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Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2016 2:47 pm Title: Chapter 25

I had to hold my breath for half a second....but Jenny was brilliant.



Author's Response:

Wasn't she!  Considering how she started out in Whispers...!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2016 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved the details on the glassblowing with Zee. Now that sounded like fun. something I'd personlly love to try sometime. Each kid having a particular part to makes them all the more special. Really nice touch!

REally proud of Mel in this chapter when she really told off Lindsey. Had to know that Lindsey was going to try anything to get her hands on the clothes. So frustrating! No respect at all. Blasting Lindsey as well on the inequality between Brian and Michael was also much needed. Naturally Lindsey sees it as a slight towards her. sulking because she's not getting her own way. What a childish brat she is. She show's her level of immaturity perfectly when she makes that comment about Zee's countertop. Kind of wish she's start getting a clue. (Only kinda 'cause the alternate makes for such fun reading!! LOL)

What the hell is Michael doing? He's really trying to ingratiate himself back into the circle isn't he? sucking up to Brian, and then the kids...if he thinks it's going to work he's got another thing coming. Now he's going to bring up the whole Kip Thomsa thing again. doesn't Brian already know about that? If not, it's not like he's going to flip out. It's been years for heaven's sake. Michael is just going to spend $$ on trying to find Kip...ARG! He's such a complete fuck up! And the audacity of thinking his mother will trade display cases. He needs even more smack downs. He's slimed his way back into the group, but it really can't go on much longer. I'm chimping at the bit to have him and Lindsey both smacked down in a BIG way!!

The launch is a HUGE success. Wasn't concerned at all for that. The menu sounds amazing. (side note...I keep looking up the recipes for so many of the dishes you've mentioned in this story. LOL. So many I want to try. :) I'm sucha foodie.)

Michael and Linsey got SLAMMED! YES!! (And fired!! YAY)

Gotta say, looking forward ot "Monday" when she tries to "reason" with sydney. HA. that should be good for a laugh. 

Brillian chapter! Such fun. Finally re-read all of Whispers and re-read all of this one too. All caught up and clearer. (can get confusingwhen you're reading a few fics at once)

So love this fic.

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Fellow foodie Elaine, you should see my table when I am doing the food sections of this fic...magazines and books all over the place.

Yep Mel ground her in Gucci and as for Michael he know so so little about everything but thinks he knows nothing.  Idiots the pair of them, who I love to punish in incremental and painful ways.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2016 3:30 pm Title: Chapter 24

absolutely perfect that Michael and Lindsay get to miss the pampering weekend... they deserve so much worse. and so glad Sidney finally fired Linds

 

things are working so well, can't wait for the hammers to drop on both of the weasels!



Author's Response:

They do deserve much worse, they get much worse...thanks to a little pitbull.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2016 3:07 pm Title: Chapter 24

Hiya,

I can't tell you enough how much I love this story,

They way you are building up the tension is really nerve wracking,

Sooooo looking forward to the moment Blondie and Whiney are getting their come uppance.

As the saying goes in the Netherlands: Wraak is zoet! (google it and feel free to borrow)

Eagerly awaiting the next update.

XOXO

Soirsa



Author's Response:

Blondie and Whiney get theirs in dribs and drabs and then kapow...is there a word for kapow in Dutch, I've tried google translate but it just puts it in English.

Yep I'm borrowing no problem

Working on C26 now...so glad you are still enjoying it

Happy reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2016 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 24

The weekend is coming and so much going on. It looks like all the kids are at the treehouse.  A welcome respite for Gus and Jenny.  No arguing.  Though I do get hungry everytime I read one of your chapters.  Lobster?!  Lindsay is still trying to get into Mel's closet?  The bickering!  It appears the weekend party is at the Treehouse this week.  Jenny has an urgent need to talk to Daphne, which Justin has to be in on.  That weekend retreat for the wedding party sounds fantastic.  I'm so jealous.  It's Sunday and everyone is there, Emmett, Lindsay and Mikey, who is already making a pain of himself.  Demanding to see Jenny's phone!  This will not turn out well.  Gus explaining chess to Michael, now that was funny.  In a way Gus and Jenny's lives are like a chess game, with sacrifices to be made.  What exactly is Michael up to wanting to know about Kip Thomas?  He's delusional if he thinks Brian will pick him over Justin.  Lindsay has pulled another sick day too many.  When Hunter was explaining why she was too sick, someone else was there.  My guess is Sidney though it only occured to me later.  She's too sick to go into work, but not to go to the launch party?  She'll be even sicker once Emily is finished with her. 

The Launch Party itself - how could you start it off with losing Zee?  Thank goodness Carl was there, you needed a detective to locate her.  The menu is  really out-of-sight!  The main courses, the sides, the deserts!  And don't get me started on the drinks.  I gained ten pounds just reading the menu.  I'd say the E and Z hod is off to a good start.  Remind me, what does EPOS mean?



Author's Response:

I know that was mean to have Zee be missing, albeit briefly!

EPOS is electronic point of sale.

There's more mendacity from my mind to come.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2016 5:19 am Title: Chapter 24

Michael trying to bring up the Kip Thomas Debacle why should anyone care about that after all these years, he was a small blimp on Brian's screen that faded to obscurity just like all the other meaningless tricks, man this is so idiotic and pathetic it must hurt Michael's head trying to come up with a plan, if he brings in Craig, Joan or Claire I want Drew to get some of his teammates to beat the stuffing out of Michael.

Lindsay got put in her place about Mel's clothes and about how she is letting Michael get away with going half on his support payments, being  less involved with Jenny and paying back Brian and Justin, now if the situation was reversed she would be all over Brian's Ass (And not in a Life Affirming Way) if he missed a payment, ignored Gus or if Justin didn't pay Michael back and on time.

You don't get to be a parent when it is convenient for you or helps you score points, you are a parent for the rest of your life and with that comes responsibility, you can't pick and choose what you want to supply your child and when you want to do it, the moment that little life comes into the world you are responsible every second of every minute of every day until your last breath.

Lindsay would rather plot with Michael make snide comments about Zee and Justin, pursue people who don't want them, lie, cheat, steal and buy toysp instead of being parents and setting good examples for their children.

Everyone must be so happy that they won't be with them when they go to that gorgeous spa in New York for a weekend of pampering, shopping and fun?

Well Lindsay can't afford to go anyway since she just got fired for being a lying, selfish cow and will soon be served court papers from Emily's attorney (She is going to need an application for The Big Q lol)

The launch went beautifully Zee and Emmett are going to be very busy with all these big events, the food sounded delicious and I wish I could have been there to sample it all.

You are So Wicked:)



Author's Response:

I know and I get even wickeder!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2016 3:17 pm Title: Chapter 23

Blake is really coming into his own.  He's managed to get Faal choking.  lol.  Which brought about a request for the change in subject.  Gun oil.  Which Michael stupidly interpited as lube.  Really this obsession about guns, these are responsible people and have been trained in the use of weapons.  A fact that Michael seems to not care.  If he'd gone after Zee to try and take a way her weapon he'd soon be looking down the point of her gun and shitting his pants.  That would have been fun.  He's down on strike on the trip to Portland.  BTW- when he was on the phone was he ordering more toys?

Loved the running theme of the coffee maker.  I know I have to have a simple coffee machine myself.  Deb and Carl are besides themselves about the makeover.  Lunch ought to be amazing.  Everyone manages to make it to Deb's on time, except Michael.  Talk about a sense of intitlement.  He expected a car to be sent for him?  Now I'm not sure what the problem with the phone was  but it made for some unique moments.  Did it need new batteries?  That lovely porch and nobody realized they forgot to turn on the heat!  Poor Justin, how sweet of everyone to be so concerned, except Michael.  He's decided to be a pain, but Tucker's got his number. 

Then you have the kids naming Zee and Emmett's new business.  I like M & Z House of Delight.  Everyone gets in on it.  Brian does advertizing.  Justin does design.  Zee picks the colors.  Blake the background. 

Then we had the chaise lounge and everyone ended up ordering it.  Different colors though.



Author's Response:

Re Michael on the phone question...he was indeed but Jenny soon put a stop to that, albeit a temporary one.  As for the other phone question, the house phone wasn't hanging up correctly so would be constantly engaged...had the joys of one of those phones so annoying!  And also had a "space ship" of a coffee machine to operate at work once...still have nightmares sometimes and put me right off coffee.

Ah yes Tucker, there's another rumble with Michael to come.  And for Blake too.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2016 3:33 am Title: Chapter 23

Two Terrific updates.  Love this fic.

Thanks for sharing.

JoAnn



Author's Response:

You're welcome.

Happy reading

Nicole

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2016 3:10 am Title: Chapter 23

You just cannot write this fast enough for me... I love it!



Author's Response:

Good to hear off to make you happy!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2016 3:00 am Title: Chapter 23

Holy Stupidity!!!! Captain Asshat and his sidekick Stuck-up Heifer just don't know when to keep their mouths shut.

They are both skating on thin ice and yet they still try to throw their weight around like anyone is going to listen to them or jump to do their bidding just so they can avoid a tantrum, the days of them pouting, whining, silent treatments, needling, or sweet talking to get their way is over.

Tucker threatening Michael was so cool and so unexpected that I hope it happens again, I dare Michael and Lindsay to tell Jenny she can't see Zee anymore than I would stand back and wait for Jenny to go off.

That moment with the gun oil was funny because it was at Michael's expense, Zee knocking down Lindsay was funny too seriously they should really just shut up but every time they open their mouths its another moment of lies and stupidity to come flowing out. (You can get angry and laugh when they are wrong)

Justin having that really bad cramped in his hand was awful thankfully Faal and Zee were able to help so now Brian will know what to do the next time that happens along with the kids.

Can't wait for the launch it will be another opportunity for Michael and Lindsay to make complete Asses out of themselves again, I wonder if Emily and Francine will be there to get in a few digs too?

Michael has one strike against him so far Lindsay should be up to bat again soon let's see her get a strike. 

I wish Deb hadn't interrupted Michael trying to goad Zee it would have been hilarious to see her kick his Ass, bet it would have made Lindsay a bit more cautious about continuing to hit on Faal lol

Another Great Chapter :)



Author's Response:

Oh I think I can arrrange for another Tucker/Michael showdown...since you asked so nicely.

Captain Asshat and Stuck-Up Heifer...hilarious

Happy reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2016 2:51 am Title: Chapter 23

I sense the boiling point is near.....



Author's Response:

There is the odd bubble starting to come to the surface.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 7:06 pm Title: Chapter 22

Sooooo much happening in these 2 previous chapters. I barely know where to begin.

I am really anticipating everything that's going to go down with Lindsey. I forsee a bitchslap like nothing she's ever experienced before. Both she and Michael have such high opinions of themselves. It's unbelievable. Glad that Zee said what she did to Linndz. Long time coming. Everyone sees her drooling over Faal. does she think she's being descreet or something? Feel bad for Mel having to put up with her shit for so long. She's only holding out for all these legal ramifications to come and bite Lindz in the ass. All of hers, Josh, Brian and Justin's plans are coming to fruition and I for 1 can't wait! How much longer?!? :)

And oh my goodness. Jenny being able to read lips! Poor girl. 

Deb...snorted with laughter over the 1 penny thing. HA! that's gonna be a hoot when he figures it out. Thrilled for her and her new reno. she so deserves it. How exciting. Papa Bear and his queen are deserving of such a showing of respect, gratitude and love from everyone.

Loved Zee's backstory. Of course it was heartbreaking, but she showed such strength and conviction.

All in all, an incredible read. I just re-read the first in the series and will go back and start this one over again as well. 

Cheers

Elaine



Author's Response:

I think another 4 chapters and an epilogue maybe.  

And I'm now bursting with pride!

Happy reading

Nicole

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 22

I'm so happy for Deb and Carl... they are so loved, and everyone shows it except Michael... what a pain in the ass he is!  Blake's talking down to him at the end was so spot on!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  The speech by Blake was a joy to write.  

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 5:21 pm Title: Chapter 21

Oh Linds and Michael... will you never learn... you two are two idiotic to see you aren't fooling anyone!!!!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 4:46 pm Title: Chapter 20

I'm so glad that Mel has finally had her last straw... also Deb it seems FINALLY

 

Can't wait until we get more details revealed :) 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 8:37 am Title: Chapter 22

If I  said it once, I've said it a million times Mikey is a ding bat. Lindsay is a nut job too.  

Thanks for the updates!



Author's Response:

And that's being kind to the pair of them.

Glad you are enjoying it

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 2:00 am Title: Chapter 22

Jenny can read lips too and that is going to come in very handy around Michael and Lindsay who I am betting won't be invited to the wedding either.

I wonder what Zee and Faal have planned for The Gruesome Twosome?

Deb and Carl now understand why the kids spend most of their time away from home or in their rooms, at least now Mel is putting her happiness first instead of trying to hold on to someone who is devious and selfish.

The redo to the house sounds beautiful so now Debbie can host some gatherings now that there is enough room.

Jenny is done with Michael and Lindsay there days are numbered they don't even realize how soon they will be out in the cold without a friend.

Deb almost scared me I thought she was going to give Michael money behind Carl's back but this is much better, he is spending money on toys instead of supporting his daughter money that is dwindling faster every day.

He doesn't listen to anyone so like Lindsay he doesn't deserve any more warnings, Lindsay was warned by Zee so after this she has to face the consequences.

Can't fix stupid and can't save ignorance.

Great Chapter:)



Author's Response:

Seriously you and Nichelle need to get together to write a book of phrases and insults...yep stealing that one too!

Glad you liked it

Hope you stick with it to the end

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 1:08 am Title: Chapter 22

I always have to read your chapters twice.  Once because I can't wait to see who and how you've messed with Michael and Lindsay then again to leave comments on the parts that stood out.  Which is most of the chapter.

I should have realized that someone was keeping an eye on the deplorable twosome.  That it was Matt and Jenny was surprising.  But it makes perfect since.  Matt because he lipreads and Jenny because she needed to learn just how dispicable her dad really is.  But it wasn't only them Zee and Faal also caught it.  Jenny was all for cutting her losses shes given up on both her dad and Lindsay, but Zee seems to have something planned.  Jenny also seems to be able to lie on a dime. 

I was surprised to learn that Zee's father refused to consider Zee marrying Faal.  But it the end it was his loss.  He lost his wife, his daughter, and his own father.  Michael, who is on thin ice to begin with, loses points with his griping.  He's lucky he wasn't thrown out right then and there.   It was very intense hearing what Zee had to go through, seeing how she's capable of doing anything she sets her mind to.

Matt on the other hand has earned a new aunt and uncle in the form of Debbie and Carl.  They have truly become the stable influence in the family.

Love, love, love Emmett telling Mikey he probably won't be getting an invite to the wedding and told him he'd acted like a total cunt.  Truer words were never spoken. That should bring Mikey down from his high horse of thinking that he's got the goods on Charles.

Mikey tends to use Jenny a lot, but he has yet to give her a key, he doesn't read her schedule, and the only times he talks with her is when she initiates it or he wants to tell her no you can't do - fill in blank.  Ben's a much better father then he. 

Zee let Lindz have right between the eyes.  Especially as Lindsay tried to compare her life with Zee's. But all is not lost, Daphne is there to help lighten the mood.

Now, about Michael trying to con his mother into giving him money.  She's smarter than that and I can't wait for him to find out just how little he's going to get.  LOL.  He thinks he can have his cake or in this case collectibles and eat it too.  Not going to happen. 

Joshua has the goods on Lindsay and once everything comes out she's going to be up the creek without a paddle.

Debbie is in for a surprise when she sees the redu.  Evidently everyone chipped in, except for her son.  Now she has plenty of room to host her Sunday dinners.

We even have Teddy doing what he does best.  Protecting the important peoples money so they are not taken advantage of.

Then we have Justin distraught over what Brian's 'best friends' have done.  But we have Milo giving aide and comfort, not to mention Brian, Zee, and Faal giving him a chance to let it all out.

Love how Blake put Michael in his place and called him on his addiction. Now that was the best ending.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, it was another favourite chapter of mine to write.  I had to give Blake that slapdown for Michael

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2016 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 22

Gurrrrl I love this!



Author's Response:

Marvellous!  Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2016 6:25 am Title: Chapter 21

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fantastic update.  Mikey and Linz still conniving as ever, anxious to see where it will lead.

Thanks for sharing.

JoAnn

 

 

 

 

 

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Author's Response:

JoAnn,

Thanks for sticking with me and reviewing.

Got a few more chapters to go.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2016 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 21

So Joshua is Brian and Justin's lawyer and he is the neighbor Michael thinks is cheating with Charles, my goodness Michael is stacking up enemies just like Lindsay can't wait for him to act out his moment of triumph so Charles can have a chance boy tell him off. 

Deb telling off Michael was long overdue and just what he needed though I don't his pea brain retained any of it, he whines that Deb won't help him but he still hasn't learned that as an adult he is suppose to help himself and take care of his daughter, if everyone else is paying for Jenny than they should have a say in how she is brought up.

Finally sees what Michael actually values and holds dear to his heart and it isn't Jenny, he places more value on his toys than the well-being of his only daughter.

Like Lindsay he loves the title of parent but the responsibility is someone else's problem while they both sit on their throne lording over everyone what they are entitled to.

That fake apology Lindsay gave to Gus just made her look like it is more important to look right than to ever admit she is wrong.

Mel tried yet again to to put her in her place concerning Zee and Faal but like Michael she hears and sees what she wants, after this I wouldn't warn her anymore she wants to face Zee so let her stand up and face her, the showdown between them should be epic and make Lindsay regret her every action.

Deb gets a new range and a remodeled kitchen from Zee and probably some other stuff from everyone else, why Michael will just bring whine and Lindsay will bring her cheesy attempts at flirting.

My these two are getting into a lot of trouble and we haven't even reached February yet, Michael who.is barely a father does not get to tell Gus what he can or cannot do, Brian told him off good but Michael won't listen.

Why is Lindsay being so nice and what is the papers Emily verified for Josh?

Way to go Ted for putting Lindsay in her place about the gallery, Emmett and Zee's cooking talents it also was a dig about her lack of talent in anything.

I don't want them to be at the Portland house for Valentine's weekend but then again their performances should be hilarious.

Let them try to stop Brian and Justin from getting married Jennifer will stomp a mud hole in both their Asses before everyone else forms a line to the left to get their turn.

I see Joshua and Carrie will soon be joining the Anti Dumbass Club perhaps they should make t-shirts? lol

Can't wait for Leda to show up again perhaps Valentine's weekend could be it by then Mel should be in the mood for some friendship and a little romance;)

Looking forward to the launch party and all that delicious food :)

 



Author's Response:

Oh yes apart from Joshua and Carrie, the Anti Dumbass club - loving that - have got a new member, a not so surprising one but one nevertheless.

Hark is that the sound of a motorbike in the distance, pots and pans clanging in the new test kitchen and I do believe, yes a...ooh almost a spoiler!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2016 1:59 pm Title: Chapter 21

Thank you so much for the answers to my last questions.  Ben's poker night almost got ruined.  Does Michael actually think anything he could say would effect Jenny and Hank?  He is such a dweeb.  Okay this is going to sound stupid, but is Joshua a lawyer?  Love the information about Emily.  Can't wait to find out what the correspondence said.  It must have been good judging from Joshua's reaction.  What's with Lindsay?  She trying to get on everyone's good side.  She might think it's working, but I doubt it.  Em and the kitchens.  He's picked pink for Zee making her day.  It will make Deb's day too, since she ends up with Zee's old range.  Nothing to be sneezed at.  We get another delicous lunch at Zee and Faal's place.  Michael should consider him lucky to have been invited.  If Jenny said no he'd be outa there.  I do believe Deb and Carl are eyeing his collectibles for resale.  Deb finally told Mikey how much a best friend to Brian he is not!  Darn now I'm hungry for an eggy bread sandwith.  Daphne's in town that means lot's of good stuff for the next chapter!  Teddy let Lindsay have it when she criticised Zee's buying Fienman Gallery!  Go Teddy.  Something will have to be done soon to counteract Michael and Lindsay trying to stop Brian and Justin from getting married.  I know you will have something deliciously evil planned.  Another delicious chapter.

 



Author's Response:

You are welcome lovely!

He is indeed, he looks after the personal stuff for Brian and Justin.

Oh you clever YumYumPM, you, have you been reading my mind, they are indeed.  She really let him have it didn't she, well most of it, there's more to come.

Of course I have deliciously evil things to come...ooh do I hear the sound of a motorbike in the distance...

Happy reading

MissMerlot

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2016 7:09 pm Title: Chapter 20

That Conniving Two Ton Heifer!! She has been pocketing some of the support payments and keeping Brian from getting his parental rights back, that was her safety net all along that means she has been doing this for years, That Mangy Lowdown Flea bag Bitch!!

No wonder she has been acting like Queen of the Manor and trying to run things at Britin (Doesn't explain her act at the Treehouse upon first being invited??), she thinks because she has custody to Gus that she is entitled to act superior than Justin, while taking his share of the support to fill her coffers. That Lying, Two-Faced Whore!!

She planned to spend the next three years building up her bank account while continuing to lie to her everyone.

I hope Zee has a way to get that money back so it can go to Gus like it is suppose to and I am hoping her humiliation will be painful.

Mel is doing the right thing to prevent Lindsay from getting another dime or having any control over Brian and Gus, this was the final straw Lindsay is so out she is going to need a map to find her way back. Freaking Cow!!!

Michael sucking up to Deb to get her to help him pay his support for Jenny is so pathetic, I agree with Carl if his daughter is so important then why doesn't he sell his toys??

Why Doesn't He Also Get A Job?!?!

Michael enjoys the title of Daddy but he doesn't want to put in the effort to take care of his daughter, he wants to lay on his Ass (Like Lindsay) while everyone else pays for everything and he can whine that he is underappreciated (Just Like Lindsay).

I see that Playtime is over these two get no more chances for redemption they blew them all, it is time to get rid of the dead weight and move forward not back.

Wow you have Amazed Me Again :)

 

 



Author's Response:

#bluemystismadatLindz!

And MissMerlot is stealing mangy lowdown fleabag bitch...just so you know...after all Uncle Luc has already called her a hound but this sounds so much better

I'm so pleased you have responded the way you did, exactly the reaction I was hoping for.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2016 5:56 am Title: Chapter 20

Boy do I have questions.  Zee was the one who bought the gallery and the two building next to it?  It's perfect for Emmett and her and cooking.  That Zee, she cooks, she blows glass, she's a computer wiz. Just what is it she's found out about Lindsay?  Or Emily?

Michael thinks he's pulled one over on Charles and Joshua, not to mention his mother.   Just how much has he been paying in support?

Now for Mel's phone calls.  Was the 1st on to Lindsay?  I know the second one was to JR.

So the main character meet at Britin.  What exactly are they looking for?  They don't seem to be finding it.  My guess though would be that Lindsay has been banking all the support she's conned everyone into giving and pulling to by her personal shit.  That's fraud.

Mel's willing to give up her parental rights to Brian and Justin.  How sweet. 

Why is Joshua smiling?

Love Carl's discision via Mikey.  Is Debbie finding out that Mikey isn't paying support has made her reconsider giving him any money?  I hope so.

Who is lying and about what?

So they take them down at the family meal? 

Of course we have to have our peek into what Brian and Justin are up to.

Joshua needs a statement from Emily and Brian, darn you know why and what for but your making us wait to find out!  <pout>  or should I cross my arms and stomp my foot. 

Can't wait to see your next chapter.



Author's Response:

Just because its you...I'll answer some in the order you gave them:

She's found something out about Emily which will lead them somewhere good...but not saying any more yet

Michael was paying a grand for Jenny...Ben is paying a grand too

Yep that was to Lindsay so if the kids mentioned that Mel was out there would be no drama

They did find it, its the letter but Brian and his lawyer have never seen it

Reason for Joshua's smile...not telling yet

Yep re Debs

As Lindsay didn't tell Mel about the extra support payments from Justin, she's lied by omission 

As for the take down, their lying ass castle ain't high enough yet...more lies, stupidity and hair flicking to come

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2016 3:20 am Title: Chapter 19

See Lindsay added another nail to her coffin by yelling at Gus and making him cry, she is one stupid slag to think that won't come back to bite her later with Brian and Justin and everyone else.

Bravo to Hunter for getting that commission and Martine they deserve to reap the benefits for a job well done, while Lindsay just wants the benefits for doing nothing.

Michael really thought he was going to continue to have a say while lessening his support for Jenny, glad that he got smacked down he should be use to it by now.

Looking forward to Michael running off at the mouth about Charles and Joshua so he can get put in his place again.

Lindsay is in the doghouse with Mel and Jenny and she is pressing on that nerve with Zee who is getting close to knocking her on her Ass.

Did our favorite chef buy a gallery?

Each New Chapter is Like Christmas Morning :)

 



Author's Response:

She doesn't think that anything will happen to her because she's got Gus, but the person that she was distressed about being so angry, wasn't Gus...no prizes for guessing who she has to make things right with in her tiny mind.

Things get so much better for Hunter and Martine...let's just say with Martine, art is not her only passion.

Of course he did, this is Michael afer all and he sees what he wants.

And yep Zee is starting to draw back her fist, she doesnt do guns blazing unless she has to...after all she fed Lindz a Milo licked eclair

Chef, gallery, I have no idea of what you speak.

Happy Christmas and reading

MissMerlot

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