[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2016 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Confusion.
I love how caring and understanding Brian is being. I think Gus is the key to helping Justin open up. He's been so abused mentally, and physically you can't help to want to protect him and love him... I love that we're seeing Brian change right before our eyes. I just hope that Michael accepts this new Brian and doesn't ruin how things are developing between Brian and Justin.
Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2016 11:24 am Title: Chapter 1 - Decompose.
Oh no, no, on... I'm only on chapter six, I just noticed that it's nice and long...
I'm loving it by the way!
Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Date: Sep 19, 2016 2:40 am Title: Chapter 1 - Decompose.
Ha! I like your way, 43 chapters is one hell of a finish...
The beginning did seem familiar, but I don't really remember this fic.
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Author's Response:
WOW! You read fast! Glad you liked it. So excited to get new readers for this story. I tried to tie it all in with my ending. Hope I succeeded. TAG
Date: Sep 19, 2016 2:27 am Title: Chapter 2 - Waste.
So I'm curious is this an unfinished fanfic by LovelessSouls? ~ Kathleen It was finished . . . Sort of. I just thought the ending was too abrupt and unsatisfying. So I took it on and rewrote it my way! Hope you like it. TAG
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2016 2:25 am Title: Chapter 2 - Waste.
This should be interesting seeing how Brian comes to grips with his need to care for and protect Justin, and his need remain on the prowl unattached...
Great Start! ~ Kathleen
Date: Sep 18, 2016 3:54 pm Title: Epilogue.
This is a well written gut wrenching beautiful tale. It will stay wil you after you read it. I highly reccomend this story for the tears of sadness, joy and triumph!!
Bravo Tagsit!!!
Date: Sep 15, 2016 4:58 pm Title: Epilogue.
Thank you again!
Author's Response:
You're welcome. Thank YOU for reading. I'm so glad you liked it. This was a ver difficult story to write but I was so thrilled with the way it turned out in the end. (sucker for happy endings . . .) TAG
Date: Sep 15, 2016 4:29 pm Title: Chapter 42 - Identity.
Wonderful story!!! Thank you for the time you spent on it and also for daring picking a concept from another writer, to give more flesh to a powerful beginning.
It's true that the end is a little sweet, but with all the angst we had before, it's not a bad thing.
The ICE cards were the right way to tell Justin what Brian couldn't tell yet. It will be a permanent reminder for Justin.
Date: Sep 15, 2016 7:02 am Title: Chapter 41 - Compensation.
Justin is really doing a lot better since the confrontation with his father. Big step for him.
Date: Sep 14, 2016 9:50 pm Title: Chapter 40 - Trusting.
They are really lucky to be able to share a room in the hospital.
I would like a sponge bath given by Brian... No need to self-fan that way...
But, I digress.
Jennifer doesn't quite get how serious Justin's abuse was. I hope she will hear the accusation that Craig will face. Maybe she will get it then.
Date: Sep 14, 2016 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 39 - Confrontation.
What a rough chapter; when you think the mess is over, Craig is back for more hurt!
But, he got an opponent he wasn't expecting: his gay son fought back, physically and verbally.
Great job!
Date: Sep 13, 2016 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 38 - Deliverance.
Brian was very careful to get the POA for Justin. It was the key to get Justin out of this madhouse and to screw Craig's plan. Hope Justin isn't in too deep layer of his mind. Boo Hoo indeed!!!
Date: Sep 13, 2016 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 37 - Repercussions.
Angst at the maximum. Where is Justin?
Author's Response:
That's a very good question . . . Lol! TAG
Date: Sep 13, 2016 6:16 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Machinations.
That was evil. Starting with hot and messy interlude to finish with a possible huge trouble. Please, don't make Justin face his father.
Date: Sep 13, 2016 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 35 - Divulgence.
The first part was very funny as both adults were having so much joy in the water. Too much kids' games were not accessible to them.
The end was bitter as Jennifer can't help it. She has to call when Justin is not ready. She ruined their day.
Date: Sep 12, 2016 8:40 pm Title: Chapter 34 - Reunification.
Great chapter! I was afraid Justin would clam up, but he finally was able to face his mother and talk to her.
Gus's intervention was maybe the key point.
I hope she will keep her word and won't disclose his phone number to his father.
Date: Sep 12, 2016 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Logic: Part II
Yeah!!! Well done.
Good job Daphne. Brian is opening up and telling Justin what he must know in order to move forward and be confident again.
Author's Response:
I love writing for Daphne - she's my girl! Glad you liked it! TAG
Date: Sep 12, 2016 4:13 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Logic: Part I
Amazing Daphne. I love this girl. Her logic is flawless and as a third party, she is neutral.
So, well done!!!
Date: Sep 11, 2016 7:03 pm Title: Chapter 31 - Fallacious.
Things are rough between these two and Justin is going a way that is not going to work with Brian, once he finds out. Justin's view of their relationship is so twisted that it will take really hard work to make him see differently.
Date: Sep 11, 2016 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Discord.
It's really often that Brian's main brain takes control over his second one. But, this was violent and the result is another tough situation. I hope that they won't have to go to the hospital.
Date: Sep 11, 2016 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Ensnared.
Devil trap for devil man. Can't wait to read how Craig is going to fall and how hard it will be.
Surprised by Deb who, for once, was discreet and efficient.
Date: Sep 11, 2016 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Alterations.
This last scene... gahhhhhhhhh...
Brian admitting he's worn out is really something.
Daphne and Justin reunited and both mesmerized by Brian. Daphne's "he's to die for" always gets me. I loved her when she's with Brian. Brian as always sure of himself about his charm.
Justin is finally getting some of his adolescence back (I could only imagine the content of the texts they exchanged; that could be a special chapter). He also is getting more and more aligned with social standards (ID, POA, bank account, ...).
The POA part was important to him, but it stressed him regarding his father.
Date: Sep 10, 2016 7:18 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Betterment.
So happy things are moving smoothly for both of them as I suspect there will be some bumps on the road to recovery...
Date: Sep 10, 2016 9:26 am Title: Chapter 26 - Recovery.
Sex God is the best way to qualify Brian, but that won't include how gentle and kind he is with people he loves and cares for.
Amazing chapter and hot as hell!!!
So glad Justin finally opened the doors of his mind and took ownership of his sexuality.
Date: Sep 10, 2016 8:20 am Title: Chapter 25 - Percipience.
Arghhhhhhhhhh... I want to get Craig naked in the middle of HIS church and asking for forgiveness. I want to know how he would react to the centerfold of Playboy in front of his buddies in church!
100th comment... I love this story.