Date: Jan 14, 2017 5:11 pm Title: Chapter 9
As usual Michael is only thinking about himself. I wonder what they have planned for the housewarming. I'm sure it will be hilarious.
Date: Jan 13, 2017 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 8
George is my new hero. These two should try to be happy together. Nobody else wants them.
Date: Jan 13, 2017 9:22 pm Title: Chapter 7
Lindsay is going mental when she finds out about Hunters job. I can't wait.
Date: Jan 13, 2017 7:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
Lindsay is cooking and cleaning. That's just too funny. No wonder they were hungry. She is going to be extremely annoying once they move back.
Date: Jan 13, 2017 6:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
Somehow I think Lindsay will be worse than Michael. At least she got some kind of intelligence. That can make the whole thing really ugly.
Date: Jan 13, 2017 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
Brian is a softy. I hope he won't regret it.
Date: Jan 13, 2017 1:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yippee, Justin has his paintings back? How can Michael afford all this and the lawyer? He must have some money left.
Date: Jan 12, 2017 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really don't know why Lindsay is helping Michael. Doesn't she realize it would look way better if she tried helping the others?
Date: Jan 12, 2017 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lindsay is behaving ridiculous. I hope she realizes that soon. Also I thought we got rid of Michael. But apparently not.
Date: Jan 07, 2017 3:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Just finished and loved it. Cannot believe you are a first time writer. To me your Zee is a combination of Brian and Justin? Love her? Loved all of it. Found out there is another part and did a happy dance. Soooo good.
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2017 5:09 pm Title: Chapter 60
Wow! Definitely an epic read! Loved all the detail you get into - the intricate timeline, the descriptions of the places and the food, the great original characters. This story was so compelling that I've done nothing else but read it for the past two days. Thank you for writing! TAG
Date: Jan 04, 2017 2:28 pm Title: Chapter 60
OMG this was a fabulous story and you have a great talent.
I'm so sorry to see it gone. It was part of my day and now my only consolation is that I know THE RATTLE OF THE SNAKE it's on his way.....soon please
Author's Response:
Thank you. The first chapter of The Rattle of Snakes is up
Date: Jan 04, 2017 10:23 am Title: Chapter 60
This story was simply amazing! I loved the entire cast of characters. Can't wait for the next installment. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2017 2:36 am Title: Chapter 60
What a fantastic ending - for almost everybody but Michael and Lindsay. Somehow I think they'll still manage to fuck up their lives. But if I'm not mistaken we have a new story to look forward to!!!
Date: Jan 04, 2017 12:55 am Title: Chapter 60
Really hated to see the end, but a Fabulous end it was!
Thanks for sharing your incredible talent!
JoAnn
Author's Response:
Thank you JoAnn. But there's more to come in The Rattle of the Snake, hope you enjoy that too.
Nicole
Date: Jan 03, 2017 8:47 pm Title: Chapter 60
Oh my God!!I just loved every bit of it..ðŸ˜ðŸ˜ðŸ˜Got the happy ending i picture out,and it's totally amazing and beautifully done🤗🤗🤗I also loved how you put the duo where they belong away from the family!!And the scene of the honeymoon in Africa,is extremely HOT,short but HOT nontheless😙
I'm so gonna miss this one,it was part of my day to look forward too but now it's finally ended..but i'm really glad to read this story...ðŸ˜ðŸ˜
Thank so much for sharing this to us MsMerlot..You're amazingly talented and brilliant writer..We still have a story of yours that's in progress but hoping to have more from you soon..Hope you won't get tired making beautiful and awesome stories to share with us your qaf family...Thanks again and goodluck for more stories..😙😙😙
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for those words of encouragement! So glad you like it. Going to be starting on The Rattle of the Snake...sequel...over the next few days hope to start posting from the weekend. Hope you enjoy that one too.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2017 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 60
WOW!! Author, Author, Author!!!
You gave everyone important the ending they deserved, Captain Asshat and Stuck-up Heifer got knocked on their Asses and had to leave the country to save what little face they have left. (and the last few dollars)
So Sperm Donor wants his turn at revenge he must know Michael and Lindsay? lol
Why do I get the feeling no one has seen the last of the Whiney Brigade or their ill conceived attempts at revenge?
Perhaps the next story could be away to mend fences between Zee and her twin? Perhaps a Hellion and a Hellcat can direct their mutual animosity towards a Two-Faced snake with the help and love of their families?? ;)
I Just Love a Good Trilogy lol
Date: Jan 03, 2017 6:36 pm Title: Chapter 60
Great story! Looking forward to The Rattle of the Snake!
Date: Jan 03, 2017 6:06 pm Title: Chapter 60
I saw the FB notice that you had posted this. I was torn. A huge part of me wanted to run off right away and read it. The other part wanted to delay the inevitable. The Final chapter. This one is over. So...I read the update on your other fic first. ;)
I was so anticipating the Reichmann party. I just knew that Lindsey was going to get her own, as well as Michael of course. I certainly didn't see the police involvement. Hehehe. That was great! And what a complete and utter humiliation for them. I was practically cackling with glee. For someone with such entitlement issues, and who was brought up within certain social circles, she really doesn't know shit does she? Her behaviour is pretty shocking throughout this entire series. Michael I get a bit, he wasn't brought up in those circles and really has no idea. He just follows Lindsey's behaviour and thinks it correct. His level of entitlement is shocking as well though. He definitely wasn't brought up to be that way.
I'm so glad things worked out in the end for everyone, well except for the obvious few. I foresee another one coming though...Rattle of the Snake. this should prove to be another exciting tale.
So, while I'm saddened that another of your stories has ended, another part is kind of excited to finally be able to put it onto my kindle. I can sit back, relax and read both fics right after the other (again) in their entirety.
glad we still have the other story to keep us going. I'm a bit of an addict when it comes to your fics.
Thank you! So very much for keeping us entertained, for keeping us at times at the edge of our seats, for letting us into your world. We've been given a lovely gift.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jan 03, 2017 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 60
Ahhh...the trilogy? Continues and I love the title
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2017 5:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was great....a great sequel to Whispers As Loud....Now we get to enjoy Love at First Bite (great banner btw)...hope you have more B/J stories to share. Thanks!! :o)
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2017 5:32 pm Title: Chapter 60
I loved this story! I'm hoping to see a sequel! Please!
Date: Jan 03, 2017 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 60
This was such a nicely done ending... everyone (who counts) is happy and well the others can just suck it! lol
So happy reading this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you my lovely. Hope I can make you happy with the next ones...
MissMerlot xx
Date: Jan 03, 2017 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 59
OMG! The warning in the previous chapter for tissues was more necessary for this one. Not that the previous chapter was bad, Oh no! But this chapter touched me deeply. I bawled my eyes out during both ceremonies in this chapter. The vows from Faal and Zee were amazing. And Ben and Steve's were so mozing. Jenny's reaction was characteristic for her. I can really see her becoming a wonderful big sister.
Hunter is gaining another great father and a man who really respects and loves him. So happy for him.
Where in the holy heaven did you come up with Wankerboy and Twatzilla? Honestly I screamed in laughter. OMG amazing nick names. The magazine and the DVD for W&T is a stroke of genius. They will arrive in New York so keyed up that the explosion to follow their arrival will be epic. Dare I say nuclear. And is Zee finally getting her chance to finish off Twatzilla? Wankerboy is really going to loose it in New York. I suspect a major whine attack and a brutally, bloody and epic end to his "friendship"' with Brian. Justin is the main man in Brians live as Steve is in Ben's.
The end of the King of the Whine and the end of the Blondie Bitch is coming..... How do the mighty fall.
Looking forward to the next chapter. And will you do a sequel? For I would love to see how W&T will end up in that flee infested hovel.
XOXO
Meriam
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked the last two chapters and the nicknames...pulled them from where heck knows but they suit them perfectly.
Hope you enjoy C60...and I may have answered your sequel question...
Love
Nicole xxx
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2017 1:58 pm Title: Chapter 59
Such nice weddings. Nice that they sent Lindsay and Michael the special addition. Do they look at the DVD? One more chapter? We are going to miss this, but you do manage to give us some great tales so I'm not worried.