Date: Jan 03, 2017 11:39 am Title: Chapter 59
Loved this chapter! I can't wait to see Lindsay and Michael get what they deserve.
I'm sad to see this come to an end but maybe a sequel in the future....hint, hint. ;)
Date: Jan 03, 2017 8:28 am Title: Chapter 59
I love everything of what's happening in Oregon.ðŸ˜ðŸ˜Hoping we still have the chance to meet Zee's twin??And by the way how did you come up with all the Stark kids name?They're unique and beautiful..😙
Oh please pretty please can you put the dumb duo down for good,i mean really down to the point that no one's gonna touch them or look at them unless they went somewhere where no one knows them and far away from the family??
Thanks for another great chapter😚
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2017 6:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Are you sure you can't stretch it to 2, 5 or even 10 more chapters? I really love this story and don't want it to endðŸ™
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2017 4:22 am Title: Chapter 59
The Weddings were just Beautiful, I am happy that Ben knows what love feels like and that with Steve by his side he will never have to wonder again.
Zee putting that announcement in the paper was Sublime especially the last part which if Michael and Lindsay were smart they would see the danger but since the pea ran away it is going to be fun having them at the party.
The Family will be there and this is about to be the party of the century <does happy dance>
Zee has sharpened her claws and now The Hellcat is coming out to play lol
Not ready for the last chapter but I know it will be Spectacular!!! :)
Date: Jan 03, 2017 2:57 am Title: Chapter 59
Love the wedding and everything that happened that weekend. Love that Zee got Lindsay and Mike a special edition of the wedding. Sad to see this story end, but I know there will be more great stories from you.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I hope I can live up to your expectations.
MissMerlot
Date: Jan 03, 2017 1:53 am Title: Chapter 59
Almost had to clean my laptop off with the titles of Wankerboy and Twatzilla. What do you in store for those two?
Love the weddings and blessing.
Author's Response:
Pain a lot of pain...
MissMerlot
Date: Jan 03, 2017 12:27 am Title: Chapter 59
I am going to so miss this verse. Ithas been a wonderful journey. Ty
Date: Jan 03, 2017 12:04 am Title: Chapter 59
This was such a beautiful chapter.
and can't wait to see what is in store for NYC and the big party!
Date: Jan 02, 2017 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 58
So a few chapters to catch up on for reviews. Sorry. Holy shit though girl........these have been absoluetly brilliant!
SO so so glad that Ronald really and truly finally grew a pair! I was worried there that he was going to let things go and fall back into his old ways, especially with Nancy in his ear. but nope...he truly set it all up properly! Excellent!! and Nancy was put in her place as well. I think she's finally woken up as well. Took long enough. I guess she really realized that hubs was serious. that he'd drop her like a hot potatoe of she didn't fall in line. I'm curious as to what he wrote in teh letter to Nancy when handing her those papers. either way, I'm glad they are both seeing Lindsey for what she truly is. AND that Zee has the full go ahead from both of them to do as she sees fit. Oh man....Lindsey thinks she has it bad now?!?! Oh I can't wait!! What makes it even more exciting is that she's completely unaware! she's so bloody entitled that she doesnt' see her own inevitable demise. She and Michael both! adn erally...where the hell does Michale get off? He questioned Ronald's contract? He wondered why he didn't get snything from Ronald? SERIOUSLY?!?!? I mean WTF?! Oh I really really can't wait until those two are permanantly stomped on and competely flattened!
OMG!! That whole plan with undermining Luther??! I never once saw that coming! Frigging brilliant! My jaw dropped a mile when I read that! and the outcome..well, satisfaction doesn't even come close to what I was feeling. I wanted to be there. To watch every nuance and every reaction up close. Wanted to hear every word and every word. I wanted to experience Luther's fury and his demise. And naturally everyone's celebration. What a wonderful family they all are. How incredibly supportive.
The wedding was lovely! So sweet and heartfelt. O loved justin's touch of anxiety there and it was Brian who was calm. Just goes to show how far the man has come. He sooooo wanted this! The fact that other got engaged and married and remarried. What a wonderful and memorable weekend for them all.
Now....for what's ahead. OMG...I simply can't wait. I'm guessing (and admit kind of hoping) that since L&M didn't make it to the wedding (thank goodness) that they will still arrive at the Reichman party? Cause that coupld be potentially HILARIOUS!! What will it take for them to finally get it? To really get that NOBODY wants them around, that they aren't entitled to ANYTHING. That they need to stop expecting everything to be handed to them and to maybe...oh I don't know...work for it? the fact t hat they even hired people to act in their place at the apartments is just nuts and am wondering what's going to happen once Ronald finds out?
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I think you might like C60 a bit...
Nicole xx
Date: Jan 02, 2017 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 58
absolutely beautiful... just beautiful!
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2017 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 58
The way they keep making friends it's no wonder the guest list for the family has grown. Lindsay seems to be making friends with her employees- NOT. I'm sure that poor Roberta is wishing she'd never taken the job. I'm just wondering why Lindsay is planning on going to New York? Luther Stark got his comupance. Nobody in his family wants him around it seems. The wedding went really well. The food had me salivating. And there was no one around to try and stop the wedding. Loved that Reverend Tom was there to officiate. Now we have more weddings to plan since Ben and Steve have decided to tie the knot, not to mention Zee and Faal renewing theirs.
Date: Jan 02, 2017 1:21 pm Title: Chapter 58
You did warn us about the tears. This was truly amazing. Love the street light idea.
Author's Response:
Thank you, typing and snivelling was not fun but I got there, glad I did them justice
Date: Jan 02, 2017 3:57 am Title: Chapter 58
Beautiful and filled with love.
Steve and Ben marrying and Zee and Faal renewing vows.
Fantastic , thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Author's Response:
Oh yes, that was great to write. Two more chapters to go and I might be saying goodbye to this verse
Date: Jan 02, 2017 3:30 am Title: Chapter 58
This chapter is the most beautiful one of all,particularly on the wedding part..Great job MissMerlot,thanks for sharing this to us😙😙😙
Author's Response:
Thank you. Hope you enjoy the rest, two more to go.
Date: Jan 02, 2017 2:04 am Title: Chapter 58
Damnit you made me cry...but they are happy tears.
Author's Response:
I'm so pleased. Now prepare to cheer for the Stark smackdown
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2017 1:19 am Title: Chapter 58
Luther got his Ass handed to him before he was kicked out of the board room if he was smart he would walk away but I don't think that man was ever smart.
The Wedding was Beautiful!!
I got teary-eyed when Justin freaked out and Brian came to help him, their vows were so beautiful and the lamppost being there so everyone could sign it and it will be shipped to Britin is extraordinary!
The food sounded delicious and I wish I was there in person lol
Good for Steve for not wasting time and wanting to put a ring on Ben's finger I am surprised he waited as long as he did lol
Faal and Zee are going to renew their wedding vows too
All is almost right in the world, just got to finish dispensing some justice to Captain Asshat and Stuck-up Heifer then all will be Serene. ;)
This Chapter Was Heavenly and the perfect start to 2017 :)
Author's Response:
Glad I did them proud. And yes justice Stark style is coming...
Date: Jan 01, 2017 7:10 am Title: Chapter 57
Great story! Really going to hate to see it end.
Author's Response:
Only two more chapters to go, am going to be sad to stop writing it too
Date: Jan 01, 2017 4:34 am Title: Chapter 57
I'm so happy that Brian feels the contentment of his REAL family/friends
I'm so looking forward what's still to come!
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2017 12:34 am Title: Chapter 57
So much left to go and what a nice time they had without the troublesome twosome along. Everything is turning out just fine.
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2017 12:15 am Title: Chapter 57
HOT SEXY FUN for Brian and Justin that was much needed to erase all the crap they had to deal with from Captain Asshat and Stuck-up Heifer. (Love that you used FrostBitch made my night :))
Lindsay and Michael are going to be waiting for Hell to freeze over if they are expecting a call from Brian.
Everyone important was in New York to help with the final preparations and to have fun, it was Asshole Free and will hopefully remain that way in the near future.
Can't wait for the wedding and more comeuppance for the Whiny Brigade, I am especially looking forward to what Zee is going to do to Lindsay (Perhaps if it is public the Peterson's would like to watch the video, I know everyone on Liberty Avenue will enjoy it ;))
This has been such a fantastic ride that I don't want to end but I can't wait to enjoy it all over again. *Big Hugs*
Happy New Year!! :)
Author's Response:
You my dear are most welcome! Happy 2017 to you too *squugles back*
MissMerlot
PS: a squuggle is a mix of a squeeze and a hug
Date: Jan 01, 2017 12:12 am Title: Chapter 57
Fantastic chapter! I was so excited for the NYC trip. I can't wait for the wedding!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 31, 2016 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 57
Great chapter. Loved the scene with their 'boxes'.
~Lorie
Date: Dec 31, 2016 9:25 pm Title: Chapter 57
"Fanning myself here"
So HOT! Love that Justin can get him to go that far.
Waiting to see what happens to the Wonder-twits......
Keeping writing! (sending treats and Beam, or alcohol of your choice, over the net)
Author's Response:
Wait for the honeymoon...Brian get um creative....
Treats worked a treat...git two more bunnies hopping. Happy 2017 to you
Date: Dec 31, 2016 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 57
Oh sweet baby jeebus! I can't wait for the rest.
Date: Dec 31, 2016 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 56
Oh I love how delusional Lindsay still is LOL