throw the party at his and Drew's place? The pedicure contest was a nice touch. Just what is Daphne up to? Excellant chapter.
Author's Response:
Yeah the gruesome delusional twosome are a joy to write...letting them have hope that they will achieve their ends only to have it yanked from their pathetic grasp.
Speaking of owing, note that Lindz hasn't mentioned the lack of present from Brian to her for Christmas...but of course Mel will share hers...right?
Although Mel is done she has to be careful especially with the kids as she doesn't want a repeat of the custody battle.
Emmy Lou and Daphne are concocting a plan...let's just say there will be a little payback for almost hitting Taylor with that snowball.
Thanks for reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2016 12:24 am Title: Chapter 9
Your Are Brilliant and I love the last line you added to the song:)
Now on to The Idiot Brigade:
They as per usual failing to realize that their nasty attitudes is the reason why no one is going to rush and apologize, Plus no one has any reason to do it since Michael and Lindsay were the ones being inconsiderate especially to their hosts.
I think chopping up Captain Astro is much better than selling this way they can get a lot of use out of him.
Daphne is not falling for that ' I'm Sorry If I Offended' fake apology Lindsay is only fooling herself and Michael telling her that she is more of a Classy Lady than Zee is laughable, Zee has more class in her pinky than Lindsay could have on her best day.
Michael doesn't love Ben he just misses someone taking care of him and excusing his childish behavior, Ben has finally woken up from his stupor and he is not going back to being Michael's doormat just so Michael can be comfortable.
They both are going to be shocked when lawyers are brought in cause Michael hasn't paid back that money.
Those gifts Michael gave Jenny and Gus was so pathetic I know it isn't suppose to be about the price tag, but he as usual doesn't know his daughter and just bought what he liked. (Gus can buy his own t-shirt...Dumbass!!)
I feel for Jenny cause she is trying to hold out hope that Michael will finally be the father and man she could respect, instead he is just a child who only thinks of himself.
Can't Wait For New Year's.
Lindsay is going to go Splat lol
Author's Response:
Oh that song had to be in, I was wine spitting when I read that...and she will get it!
Yep The Idiot Brigade really do think they are classy, superior, in the right and just all round marvellous...in a parallel universe where everyone is an omeba they would be right.
You're dead right for Daphne and especially Michael, he just doesn't want Ben to be happy and he can see that he is with Steve more than he ever was with him.
Poor Jenny a wee bit more angst for her to come. And Hunter and Lindz get into it too, like George said she's a nasty ass broad.
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 25, 2016 12:23 am Title: Chapter 9
Fantastic update. Love this fic.
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Thanks glad you like it.
Hope you stay with me.
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 24, 2016 8:42 pm Title: Chapter 8
Hiya,
I read Whispers and this story in one go.
OMG! I have been having a belly ache from laughing out long and hard. More than once I had to run full speed to the bathroom to prevent me from peeing myself with laughter.
You sure know how to write Anti Lindsay and Anti Michael.
I especially loved how George told Lindz of. She deserved all she got. And Michael? Well he's propably never going to learn a thing from all of this. He'll end up totally isolated and alone. Stupid little manchild.
I love Zee and Faal. They are simply gorgeous. A loving, warm and welcoming couple and great friends to everybody. It is wonderful to see Ben and Hunter so very, very happy.
Wouldn't it be great to see Lindz applying for a job at the gallery Hunter's working and him becoming her supervisor? I can just imagine the look on her face. And how will she react when Mel can't stand it anymore and leave her. I can just see Michael and Lindz sharing the house at Shayside, planning the demise of all of the clan and end up without family, friends and with no life to speak off.
Being in a choir and having to sing Deck the hall this Christmas I will have to concentrate real hard on not singing the version in this story. It will also be very hard to keep the grin off my face when thinking about these lyrics. Who ever wrote them has a wonderfully wicked sense of humor.
Thank you so much for this wonderful story and its prequel. I can't wait for the next update.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response:
Soirsa,
Thanks very much for your kind words. Whispers was my first fic.
I had thought of putting her and Hunter in the gallery but that's just too cruel, though I have thought of something else to enable Hunter to put that nasty ass broad in her place.
You can thank BlueMyst for the lyrics, although I just added the last line, I was crying with laughter when I read that in her review!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 24, 2016 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh yippee!!!!!!! Christmas chapter! It went pretty much like I thought it would. Few added bonuses of green hair though! LMAO! I can't believe her audasity!
I want to go to the Treehouse for Christmas! Sounds incredible! Zee and Faal asr, as usual, top knotch! Love them both! truly stand up characters. their devotion to each other and their friends are amazing especially after a fairly short amoung of time.
Justin is getting his memories back it seems! I hope this isn't just aone time occurrence. I really hope he gets them all back for both their sakes.
Lindsey is juat a terrible person all together! So glad everyone is putting her in her place on such a regular basis. Her treatment of everyone is intolerable. Poor Gus! I mean he's almost 18 adn is being reamed out by her for stating what she herself has said on occassions. she needs to learn to live by her own statements. Her allegience to Michael is just silly. I don't think she even really feels anything for him in all honestly, I think she just hopes to have an allie in him.
So why didn't Michael bring gifts? He was going to shop for them wasn't he? Was he delayed for some reason? If so why? Why is he lying about them?
I'm not sure who's smack down I enjoyed more. Lindsey's or Micheal's LOL! the captain is nothing more than a bunch of ashes! HAHAHAHA! Love it! That was truly brilliant adn the fact that Michael mistakenly thought is was some kind of doing on Brian's part was even better! Have to say though...George was the best out of all of them! OMG!! "Over indulgent fuckstain"!! "Nasty ass broad"! HAHAHAHAHA!
Thansk for this chapter! It warmed the cockles of my heart! Had much enjoyment from it! so looking forward to what else you will do with his!
LOVE!!
Cheers
Elaine
Author's Response:
Hi Elaine,
So do I, now just need an architech and millions to build the damn thing!
Lindsay focuses on one person that isn't her and that's Brian but now she's focusing on Faal, but has tro try AND FAIL to get round the obstacle that is Zee.
Michael bought gifts but only for Jenny. Zee sent a text to tell him that if he didn't bring gifts for Jenny and Hunter not to come, so he pretended to have forgotten them...payback came nice and toasty or did it.
I had great pleasure writing George's speeches.
Happy reading
Nicole
Date: Oct 23, 2016 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
Well that certainly was Christmas done a differnet way...wow! Love George...note to self, 'Don't anger George' classic!
Author's Response:
Oh hell no and don't anger Lilah either. Brian's her most favourite human.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 23, 2016 6:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
I keep saying it, but I love how they all back each other up.. and are even a bit disappointed when they cannot be the ones to tell someone off LOL
Burning the Capt was the funniest!
Author's Response:
They were disappointed indeed but George got s**t done don't you think.
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2016 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
OMG!! Thanks for using the song that was Hilarious!!
Lindsay had some nerve to go into private rooms and use someone's shampoo, she is so damn rude thankfully Daphne took care of her cause I think Faal was going to wring her neck, I see she is still acting like Queen of the manor despite the fact that the Tree House is not hers and neither is Faal (The man doesn't want your skanky Ass move on!).
Gus was right to put her in her place too she is being so freaking rude I want grab her by the hair and dunk her head in the toilet, she had no right to berate him for her rudeness and the stunt with the snowball has even Emmett gunning for her Ass.
What the Hell Michael, I thought he told everyone he went Christmas shopping, how can you show up without Christmas gifts for your kids????
The Ass even came in his pjs expecting to stay over while again dismissing the fact that he was invited to eat and spend time with his kids not stay over.
Zee played him so well about the Captain and Ted reminding him that he is still in default was perfect.
The delusion he and Lindsay share is the reason why George had to lay the smackdown on them and kick both of them to the curb where all the trash belongs.
I just loved when George told them off that man is my Hero!!
Despite the whiny brats Christmas was Wonderful and especially with Justin starting to remember prom.
Lindsay and Michael need to realize that no one is taking their crap anymore, Mel needs to start the New Year by getting rid of the dead weight.
I can't wait for what these two idiots think of next :)
Author's Response:
No I should be thanking you. I just added the last line.
Faal was definitely going to wring her neck starting from the ankles, which is why Zee needed Emmy Lou to calm and Daph for payback.
Oh I so enjoyed writing the George smackdown. Not sure where nasty ass broad came from but it fits her perfectly.
Mel knows Lindz well, she's in it for the long game, after all there's the wedding to try and derail after all...
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 23, 2016 4:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
LMFAO!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE GEORGE!!!!! His reference to Nathanial Hawthorne's novel "The Scarlet Letter" was spot on. But unlike Hester Prynne, Lindsay is immodest, a shrew and an asswhore! I sooooo wish Faal and Zee would have kicked her out for the shampoo incident but Daph's revenge was so much better! I think George was probably a little sad that Michael opened the door because he couldn't send a WASP and a DUMMY flying! I know I was LOL
Justin is starting to recover his memory at long last and I am so happy about that! He and Brian have been through so much and having that bit of their lives back will make them stronger all the more. Gus handled Lindsay like a Kinney and I LOVED it! I loved Gus' talk with Brian since it was so damn true to what Lindsay is up to. The bitch ain't slick! Also I love Emmett's defense of Gus and Daph. Lindsay had better walk a chalk line because NO ONE is going to put up with her bullshit any longer, including the kids!
As for Michael: Still petulant, still selfish and still an Asssshole <in Ted's voice> . He needs to go on and just sign the papers. He's not getting anything except his ass handed to him at every turn. The stupid idiot needs to go find a job and find a LIFE. No one is buying the 'Michael is a Victim' act except that spiteful, blind heifer named Lindsay! I'm glad that he thought his collectibles were 'safe' and that Brian disabused the bastard of that notion posthaste. $30,000 in toys? REALLY?! Yet he couldn't manage to fund his own life! That ratty rat bastard!!
The Christmas gifts were so wonderful! Mel now has a new wardrobe to get started in her new life. I'm glad she's DONE with Lindsay! Hopefully she will go back to the Brownstone and pack up Bitchzilla's belongings and kick her ass to the curb. It's no less than what Lindsay deserves. Let her go live with Michael or her parents where she belongs, since she is still a child playing grown-up!
WRITE On Nicole!!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Isn't George great! More memory camera clicks from Justin to come.
I am enjoy this as much as WAALAAS
I shall indeed write on.
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2016 4:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
This is the best present ever. A Treehouse Christmas at it's best. Michael with his pouting, pjs, not buying presents gets a chopped up Capt for Christmas. Lindsay with her nose in the air and stealing Faal's shampoo and sporting green hair got thrown out with Mikey. Yay. Love, love, love George. He said what everyone else wanted to say but felt they couldn't. Little Taylor, who almost got smashed by a snowball thrown by Lindsay, gave Ben a cute Teddy Bear. There was iceskating, and delicious food. Tree decorations. I'm still wondering why Tucker looked horrified? Snowing for Christmas! Yes! That makes it a White Christmas. Justin remembering the prom is icing on the cake for Brian. I actually expected them to lift a lid on the kedgeree and finding the kitty munching down on the fish. lol. Gus, my love, telling off his mum. Her lecturing him later was another reason for throwing her out. I was amazed that everyone waited to open presents until later. And what wonderful presents they were. Even Emmy Lou got the present he had been wishing for. Zee! There was so much more to love here.
Author's Response:
Thanks hope you stay with me till the end. Lindz wants to...oh wait that would be telling
Date: Oct 23, 2016 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
Omg I just love this fic best chapter ever daph song hilarious
Author's Response:
Thank you, the song inspiration was from BlueMyst, I just added the last line.
Date: Oct 22, 2016 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
Lindsay is not a part of the real world, it's as if she's ignores what she sees and hears. I'm shocked she's willing to associate with Mikey. I wonder if Zee is going to drop kick her at some point... Lol.
Author's Response:
Oh yeah shes gonna get a metaphorical kicking.
Hope you enjoy the rest
MissMerlot