Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2016 3:30 am Title: Chapter 40

Lindsay NEVER learns. She lies even to herself that she has any REAL influence over anything at this point... and Grace is going to be fun!!!

Author's Response:

Nope she never does...and that's what makes it fun!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2016 12:51 am Title: Chapter 40

HOLY GUACAMOLE!! Michael and Lindsay are Dumber Than A Sack Of Hair!

That moment between Lindsay and D was funny I especially liked when she had Lindsay try on the coat then proceeded to insult her, honey your Ass is not made for designer clothes.

There are pictures of Michael making out with Patrice Ewww and Hilarious (Feel Sorry for Patrice)

Michael should be scared cause when Daphne gets back It Is On!!

Lindsay told that Robert guy she was related to Melody?

Trying to control Hunter's life doesn't make you his mentor, lying and using deceit is not going to guarantee that Melody won't destroy her. (I swear they are going to need t-shirts and a secret code for this club, already have mascots lol)

Mel has to stay strong and keep Lindsay out of the Brownstone time for her to learn her words and actions have severe consequences.

So Leda has pets huh? 

Grace and Celeste are married and she knows about the affair?!? Is Grace there to tell Mel? Will the secret about the house come out now or in court?

Lindsay is so dead they are going to have to bury her twice!

Captain Asshat and Stuck-up Heifer Wow...Just Wowwww!

 

Author's Response:

Dumber than a sack of hair?  Brilliant!

Indeed there are, but I'm not IT savvy enough to knock one up, I thought the idea was enough a visual would be too much for my delicate nature.

She will deny she said that...she simply didn't correct his assumption...completely different in Lindsay's mind and the perfect 'get out' for her.

Loving the 'bury her twice' comment, so good!

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2016 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh I hope this is the final straw for Mel! I have a pretty good idea the kids will be ok with it. Jenny has certainly been hinting at it for long enough. Gus has pretty much had it with her as well. she may be his mother biologically, but Mel is so much better at mothering. she doesn it honestly. For lindsey, Gus is merely a pawn in her games. She maes the arguement of not staying away from Gus, but isn't he only a few months away from 18? (sorry, I can't remember) I'm thinking he can make that decision for himself either way. If Mel does end it (fingers frossed) she has a HUGE support network who will help her and the kids adjust. (I really don't think it'll be  a huge adjustment tbh!)

Oh I hope Mel really sticks to her guns on this! she may have changed teh locks, but I hope she doesn't give Lindsey a key. I can't believe Lindsey doesn't think she said anything wrong!! Unbelievable! THEN she has the frigging audasity...the utter gaul to contact that robert Caswell guy!! Like nobody will be able to find out she initiated this. she's so caught up in her machinations, she's become an absolute stupido as well! 

OMG!!!!!!!! Oh how I WISH there was a possible pic for us to see! what I wouldn't give to be in that particular circle, just to be a part of that photo being spread around. Even justpicturing it in my head in no way does it justice, but will have to do. OMFG.............SO incredibly bloody frigging funny! that was shere brilliance on your part to add that into this story.

So now Leda has dogs. My goodness, there's a menagerie of animals in and amongst these guys. Love it.

Not only does Lindsey almost flub it with Michael about Celeste, but now Grace is here as well to whom Grace is referring to. Whoooooooooooeeeeeeeeeee! Even more things to look forward to. Wow.

Absolutely wonderful chapter! thank you for posting on such a regular basis. Between you and Starlight, we are incredibly spoiled.

thank you !!!!!!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2016 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 39

I'm thoroughly enjoying Jenmy more and more every chapter. While she may be inquisitive about the "social standings" of particular "circles" I got the impression that her line of questioning was intenional. She specifically wanted to push Lindsey's buttons. 

Interaction between Michael and Justin was great! LOL! Really enjoyed that smack down. Michael STILL seems to think he's special (well, he is, just not in the way he thinks nor in a way that one would want to be deemed as "special".;) ) I mean, when is teh guy going to stop with the smugness? He's been shot down, put down and smacked down so many times....you'd think he's learn at some point! He's trying to get people to argue amongst themselves I guess by insinuating things about he and Brian, all the while assuming Justin doesn't know anything (wrong), THEN he makes comments about Ben, and putting emphasis on himself once again. Once again however being shot down. Both he and Lindsey should learn their lessons, however, watching the smack downs is just to much fun from out perspective.

I absolutely could not believe the way Lindsey spoke to Jenny!! My jaw dropped! I surprised there wasn't a massive take down of her physically! And really........when the hell did she become such a bloody prude? We've seen her over adn over again makeing some comment about B&J or whoever having sex in whose ever home. i mean seriously...I so want to smack her! lol.

I'm thinking Michael and Lindsey are so bloody suportive of each other, perhaps they need to get together...I mean, Michael's already made out with a woman. (BAHAHAHA) and we already know Lindsey is bi. (Seriously, the idea completel grosses me out, I'm just kidding!!) I definitely think though, that since Mel has told her to leave, that she should just go live with Michael. i'm dying to know what happens when they find out that Zee now owns it.

I cannot describe how much I LOVED this update! I've read it about 3 times just to be able to get every nuance...and to just keep reliving the great smackdowns M&L so richly deserved!

To say "I can't wait for the next update" isn't even close to my anticiaption level!

Cheers!! and than kyou thank you thank you!!!

Elaine

Author's Response:

Oh yes Miss Jenny is happily taking potshots at her momma and she's too blinded by Faal/Brian/living through Justin now through Hunter to see it!  And therein lies the problem with M&L their rose coloured glasses view of themselves.  Michael can't accept that he is nothing in Brian's life and wasn't that much before, yes he was his best friend but then Justin came along and snatched him without bye or leave.  And for him to find out that it was Hunter's presence that made Ben stop the steroids was fun to write.

Lindsay's prudishness is plain jealousy...she can't understand why everyone is having more sex than her...I suggest a mirror for her in and outside.

Having Lindsay speak to Jenny that way was needed for it to be the start of the push for Mel to get some distance betweeen them and the fact that Jenny was going to be the adult and apologise speaks more about her than Lindsay.

No I already shuddered over Ted's double headed dildo comment I think that's enough togetherness for them for now...though the author reserves the right to change her mind.

And there is a nice surprise waiting for someone, I think I may have given it away a tad in C40 but I don't think anyone will mind.

This was one of my favourite chapters to write.  Especially the smackdowns!

Happy reading

Nicole

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2016 3:52 pm Title: Chapter 38

I still don't understand why they are keeping Lindsay's suspension a secret.  I'm amazed that Zee knew who Garner Vance is.  Emmett may not know what's going on but as long as bubbles are on hand he'll go with it.  Just what house is Aunt Dee and Uncle Luc at?  I know it's the Squirrel Hill Residence but I'm confused about who owned it before Zee.  We learn more about Lindsay's house in Toronto, the two-face bitch.  Lydia seems to be all over the place here.  I'm sure the art showings are going to go off brilliantly, but why would Lindsay want Gus to use his i-pad when the gallary is recording it as well.  Love the segment with Melody and the fact that Hunter decided to stay with Lydia and not flit off.  Wonder what Michael  had that kept him away and am glad it did.  It amazes me how much work Zee got done on the Squirrel Hill place.  They came up with the perfect solution for a temporary tenant and oddly enough have Lindsay to thank for the suggestion.  Michael is in shit, first for trying to stop Jenny from playing roller derby and then for starting something with Blake.  Now that he's on Jenny's bad side maybe no more invites!  I'm surprised that Michael and Lindsay are teaming up trying to get Hunter to go to NY.  Wonder where Lindsay and Mel will be staying in NY, certainly not in the condo which is a shame for Mel.

Author's Response:

Hiya

Brian and Zee are saying nothing because Lindsay lied about where she would be for the next six weeks...and of course nobody but Ted knows that Brian has bought Bloom for Justin as a wedding present and would question why Lydia would tell him such a thing.

Squirrel Hill was owned by Bernadine Williamson a fellow WASP friend of Nancy Peterson.  Nancy wanted to buy the house from her but she sold it to Zee

Michael had nothing to do he just didn't turn up because that's the dad he is.

Ah New York...there's more to come for both those trips.

Lindsay was trying to be a bitch and cause problems between Faal and Zee by suggesting Leda but it backfired...nicely I thought.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BritinLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2016 2:46 pm Title: Chapter 39

Omg this chapter was amazing just awesome linds the B can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

It is one of my favourites.  Especially the Justin slap down of Michael

There's more kabooming to come

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2016 3:21 am Title: Chapter 39

Finally!!!!  Everyone has been way to nice to those two -  Can't wait for Michael to realize that Zee is his new landlord and she too throws him out or whatever she is planning.  I just despise both of them.

Author's Response:

It had to come, there's moe to come.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2016 1:56 am Title: Chapter 35

Melody is being so sweet to Miranda.  Hopefully Lindsay will get what she deserves for being 'honest'.  Poor Brian and his back.  At least he has Justin to keep him safe from unscrupulous chiropracters.  Love, love, love how Norma took Lindsay down a peg.  Thank God for Marek.  His message will mark Lindsay's coming down.  No trying to keep secrets from Zee.  Why is Michael trying to get in Hunter's good graces?  Lindsay is not the least bit sorry for what she said and I think a 6 week suspension is too good for her.

Author's Response:

Oh Lindsay gets hers and then some, she always underestimates the strength and sting of the 'little people' as she sees them.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2016 12:21 am Title: Chapter 33

Valentine's Day!  Heh, heh, Mikey actually thought he could piece together the letter he tore up and salvage the $3000.  Not happening.  Lindsay thinks she can get envolved with the Melody party.  Again not happening.  Jenny has the best ideas.  Love, love, love how Hunter found those paintings and Lindsay couldn't be bothered to look at them.  Well, he called in the right person.  Justin. How did Lindsay get into the gallary?    Hunter is coming into some serious money and Lindsay is not.  Oh joy!

Author's Response:

Of course he did, this is Michael after all.  And of course she did because she's a Petersson and their name means something...

Gallery answer: she just followed the noise of an excited Justin and Brian, she didn't get into the gallery room itself just the room with the Kirkidans in it.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2016 7:49 pm Title: Chapter 39

OMGAWD! HOLY SHIT!! 

I had to read the chapter twice and I still can't believe what happened?

Jenny went after Lindsay and it makes me proud. Nice reveal about Lindsay implying Gus was conceived naturally :)

Hunter put Michael and Lindsay in their place another proud moment :) That was nice of him to get the motorbikes

Even Deb and Carl threw in their $20 worth

Justin firmly established for Lindsay that just because she pushed New York doesn't mean she gets to bask in his success, no one applauds the tenor for clearing his throat (Dangerous Liaisons reference lol).

Both of them acting like jealous lovers got Bitch slapped twice, first by Leda and then Mel raised her hand and laid it down on Lindsay by kicking her out of the Brownstone.

That Was My Favorite Part!!! rofl

Oh Man Chapter 40 is going to be Very Interesting.

Applause, Applause You Are Awesome :)

Author's Response:

I'm bowing and curtseying.  It was great to write, one of my favourite chapters.

More kabooms to come.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2016 3:50 pm Title: Chapter 39

Hiya,

Kaboom indeed!

This chapter made me want to cry out: Are you ready to rumble!!

A sparring match for the family and a first round of blows for Mickey and the first uppercut for Lindsay. 
They will be black and blue by the time the match is over for this was only a warm up wasn't it. I felt Zee was keeping way, way back. If she's gonna loose it I wouldn;t want to be around cause it ain't gonna be nice. Coffins could be involved. 

Now all I have to do is to wait to see Whiney and Blondie: vol op hun muil gaan. They are stumbling already.

The absolute ruthlessness and utter smugness of Lindsay towards Hunter and Jenny had me foaming at the mouth. Yay to Mel. She's finally seeing the light isn't she. I will never understand how she put up with Lindz that long. And way to go Jenny and Hunter for telling both Lindsay and Michael off. And Hunter wanting to share his wealth just shows how grown up and loving he has become. He has become one heck of a man and way more adult than his "lovely father" ever will be.

Justin's reaction towards Michael had me running for the loo. And yes I made it in time. Lindsay's reaction to Hunter and Matt and Brian and Justin having sex in the house made me in stitches. OMG she acts like such a victorian old biddy. Like she never had sex before. Her blatant jealousy! We all know she hasn't had a decent roll in the sack for ages. Maybe she could get some from Michael a he isn't adverse to snogging a lesbian (hihihihi) 

And Leda kicking Blondie and Whiney out made me run for the bathroom again. That flee infested hovel is drawing nearer and nearer.

Thank you for a wonderful afternoon with lots of laughter. This surely took the edge of my anxiety.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

XOXO

Meriam

Author's Response:

Hey Meriam

Ding-ding and everyone back to their corners...and absolutely she was kept away Faal knows how to handle his girl.

Her sense of hauteur is absolute and smackable...and Michael being so yellow bellied and indignant that Brian should spend time supporting Justin when he needed him was great to write, there's more to come on that.

Glad you made it to the bathroom twice!

Hope you enjoy the next chapter, sending you more hugs

Nicole xxx

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2016 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 39

LMAO!!!!! OMG!!!!! BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'll have to review again in a bit after I calm down and get my racing thoughts together BUT OMG!!!!!!!!

WRITE On Nicole!!!

~Nichelle

Author's Response:

Can't wait to read your review.  Glad you liked it.  It was an absolute joy to write, especially the Justin slapdown of Michael...again!

Hugs

Nicole

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2016 4:10 am Title: Chapter 38

I think Mel and Lindsay should go to New York for the birthday party at MoMa because there will be press and  paparazzi taking pictures and it will do good for Lindsay's self-esteem to have her photo taken in her tux and shoes so later she can be on The Worse Dress List.

The would just be the cherry on the worst night of her life especially if she tries sucking up to Melody and her husband Franklin.

Now I understand why she was trying to get close to Melody in San Francisco and why she was pushing her way into the party planning so badly.

Wonder how she is going to feel when she finds out her partner in stupidity is not going to be at anymore gatherings? (I see her stomping her foot and folding her arms with a pout)

Justin was right every house Michael goes to he gets into it with someone and how no one comes to visit him.

Is that $220 a bottle and apiece for the four (?) They drank or was Lindsay hedging on her share?

Leda is going to enjoy having everyone spend time at her new temporary place especially Mel, Gus and Jenny will love it, bet they even come up with a nice routine after a week ;)

Michael is going to freak when he finds out Zee is his landlord that should be Hilarious.

 

 

Author's Response:

The wine question is $220 each, I rounded up a wee bit.  

I really hope you enjoy C39.

Nicole