Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2016 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 55

Wow, wow, wow! This story is really picking up speed now. 

Whiney and Blond Bitch out on their asses.... Not a lawfirm in town wanting to do business with them. Nearly pennyless and still not a clue between both of them on how bad it looks for them.

Bravo to Ron to getting his balls back and bravo to Nancy: finally her eyes have opened and she chooses for herself and her marriage. Loved the final remark from Nancy. I could just see Blondie Bitch sitting there gaping, looking like a gargoyle waiting for a bit of rain.....

And Dapnhe? She is going to show the world how devious she can be. This will mean the end of the Luther Stark. Go Daphne!

Great to see you back from your break. Looking eagerly forward to the next chapter. 

XOXO

Meriam

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2016 7:31 pm Title: Chapter 55

Bernie, Arnold and Millie in Liberty diner now things are going to get back on track.  Love the Mr. DeVore comment.  Love that it looks like Ron is going to get a clue.  Ah, no wonder Mikey's payment for the truck rental was declined.  A smart move by Teddy.  Go, Teddy.  Ron's back in my good book, but will Lindsay and Michael actually read the contracts?  I'm happy to see that Nancy had decided to fight for her marriage.  But you threw me a curve ball.  Daphne taking over Stark Ind.? with Ephriams help?  I know this is going to be goooood. 

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2016 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 55

Yay!!! It's back!!!!

Reviewer: kellydeer Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2016 4:51 am Title: Chapter 54

Just curious...have you abandoned this story? I hope not...it was always my happy place at the end of the day.

Author's Response:

Nope, just had a bit of a break...for Christmas...C55 is being posted in about 10 minutes xx

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2016 4:14 pm Title: Chapter 54

It's a shame that Ron isn't going to be able to curb L&M.  I can't believe Ron is going to finance their appeals.  Will he have any money left once he does that?   Now I'm not sure exactly what Ted, Mel and Luc have planned or for whom.  Is it Ron or Michael?  Planning the wedding breakfast won't be easy with Justin trying to find out what's on the menu. 

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 26, 2016 12:43 am Title: Chapter 54

I really love this story!

One bit of constructive crit? Martine's name seems to have changed to Miranda in some chapters. 

also, as an observation, I can tell you are not an American writer as you use "whilst" instead of "while" along with other non American terms. It by no means affects the storytelling as a whole but it does sometimes detract as I had to figure out what you meant. 

But I like it and look forward to an update!

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2016 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 54

I really love this story!

One bit of constructive crit? Martine's name seems to have changed to Miranda in some chapters. 

also, as an observation, I can tell you are not an American writer as you use "whilst" instead of "while" along with other non American terms. It by no means affects the storytelling as a whole but it does sometimes detract as I had to figure out what you meant. 

But I like it and look forward to an update!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2016 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 54

Okay so Captain Asshat and Stuck-up Heifer have now been joined by Mother FrostBitch (Yes You Can Use It lol ;)) hope Ron finds a lawyer before Millicent and Zee come after them?

Then again with New York coming up aswell as the party Melody is planning for her husband's birthday perhaps he should just continue his plan and just watch what happens?

Is Mother FrostBitch coming to the party with Stuck-up Heifer and hopefully Captain Asshat?

It seems the Sperm Donor Zee is unfortunately related to is about to get his comeuppance too :)

The Next Few Chapters Should Be Quite Epic :)

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2016 10:54 am Title: Chapter 54

Ah yes....this just keeps getting better.

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 53

OMG Linz an apartment manager, I can see the tenents running now and Mikey a janitor, he has never picked up a cleaning tool in his life.  Should make their selfish lives wonderful.?

Fantastic update. thanks for sharing. looking forward to next update, plus enjoying your new fic as well.  You are a very, very talented writer.

JoAnn

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

HA! Michael so deserves the Panda look. Zee proves that the hand is quicker than the eye. Now that Jenny knows that little trick, I wonder if she'll ever have the chance to put it to good use?? LOL! A life lesson that could very well come in handy.

Gus was too cute talking to his dads. Is that what he wanted to talk to them about? That Phil guy or was there something else? I guess now we have to wait till Saturday. Brian and Justin got a bit side tracked. ;)

And curious about what plans are in the works for Zee's dad. There was mention a little bit ago, and he's another one that will surely deserve some angst coming his way. Has he been doing anything naughty on the sides that we are unaware of and if so, what and when will he be caught out? Uncle Luc and Aunt D are planning something good I'm sure.

And Phil is DONE! Oh what an incredible relief for that poor bloke! So now the two nunbnuts need to find new representation if they plan to appeal. Somehow....I just don't see that happening.

Can I just say...Ron ROCKS! And it's about bloody frigging time he put his foot down. Not sure what Nancy's deal is. She's too concerned about how it will look, than anything about her own daughter. No wonder Lindsey grew up to be the person she is. She learned at the knee of her mother. I simply can't wait to see Lindsey and Michael actually having to lift a finger to earn their keep. And Ron will be able to monitor if they're actually keeping up with their duties as well. I can see them falling down on the job and Ron will then kick them out of that property as well. Not another free ride for either of them. Mind you, why he continues to assist Michael is beyond me, but what ever. Any money he may have made selling Michaels collectables would be long gone by now.

So much has happened and there's still so much more coming!!! There's no way that either Michael or Lindsey are out for teh count. they will continue to try to manipulate any situation and any person to try to get their way. Further downfalls I'm sure are coming their way. They'll still need to get jobs as they may be getting free rent in trade, but they still need expenses as well as legal fees as Ron is stopping that as well. Hopefully Nancy stays clear of that or else she'll be joining them. What will either of them do?

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2016 1:21 pm Title: Chapter 53

OMGood GRAVY!!! This was fabulous!! Phil was too hilarious and he is FINALLY rid of the Dumb-as-Doornails Gang! Judge Milner busted Lindsay's WASP bubble by saying that the hearing was just a formality and that Mel was not needed. HAHAHAHAHAHA!! That witch wanted to look her best only to be shot down and trampled by way of the Dissolution. NO MORE ways to use Brian nor Mel and what's more... The Bank of Daddy is CLOSED!!

I couldn't even stop laughing when Ron imparted his plans for Michael and Lindsay. I suppose he was only helping out Michael at the behest of Lindsay and the fact that Michael seems more of a mental patient so it would technically be considered charity but OMG!! Making them the building manager and janitor for their apartment complex was PRICELESS!! Not only that but he told Nancy that if she didn't like it, she could join them. I gotta admit that Ron finally finding his man parts was kinda HOT! Honestly, I wish he would just go ahead and divorce Nancy. She's cut from the same cloth as her spoiled ass daughter and as long as he's funding her lifestyle, has no reason to change. Besides I never understood the attraction anyway.

As for the rest of the chapter:

-Phil's secretary and the Doctor's reactions to Michael was hysterical. I agree that Michael's mouth should have been wired shut too.

-Malcolm is hilarious!! I really like his dry wit and humor. I'm sure he's glad to have seen the back of the Brat Brigade

- I like that Solomon and Menno may be getting together. After the job Sol did for the cases, he definitely deserves a vacation in Aruba and someone to share it with.

- All of the scenes/ aftereffects of the hangovers were just too damn funny. Poor Mel! I think out of all of them, she had the worse of it and Jenny tromping around didn't help matters.

-Carl's talk with the kids was heartfelt. If anyone understands human nature and what motivates people to act a damn fool, he does. I love that he took the time to reassure them that none of this was their fault but the deficiency of Michael and Lindsay. They are all well to be rid of the PITA Association!

-Zee and that damn ice ball!! WOW!! But DAMN! Menno caught that sucker??!!! I swear fo' cheese grits Lindsay best not try to take down Zee. I have a feeling that she will end up much worse than Panda boy!

I think I covered just about everything!! What and FANTASTIC chapter!! 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle