Date: Aug 31, 2016 9:33 am Title: Chapter 7 - Misconception.
I'm so captured by this story I haven't been able to comment. This is amazing. I'm off reading now.
Author's Response:
That's a good sign. I won't say a word. Just keep reading. TAG
Date: Aug 27, 2016 2:07 am Title: Chapter 1 - Decompose.
Didn't seem that long, I spent the day at the palace, then came home and started this.... Just realized it's 3am.... Couldn't help it lol
Author's Response:
The first review was clocked in at 4:16 am my time and this one is at 7:10 pm . . . So it was more like 15 hours of straight reading. LOL. Glad that my story could keep your attention for that long. Thank you for reading! TAG
Date: Aug 27, 2016 2:00 am Title: Epilogue.
GREAT GREAT (angst really does kill me!!!!) story!!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it. BTW - you just spent the last ten hours or so doing nothing but reading fanfic . . . my kinda girl! TAG
Date: Aug 27, 2016 1:46 am Title: Chapter 42 - Identity.
Can't wait for the epilogue, even though I think this would have been a GREAT ending too :)
Author's Response:
I think you'll like the epilogue. It really ties the whole thing together! TAG
Date: Aug 27, 2016 1:36 am Title: Chapter 41 - Compensation.
I think Titts needs a BIGGER role in another story you write... she is a character just waiting to be further utilized lol
Date: Aug 27, 2016 1:24 am Title: Chapter 40 - Trusting.
I know this started with revenge against Craig by Brian, but I am holding a grudge against Jennifer too... I'm so invested in this universe!
Author's Response:
I must have done something right then if you're totally invested! Yay, me! TAG
Date: Aug 27, 2016 1:04 am Title: Chapter 39 - Confrontation.
Way to go Justin!!!!
Date: Aug 27, 2016 12:52 am Title: Chapter 38 - Deliverance.
Fucking asshole Craig
Date: Aug 27, 2016 12:43 am Title: Chapter 37 - Repercussions.
If Brian is his POV, who gets called when Brian is out of it... please not Jennifer!
Author's Response:
Worse! Read on! TAG
Date: Aug 27, 2016 12:30 am Title: Chapter 36 - Machinations.
Ugh, this put a pit in my stomach
Date: Aug 27, 2016 12:19 am Title: Chapter 35 - Divulgence.
I just can't feel any sympathy for Jennifer, I'm sorry... and her pushing so much is really making me like her even less
Date: Aug 27, 2016 12:08 am Title: Chapter 34 - Reunification.
I know Jennifer is trying, but I really don't like that she couldn't show ANY patience in letting Justin decide for himself
Date: Aug 26, 2016 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Logic: Part II
I cannot wait for Craig to get his due.
and thank you Daphne!!!!!
Date: Aug 26, 2016 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Logic: Part I
Now it's time for Daph to get him to see the truth about Brian... REALLY!!!!
Date: Aug 26, 2016 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 31 - Fallacious.
I think I'm in the minority...
I know Justin has had such valid reasons for some of his issues, but he is just so quick to be dismissive of the good Brian does by just one fuck up on his part... I feel bad for Brian, he is opening up himself so much more and Justin always wants to make him out to really be a bastard when something happens... I know it's a story, but it still gets to me
Date: Aug 26, 2016 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Discord.
I'm actually surprised at Brian... I know he's the Stud, but it almost felt OOC for THIS Brian to be so easily led to the backroom
Date: Aug 26, 2016 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Ensnared.
Tittsy McGee!!!!!! OMG LOL
Author's Response:
I've always loved playing with Brian's nicknames since he refuses to learn anyone's name unless they're important. So, yeah, Titsy McGee . . . it's just Brian, you know? TAG
Date: Aug 26, 2016 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Alterations.
Brian likes it!!!!! hell yeah!!!
Date: Aug 26, 2016 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Betterment.
I like horny Justin lol
Date: Aug 26, 2016 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Recovery.
fantastic sex explosion!!!! (who couldn't use a good sex explosion lol)...
that "love" took me by surprise!!!
Date: Aug 26, 2016 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Percipience.
I just hope Justin is at least starting to believe Brian WANTS him...
I really like and want Ted's idea of a mob to go visit Craig
Date: Aug 26, 2016 9:59 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Restoration.
I know it's probably sincere, but shame on Jennifer... i'm so disappointed in her still
Author's Response:
Yeah - the Jennifer in this story was a total wimp and not so nice. But, she was abused too, so it kinda makes sense. Of course, you still don't feel too sympathetic to her. TAG
Date: Aug 26, 2016 9:48 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Revelation.
I love that Justin really seems to want it... I want Brian to fix or at least address his deflating issue soon
Author's Response:
Go you! Way to binge read, Cookiebun! A reader after my own heart! Neverfear - Brian has a plan for fixing all. TAG
Date: Aug 26, 2016 9:29 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Catharsis.
Finally... Justin finally sees his father is the failure!!!!
Date: Aug 26, 2016 9:21 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Adumbration.
I hope it's Daphne looking for him... we know it isn't Craig, and I don't think this Jennifer will ever be strong enough to do anything, even if Craig was gone.