Date: Oct 26, 2016 1:38 am Title: Chapter 66
How sweet,Justin has a little brother. Yay they got Stockwell!
Date: Oct 26, 2016 1:35 am Title: Chapter 66
Glad that Brian's gamble with Deekins worked! And in the process, Stockwell is being investigated and Reichert will finally be punished. JUSTICE SERVED!!
The scene with Jenn and Justin was very touching. With all that Brian and Justin still face, I don't think it's the last we've seen of 'Hereafter Jenn' but at the same time, I think she'll be inside guiding the 'Here-and-Now Jenn' to achieve all of the goals she had ever wanted for herself in the previous life. It will definitely see how things play out going forward!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 24, 2016 9:04 pm Title: Chapter 65
WOW! You are at 65 chapters!! Just amazing! Terrific accomplishment!
So Brian has already made contact wiht Deekins. He's made this necessary change anyway thankfully. He told Deekins what's what. He's right, you can stay clean, but you can't just sit back and plant your butt on your morality. You have to show it and prove it.
thankfully no dinner with Michael and Ben. Wondering why "after Ben" is letting this Ben do the whole steroid thing. What possible positive result can come of it and how does it end. I can't believe justin jumped Ben like that! WOW!! then Brian goes after Ben. Michael will more than likely think it's to protect him, but really it's because Ben put justin on his ass...twice!
At least now Micheal has made peace with Deb thankfully. No more of that bitching.
Excellent!!!!!! Love it! It's always fun to read a new chapter. It's amazing how much I've forgotten in the show. Little things here adn there. I competely forgot about Ben's dance with roids. Everytime I read a fic that has a bit of that in it, I'm like "Oh yeah!! I forgot about that!!"
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Oct 24, 2016 3:02 pm Title: Chapter 65
Hahaha! Michael thinking he and Ben should be invited anywheres. Deb and Michael need to really look at themselves before they talk. Glad to see that Blake isn't going to be a doormat. Where was Mysterious Marilyn? How will this affect Deekin's campaign? Fantastic chapter.
Date: Oct 24, 2016 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 65
Loved the way Brian handled Deekins. He could still be honest and not handle Stockwell with kid-gloves.
Mitch-ael insinuating himself into his friends lives is classic! Loved the way Brian and Ted handled him and then Blake drove the point home basically saying that he wasn't wanted there. You would think he would have actually learned something from his time with David. This is the second boyfriend now telling him that he's too damn obsessed with his friends. The funny thing about drug addiction and drunkness is that the truth as the addict sees it comes out when they're high. So regardless of Ben roid raging, it's still Ben's truth which I doubt Michael's HDD (brilliant btw) allowed him to hear. The only good thing that came oit of all this drama is that Michael will start speaking to Deb again because Carl 'rescued' him from possibly becoming aomebody's Mitch in prison. Perhaps the rest of them will finally be free in the cease fire in the War of the Battling Novotnys.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 24, 2016 10:49 am Title: Chapter 65
I'm glad that Blake, like Justin, isn't going to take any of Michael's shit. I always liked Blake the 2nd time around. He made Ted very happy.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: Oct 24, 2016 10:05 am Title: Chapter 65
Michael will never learn. I LOVED HDD. That sums up Michael and Deb perfectly.
Date: Oct 23, 2016 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 64
Lindsay has certainly lost her mind.
Michael needs to grow up. I do feel bad for Ben. I completely understand him not wanting to be with Michael again in this life.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: Oct 22, 2016 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 64
Fantastic update! Let's hope Linz parents take her away.
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2016 7:30 pm Title: Chapter 64
Boy, Lindsay really has gone over the edge. Good thing Justin and Emmett ran into Blake. It played right into Crazy Lindsay and getting Ted laid. Fantastic chapter.
Date: Oct 22, 2016 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 64
Awww sweet Ted moment...Lindsay is crazier than a bag of nuts!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2016 6:33 pm Title: Chapter 64
I see Deb and Michael aren't behaving like grown-ups they are just trying to show who have the bigger pair, while neither is listening or trying to compromise.
I feel for Emmett and Vic being dragged into their childish behavior they just want people to agree with them, this battle could go on for decades with no real winner, Emmett should move some place with better security so he can get some peace, that would just mean they will come to their place of work, can't win for trying with these two children.
Now Lindsay really needs to wake up and face the truth that Brian and Justin are destined to be together and the reason her life is boring is because she expects everything to be handed to her on a gold platter, she doesn't want to work for accolades she just expects the applause and praise wherever she goes.
She also wants Brian to just accept that they should be together totally dismissing the fact that he is gay and only loves her as a friend, she wants the life she was raised to have and can't accept by rebelling she has to play the hand that was dealt, just because she can't decide whether to be straight or a lesbian does not mean Brian is confused.
We all make our own destiny and write our own story Lindsay has had several lifetimes and just can't face that her actions determine how the story ends for her.
It is time for Mommy and Daddy to deal with their little girl and her delusions of grandeur, of course as soon as she gets better (Or over on the doctors) she is coming back to take Justin out.
I am happy that Ted is more confident this time and Blake is sober so now they both have a real chance to make a go at a relationship.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: Oct 22, 2016 6:00 pm Title: Chapter 64
I laughed hearing about the War of the Novotnys! It's so like both Deb and Michael to hear only what they want to hear regarding the other. Being right always seems to outweigh being supportive in their world. Glad they are all staying far away from that hot mess!
And speaking of a hot mess....Lindsay is a HOT ASS DAMN MESS!! I knew that now that Kinnetik is becoming successful and since Brian and Justin are moving forward with their plans for their lives, that she was going to show up acting a damn fool. Brian is only with Justin because he reminds him of her indeed! Even when she was reborn as a man, Brian didn't want her so that should have told her that her personality alone is undesirable to Brian. I'm glad that he acknowledged that he knew Lindsay's motive for introducing Justin to Eck... I've always thought so too and that Mel just went along with it because of Lindsay.
Why do I get the feeling that she is on Crystal though? That last scene was really reminiscent of how Blake was when he approached Ted for the first time after Ted woke up from his coma. In any event, I'm glad that Ted gave the paramedics the Petersons phone number in order to deal with Lindsay. She really needs to be committed with no hope of ever getting out. Hopefully she will also be catatonic because....WHEW! That bitch is NUTS! In any event, I hope she is locked away permanently because I don't trust her. Based on her desperate and deranged ravings about Justin being in her way to Brian, I don't think that she will wait more than 2.2 seconds before trying to remove Justin...again.
WRITE On Star!!
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 22, 2016 1:37 am Title: Chapter 63
Just finished reading chapts. 54- 63, all I can say is Brilliant! Got behind due to illness.
Thanks for sharing this Fantastic fic.
JoAnn
Date: Oct 21, 2016 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 63
Awwww, Brian and Justin are on the right track.
Date: Oct 21, 2016 11:03 am Title: Chapter 63
This story just keeps getting better and better. I'm so excited to see how their life takes shape without others interferring.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2016 7:06 pm Title: Chapter 63
It's nice to see where some changes are going and what is staying the same. I'm glad that Brian decides to give Justin a birthday that's what he would want. It appears that Ted is having a positive influence on Brian and Justin's life.
Date: Oct 20, 2016 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 63
Absolutely LOVED this chapter! I really like the idea of building up Mayor Deekins in such a way where they do not have to be bothered too much with Stockwell. It's a brilliant strategy. I also think it's a great idea to have Brian and Justin move into Britin ASAP. Something tells me that the Loft is about to become a revolving door again with Michael and Ben having issues and the inevitable arrival of Devina. I vote for not telling anyone except their 'new' core group and Vic where they live. If Michael and Debbie know they surely will not have any freaking peace! Sheesh! Needy much?
YAYYYYYYYYYYYY Mel has moved Leda in and is moving on with her life! But why do I get the feeling that Bitchzilla is somewhere waiting in the wings again to make all their lives a living hell? And somehow I don't think that she will overtly attack that ones that knows exactly what she's up to or even show her face to them boldly. Nah, she'd probably go after Leda with her manipulations first. Perhaps I'm just speculating but I don't think Lindsay is done....well unless you have decided to kill her off so she can sit at the business end of Satan's pitchfork sooner rather than later....Hmmmm definitely a nice thought for me to have on this dreary afternoon in New York!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2016 3:15 am Title: Chapter 62
So things for Brian and Justin are okay. Mikey and Ben have the problem. Not sure how to fix someone with a fixation on someone who cannot love him back.
Date: Oct 20, 2016 2:25 am Title: Chapter 62
Great Day in the damn morning! Ben is twisted! Yes...okay he doesn't want a repeat performance of the Brian and Mikey show. I get that but when is he going to take responsibility for the part he played in that? I agree with Justin that he and Michael suffer from the same debilitating disease called 'Non-reponsibility-itis.' As long as they can pass the buck and not accept blame, they will do it. Ben really needs to man up and decide what he wants to do. Michael....well what the hell are the odds of that? Unlike Ben, Michael can't make a solid decision without someone telling him it's the right one. My opinion, Ben needs to leave that fool behind. Loving someone doesn't mean to be their willing sucker and doormat!
Date: Oct 20, 2016 2:19 am Title: Chapter 61
Michael and Deb....Like seriously they both need new hobbies!!! I actually applauded Justin when he told Michael off about his ridiculous grieving for Captain freaking Astro! I mean seriously....is he 12?!!! Just dumb! I still hope Justin doesn't bend and do the comic with Michael.
As for Deb, she needs to grow a pair of cajones and go out with Carl. Then perhaps she wouldn't be so wrapped up in Michael's life- bad decisions or not!
Date: Oct 20, 2016 1:44 am Title: Chapter 60
YAY!!!! *tears* Jen is BACK! And they have managed to at least temporarily save Hunter. So glad that Brian and Justin have another ally! Onto the next chapter!!!
Date: Oct 20, 2016 1:37 am Title: Chapter 59
I thought Ben was pulling an 'Ethan!' But unlike Ethan's trifling good-for-nothing ass, Ben isn't doing it out of spite. He sees the value of having someone like Justin; something Michael could never do in this life or the next or even the one before it. Such a damn putz! Anyway, I'm glad that it will remain just a stupid idea instead of a long drawn out saga.
As for Hunter, I think Jen is an excellent idea! I definitely wouldn't have chosen Debbie for the task as she has all she can handle dealing with a grown ass 'teenage' Michael. I'm still holding out hope that Justin will not restart Rage with Captain PITA!
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2016 1:32 am Title: Chapter 62
Ben needs to face the facts that his life ended up bad because he let Michael get away with all is whiny, conniving crap, he just rolled over constantly while always expecting Michael to choose him, instead he should have fought and put a stop to it from the beginning.
You can't be mad at Brian and Justin for having a love stronger than time, the second he started making excuses for Michael's behavior and giving in to his temper tantrums is the second their relationship was doomed.
You fell in love with someone who loved another you can leave or stay and fight, instead Ben just accepted the status quo while his bitterness, anger and jealousy grew.
Ben chose to be a doormat that was his decision can't try to sabotage Brian and Justin now, he lost his chance to find Happily Ever After cause he chose the wrong man to love.
Time to either fight for a chance to change Michael's heart or else just let him go and look for happiness elsewhere.
:)
Date: Oct 20, 2016 1:27 am Title: Chapter 58
OMG!! Please don't let Justin restart Rage with Michael!! Brian and Justin would never have any peace plus I really think that their lives bleeding on the pages caused a lot of their problems with Michael, as always, planted firmly in the middle- only this time as Zephyr.
I don't blame Ben for wanting a different life but he is going about it the wrong way. In this particular arc he kinda reminded me of how Ethan used to stalk Justin until he wore him down. Although Ben isn't going to get anywhere with Justin, it's still annoying as hell!