Date: Jul 29, 2017 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 35
Great idea to have Lindsey without money for six weeks; will she dare saying that to Mel?
Date: Jul 28, 2017 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 34
They had to christen the galery... These two, they will use anything to get a reason to get laid!
Lindsay just dropped a bomb that will explode in her head later I hope.
Date: Jul 28, 2017 5:07 pm Title: Chapter 33
Excellent! Lindsay is once again too "busy" so she missed a huge opportunity to get some money.
Date: Jun 30, 2017 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 32
Yeah! Take that bitch!
So happy the cat is out of the bag. Maybe Lindsay will slow down a bit with Zee.
Date: Jun 17, 2017 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 30
Ha ha ha, Sam is back! I hope he will try to convince Lindsey to have a second chance and she will go for it. It should give Mel some "balls" to stop this farce of a marriage.
Date: Jun 17, 2017 2:11 pm Title: Chapter 29
“Cataloguing and Rehang Fridays?” Lindsey better not miss another day, especially a Friday!
Hunter and Lindsay in SF at the same time? It's going to be explosive...
Date: Jun 11, 2017 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 28
Lindsey has a tight leash and she can't do anything!
Date: Jun 06, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 27
Diamonds? Really? I was surprised by the ring, which is certainly beautiful, but I don't see Justin wearing that; as for the earring, it's so not Brian, maybe Emmett because he often wears jewellery. Sorry for bursting out because I love your story, but it's out of character for both of them.
Leda handled Lindsay and Michael, like a ninja, then Tucker added his touch. Leda is so much more in synch with Mel than Lindsay; I do hope you will let them have a second chance now that Lindsay is slowly, but surely going out of the marriage. Lela and Mel in leather on bikes: hot as hell and gorgeous!
Date: Jun 06, 2017 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 26
I loved how Justin put Michael in his place with his residual payment and how he told him he will fuck his fiancé into the mattress.
Date: Jun 06, 2017 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 25
Each chapter is a delight for the taste buds! It's another way to make us salivate.
Jenny is becoming a master mind when it comes to counter her father.
Date: Jun 05, 2017 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 24
The tension is getting high between Michael and Jenny, as well as between Mel and Lindsay. Now that she's fired, it will become more as she won't have any income and will depend on Mel and Brian.
The chess part was interesting: Gus, as his father, doesn't say a lot, but it's sharp and smart.
Date: Jun 04, 2017 6:06 pm Title: Chapter 23
I love Deb in this story: she sees how her son is behaving and acts on it. Ben is cool too; no more a fool.
The moment everyone knows what Blake told Michael is hilarious.
Date: Jun 04, 2017 11:27 am Title: Chapter 22
There are so many good lines in your story that it's difficult to point only few. Those ones, I loved:
“Ma, I’m not a dog…”
“No you’re not, a dog learns. Now sit.”
"Yes that’s correct one penny"
"Captain Twink and his Mighty Ass"
The analysis of Blake about Michael and his addiction to Brian is so accurate.
Date: May 28, 2017 3:42 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ah, gotcha...Thanks for clearing that up. Must have missed the reference somewhere.
Date: May 28, 2017 1:54 am Title: Chapter 13
Brietling? Is this a British thing or am I just that old and don't get it?
Author's Response:
No this is a MissMerlot thing. Basically, Zee did something so sexually amazing to Faal that he bought her a Brietling watch in gratitude, so any time she says that to him, he knows he's in for a good time.
MissMerlot
Date: May 27, 2017 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 21
Michael and Lindsey really choose to put a damper on anything they can!
Date: May 23, 2017 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 20
Some more lies from both Lindsey and Michael...
This time, Mel has enough, and I bet Brian is waiting for the fallout. Deb is also very determined.
I can't wait to read about the renovation results and the party that Emmett will throw.
Date: May 22, 2017 8:38 pm Title: Chapter 19
So much happened in here!
Most of all, Gus and his mother: how can she still call him "Lambskin" especially after being so mean to him! I was so relieved when Mel asked Jenny to call Brian and they took Gus away.
Hunter and his first sell: great news after the debacle that was caused by his mother.
The keys: every kid has one for almost all houses, except Michael's of course!!!
Date: May 21, 2017 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 18
I hope someone saw Michael give money to Rita.
I can't wait to see how Lindsey will try to explain why she lied to Gus about his conception; as if he misunderstood...
I loved how Brian gave the week off after signing the huge contract.
Date: May 21, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 17
Mel is gonna explode when she will find out what Lindsey told Gus about Brian and her and also Justin and Daphne.
So happy Deb refuses to give money to Michael and called him on his toys' expenses.
Date: May 21, 2017 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh, poor Princess, soooooooooooo lonely...
At least, Jenny was able to go to the game; I thought they would forbid her to go.
Ben must be so relieved to be out of this marriage. So happy he opened his eyes.
Brian fainting: Justin is not only an amazing artist, he also is a fabulous lover.
Date: May 21, 2017 8:28 am Title: Chapter 15
The parental skills are really improving for Michael and Lindsey! Especially Lindsey.
She is nasty and demanding; and of course, doesn't apply her rules to herself. She must be dying from jealousy each time she goes in the dressing.
I hope they won't follow thru about the roller derby: it will crash Jenny.
Date: May 20, 2017 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yeah, Lindsey had an ulterior motive with her champagne: she wants Mel's clothes. She also wants to run the gallery and, too bad for her, Justin's show isn't going to be held where she wanted.
As for Justin, he should better go with Brian next time he travels; he will avoid panic attack and a good spanking... although, I'm not sure he didn't enjoy the last part...
Date: May 20, 2017 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 13
Michael and Jenny's relation is not gonna last long if he really wants her to stop roller derby. And once he will find out about Hank, it will explode.
What has Lindsay in mind with her champagne? It's certainly not only because she has a job.
Date: May 04, 2017 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 12
TalonMotor is back! I don't know how Ted and Brian didn't explode from laughter!
Blake owning the comic book store will be a knife in Michael's heart (and balls as well). The vengeance of the other twink...