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Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 9:00 pm Title: Chapter 44

Very glad I'm not on teh receiving end of Zee's pitbull actions. Definitely would want to stay on her good side. She's wonderfully evil. hehehe.

Lindsey of course has pulled the wool oever her parent's eyes. But apparently not for long. Interesting conversation that Bernadine overhead at the shop between L&M. The great thing is, Mel didn't once reaact in anger or anything! she wsa totally calm and actually laughted at Lindsey.

Over the moon for Mel! Amazing! YAY!!

also had to cheered really loudly when Jenny plowed into Michael adn screamed at him! I feel bad for her that it came to that point, adn that she actually over heard what Michael said. And that she called him a cunt?!?! WOW. I don't see any kind of bridge happening now. There's no way Jenny will ever forgive Michael.

Shame we'll never see the video compilation being put together. LOL. Would be worth the laugh!! :)

Step 1 in gettng Michael adn Lindsey out of Shadeyside is underway. 1 step further in showing that neither have a place to live, making their quest for custody nullified. Oh Zee is so wonderfully evil! Just love her to bits!

Nancy and ronald had a very rude awakening regarding their darling daughter. the tide certainly turned at record speed once everything that Bernadine said was backed up by Phil. Life is going to get even worse for L&M.

OH I meant to say a couple chapters back...the idea of ryder and Ben together......very nice. 

cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Yep Zee is starting to bite back...she comes into feed when she needs to but also lets others share the meal.  She scares the devil sometimes with her calm approach to absolute evisceration of a body.

Of course I had to have good news for Mel to lead to good news for Jenny in the romance department...

Jenny had to have the white out and lose it, it has been a long time coming since...I will balance this out a bit in a later chapter.

The Petersons and that Novotny aer about to enter hell.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

PS: I'm reading the Game they Play too isn't it great.  I love Ryder!

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 45

Once again a humdinger of a chapter. And once again in stitches.

So Nancy and Ronald finally found out about the extent of deceit, abuse and malice Lindsey is capable of. So they're considering cutting the apron strings? Wow, that will leave Bitchy and Whiney without any income for both of them are jobless and homeless as well. That flee infested hovel is just around the corner. 

Now Bitchy has to get her head out of the clouds and seriously start to consider which direction she wants to give to her life. It were best to just pack up her scrawny arse and leave town altogether. Start somewhere new. The same thing applies to Whiny. He really should get his head out of his arse, his foot out of his mouth and grow up. The time for comics and collectibles is over. 

And all the lawsuits? May the odds ever be in the favor of everyone but M&L. May the consequences be bloody and demeaning. 

Justin remembering the Prom: Tears, tears, tears. OMG I cried my eyes out. And Save the last dance for me as their wedding song? This is not going to be the wedding of the century but the wedding of the MILLENIUM.

Thank you for including team T and T in the story as well be it ever so tiny. I do really appreciate that. And thank you so very much for yet another wonderful update. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Big, big hug with sprinkles on top.

XOXO

Meriam

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 43

I don't think my own visials could do Zee's take down of Michael justice. I mean, it was aweome in my own mind...but wow! what i wouldn't give to see it in HD! :) It still slays me that both he and Lindsey think they are able to do anything about Zee or any of teh gang. They simply refuse to see their own faults. while they seem to think they deserve special attention, or that what they say should be seen as gold, the truth of the matter is that neither of them deserve squat, except exactly what they keep getting handed.

Poor poor Phil. Having to deal with these 2 incredibly STUPID people. It boggles the mind how they are able to turn everythingthey do onto others. That they can excuse their actions...I actually shake my head every now adn again.

hehehehehe...Zee's delivery was definitely chuckle worthy!

Really am liking Millicent. she's definitely a character! Especially love that she knows what Lindsey is all about as well. Isn't fooled for a minute and holds huge disdain for her. That can only prove to be a good thing! Millicent would be a great person to help in putting Lindsey and Michael in their places. Wit hher also having Jen take on her RE portfolio......OH WOW! That is goign to put a bee in L's bonnet, never mind her parents! Even more awesomness to look forward to!

Oh how I LOVE love love this judge! For one thing, the fact tht Lindsey needs to be told continuously the shut up...wow. Stupido!! teh fact that she friffing GLARES at the judge is absolutely mind-boggling! My jaw dropped when I read that! That whole scenario was excellent!

wish I could witness everything between Millicent, Jenn adn teh reat of the table wtih Nancy and Lindsey. Oh what a riot that would be!

Cheers

elaine

 

 

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 4:58 pm Title: Chapter 45

so much good stuff in this chapter... the Petersons finally getting the info they should have known, Charles and David moving in all in front of the idiot twin, and the PROM!!!!

but I think my favorite is that Michael has been buying his own shit on Ebay!!!! that is priceless!!!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 45

What a wonderful chapter.  At least now Ron and Nancy know the truth.  Lyndsay and Michael are trying to block all the suits brought against them, but you blocked them nicely.  I like how a lawyer showed up just when Hunter needed one.  I especially enjoyed when the terrible twosome showed up at Shadyside and found the house had been rented out from under them.  First they ended up being charged at the hotel for items they thought the realty company would pay for and now they have no place to live.  Somehow I don't thing Lyndsay will be getting any help from mommy dearest. 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 45

We now join the Chronicles of the Pain-in-the-Ass (PITA) Association starring Lindsay Peterson and Michael Charles Novotny already in progress:

HOT DAMN!!!! WHAT A CHAPTER!! First, can I just say that I LOVE the frenemies Arnold and Bernadine! Although they don't like the Petersons, they are still willing to put their animosity for them to the side and help them out of the pit of obscurity Lindsay is heading for. They are just simply decent people. I had to love that they were even willing to brave the Liberty Diner to do that and without undue prejudice towards people who live their lives differently than themselves. Their reaction to Kiki was priceless!! 

As for Mel: Thank goodness she figured out Lindsay's endgame and called Adam. Then he has the forethought to bring Judge Millner up to speed on the situation and asking him to enlist Meriam to hear Michael's case. LMAO!!!! Bitch and Mitch are simply NOT READY for what's coming. The supoenas was a brilliant idea because Melanie was right on point when she said that Lindsay- who in turn would advise Michael- to wait to respond as close to the date of Brian and Justin's wedding since it is more than obvious now that they are NOT invited. Triflin' HO

Then we have Joshua, who already has a few axes to grind in Michael's spine simply for being the asshole that he is (apologies to assholes everywhere since you have purpose whereas Michael has none but to be a turd). I'm glad he and Phil had drinks and without pressing the attorney for the client names, gleaned the gist of what the Dumbass-tic Duo were trying to do. Since he's well versed in most of the cases, he in turn he enlist Ivan to get the story about Hunter. Ben and Deb trying to comfort him was touching and very well-written. I felt the anguish and anger from all three of them. Now Ivan has an even bigger axe to grind after hearing Hunter's story from beginning to end. And the piece de resistance is that Michael will have to prove WHY he should not be removed as Hunter's foster parent. WHOO-WEE I can't wait for that showdown to happen! I'm especially looking forward to Michael trying to explain why he feels that Hunter owes him anything when it was really Ben who pushed for the adoption and all subsequent events.

Bitch and Mitch's Hotel Blues has me ROLLING!! Entitled and spoiled doesn't even begin to describe the Idiot Brigade. Somehow I get the feeling that they thought Michael was being original in trying to put one over on the Hotel Manage. I'll be that that $3400 room service bill opened their collectively closed eyes real quick! Mansions on Fifth became the land of Money Pit for Michael and Lindsay and it serves them right! 

Then to top it all off, Zee waiting inside the house was EVERYTHING!! And knowing that Michael once again, has disregarded something important in favor of his self-centered desires was the icing on the cake since it left their dumbasses homeless! I can't deny that I wished Michael had tried to attack Zee again or that Lindsay did. I would have cheered aloud if Faal had laid his stupid ass out! Then the process server hands them the supoenas for which Charles happily witnesses their receipt of the documents. What an amazing move-in day present for him and David! But Deb's arrival was the true scene stealer!! She just knew her son wasn't going to be able to resist the temptation to indulge in one of his many addictions. I couldn't stop cackling!!

Justin recovering his memory has me in tears! The timing of it is pure perfection as well since amid all the chaos of their battle with the Bitch and Mitch, this is a major victory. Emmett fainting has me a little concerned but it could just be overexcitement for Baby and the idea/ fact that Brian actually danced at a high school prom with his beloved.

All in all a SPLENDID chapter! Thank you for my morning 'gift' as I try to deal with the fact that it's Monday and I would rather be anywhere but here in my office at work. I was definitely transported to a happy place- even if it was only for a little while.

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 1:38 pm Title: Chapter 45

I'm all caught up, and I love all the twists and turns in this wonderful fic!

Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 45

The blunder twins never learn....they have gotten exactly what they asked for. And how wonderful is it that Justin can remember the prom! But I have a feeling that there is still more to be said there.

Reviewer: OBabyRN Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 5:05 am Title: Chapter 44

So great!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 1:51 am Title: Chapter 44

I think this is going to hurt



Author's Response:

Oh hell yeah.

Hope you stick around to find out how much!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BritinLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2016 12:14 am Title: Chapter 44

Fantastic Chapter the only dislike is what jenny did to her father 



Author's Response:

Thank you and I understand your dislike and I was in two minds about it as I've said in previous revieews, but it had to be done and I will balance it out in later...hope you stay with me.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 8:55 pm Title: Chapter 44

Fantastic!  Well the Petersons have had an eye opening.

Thanks for sharing, looking for next update!

JoAnn



Author's Response:

Thanks JoAnn, I am so enjoying writing this.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 8:29 pm Title: Chapter 44

GO JENNY!!  I don't condone violence against a parent but since Michael can't even be referred to as a substitute parent I don't see the harm of her knocking him on his Ass. (That was so funny I gotta read it again:))

Not surprised after they got served last weekend they would expect a free meal the next, time for these two nitwits to wake up and realize you are no longer welcome anywhere, Hell everyone would rather invite Hannibal Lector than eat another meal with these two vile people. (The free meals, free car service is OVER!!)

Ron and Nancy had to be told the truth after all they are paying for her stupidity, Bernice could have been really mean and just gossip to everyone behind their backs, but she felt Ron and Nancy needed to be told that their entitled little princess is hated wherever she goes. 

Just because you were born into a life of privilege doesn't mean it can't be turned against you or taken away.

Michael and Lindsay have a lot of money to shell out to people in the next few weeks, Ron and Nancy should walk  away and let Lindsay fight her own battles.

Happy that Mel will be working at White & Sullivan Charles, David and Hank will be moving back to Pittsburgh, the preparations for the wedding are set, Emily and Francine are working on the flowers and making new friends.

Lindsay and Michael think they have the power or clout to get back to their rightful places, they can't comprehend that life is not a fairytale and that when you throw dirt on others it comes back  to you tenfold.

The next few weeks leading up to the wedding should be very interesting, amusing.

 

 



Author's Response:

You and me both, I don't condone violence at all but she had a white out moment and this has been building up since Christmas, I hope to balance what she did a bit in a later chapter.

They're going to learn and learn hard and they've not been throwing dirt they've been throwing rocks.

Happy reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 44

YES... Mommy and Daddy are not going to be the resource Lindsay expects anymore... 

Love the renovations are being done so the idiot twins can see what they are losing...

So happy for Jenny that Hank is moving near!!!

 



Author's Response:

Glad you are still enjoying it, the beginning of the end, and watch out for unexpected but nice visitors who are very firmly in Zee's camp.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 4:38 pm Title: Chapter 44

We now tune into the Downfall of Bitch and Mitch already in progress....

Quite the eventful chapter and I'm soooooo glad it was!! Ms. Entitled Wannabe-Rich-Bitch is going down faster than the Titanic! LOL Although I can't stand Nancy and Ron, I'm glad that Beradine and Arnold were undeterred in giving them the unadulterated TRUTH about Lindsay. They can't dispute what was told to them by the Williamsons or their own lawyer! I'm also happy that they told Nancy that the reason Lindsay isn't accepted or at the most barely tolerated isn't because of that 'phase of her life' but because she's a spoiled heifer. NO ONE likes to eat from the table where the cow isn't palatable- in this case that cow is Lindsay. It's going to be interesting to see what Nancy and Ron do with the information that's been given to them especially since they have been lied to, humiliated and taken advantage of and at least one couple in the WASP nest knows it. 

As for Zee, that was EPIC! I could just see the look on Nancy's face when she found out just how much of a gain Jennifer has now that Ron's fired her. Lindsay and her machinations once again prove to be a detriment to her parents. I bet now Nancy is wishing she would have swallowed instead of begetting Lindsay...LOL As for the woman herself, she is certainly about to feel every bit of the wrath she promised Brian and Zee would and it's coming from all directions.

As for Soprano Boy......LMFAOOOOOOoooooooo ROFLMAOoooooooooo LMAO LOL!! I spit my coffee and couldn't catch my breath for about a good five minutes from laughing so damn hard! Even now the residual chuckles have me wary to put my coffee cup to my lips! That was EPIC, CLASSIC and long OVERDUE! Understand that I would normally never condone a child clobbering their parent but Go Jenny! Michael really doesn't have a case where Hunter is concerned especially since he never really supported the young man. It will be fun to watch if he still tries to pursue fighting the dissolution so that all of his own dirty laundry will be aired publicly, including his brief association with Rita Montgomery.

And they Dumbass-tic Duo is about to be homeless!!! It's hilarious that they think the renovations on the property are being done for their continued comfort. Will Zee serve up the eviction notice while they are in the hotel? Also, I bet Michael is constantly buying back his own possession from Deb....LOL So he's about to be BROKE, BUSTED and DISGUSTED again!

Poor Phil having to be hounded by Lindsay and Michael! I wonder if now that Ron knows what his money is paying for- which is defense of his guilty daughter- will he stop paying the bill and either let Lindsay continue to use his lawyer or ask Phil to stop representing the harridan? Personally I opt for the second one. Any further assistance on his part is going to result in abject public humiliation. No way can they keep all of Lindsay's legal troubles silent- something is bound to get out, specifically the emancipation suit from Gus and Jenny. Also that bogus countersuit Lindsay is trying to push would also be a surefire way for her secrets to get out. Mel has just become a partner in a firm that is more than well-known but notorious for their Win-Loss ratio in Legal circles....SMH Hanging out with her fellow Entitlement Whore Michael has given Lindsay a STUPIDITY LEAK of EPIC proportions.

LAWD, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

WRITE On, Nicole!!

HUGS,

~Nichelle 



Author's Response:

Nichelle, as I have said to BlueMyst a couple of times...I wrote the chapter before I read this review, so ding-ding on Michael and his toys.

They are in a slow leaking boat in shark and pirahna infested waters and there's already blood in the water...hee hee.

Yes Soprano Boy finally got what she screamed at him at Christmas.  I was in two minds as to whether or not to let her at him in that way but with all the frustration and hurt she had she just had a white out moment, there is more on this to come.

Happy reading

Hugs

Nicole

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 44

What a super fantastic chapter.  I learned a new word.  Myrmeric pyriformis.  Zee out wasped some wasp.  Ron has no idea what havoc his daughter has spun.  He just listened to her and did what she asked.  The fact that it cost his wife wasn't in the cards.  Lindsay tends to twist things.  Running into Mel as the super market led to more interesting exchange of information.  First Lindsay thinks she can move back to the brownstone, then she assumes that she'll be allowed to use the loft.  What planet is she living on?  Lindsay doesn't realize that pissing off a judge is not a good thing.  And a fellow wasp heard it all.  Love the call between Emily, Francine, Emmett, Brian and Justin.  It helped that Emily heard what Brian told Lindsay after the court case ended.  So all's good from that corner.  You have to feel for poor Phil having to deal with the Terrible Twosome.  Michael with his mindset that Hunter owes him and Lindsay with her sense of entitlement.  Then we hear that Mel is told that she'll no longer be working for her law firm and I'm thinking WTF.  But you fix it by getting her a partnership with a better firm and giving her job to Charles, which brings David and Hank back to Pittsburgh, which is good for Jenny.  Speaking of Jenny, our sweet, adorable Jenny who speaks her mind and mows her sperm donor down when he has the never to say that Hunter almost killed Ben. It was more like Michael not listening when Hunter suggested a different treatment that almost killed Ben.  Gus is really pissed too.  I'm still quaking from Lindz and Mikey thinking they can push there way into a free meal.  Love the finishing touch were Butch eats the shoes.  At least once Deb found out about what Mikey said, she sided with Jenny.  Can't wait for L and M to find out who will be moving into the property once it's renovated.  Evil to let them stay at Mansions on the Fifth.  Too good for them.  Ron and Nancy now know just what their daughter has been up to.  Can't wait to find out if she takes Bernidine's advice.  The only people we didn't hear about was Ben and Steve.  How you keep up with everybody is amazing.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it although I did give you a bit of a jolt...but I will always make sure everyone but them is happy.

Their behaviour towards Phil gets worse.

If you like insects do feel free to google bulldog ant/mymerica pyriformis...I'm not to bothered but regretted clicking on the picture of them feeding.

Happy reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 3:20 pm Title: Chapter 44

So, now that Nancy and Ron have had their eyes forced WIDE open, I'm waiting on the edge of my seat to what Nancy is going to do to her daughter.

Love the hit Jenny gave Michael.  He deserved it for all the grief he has caused her.

Keep writing!!!



Author's Response:

Oh yes and then some.

I wasn't sure about getting her to wallop him but I felt she needed to.

Thanks for the encouragement.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: OBabyRN Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 6:42 am Title: Chapter 43

Loving the story so much! Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you will try...nice to have a new reviewer.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2016 12:10 am Title: Chapter 43

OMG! 

It took me nearly all afternoon and evening to finish this and I;m glad I was alone when I finished this.

Girl you caused me pain in all kinds of ways. Pain in my stomach and sides from laughing. Zee giving Michael a flip.... I saw it like movie in my head and in SLOW MOTION. And her Manolo's in his crotch?  Respect for her for not pushing the heel down. I would have loved to hear him hit the high C.  Yep! He had it coming. 
Zee having dumb and dumber walking of the driveway. Ouch, ouch, triple ouch. Both Michael and Lindsay still think they are the top dogs. Man, forget it. They are like chihuahua's barking up a Bull Mastiff. 

Pain in my head for the tension slowly building up and the exitement of seeing Lindsay slowly but surely driven into a corner. She got smacked really good. The way everybody treated her is what we, in the Netherlands, call: De botte bijl methode. (google it and feel free to use) 

Pain in my chest (not so happy about) after punching the air. ME being the judge? I think my neighbours might have been wondering why I was screaming so loud. OMG I feel so honored to be a part of this story and especially being the one to humiliate the Blonde Heffer. That apology is a very hard one to make especially for the blond stuck up cow she is. And then being rebuked by Brian and Justin, pure genius. 

The way Zee shipped back Lindsay clothes? Another stroke of genius.

Now to see how Nancy is going to react when she as well as her daughter are being snubbed by the Queen Wasp. It wil end in blood and tears I think. Mommy dearest won't be to happy with her little princess. 

After being snubbed by Melody I guess Lindsay can't show her face anywhere in town anymore. No longer a Wasp but not blue collar either. Classless and outcast. She really deserves it.

I hope Mel, Jenny and Gus will now find some peace and quiet. And Mel deserves some TLC and who better to give it than Leda.

Can"t wait for the next chapter.

Thank you for the lovely dedication. Loving you with chocolate and sprinkles

XOXO

Meriam



Author's Response:

Dear Judge Maatje,

You had to be included in this story...oh and you're coming back just a heads up!  Look or the chapter titled De botte bijl mothode and am stealing the bull mastiff quote too.

I think you are going to like C44 a great deal...hopefully it's not too painful for you to read.

Loving you with chocolate and sprinkles too

Nicole xxxx

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2016 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 43

Wow.  Michael actually thought he could take on Zee?  Not only was he wrong, but it makes him look double bad for trying to strike a woman.  Love the device that won't let Lindz call for a cab.  Hehehe.  Whatever L&M try is so not going to work.  Charles has already informed us that Zee's attack was self-defense.  Which they have on tape I assume.  Mikey's back black and blue?  Wasn't it already blue?  Now you've thrown Millicent Foster Brown into the mix.  That should prove interesting.  What!  Michael is trying to get at Hunter's college fund.  That is not nice.  I have to feel sorry for Phil.  Such dumbass clients he's never had.  With every question he askes they dig theirselves deeper in shit.  I have to admit Lindsay getting a delivery and thinking it was her gift from Brian was funny.  Especially when it turned out to be her things from the brownstone.  At least she'll have what she needs for her defense.  NOT.  With Millie firmly in Zee's camp, Lindsay doesn't have a leg to stand on.  Now have I got this straight?  Lindsay went to the brownstone and found out Mel and the kids no longer live there and thinks they are at Britin?  Oh boy, the case of Emily vs Lindsay that Lindz feels is a nucense suit.  Shame the judge dismissed the suit, but Lindsay's attitude should have her muzzled.  Personally I think Phil should drop her as a client.  Once he's filled in with the whole story, he's going to be sorry he ever took her on if he isn't already.  Boy did you slam the Peterson's at the end.  Millie not only let out that Jennifer is her realtor, but let it be know she got the McHaigh Estate for a very good price.  Take that Ron and Nancy. 



Author's Response:

Once again I typed C44 before I read your review swear on the holy hotness that is Brian Kinney!

Happy reading

MissMerlot 

Reviewer: jaspersgirl21 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2016 4:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

I feel so incredibly sad for Emily right  now. An apology letter isn't going to undo the pain and damage that Lindsay has done. And I find it absolutely disgusting that after Lindsay had Brian's child herself, she would invite Emily to events that specifically had to do with Gus, to rub it in Emily's face that she had what Emily so desperately wanted. I think it would be karmic justice on Lindsay's nasty, used up ass and dirty stretched out that if Brian WAS somehow able to give Emily the child she so badly wanted and rightfully deserved. Emily and her wife wouldn't put Brian through the bullshit about their child that Lindsay and to an extent, Mel, did to him with Gus. This is all just wishful thinking. But I do hope Emily and even Brian, get some form of justice for what Lindsay robbed them of.



Author's Response:

Don't be sad, I'm anti-Lindsay so everyone gets their happy, well except her of course!

Hope you stay to find out how

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2016 6:35 am Title: Chapter 43

Love it! All the Peterson's are getting what they deserve.

So looking forward to next update.

Thanks for sharing!

JoAnn



Author's Response:

Thanks JoAnn,

C44 is being cranked out, hope to post tomorrow.

Happy reading

Nicole

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2016 6:12 am Title: Chapter 43

LMFAO!!!!! Michael's  mouth FINALLY wrote a check his non-existent ass couldn't cash!! Challenging Zee to a fight?! Really Wonder Twit?! REALLY?!!! And she was in Manolos....LMAO!!! Lord, I laughed until I had hiccups!

The Wonder Dumb and her remarks... insulting Zee's intelligence! That 'stupid woman' as Lindsay seems to think Zee is held all the cards including but not limited to: a signal scrambler, high-end boxes for that trash Lindsay called her possessions, the DEED to her temporary abode and the icing on the cake, access to Pittsburgh's QUUEN, Millicient! Zee is fucking Lindsay without lube in all sorts of ways and without breaking the bank or her fingernails. 

I completely felt bad for Phil having to be subject to the STUPIDITY LEAKS of Michael and Lindsay. I think I felt his IQ drop just from breathing the same air as Tweedleledee and Tweedleledumb! I choked on my Pepsi when he said that he pitied Michael's children if they inherited his brain. Thankfully Jenny inherited Mel's brain and shows far more intelligence than Michael ever could even in a reincarnated life. Hell a pair of mismatched socks has more thinking power than he does. DAMN! A pile of ashes has more of an IQ than Michael does! A pack of toothbrushes has more.... well you get the picture. Michael is an IDIOT! And that's being nice about what he really is!

You GO Meriam!! I LOVED that she got to let Lindsay have it! The fabulous judge didn't let Lindsay speak out of turn or lie her way out of her wrongdoing. I'm glad called Lindsay on her misdeeds, even if it was done in private. I still think he should drop the bitch as a client for all of the cases Cunty-rella has against her. But then again win, lose or draw he still gets paid. However his reputation will suffer in the long run and that definitely wouldn't be good. BTW his reaction to 'THAT NOVOTNY' was hilarious in the extreme! Just too damn funny!

My heart broke for Brian! Lindsay really used and abused him the entire time they were friends but no one would have imagined that she would bring an innocent child to use as a billy club repeatedly to metaphorically beat Brian over the head and bust down the doors to his private life. The bitch really should be wearing cement shoes for this kind of slight and disregard. And yet the most troubling thing is that she STILL believes that she didn't do anything wrong. Seriously a letter of apology is simply not enough to punish Trickzilla! But that's okay, there is always the public embarrassment she is going to suffer by #1: being thrown out on her flat keyster along with her Partner-in-Cunty Michael!  

I'll bet Lindsay is jamming her toes down her throat now. There's an old adage that goes "When you're digging one ditch, you'd better dig two." All of her threats, innuendo and conniving got Jenn a much more lucrative client- the kind where Ron and Nancy are barely tolerated and would never be able to match financially. Thanks again Zee for that! Jennifer is Real Estate agent to Pittsburgh royalty and I can already see that not only is Ron embarrassed but Nancy pissed. I'll bet he's about to find out what the real meaning behind 'Happy Wife, happy Life' is and Nancy is definitely NOT happy. Lindsay is about to be tossed forcefully OUT of her safety net and there isn't anything she can do about it.  

HA! Looking forward to MORE of this!! Can't wait for more comeuppance for the Pain-in-the-Ass Association!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Yep she had to do it and do it in style, she's been itching to get to him since she found out what he said about Hunter.

As Zee says she looks after her own and then some...and when it comes to her enemies a quiet Zee is a dangerous one.

And Judge Meriam will be coming back...that's all I'm saying.

Happy reading hugs

Nicole

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2016 5:00 am Title: Chapter 43

Michael getting knocked on his Ass was all kinds of funny I only wish Lindsay could  have experienced it too <Evil Grin>

I bet her feet had blisters after walking in her cheap heels, I feel for Philip Mitcham the man should have stayed  home and enjoyed tea with his daughter, cause listening to and trying to explain stuff to Captain Asshat and Stuck-up Heifer made him lose some IQ points, would probably be easier to explain quantum physics to a toddler than law to these two idiots.

We all know Lindsay is not writing an apology to Emily so Adam should get ready to make his opening statements.

I see where Lindsay gets her grandiose behavior too bad Mommy and Daddy aren't much smarter than their sweet angel, Millicent got her property and and a new fantastic realtor, all The Peterson's get is the joy of sucking down Envy.

Lindsay calling Zee should be Hilarious.

I can't  wait  for Lindsay to realize that The Peterson name doesn't have as much clout as she thinks, as a matter  of fact knowing Lindsay could actually be bad for your status lol

Holy Smokes, The Hits Just Keep on Coming :)



Author's Response:

That would've been too easy to do, no Zee wants her to suffer and suffer hard.

I do feel sorry for Philip as he thought that he was rid of them...but alas...all I will say about the apology letter is watch for the wrath of Judge.

Mommie and daddy dearest get a shock when the reality of their widdle princess hits them full in the face.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2016 4:24 am Title: Chapter 43

Lindsay is so spoiled-  thinks she really hasn't done anything wrong-  love that the judge questions why the emancipation and the desolution of the marriage-  now if we could just get a way to get her totally away from the family for good



Author's Response:

Oh she will be going away...snicker snicker...especially mommie and daddy dearest have their ears and eyes wrenched open.

Happy readng

MissMerlot

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