Date: Aug 02, 2017 4:25 am Title: Chapter 40
Lindsey out "her home" without the new key... Feels like Mel took a major decision!
As for Michael, he will feel less cocky when he will discover who is his landlord!
Date: Jul 30, 2017 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 39
Whoa!!! What an explosive and revealing chapter!
So, Brian was in NY with Justin for a few weeks/months? What an amazing information. No wonder they are monogamous.
Jenny is as feisty as her mother, she doesn't let anything go with Lindsay and Michael.
Date: Jul 30, 2017 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 38
Leda all alone in a big house? Is Zee preparing something about Leda and Mel? That would be a great idea as Lindsey is getting worse quite every day.
Date: Jul 30, 2017 2:01 pm Title: Chapter 37
Hilarious, Michael kissing a girl!!!
Why is Lindsay giving Brian's address? Maybe doesn't she want Mel to see what she got? What is Lindsey expecting to find in NY? She doesn't have a good reputation in the art world.
I bet Zee bought Michael's home.
Date: Jul 30, 2017 10:16 am Title: Chapter 36
You have some hilarious quotes in there; my favorite is from Deb: "No you won’t. We actually want them walked in the fresh air not you two go to the loft put them on the treadmill and go fuck."
Date: Jul 29, 2017 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 35
Great idea to have Lindsey without money for six weeks; will she dare saying that to Mel?
Date: Jul 28, 2017 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 34
They had to christen the galery... These two, they will use anything to get a reason to get laid!
Lindsay just dropped a bomb that will explode in her head later I hope.
Date: Jul 28, 2017 5:07 pm Title: Chapter 33
Excellent! Lindsay is once again too "busy" so she missed a huge opportunity to get some money.
Date: Jun 30, 2017 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 32
Yeah! Take that bitch!
So happy the cat is out of the bag. Maybe Lindsay will slow down a bit with Zee.
Date: Jun 17, 2017 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 30
Ha ha ha, Sam is back! I hope he will try to convince Lindsey to have a second chance and she will go for it. It should give Mel some "balls" to stop this farce of a marriage.
Date: Jun 17, 2017 2:11 pm Title: Chapter 29
“Cataloguing and Rehang Fridays?” Lindsey better not miss another day, especially a Friday!
Hunter and Lindsay in SF at the same time? It's going to be explosive...
Date: Jun 11, 2017 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 28
Lindsey has a tight leash and she can't do anything!
Date: Jun 06, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 27
Diamonds? Really? I was surprised by the ring, which is certainly beautiful, but I don't see Justin wearing that; as for the earring, it's so not Brian, maybe Emmett because he often wears jewellery. Sorry for bursting out because I love your story, but it's out of character for both of them.
Leda handled Lindsay and Michael, like a ninja, then Tucker added his touch. Leda is so much more in synch with Mel than Lindsay; I do hope you will let them have a second chance now that Lindsay is slowly, but surely going out of the marriage. Lela and Mel in leather on bikes: hot as hell and gorgeous!
Date: Jun 06, 2017 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 26
I loved how Justin put Michael in his place with his residual payment and how he told him he will fuck his fiancé into the mattress.
Date: Jun 06, 2017 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 25
Each chapter is a delight for the taste buds! It's another way to make us salivate.
Jenny is becoming a master mind when it comes to counter her father.
Date: Jun 05, 2017 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 24
The tension is getting high between Michael and Jenny, as well as between Mel and Lindsay. Now that she's fired, it will become more as she won't have any income and will depend on Mel and Brian.
The chess part was interesting: Gus, as his father, doesn't say a lot, but it's sharp and smart.
Date: Jun 04, 2017 6:06 pm Title: Chapter 23
I love Deb in this story: she sees how her son is behaving and acts on it. Ben is cool too; no more a fool.
The moment everyone knows what Blake told Michael is hilarious.
Date: Jun 04, 2017 11:27 am Title: Chapter 22
There are so many good lines in your story that it's difficult to point only few. Those ones, I loved:
“Ma, I’m not a dog…”
“No you’re not, a dog learns. Now sit.”
"Yes that’s correct one penny"
"Captain Twink and his Mighty Ass"
The analysis of Blake about Michael and his addiction to Brian is so accurate.
Date: May 28, 2017 3:42 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ah, gotcha...Thanks for clearing that up. Must have missed the reference somewhere.
Date: May 28, 2017 1:54 am Title: Chapter 13
Brietling? Is this a British thing or am I just that old and don't get it?
Author's Response:
No this is a MissMerlot thing. Basically, Zee did something so sexually amazing to Faal that he bought her a Brietling watch in gratitude, so any time she says that to him, he knows he's in for a good time.
MissMerlot
Date: May 27, 2017 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 21
Michael and Lindsey really choose to put a damper on anything they can!
Date: May 23, 2017 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 20
Some more lies from both Lindsey and Michael...
This time, Mel has enough, and I bet Brian is waiting for the fallout. Deb is also very determined.
I can't wait to read about the renovation results and the party that Emmett will throw.
Date: May 22, 2017 8:38 pm Title: Chapter 19
So much happened in here!
Most of all, Gus and his mother: how can she still call him "Lambskin" especially after being so mean to him! I was so relieved when Mel asked Jenny to call Brian and they took Gus away.
Hunter and his first sell: great news after the debacle that was caused by his mother.
The keys: every kid has one for almost all houses, except Michael's of course!!!
Date: May 21, 2017 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 18
I hope someone saw Michael give money to Rita.
I can't wait to see how Lindsey will try to explain why she lied to Gus about his conception; as if he misunderstood...
I loved how Brian gave the week off after signing the huge contract.
Date: May 21, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 17
Mel is gonna explode when she will find out what Lindsey told Gus about Brian and her and also Justin and Daphne.
So happy Deb refuses to give money to Michael and called him on his toys' expenses.