Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2016 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 31

Brilliant update!

Can't wait til the arrival of David, Charles and Hank.

Thanks for sharing!

JoAnn

Author's Response:

You're welcome and I hope you enjoy their arrival.

They're coming back!

Happy reading

Nicole

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2016 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 31

Cannot wait for Zee to get Michael...hopefully for good!

Dinner should be fun! lol

Author's Response:

She will and it will be.  Hopefully you enjoyed the dinner...not as brutal a slap as it could've been because there's more Charles, David and Hank to come.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2016 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 31

Well Bitch and Mitch have been warned!! I LOVE Aunt Dee and Uncle Luc. Michael is such a bastard! He hides behind Lindsay until after she makes her point and then jumps on her Complain Train without thought or regard that NOT everything is his business. Case in point- the dogs! Why should he have been informed or asked his opinion about anything? Furthermore, he can barely walk himself to the bathroom, or walk and chew gum at the same time so why would Gus and Jenny getting a dog/ dogs be of any concern to him? If he has something to say about dogs perhaps he should look at Lindsay and himself since that's the way they are acting by continuing to fight and scrap over every little thing- whether it involves them or not. I'm so happy that Luc and Dee put both of those trifling twin pea brains in their respective (or not so respective) places!

I'm also glad that Norma kept Mel from placating Lindsay. Why should Mel feel the need to? It wasn't her ex-fuckbuddy who happened up at the dinner table and boasted that he would meet her in San Francisco. Why shouldn't someone- namely Brian- have rescued Mel from another episode of "Dicks, Tricks and Trollops"? And I notice that Lindsay didn't dispute Sam's plans to meet up with Lindsay in San Fran immediately. Hmmm? That's all I'll say about that for now <strong side eyes and smirks given>. 

I can't wait to delve further into this Portland trip and for Michael's supposed triumph over David and Joshua and Charles and a potential MITCHSLAP from Carrie and or Zee. I really wish that she would go ahead and tell everyone about Michael and Rita's deal but I have a feeling the fallout when it is exposed will be even more painful for the imbecile. Michael being embarrassed and ostracized is ALWAYS worth the wait to me.

As for that other inglorious idiot Lindsay, I really hope that it comes out about the house and mortgage she's not supposed to have. I had been wondering if she had another source of income when she finds herself both Jobless and Gus-less. I can't imagine that her original purpose in buying the house was simply for supplementing her income. Something tells me there was a tryst or five that took place within that house and then when she decided that she couldn't continue to willingly risk her meal tickets aka Mel and Gus, she decided to rent it out. I wouldn't be surprised if the renter paid both in money and for other services rendered. What a Trifling Trick!!  

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 

Author's Response:

Nichelle, 

You like me, recognise cowardice in its many forms.  He's not only a coward but a selfish two faced one as well.  They feed off their undeserved sense of entitlement and injustice...and yep sometimes they share the same brain, you can tell when one has it...the other is quiet!

Oh you spotted her lack of rejection to Sam's offer of lunch or something did you?

You're right about the fallout of Michael, he's hurt her boy's boy and she wants him to suffer and suffer he will, but of course he won't think it's her doing it, it will all be "Justin's fault"

I can tell you that the house in Canada is not a source of income for her but how she came by it...you are so close!

Happy reading & hugs

Nicole

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2016 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 31

Oh what an amazing trip for Hunter and Ben to take together!! NOT surprised that Matt suggested it. He's just like his parents that way. Loving adn giving. He knows that Hunter and Ben taking this trip together is the perfect idea for them.

Oh dear lordy.PLEASE tell me Lindsey is going to get her own soon!! I mean really. Where on earth is she getting such an incredible sense of entitlement from. I get she's from "waspy" background, but really...the way she spoke to Mel upon their return from teh party was unreal. It's like she was talking to a child. Sadly, it's her behavior and attitude that is more childlike.

LMAO! I KNEW Zee was going to buy the Peterson. Woohoo! when does Michael find out? hehehe. Now that Leda is staying in town they're buying a nother place for her to live in. Have to say, I'm with Faal here. what are you plotting? Can't wait to find out!! The anticipation is killing me, but at the same time....the build up is terribly exciting! :)

Lindsey and Michael are going to be in a hell of a shock if they get in the way of Jenny and Hank! Jenny will have no part of either of them and the rest of the family will happily flay them alive I'm sure. 

Do you have a subscription to Architectural digest? ;)  your descriptions of all of teh houses are amazing and so beautifully detailed. I can almost picture them in my mind's eye.

Carl's sense of humour is really coming out in this chapter. I found myself chuckling at his comments. The plane the plane!! lol. and "what is with this family & glass" that one really got me! Funny as hell!

Luc's background check into Lindsey and Micael produced interesting results. WE already knew about Michael's machinations with Rita. Poor Zee certainly got a terrible shock though. she's going to come up with something now. wonder what?! Of course, he's going to be digging himself an even deeper grave when his plans for David, Charles and Joshua down down. But hmmmmmmm very interesting information about Lindsey's property owndership in Toronto. VERY curious about that.

The Toyger's was a great idea for Faal. Luc and Zee really got him there! :)

Michael and Lindsey certainly got a dressing down from Luc! They had better mind their P's and Q's!! Highly doubt that's going to happen, especially at dinner tonight!! BWAHAHA! again, another chapter to really look forward to. I get the feeling that much wil happen around the dinner table.

thank you faor another fantastic chapter.

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Author's Response:

Hi Elaine,

Of course Zee is going to buh the Petersen place, it's how she stops Michael and Lindsay to stop coming to New York is the kicker, think how much of a wasp she is and how greedy and selfish he is.

I don't have a subscription, i just think of my absolute dream house and type away. 

Yeah Zee is now gunning for Michael nobody hurts her boy's boy but as with all things it has to be done right.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2016 5:00 am Title: Chapter 30

I was rereading the story again again when I thought occurred to me isn't the lease the girls sign for the Brownstone almost up?

I'm sure Zee and Faal wouldn't mind letting Mel and the kids stay longer because they respect the place, but Lindsay is treating it like she is going to stay forever and continues to disrespect Zee?

Zee is getting tired of Lindsay always implying that all the money comes from Faal but I think Zee is richer than Faal(?), Lindsay probably even thinks this house they are staying at is Faal's despite being told it was gifted to Zee?

Lindsay is about to meet another Hellcat and I don't think she is ready or prepared for what is in store. lol

Can't Wait!!

 

Author's Response:

Seriously your question is impeccable!  And Zee does everything for a reason!

C31 is about to be posted.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2016 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 30

First off, I have to say...THIS chapter was SO worth waiting for (even if the wat really was only a few hours. lol) I admit, I was chomping at the bit to read it. SO good!!

2nd..LOVE the shoes! OMG...they are gorgeous!!

OK, so the meat and potatoes now. What an absoluely brilliantly successful evening for our little "urchins"! So proud! they pulled it off without a hitch and their gifts of appreciation at the end were amazing! what an amazing opportunity for them both. I think they will both become front and centre in Uptown gallery with incredibly bright futures ahead of them! 

Lindsey seems to be in a perpetual state of "pissed off" throughout the evening, at varying degrees of course. I was so looking forward to you writing about that! It was sublime! Her surprise at the guest list...Sam...Mel being sent to table 3...both Emily adn Adam being there....francine's comment (which BTW...so good! I was definitely sniggering) It's like everywhere she turned, she was getting nailed. (and not in a positive way either)HAHA, the fact that she was 3rd choice for San Fran was yet another kick. To top it all off...absolutely no recognistion from Sydney! Absolutely icing on the cake!! 

I have to say yet again, I cannot WAIT until she finds out that Justin will be part owner of the gallery!! EPIC!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!

Who the heck was that Campbell Lutz guy? Hmmm is he a blip or will he have further mention? He's definiltey a sleeze. (might be another perfect one for Lindsey. lol)

An Absofrigginglutely awesome awesome chapter! Oh I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.

Grinning away like a fool here having enjoyed it so much.

Cheers,

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I scrolled for the shoes, having a fair few pairs of killas myself, I think I'm going to save up for my Zee shoes!

Yeah Lindsay got her ass kicked but only of her behaviour and her actions...thinking she could manipulate Francine by using veiled threats and then when Sam joined her table there was no way Mel could be left there.

Epic is an understatement when she finds out abou that...

Campbell Lutz was just a insignificant gap filler for Faal to protect Zee from his sleaziness and for Lydia to use her rapier tongue to see him off, he won't be mentioned again, not even Lindsey deserves him...but only by the smallest of margins!

Working on the first stage of Portland now...say hello again to Uncle Luc and Aunt Dee...

Glad you are still with me.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2016 10:58 am Title: Chapter 30

Wow, I feel awful for Lyndsay.  Even if her and Mel are on the outs constantly interfering in their marriage is just wrong.  Taking Mel places without her and then leaving her at the table is harsh.  Not to mention the law suit (which irl Mel would be fined or disbarred for her part in the prep for). If Mel wants out she should just leave. When you manipulate things to avoid manipulation you can become what you are trying to avoid. Don't get me wrong, Lydsay is a pill but between the cloths, work, the lawsuit, the wedding party trip and the outings she's seeming more atracked than attacking. 

I'm still reading along, but with one eye closed (I hate siding with Lyndsay).

I'm glad Faal found Zee and helped her.

Happy Thanksgiving!!! (Being thankful is universal tho the holiday is American)

Thanks for writing!

 

Author's Response:

You're welcome!  I'm glad you will still read albeit with one eye closed for now, but think I should answer your points:

No-one is interferring in the marriage but Lindsay, she has always run to Brian whenever there was a problem or used Gus as an excuse for trying to run aspects of Brian's life.  She's also blantantly flirting with Faal in front of Zee and Mel.

With regards to the lawsuit, Mel has made a statement to Joshua as to her knowledge of the email address and was shown the contents, she asked Adam not to serve at home and that's all she has done and all she will do.  

As for the clothes, these were a special present to Mel from Brian and Justin to thank her for bringing Gus home from Canada and were part custom made for her, she asked Lindsay not to wear them but she did anyway behind her back, so the lockdown was again her fault.  

Work wise, she's at fault because she is not moving along with the changes and feels entitled to do what she wants because she used to work there before and has taken advantage of that.  Lydia is different to Sydney and won't put up with her behaviour.  

If by outings you mean the tasting for Sydney's party she was at a showing and couldn't come anyway.  

Mel was taken from the table because Sam Auerbach, the man Lindsay had an affair with was sitting there, it wasn't fair on Mel especially as he said that he would be meeting up with Lindsay in San Francisco and she didn't say anything.

As for the wedding party, maybe I used the wrong phrase, the New York weekend is a thank you from Brian and Justin to those attending the wedding in a special capacity not just as a guest, which is what Lyndsey would be, so for her to want to come along isn't fair on any other guest.  

Lindsay's other behaviour has caused her problems as people react to it, she has lied to Emily, she deceived Brian as to the real reason she wanted a baby, she's not shown Brian the parental rights letter that she told Gus and Mel she would, saying she would discuss it with Brian and she's not done that either.  Also she's not told Mel about the support payments she's also received from Justin.

Yes Mel should get out and she will but she's also got to make sure she does it right.  She's giving up her parental rights to Gus so that Brian can get his back.

I do hope you stay with me to the end to see how this plays out.

Happy Thanksgiving too...sadly in the UK we don't have that but we have taken on the Black Friday sales with gusto.

MissMerlot

 

 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2016 4:04 am Title: Chapter 30

Thanks for up dating so quickly. I thought I would have to wait days. Still waiting for Michael  to get. his at the Keller event. I trust you to have something wicked up your sleeve

Author's Response:

You're welcome, am tip-tapping away as we speak.  I do indeed, my sister doesn't call me Miss Lecter for nothing!

Happpy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2016 2:45 am Title: Chapter 30

Wow!  That was some going away party.  I'm not sure why Lindsay is surprised that Brian, Justin and Faal or there.  She's gonna be more surprised to find Ben and Steve were invited.  Lord knows who would have been invited if she'd been in charge of the invites.  Love how Brian got Melanie moved to his and Justin's table where all the important people are.  Just who was Campbell Lutz and how did he get invited.  Giving a trip to Japan to Martine and Hunter is the best.  Lindsay only gets to go to San Francisco for a couple of days.  hehe.  Love, love, love the shoes.

Author's Response:

I did enjoy writing the party out and dropping the guest bombs along the way.  Brian was showing his sweet side to Mel, by moving her away from Sam Auerbach, would you want to sit at the same table as your wife's ex-lover...shudder!

Campbell Lutz was just a reason d'etre for Faal to protect Zee from odious advances, Sydney just didn't spot he was still on there.  

Oh the shoes weren't they marvellous!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2016 1:20 am Title: Chapter 29

See Ms Stuck-up Heifer feels that she should have been given a standing ovation further poor attempt at helping with Breakfast, I think Mel, Gus and Jenny would love to give her something but it wouldn't be applause, I think she should get use to eating at the diner with Michael they can sit and commiserate about how they aren't allowed to eat any of that delicious food anymore.

They don't know that the free meals are going to be coming to an end very soon along with the car service and being around the family, no one will miss their snarkiness, complaining and utter rudeness.

Leda is going to be in Portland for the weekend Lindsay is going to love that and especially when she sees Mel smiling and laughing without a care.

Lindsay thinking that Mel, Gus and Jenny owe her an apology for her lame attempt is funny, I guess her majesty couldn't be bothered to learn all weekend and had to complain to Captain Asshat about how rude they are being considering what good parents Michael and Lindsay are. 

All I can say to that is: Bitch Please!

Should they clap because she can pour juice?

Michael got put in his place considering that email and trying to act all superior to Carl, now Deb should stick to get guns and let him deal with the consequences like Kiki told her.

Zee really does know how to apologize but I think the puppies might have stolen the show, Rhett and Miss Scarlet are wonderful additions to the family.

Lindsay still hasn't learned what her job title is and now she will have to share the position, she also hasn't learned when you given a chance to make amends take it, forgetting the stew was not stupid but goes to she yet again what is important in Lindsay's world.

The tasting sounded like fun (especially since Michael and Lindsay weren't there) and the food is going to be a big hit (Unlike Lindsay I bet?), I hope Faal used disinfected after kissing Lindsay on the cheek.

Lindsay really thinks she had handle planning a party for Sydney's retirement she can't even handle following basic instructions, plus she never would have gotten the Clayton Mansion or any of the people Sydney and his wife have known for years, I mean Sydney did run the gallery long before Lindsay worked there so he knows more than her (I think lint knows more.

Can't wait for the party and Portland :)

Author's Response:

Lint knows more...snarf!

Until Lindsay actually listens she's not going to learn, even her dad said she's spoilt and why do they think its her Brownstone.  Michael has always been entitled but in a different way to Lindsay but they're behaviours achieve the same result...one way ticket to Pariahville.

Hope you enjoy the party chapter...Portland is being tip-tapped right now.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2016 5:37 pm Title: Chapter 29

Had to chuckle over the breakfast scene. Lindsey trying to be a part of the family dynamic there, but to just thrust herself in there...it's almost a "too little, too late" scenario. We'll hav to see if they actually do write down a list of TTD in the mornings so she understands what the morning "rituals" consist of. Mind you, if she continues to be so caught up with herself to even forget to put teh stew in....to pout like she did, toss out her food etc. Only goes to show that the 2 kids really ARE the adults compared to her. then her going off to the diner and "comiserating" with Michael. I really just can't wait till she's really really really brought down. So many have tried with no success to bring her to heel. She just can't a clue though. Again....had to chuckle at her assumption that she'd be hosting Sydney's party. LOL!! That's she's merely a guest and has no other place or authority there! I am so looking forward to the party and hopefully see her fall flat once again. see her put in her place...again. She's on strike 2 yes?? lol. Mind you...I almost want to see her stay on there until Justin is gifted with the Gallery. I REALLY want to see her reaction to that. Will be a most enjoyable blow up. I'm grinning like the cheshire cat just thinking about it. Her and Lydia going to San Fran at the same time as Hunter et al will also be....um...interesting. Hunter and Martine basically having the same opportunity as Lindsey, and with them so early on in their job experience is a riot!! Again...another meltdown opportunity. Or at least one for her to show her claws, be  a snobby bitch and be put in her place.

And then there's Michael. *sigh* Soooo pathetic, yet at the same time thinks himself so entitled. Imagine, assuming he should automatically be a part of any and every meal the groups have. The best though was when he tried to delete the email and Carl was notified right there infromt of him. We know that Michael was just going to delete it and then lie, sayingit was never recieved. He needs a serious kick in the ass! He and Lindsey both! They both have unbelievable thought patterns. Neither see why Faal is with Zee. not why Brian is with Justin. Both assume it just about the sex and would be better off with, well...them! I almost wanted to kick Faal's ass for "taking one for the team". He wanted to stop any arguement, but really.......the poor guy. and Lindsey's simpering attitude afterwards. simply naseating!! 

the whole flowers and puppies idea is adorable!! Dying to know what Drew was supposed to get. I'm guessing autocorrect was to blame in this case. Oh well.2 adorable pups now have a home with Drew and Em. Those are going to be 2 VERY spoiled little pups. 

I need say nothing about the tasting menu. Was obviously drooling. :) I must say though....for the past while now I'm craving duck. lol. I think it will have to be on my next shopping list. Will have to find a good recipe. Have always wanted to make Peking duck, so who knows...perhaps soon. :)

Very curious as to how Brett being in town is going to go. Will Michael be able to attend this shindig at the GLC? HE obviousl ywon't be able t oattend teh perspective afterwards. what shit will Michael try to create if he does attend the GLC. Oh yet another possible take down to anticipate! You're so good at this.

It was such a joy to read this update this morning! I was really looking forward to it and it most certainly did NOT disappoint. Mind you....now I'm absolutely salivating for  the next one. lol.

Absolutely brilliant!

Cheers

Elaine

Author's Response:

Thank you!  So glad you are enjoying it.  The San Fran trip has an extra spin, C30 is already up so it's not exactly a spoiler but I won't mention it anyway. 

You are right it was an autocorrect error used to get the puppies to the Boyd Honeycutt household.  And already they are divas, 

Again I made the mistake of going through books to get the tasting menu on an empty stomach...big mistake huge.  If you make the peking duck let me know how it works out. 

Unfortunately, Michael thinks that because its being held at the GLC that it's not a Red Cape Event...big mistake huge...and there's a take down coming but not from whom you'd expect.

Happy reading

Nicole

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2016 4:29 pm Title: Chapter 29

Oooh LAWD Bitch and Mitch certainly had their noses out of joint and stuck in places they have no business in during this chapter! I wait with baited breath as I watch their descent into obscurity.

I had to laugh at the breakfast scene. Mel, Gus and Jenny sure displayed how useless Lindsay really is. Then in her pique and petulance at basically being told that she was in the way, she turns on the oven and leaves without putting dinner in and heads to the diner. I'm so glad Debbie overheard her comments to El Captian Pan de Culo and told Mel so that the good ol' Sargeant couldn't backpeddle. Jenny was absolutely RIGHT to keep Gus from covering for Lindsay. She, like Michael, needs to learn to take responsibilty for her inaction and neglect. 

Lydia sure does have Lindz's high-and-mighty number! I'm so happy that she is hellbent on showing Lindsay exactly how her much presence means. The little power-tripping missy is having her legs continuously chopped off. I hate that Faal felt he had to take one for the team to shut the harridan's tirade up. Her entitlement issues need to be addressed once and for all!

As for her mealy-mouthed counterpart: If I could reach into the story and throat-punch him, I WOULD!! Every single word or thought in his head is an insult to the creator of brain cells. When he told Lindsay's complaining ass,  'Damn right they do. They need to remember who the parents are!' I wanted Kiki to tell him that Gus and Jenny actually do know who their real parents are- Ben and Mel- because it is certainly NOT Michael and Lindsay. OOoohhhh THEY MAKE ME SICK!! 

I really can't wait for the party so that Lindz has to eat that same crow which is pecking at her brain. Hunter and Martine under the guidance of Lydia are going to be a success. Add to the fact that they obtained a venue which there is no way Lindsay would never have been given access to and Em&Z HoD catering, I think their success is assured. No doubt that the Diva of the Dumbassment Duo will try to mess it up with deplorable manners and pretentious comments but I think having Emily and Francine might take the bitch down eighty pegs or five-hundred.

As for Michael buying the ticket at the GLC, is that a separate event from the one being given by Red Cape Comics? I really hope not. I wouldn't want Brett to have to put up with the unneccessary whining especially being so far away from home. But then again, having Justin and Blake there to publicly embarrass the Dumber of the Dumbassment Duo might be worth its weight in hilarity! 

So much to look forward to in this fabulous fic!! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

P.S. The 'Apology' flowers and Em's reaction to them was so touching. And I have a feeling that Rhett and Miss Scarlet are going to wrap Drewsie up as tight as Em has him. I couldn't stop smiling every time he and the puppies was mentioned. Em is going to have trouble on his hands...LOL

Author's Response:

Ah yes Miss Scarlett and Rhett are now the king and queen of the Boyd Honeycutt household and Drew can consider himself, like Brian with Lilah and Justin with MIlo, owned!

Lindsay just doens't know when to stop and can't see that she's doing anything wrong.  As Jennifer said an entitled wasp even her daddy says they've spoiled her!  As soon as things don't go her way she spits out her dummy stamps her feet.

Oh a throat punch, now how could I incorporate that without anybody getting sued...let me think on that <tee hee>

The Red Cape Comic and GLC event is one and the same...Michael hasn't quite grasped that...and remember his nastiness about Stuart, well that sets...oh wait not yet can't tell you that yet.

Glad you are enjoying it still

Happy reading and huge hugs...off to write first stage of Portland

Nicole x