Date: Dec 07, 2016 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 41
LAWD!!!! SECRETS and LIES EXPOSED and PLANS are MADE!!! LAWD!! I would feel sorry for Orangeade and Dummy Smurf but the way my feelings are set up... NAH not gonna happen! HA!
First, let me just say this was a BRILLIANT way to bring everyone up to speed on Lindsay's machinations and expose her pefidy to Gus. She's had it coming for a long time; it's so much FUN watching the trick get her comeuppance. Ellen is a freaking GENIUS to have recorded the contretemps between Lindsay and Grace! I would love to see her try to backpeddle out of this one. She's a lying, scheming, low-down, skanky trifling HO and this proves it. Now this is the ammunition Mel has to definitely seek divorce. That house alone proves that Grace isn't lying....LOL
I can't believe Lindsay had the temerity to have custody papers drawn up against Mel on her and Michael's behalf. She needs to be smacked with a Dung Truck and covered open-mouthed in cement. And they're not doing it for any reason other than support money so that the two of them can be the neglectful imps they all ready are with a cushioned bank account. Any judge who entertains the thought of awarding custody to Dumb and Dumber needs to be shot with shit, rinsed off with piss and then shot again for stinking! I'm glad that Emmett brought up the Maculay Culkin case! And now Michael's been caught out there regarding his involvement with Rita Montgomery too!!!! No Way, Jenny is going to be denied her emancipation simply because her father arranged for the woman who prostituted her own son for personal gain to harass Hunter. Unfit much? You bet Michael's ass it is! Add to that he's an irresponsible, jealous, thieving little troll and he doesn't have a leg to stand on.
As for Bitch..... LAWD love the truth, I would like to see Gus tell his mother in front of a judge that he wants NOTHING to do with her and then list all her sins, especially her GREED. She is just straight up TRIFLING! BTW, where has Justin's support money been going? Is it in the same account as Brian's? I really hope so!
I'm glad that Daphne is coming back to the Pitts to knock some heads and kick some ass! THEY AIN'T READY!!! Between her, Zee, Leda and Aunt D, Mel and the kids are going to be protected at all costs from the Dynamic Dumbasses. Add Jenn, Alice and Deb into the mix along with a bunch of ANGRY men, one of which is an attorney, and Lindsay and Michael betta watch out!! The Battle Royale is about commence and I CAN'T WAIT!!!
OMG! Nicole this was so freaking well-crafted! I love where your mind has gone!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Hi Nichelle,
So glad you like it, I'm so happy.
Yes the money from Justin is going to the same bank account as Brian's does.
I really hope you enjoy C42...
Happy reading
Hugs
Nicole
Date: Dec 07, 2016 3:24 am Title: Chapter 41
I'm so glad the entire family knows ALL of the plans in the works and all the details of the chaos the two dipshits have done. the only downside was Brian had to tell Justin about his wedding present early, but i still love it!
Now that the entire family knows what is going on, NOTHING is going to stop the family force!!!
Why is Mel so worried about custody though... what judge in his right mind would award either of the idiots custody... both kids are old enough to have a say and the rest of the family is against them... but I just want them to fall on their faces, their blue and orange faces!!!
Author's Response:
Falling flat on their blue and orange faces...I think I can manage that!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2016 2:43 am Title: Chapter 41
OH HELL NAW!!!
Just when I think Michael and Lindsay can't stoop any lower they become worms (Sorry Worms Everywhere) without feeling, for them to sue for custody of Jenny and Gus just goes to show that they are only thinking of themselves and to Hell with anyone else.
Too bad they are too stupid to see that they have snapped that last Damn nerve so now it is on!!
All the secrets have been revealed Gus and Jenny are going to fight to be emancipated from their so called parents, Mel is getting rid of Lindsay's flat Ass for good the kids are okay with it and she can cry and move on finally at peace.
Mel and the kids are moving in with Leda (YEAH!!), Matt is getting The Brownstone early (YES!!!), Daphne is coming home (OH SHIT!!!).
Michael and Lindsay should just stay in jail with their new looks because when they get out they are beyond in Shit's Creek!!
Great Chapter, Thanks for making me a small part of the story and giving me a laugh in the midst of all the turmoil :)
Author's Response:
Oh you are more than welcome, your reviews and bon mots are confidence building and amusing respectively.
Hope C42 makes you laugh as much too.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2016 2:24 am Title: Chapter 41
So many bits and pieces leaving me wanting more. Things must be bad if Zee in gathering the troops together. Okay where did the video come from? I mean how did he get it? Michael and Lindsay dyed and in jail! Wonderful. Oh my, everything is out! So Mel and the kids are getting to move in with Leda? Good move. That leaves emancipation. Brilliant!
Author's Response:
Oh it's bad. I hope I cleared up the video question for you.
Glad you are still enjoying it.
C42 is a bit of a doozy.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2016 4:02 am Title: Chapter 40
Love how Aunt Dee takes things in hand. Jenny was going to apologise? No way. It doesn't pay to make Vince mad, but Aunt D has a point, Daphne will make Mikey's life miserable. Oh boy, Lindz and Michael actually think they can win this? I was wondering what you had planned. Changing the locks is a nice start. Love that everyone learns that Zee is Mikey's new landlord. Talk about evil intentions. Okay who's contact photo is going around and how did they manage it? Oh no, Lindsay did not just sic Caswell on Hunter. Justin will have something to say about that I'm sure. Another question. What is it about rats that involve Melanie, Leda, Faal and Zee? Oh this chapter ended on a charming note. Can't wait to see the shit hitting the fan.
Author's Response:
Hey,
Sorry forgot to answer the Gardner Vance question in your previous review. Zee knew him because his company did their advertising and she and Cynthia conspired to get Stark Industries to sign Kinnetic, think it was chapter 6 that happened in. As for the rat thing, in this story, Leda has a phobia about rats and used that as a way to lure Mel up to the house to 'rescue her' but it was a ruse to introduce her to Butch and Sundance the malamutes, Jenny and Gus really want dogs...
The contact photo is of Michael and Patrice making out...mercifully I am not IT savvy enough to knock that up, the thought is enough!
Ah yes Hurricane Daphne is coming!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 06, 2016 3:30 am Title: Chapter 40
Lindsay NEVER learns. She lies even to herself that she has any REAL influence over anything at this point... and Grace is going to be fun!!!
Author's Response:
Nope she never does...and that's what makes it fun!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 06, 2016 2:03 am Title: Chapter 40
And for the latest episode in Chronicles of BITCH and MITCH:
Holy Shucks Montgomery!!!! Robert Craswell!!! That fucking BITCH Lindsay called the same Art Critic who set Justin up?!!!!!! I definitely want to punch her in the face now! I'm glad Marek called Lydia who in turn called Melody! That trick is trying to sabotage Hunter the way she tried to do Justin.
Incidentally, I'm so damn HAPPY that Lindz and Michael found out that all Lindsay tried to do to Brian and Justin's tear their relationship apart failed and there wasn't a damn thing they could do to stop it. Justin was about to dig a new asshole for Michael while jamming his foot up the one he's already got. And Jenny.... WHOO LAWD Lindsay and Michael done pissed off the wrong two! I cheered aloud when Leda threw their too entitled, too mouthy, too dumb asses OUT of her house!
The confrontation between Dee and Lindsay was HILARIOUS!!! Did that little harridan really think she was any match for Mrs. Deidre Starks? HA! When she called Lindsay's bluff that the coat was hers, Honey! I nearly choked on my Jim Beam!! Talk about too damn funny for words! Then to have Michael almost become roadkill because of his reckless mouth!!! OMG!!!! Vince is the MAN! But Dee's right...Daphne is going to have a field day kicking Michael's ass proper!
As for Mel, I'm so HAPPY she is sticking to her resolve regarding Lindsay. It would be better though if she packs up all of her shit and send Lindsay her things via FedEx to Michael's place. Time to officially Ditch the Bitch in my opinion!
Zee.... well what can I say that hasn't already been said about that incredible, forward thinking woman. I'm so happy that she let the family in on the fact that she now own Shadyside!! The entertainment value of Michael's downfall alone is worth the price of admission but when Lindsay finds out....Lawd love a FOOL because that will be worth the entire fall Armani collection!! Head spinning and green shit flying out the mouth anyone?? LMAO! I can't wait!
As for the last scene: WHOO-HOO I knew the Celeste situation would resurface to bite Lindsay in her flat ass!! Grace... lawd AND she's a lawyer..... AND she's friends with Mel....AND she's got an axe to grind with the Tricking Trollop!! WHOOOO-WEEEEE Hello a revenge plot worthy of Puccini <in my Ted voice>
Lindsay and Michael are just racking up the points in the Dumbass Duo Tournament in which they are the only players. Whatever Joshua is sitting on will probably be the 8-ball that sinks them into the corner pocket of obscurity! Did I mention that I can't wait?!!! WELL I CAN'T!! I'm wriggling around in my chair like a puppy that's gotta pee, I'm so freaking excited!!
WRITE On Nicole,
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Oh yes, she's a determined but she's underestimates the depth of protection of Lydia for her little urchin cub and Melody doesn't like being used...
Ah there is more pitbull pissed of Jenny to come very soon.
I love your reviews and so glad that you are enjoying the story.
Off to write C41 where things get interesting.
Happy reading
Hugs
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2016 12:51 am Title: Chapter 40
HOLY GUACAMOLE!! Michael and Lindsay are Dumber Than A Sack Of Hair!
That moment between Lindsay and D was funny I especially liked when she had Lindsay try on the coat then proceeded to insult her, honey your Ass is not made for designer clothes.
There are pictures of Michael making out with Patrice Ewww and Hilarious (Feel Sorry for Patrice)
Michael should be scared cause when Daphne gets back It Is On!!
Lindsay told that Robert guy she was related to Melody?
Trying to control Hunter's life doesn't make you his mentor, lying and using deceit is not going to guarantee that Melody won't destroy her. (I swear they are going to need t-shirts and a secret code for this club, already have mascots lol)
Mel has to stay strong and keep Lindsay out of the Brownstone time for her to learn her words and actions have severe consequences.
So Leda has pets huh?
Grace and Celeste are married and she knows about the affair?!? Is Grace there to tell Mel? Will the secret about the house come out now or in court?
Lindsay is so dead they are going to have to bury her twice!
Captain Asshat and Stuck-up Heifer Wow...Just Wowwww!
Author's Response:
Dumber than a sack of hair? Brilliant!
Indeed there are, but I'm not IT savvy enough to knock one up, I thought the idea was enough a visual would be too much for my delicate nature.
She will deny she said that...she simply didn't correct his assumption...completely different in Lindsay's mind and the perfect 'get out' for her.
Loving the 'bury her twice' comment, so good!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 05, 2016 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 40
Wow, things just get better and better for Linz!?
Fantastic, thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Author's Response:
Never has a woman reaped such a whirlwind of fun right?!
You're more than welcome
Nicole
Date: Dec 05, 2016 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh I hope this is the final straw for Mel! I have a pretty good idea the kids will be ok with it. Jenny has certainly been hinting at it for long enough. Gus has pretty much had it with her as well. she may be his mother biologically, but Mel is so much better at mothering. she doesn it honestly. For lindsey, Gus is merely a pawn in her games. She maes the arguement of not staying away from Gus, but isn't he only a few months away from 18? (sorry, I can't remember) I'm thinking he can make that decision for himself either way. If Mel does end it (fingers frossed) she has a HUGE support network who will help her and the kids adjust. (I really don't think it'll be a huge adjustment tbh!)
Oh I hope Mel really sticks to her guns on this! she may have changed teh locks, but I hope she doesn't give Lindsey a key. I can't believe Lindsey doesn't think she said anything wrong!! Unbelievable! THEN she has the frigging audasity...the utter gaul to contact that robert Caswell guy!! Like nobody will be able to find out she initiated this. she's so caught up in her machinations, she's become an absolute stupido as well!
OMG!!!!!!!! Oh how I WISH there was a possible pic for us to see! what I wouldn't give to be in that particular circle, just to be a part of that photo being spread around. Even justpicturing it in my head in no way does it justice, but will have to do. OMFG.............SO incredibly bloody frigging funny! that was shere brilliance on your part to add that into this story.
So now Leda has dogs. My goodness, there's a menagerie of animals in and amongst these guys. Love it.
Not only does Lindsey almost flub it with Michael about Celeste, but now Grace is here as well to whom Grace is referring to. Whoooooooooooeeeeeeeeeee! Even more things to look forward to. Wow.
Absolutely wonderful chapter! thank you for posting on such a regular basis. Between you and Starlight, we are incredibly spoiled.
thank you !!!!!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Dec 05, 2016 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 40
WHOLLY HANNA! Linz's perfect little world is about to crash and burn spectacularly.
Waiting on the reaction when Mikey finds out that Zee is his landlord and is kicking his ass out.
Keep on writing!!!
Author's Response:
It is indeed!
Oh and the reason he's being kicked out is so schweet!
Your wish is my command...off to do C41!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 05, 2016 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 39
I'm thoroughly enjoying Jenmy more and more every chapter. While she may be inquisitive about the "social standings" of particular "circles" I got the impression that her line of questioning was intenional. She specifically wanted to push Lindsey's buttons.
Interaction between Michael and Justin was great! LOL! Really enjoyed that smack down. Michael STILL seems to think he's special (well, he is, just not in the way he thinks nor in a way that one would want to be deemed as "special".;) ) I mean, when is teh guy going to stop with the smugness? He's been shot down, put down and smacked down so many times....you'd think he's learn at some point! He's trying to get people to argue amongst themselves I guess by insinuating things about he and Brian, all the while assuming Justin doesn't know anything (wrong), THEN he makes comments about Ben, and putting emphasis on himself once again. Once again however being shot down. Both he and Lindsey should learn their lessons, however, watching the smack downs is just to much fun from out perspective.
I absolutely could not believe the way Lindsey spoke to Jenny!! My jaw dropped! I surprised there wasn't a massive take down of her physically! And really........when the hell did she become such a bloody prude? We've seen her over adn over again makeing some comment about B&J or whoever having sex in whose ever home. i mean seriously...I so want to smack her! lol.
I'm thinking Michael and Lindsey are so bloody suportive of each other, perhaps they need to get together...I mean, Michael's already made out with a woman. (BAHAHAHA) and we already know Lindsey is bi. (Seriously, the idea completel grosses me out, I'm just kidding!!) I definitely think though, that since Mel has told her to leave, that she should just go live with Michael. i'm dying to know what happens when they find out that Zee now owns it.
I cannot describe how much I LOVED this update! I've read it about 3 times just to be able to get every nuance...and to just keep reliving the great smackdowns M&L so richly deserved!
To say "I can't wait for the next update" isn't even close to my anticiaption level!
Cheers!! and than kyou thank you thank you!!!
Elaine
Author's Response:
Oh yes Miss Jenny is happily taking potshots at her momma and she's too blinded by Faal/Brian/living through Justin now through Hunter to see it! And therein lies the problem with M&L their rose coloured glasses view of themselves. Michael can't accept that he is nothing in Brian's life and wasn't that much before, yes he was his best friend but then Justin came along and snatched him without bye or leave. And for him to find out that it was Hunter's presence that made Ben stop the steroids was fun to write.
Lindsay's prudishness is plain jealousy...she can't understand why everyone is having more sex than her...I suggest a mirror for her in and outside.
Having Lindsay speak to Jenny that way was needed for it to be the start of the push for Mel to get some distance betweeen them and the fact that Jenny was going to be the adult and apologise speaks more about her than Lindsay.
No I already shuddered over Ted's double headed dildo comment I think that's enough togetherness for them for now...though the author reserves the right to change her mind.
And there is a nice surprise waiting for someone, I think I may have given it away a tad in C40 but I don't think anyone will mind.
This was one of my favourite chapters to write. Especially the smackdowns!
Happy reading
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2016 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 39
Love Jenny learning about social mores. Then there is Michael's little tado with Justin. When will he learn he's never going to win? Lindsay has told more lies. Hope she gets called on them. There is a lot of money being bantered around in this chapter. So much fun. Lindsay going off on Jenny, so not good. Mel finally threw the witch out after Leda showed her and Michael the door. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks glad you're still enjoying it.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2016 3:52 pm Title: Chapter 38
I still don't understand why they are keeping Lindsay's suspension a secret. I'm amazed that Zee knew who Garner Vance is. Emmett may not know what's going on but as long as bubbles are on hand he'll go with it. Just what house is Aunt Dee and Uncle Luc at? I know it's the Squirrel Hill Residence but I'm confused about who owned it before Zee. We learn more about Lindsay's house in Toronto, the two-face bitch. Lydia seems to be all over the place here. I'm sure the art showings are going to go off brilliantly, but why would Lindsay want Gus to use his i-pad when the gallary is recording it as well. Love the segment with Melody and the fact that Hunter decided to stay with Lydia and not flit off. Wonder what Michael had that kept him away and am glad it did. It amazes me how much work Zee got done on the Squirrel Hill place. They came up with the perfect solution for a temporary tenant and oddly enough have Lindsay to thank for the suggestion. Michael is in shit, first for trying to stop Jenny from playing roller derby and then for starting something with Blake. Now that he's on Jenny's bad side maybe no more invites! I'm surprised that Michael and Lindsay are teaming up trying to get Hunter to go to NY. Wonder where Lindsay and Mel will be staying in NY, certainly not in the condo which is a shame for Mel.
Author's Response:
Hiya
Brian and Zee are saying nothing because Lindsay lied about where she would be for the next six weeks...and of course nobody but Ted knows that Brian has bought Bloom for Justin as a wedding present and would question why Lydia would tell him such a thing.
Squirrel Hill was owned by Bernadine Williamson a fellow WASP friend of Nancy Peterson. Nancy wanted to buy the house from her but she sold it to Zee
Michael had nothing to do he just didn't turn up because that's the dad he is.
Ah New York...there's more to come for both those trips.
Lindsay was trying to be a bitch and cause problems between Faal and Zee by suggesting Leda but it backfired...nicely I thought.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2016 3:00 pm Title: Chapter 37
Lindz and Michael need to learn that when something is important they need to make it right. Like Daphne telling them off. They so deserve it. Love a take charge Carl. He's not going to let the Terrible Twosome get away with anything. I enjoy seeing Vince and Daphne together. Their parts were delicious. Learning from Jenny that Mikey snogged a lesbian was funny. Love the Red Cape parts. I like Stuart a lot. Then Lindsay learns that mommy dearest sold Shadyside and manages to con an invite to Melody's party. Mikey dressed as a comic book character and thinking he can get away with attending the Brett Keller affair was a hoot. Brett seems to know a lot about what Michael's been up to. I, too, am wondering what Lindsay is playing at when she gave the address of Brian's loft for the delivery. But the good news is she's been served.
Author's Response:
Oh it gets better
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 05, 2016 2:46 pm Title: Chapter 39
Omg this chapter was amazing just awesome linds the B can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
It is one of my favourites. Especially the Justin slap down of Michael
There's more kabooming to come
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2016 5:36 am Title: Chapter 36
Oh my, I'd forgotten the weekend in NYC. That should be fun. Did Lindsay and Mikey ever come up with their share? Michael thought he was apologising? Him and Lindsay going out now that's just plain weird. Ted in this chapter rocked it. With his decription of Mikey and Lindsay with a double headed dildo to his thinking Lindsay was the wrong woman for Mel. I'm so glad that Mel won her court case. I'm wondering who is going to live in Squirrel Hill? What makes Lindsay think Mikey's being let back into the fold? Meeting up with Todd was interesting. It's nice that the others took up for Todd and declined to serve drinks to the troublesome twosome. Who stole wine that was marked wedding wine do not drink! Hunter gets to host another art showing, shame Lindsay can't attend. NOT!
Author's Response:
Oh they think they have their share...
Hope you like the Squirrel Hill answer
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 05, 2016 3:21 am Title: Chapter 39
Finally!!!! Everyone has been way to nice to those two - Can't wait for Michael to realize that Zee is his new landlord and she too throws him out or whatever she is planning. I just despise both of them.
Author's Response:
It had to come, there's moe to come.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 05, 2016 2:36 am Title: Chapter 39
Wow, Fantastic!
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Author's Response:
Welcome...more kabooms to come.
Happy reading
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2016 1:56 am Title: Chapter 35
Melody is being so sweet to Miranda. Hopefully Lindsay will get what she deserves for being 'honest'. Poor Brian and his back. At least he has Justin to keep him safe from unscrupulous chiropracters. Love, love, love how Norma took Lindsay down a peg. Thank God for Marek. His message will mark Lindsay's coming down. No trying to keep secrets from Zee. Why is Michael trying to get in Hunter's good graces? Lindsay is not the least bit sorry for what she said and I think a 6 week suspension is too good for her.
Author's Response:
Oh Lindsay gets hers and then some, she always underestimates the strength and sting of the 'little people' as she sees them.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2016 1:22 am Title: Chapter 34
Love how Mel explains to Lindz how she lost her share of the finders fee. Michael is so jealous - of everybody. Brian and Justin are christening every room in that house and there are a lot of rooms. It appears that Brian overdid it, poor baby. Then you take us to San Francisco. Lindsay's in the soup now. We know she told about Hunter the way she did on purpose and that will come back to bite her. Hunter has too many friends.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Soup was not quite where I was aiming to put Lindsay but it will do for now.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2016 12:21 am Title: Chapter 33
Valentine's Day! Heh, heh, Mikey actually thought he could piece together the letter he tore up and salvage the $3000. Not happening. Lindsay thinks she can get envolved with the Melody party. Again not happening. Jenny has the best ideas. Love, love, love how Hunter found those paintings and Lindsay couldn't be bothered to look at them. Well, he called in the right person. Justin. How did Lindsay get into the gallary? Hunter is coming into some serious money and Lindsay is not. Oh joy!
Author's Response:
Of course he did, this is Michael after all. And of course she did because she's a Petersson and their name means something...
Gallery answer: she just followed the noise of an excited Justin and Brian, she didn't get into the gallery room itself just the room with the Kirkidans in it.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2016 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 32
Michael's up to something. Wish I knew what. Lindsay is being a pain as well. She doesn't seem to have a clue as to how well off Zee is. Love the little pittbull named Jenny taking on her Momma for all the good it will do her. Did I tell you how much I love Charles? He knows just what to say to both Joshua and Michael. Especially when Carl delivers the coup de gras. Michael tore up a $3000 check. lol. Why does Lindsay feel that she has to help with the party for Melody Reichmann? Like she'd be any help at all. Why is it I gain 10 pounds whenever I read one of your chapters?
Author's Response:
He is but it will come to nought as usual.
Jenny hasn't begun to bare her fangs yet.
Lindsay has a misplaced sense of hauteur...and sorry about the 'gain' but I just love food both cooking and eating!
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2016 7:49 pm Title: Chapter 39
OMGAWD! HOLY SHIT!!
I had to read the chapter twice and I still can't believe what happened?
Jenny went after Lindsay and it makes me proud. Nice reveal about Lindsay implying Gus was conceived naturally :)
Hunter put Michael and Lindsay in their place another proud moment :) That was nice of him to get the motorbikes
Even Deb and Carl threw in their $20 worth
Justin firmly established for Lindsay that just because she pushed New York doesn't mean she gets to bask in his success, no one applauds the tenor for clearing his throat (Dangerous Liaisons reference lol).
Both of them acting like jealous lovers got Bitch slapped twice, first by Leda and then Mel raised her hand and laid it down on Lindsay by kicking her out of the Brownstone.
That Was My Favorite Part!!! rofl
Oh Man Chapter 40 is going to be Very Interesting.
Applause, Applause You Are Awesome :)
Author's Response:
I'm bowing and curtseying. It was great to write, one of my favourite chapters.
More kabooms to come.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 04, 2016 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 39
so glad of that final explosive scene... still want more of it... Jenny finally telling of Lindsay - the gall of Lindsay saying that to Jenny!
so Linday and Michael are mad that Brian lied and said he was in Chicago for a while when he was actually in New York with Justin? They were ok with Chicago, since no Justin, but his location was THAT big a deal to them... they make me want to spit in their faces (ultimate insult in my opinion)
I cannot wait for more of this to unfold!
Author's Response:
Oh there's more to come.
Happy reading
MissMerlot