Date: Dec 10, 2016 4:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I feel so incredibly sad for Emily right now. An apology letter isn't going to undo the pain and damage that Lindsay has done. And I find it absolutely disgusting that after Lindsay had Brian's child herself, she would invite Emily to events that specifically had to do with Gus, to rub it in Emily's face that she had what Emily so desperately wanted. I think it would be karmic justice on Lindsay's nasty, used up ass and dirty stretched out that if Brian WAS somehow able to give Emily the child she so badly wanted and rightfully deserved. Emily and her wife wouldn't put Brian through the bullshit about their child that Lindsay and to an extent, Mel, did to him with Gus. This is all just wishful thinking. But I do hope Emily and even Brian, get some form of justice for what Lindsay robbed them of.
Author's Response:
Don't be sad, I'm anti-Lindsay so everyone gets their happy, well except her of course!
Hope you stay to find out how
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 10, 2016 6:35 am Title: Chapter 43
Love it! All the Peterson's are getting what they deserve.
So looking forward to next update.
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Author's Response:
Thanks JoAnn,
C44 is being cranked out, hope to post tomorrow.
Happy reading
Nicole
Date: Dec 10, 2016 6:12 am Title: Chapter 43
LMFAO!!!!! Michael's mouth FINALLY wrote a check his non-existent ass couldn't cash!! Challenging Zee to a fight?! Really Wonder Twit?! REALLY?!!! And she was in Manolos....LMAO!!! Lord, I laughed until I had hiccups!
The Wonder Dumb and her remarks... insulting Zee's intelligence! That 'stupid woman' as Lindsay seems to think Zee is held all the cards including but not limited to: a signal scrambler, high-end boxes for that trash Lindsay called her possessions, the DEED to her temporary abode and the icing on the cake, access to Pittsburgh's QUUEN, Millicient! Zee is fucking Lindsay without lube in all sorts of ways and without breaking the bank or her fingernails.
I completely felt bad for Phil having to be subject to the STUPIDITY LEAKS of Michael and Lindsay. I think I felt his IQ drop just from breathing the same air as Tweedleledee and Tweedleledumb! I choked on my Pepsi when he said that he pitied Michael's children if they inherited his brain. Thankfully Jenny inherited Mel's brain and shows far more intelligence than Michael ever could even in a reincarnated life. Hell a pair of mismatched socks has more thinking power than he does. DAMN! A pile of ashes has more of an IQ than Michael does! A pack of toothbrushes has more.... well you get the picture. Michael is an IDIOT! And that's being nice about what he really is!
You GO Meriam!! I LOVED that she got to let Lindsay have it! The fabulous judge didn't let Lindsay speak out of turn or lie her way out of her wrongdoing. I'm glad called Lindsay on her misdeeds, even if it was done in private. I still think he should drop the bitch as a client for all of the cases Cunty-rella has against her. But then again win, lose or draw he still gets paid. However his reputation will suffer in the long run and that definitely wouldn't be good. BTW his reaction to 'THAT NOVOTNY' was hilarious in the extreme! Just too damn funny!
My heart broke for Brian! Lindsay really used and abused him the entire time they were friends but no one would have imagined that she would bring an innocent child to use as a billy club repeatedly to metaphorically beat Brian over the head and bust down the doors to his private life. The bitch really should be wearing cement shoes for this kind of slight and disregard. And yet the most troubling thing is that she STILL believes that she didn't do anything wrong. Seriously a letter of apology is simply not enough to punish Trickzilla! But that's okay, there is always the public embarrassment she is going to suffer by #1: being thrown out on her flat keyster along with her Partner-in-Cunty Michael!
I'll bet Lindsay is jamming her toes down her throat now. There's an old adage that goes "When you're digging one ditch, you'd better dig two." All of her threats, innuendo and conniving got Jenn a much more lucrative client- the kind where Ron and Nancy are barely tolerated and would never be able to match financially. Thanks again Zee for that! Jennifer is Real Estate agent to Pittsburgh royalty and I can already see that not only is Ron embarrassed but Nancy pissed. I'll bet he's about to find out what the real meaning behind 'Happy Wife, happy Life' is and Nancy is definitely NOT happy. Lindsay is about to be tossed forcefully OUT of her safety net and there isn't anything she can do about it.
HA! Looking forward to MORE of this!! Can't wait for more comeuppance for the Pain-in-the-Ass Association!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Yep she had to do it and do it in style, she's been itching to get to him since she found out what he said about Hunter.
As Zee says she looks after her own and then some...and when it comes to her enemies a quiet Zee is a dangerous one.
And Judge Meriam will be coming back...that's all I'm saying.
Happy reading hugs
Nicole
Date: Dec 10, 2016 5:00 am Title: Chapter 43
Michael getting knocked on his Ass was all kinds of funny I only wish Lindsay could have experienced it too <Evil Grin>
I bet her feet had blisters after walking in her cheap heels, I feel for Philip Mitcham the man should have stayed home and enjoyed tea with his daughter, cause listening to and trying to explain stuff to Captain Asshat and Stuck-up Heifer made him lose some IQ points, would probably be easier to explain quantum physics to a toddler than law to these two idiots.
We all know Lindsay is not writing an apology to Emily so Adam should get ready to make his opening statements.
I see where Lindsay gets her grandiose behavior too bad Mommy and Daddy aren't much smarter than their sweet angel, Millicent got her property and and a new fantastic realtor, all The Peterson's get is the joy of sucking down Envy.
Lindsay calling Zee should be Hilarious.
I can't wait for Lindsay to realize that The Peterson name doesn't have as much clout as she thinks, as a matter of fact knowing Lindsay could actually be bad for your status lol
Holy Smokes, The Hits Just Keep on Coming :)
Author's Response:
That would've been too easy to do, no Zee wants her to suffer and suffer hard.
I do feel sorry for Philip as he thought that he was rid of them...but alas...all I will say about the apology letter is watch for the wrath of Judge.
Mommie and daddy dearest get a shock when the reality of their widdle princess hits them full in the face.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 10, 2016 4:24 am Title: Chapter 43
Lindsay is so spoiled- thinks she really hasn't done anything wrong- love that the judge questions why the emancipation and the desolution of the marriage- now if we could just get a way to get her totally away from the family for good
Author's Response:
Oh she will be going away...snicker snicker...especially mommie and daddy dearest have their ears and eyes wrenched open.
Happy readng
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 10, 2016 4:04 am Title: Chapter 43
first off... the Judge's name is AWESOME!!!!!
the ending left me with a happy heart just rubbin in the sale in front of the Peterson clan...
I'm still trying to figure out why the court case was settled for an apology letter... i'm guessing it is for something to do with one of the other cases...can't wait to find out.. it couldn't be as easy as just making her go to court.
can't get enough of this story!!!! :)
Author's Response:
it had to be done, Meriam is lovely!
I took a few liberties with the legalities as I wanted that out of the way, she had to be held accountable for her lie to Emily and that seemed a suitably humiliating way to do it...and remember she pissed of Meriam so she's going to make sure she apologises properly...so we could concentrate on the emancipation, divorce and physical custody bits.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 09, 2016 1:43 pm Title: Chapter 42
OHHHHHH I KNOW what 'power' Lindsay is talking about..... I finally figured it out. It's called WONDER DUMB POWER and its usually activated by the WONDER TWIT Michael by her side. That was going to tear my brain up until I figured it out. I wonder if Debbie can make them costumes, preferably Orange and Blue ones with a green brain in the middle with the red circle and a slash in the middle...LOL
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Wonder dumb power! Mine, all mine, no idea who is going to say it but say it they will!
Happy reading
Hugs
Niciole
Date: Dec 09, 2016 1:29 pm Title: Chapter 42
FINALLY getting a chance to read and review!!!! OMFG! WHAT A CHAPTER!!!!!! Thank you for allowing me to deliver the big can of BITCH PLEASE!!!!! I couldn't even stop laughing!!! That 'No pass for yo' ass' sounded so much like me I thought 'OMG Have we met?' And Hunter was the nail in the coffin reminding them of their orange and blue states, LMAO! He's been around Brian too long...LOL
Now onto the chapter itself: Gus, Jenny and Hunter were AMAZING! So strong and independent when dealing with Orangeade and Dummy Smurf!! Michael and Lindsay truly have some big shit with them. I think they really thought that nothing they ever did to the family would have consequences.
Daphne....WHOOOOOOO-WEEEEEE!!!! I actually cheered aloud and fist pumped when my girl got through with the two of them. I could just see their faces when getting those papers...ALL of the papers really!
Mel: YESSSSS!!!! YES! YES! YES!!!!!!!! She is FINALLY free of the entitled, spoiled, wannabe-rich-bitch that is Lindsay. I guess that WASP training will be keeping her warm at night. Thank goodness again for Ellen who had the forethought to videotape the contretemps between Grace and Lindsay! The best part is that Lindsay doesn't even know Mel, Gus and Jenny have officially moved from the Brownstone.
As for Dopey: I'm so glad that Hunter called him on sending Rita to the gallery. I'm especially glad that Zee had him followed so that he couldn't backpeddle and whine his way out of taking responsibility for his viciousness. Charles showing up was just plain BRILLIANT!!
Lindsay feeling that she can threaten Brian and Zee with her power was just fucking HILARIOUS!! Exactly what is it she thinks she can do? Her mother and father are barely tolerated because of Nancy's uppity attitude and Ron is a Sissified straight man. Besides, the two of them are also fed up with Lindsay's entitled and thoughtless behavior which embarrasses them to no end. I'm so looking forward when everything regarding Emily hits the public as well as Justin firing the trollop.BTW Justin..... LAWD I LOVE a strong and forceful Justin Taylor! That young man has spunk in more ways than one and I absolutely adore reading and writing about him that way! As for Zee's parting shot: LMFAO, LMFAO, ROFLMAOOOOOOOoooooo! OMG what a scene stealer she was pointing out the fact that Lindsay's ignorant ass shall be strutting down the street in high heels looking for a way back to the Pitts with her Sidekick in Whine beside her. They can't even call a cab and wait outside since Justin wants them off his property. LOL! What a way to oust the Inglorious Bastards!!
WRITE On Star!!!! HUGS, ~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Oh you had to be in there, nobody could deliver those lines but you!
I'm so glad that I'm doing you proud...you are going to love what happens in the driveway
Happy reading
Hugs
Nicole
Date: Dec 09, 2016 3:45 am Title: Chapter 42
After all that the idiot duo still thinks threats will help them???? Lol
Author's Response:
Of course, naturally they think they are untouchable court wise too...!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 09, 2016 2:23 am Title: Chapter 41
I'm so glad that they finally all know the truth. Can't wait to see what happens when the next step happens
Date: Dec 08, 2016 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 42
WOWwwww!!!
Michael and Lindsay came to lunch at Britin expecting everything to be forgiven and returned back to normal instead what they got served was a Shit Storm of their own making.
Daphne got the ball rolling but before the meal was over Michael and Lindsay felt like they got KO'd in the first round.
The Family handled the situation beautifully cause now it is up to Michael and Lindsay to prove their case in a court of law. (That should be funny a judge will probably ask for a psych evolution lol)
Who they should be more afraid of is Zee she was quiet through the whole tirade which is never good, that means she is plotting and planning Zee is about to rain Wholly Hell on these two Slimeballs.
Hope they enjoyed the walk back cause they are going to need to get use to them.
Michael and Lindsay are now Persona Non Grata.
Not even Mommy and Daddy Peterson can help they would be wise to stay away and let Lindsay handle this herself.
This is a fight that is best watched from the sidelines with plenty of alcohol and snacks lol
That pea inside their heads must be running for cover cause this is about to become a blood path (Figuratively Speaking?), Lindsay and Michael plotting revenge is Hilarious, these two idiots couldn't catch a cold without screwing it up.
Can't Wait for the next chapter should be very amusing :)
Author's Response:
Of course they expectd forgiveness after all they are his oldest and best friends the mother of Gus the father of Jenny and everyone always forgives them...well that bullcrap was stopped cold wasn't it.
Hope you enjoy the beginning of C43!
And Ma and Pa Peterson aren't wise, not wise at all.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 08, 2016 7:14 pm Title: Chapter 42
I think I'd almost give my right boob just to see L&M looking like Oompa Loompas!! LMFAO! Oh what a vision I had in my head. Utterly friggin brilliant. Gave me so much joy to know that apparently was caught on tape, or police pictures so that the gang could see it. So deserved!
I can't believe those 2 still think so highly of themselves. It truly boggles the mind. Even while Jenny is sick, I don't believe for a second that they have any true concerrn in their attempts to see her (or Gus). They're concerned only with their immage. How they need to SEEM concerned. That they feel entitled to any adn all information. So much so that they run everywhere rather than calling and leaving even a message to ask about them. I want to smack them both. HARD!
Lunch was the most incredibly awesomest brilliant affair ever! I pissed myself lughing through it all just imagining the stunned and outraged looks on their faces. Loved that Daph even surprised the gang with her suits as well. The band of 2 idiots got nailed from all sides, and kicked out to boot! Even Hunter got his bits in as well. He'll very happily be a Bruckner, and Ben will be thrilled as well. Everyone has had enough. But really.......it is just SO much fun reading about all their downfalls adn shit that happens to them, all because they think so highly of themselves.
I must admit, my jaw dropped to the floor when Lindsey had teh audasity to threaten Zee. Zee's reaction.well....scared the shit out of me. Yikes! I really laughed out loud however when Lindsey went on about "You have no idea how much power I have" she has NONE! Zip, zilch...nadda. Her parents may have some influence, but it's not like they're going to help, at least not willingly.
I swear I say it every single chapter....repeatedly...but this was frigging brilliant! Wowza! Every new chapter is my new favorite. lol.
Looking forward ot what happens next.
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Hmmm, I do believe I see a compilation video of their best bits in the future...you know a nice wedding present for Brian and Justin.
Thanks so much for the praise Elaine, I am having great fun sending them to hell.
I think you will like the beginning of C43
Happy reading
Nicole
Date: Dec 08, 2016 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 42
Oh sweet baby jeebus this was soooooo delicious! Lindsay and Mikey are finally going down for good. I'm not sure what Lindz thinks she has the power to do but it's all in her delusions.
Author's Response:
Yep their slow and painful descent to hell begins...hee hee!
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 08, 2016 8:10 am Title: Chapter 42
OMG, so good, so good, could cont. on with the praises.
I know you have been updating updating quickly, but pleasssssse.
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Author's Response:
Thank you thank you.
C43 being tip tapped out...hope to post tomorrow.
Happy reading
Nicole
Date: Dec 08, 2016 6:28 am Title: Chapter 42
"Open a can of, bitch please?" Love it!
Also, Lindsay bringing all her wrath down! Ha fucking ha! And what power? I love seeing her try to WASP her way out of an embarrassing situation. She just ends up looking more ignorant and like the classy wannabe that she is.
Oooh...I'd just love a scene where they all form a line just to smack the shit out of her...one.by.one.!!!
Keep posting girlfriend!
Author's Response:
I did enjoy that line it has to be said, something that Nichelle would definitely say.
I shall keep posting...C43 being tip-tapped out, hope to post tomorrow.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 08, 2016 6:15 am Title: Chapter 42
Okay, maybe I need to reread the last chapter, but why are Brian and Justin crying? Opps I forgot about Brian's surprise for Justin, that was ruined. So everyone is helping with moving them to Squirrel Hill now, what about the food? Poor little Jenny coming down with a cold. Oh I just read Nichelle's part - so cool and sounds just like her. Orangeade and Dummy Smurf! Hahaha. Trying to contact the kids? Unaware that the kids are going for emancipation. Jenny and Gus aren't the only ones not sure what has happened, but it looked like fun. Looks like the emancipations went through. Love all the lawsuit section. Yahoo, Justin threw them out. But why does Lindsay think she can still best Zee?
Author's Response:
Because she's a WASP and she screams a lot, and thinks shouting equals power...but she does have a brief glimpse of hope.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 08, 2016 5:47 am Title: Chapter 42
Will Give a longer review tomorrow cause I gotta read it again, all I will say though is:
BOOM, GOES THE DYNAMITE!!!
Author's Response:
Look forward to reading it.
More kabooms to come...!
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 08, 2016 4:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Both of your stories are the best. I cannot wait for the next chapter of the second one. I read a lot of QAF fanfiction, your two are on my top five. Keep writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, that's very kind. I've only just started writing so I'm still learning!
Hope you enjoy the rest.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Dec 08, 2016 3:41 am Title: Chapter 36
The part about bitch, weasel, double headed dildo and replay face; that was inspired and absolutely hysterical. Another wonderful chapter.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Thanks, I did enjoy writing that!
- Nicole
Date: Dec 08, 2016 3:40 am Title: Chapter 41
Wow, let's hope it all goes as planned!
Fantastic, thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Author's Response:
You're welcome and operation seek and wreak havoc and destroy begins...as Mel says, Zee is still too quiet.
Happy reading
Nicole
Date: Dec 08, 2016 12:46 am Title: Chapter 35
I so want to hurt the bitch.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
You'll want to hurt her more...
- Nicole
Date: Dec 08, 2016 12:06 am Title: Chapter 34
I hope the bitch gets fired for that shit.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Oh that would be too easy and not as painful
- Nicole
Date: Dec 07, 2016 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 33
This just gets better and better. That bitch must look like she's sucked on a whole bushel of lemons.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Salted lemons with a shot of vinegar.
- Nicole
Date: Dec 07, 2016 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 32
I hope this is just the beginning of the slapdown for the bitch and the weasel. So good.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Oh and then some...thank you
Nicole
Date: Dec 07, 2016 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 31
Seriously LOVING this story. Although I usually want to jump into the story and slap the shit out of Lindsay and Michael. The two of them are high and mighty entitled assholes.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Thank you...
Happy reading
Nicole