Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 06, 2016 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 46

Great take on Deb here. She's really taken to heart the reality check re: Michael. she's not foever looking out for his best interest, but those that are being effected by him. Good on her! Her concern for Tracey is right on the money and that needs to be nipped in the bud quickly! while Brian's comments were very much "old Brian" he does in a way still need to keep up appearances I guess. Still needs to show himself as a little bit of a, asshole. :) The change would be too drastic otherwise. Shame he can't just leave Michael to become Mr. Straight, but....those kinds of changes are far too big and would have drastic measures on B&J as well as those around them. No Jenny, perhaps no Kira...just to name a few.

Brian...ever the salesman. :) Laying it on that's for sure, but from David's perspective, could be totally believable. Will Brian have to be the complete asshole at the party though so that tracey sees things for what they are? If so, at least this time Brian will have the support of others rather than them being pissed. that may just be the shove Michael needs to go off with David. with everyone supporting Brian being a jerk, and none of them listening to Michael's whines, he may just leave thinking that the others will see what they are missing when he's gone. (BAHAHAHA) ahem...sorry.

Jen will be the perfect "nanny" for Gus. She's done such a wonderful job raising Justin and Molly, she's the perfect "fill-in" mom for Gus. A terrific example and she will honestly love him as a grandson. While I completely understand Mel's misgivings at first, Jen is a stranger, and she initially would question Jen's motives for letting Justin go, but she did it with his best interest at heart. She has the unanimous agreement from Brian and Justin. PLUS she see's how she raised Justin.

looking forward to today's update as always. :) 

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 06, 2016 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 45

While I have every intention of re-reviewing previous chapters, I want to keep up with current ones. I think that's just as if not more important. Perhaps I can pay more attention to my spelling and such in my  rewrites! lol. I tend to do them so quickly that my fingers go faster than my brain. I need to slow down a bit an pay attention. Otherwise it just looks sloppy. shame this comment area doesn't have spell check. Anyway.........   ;)

Marilyn covered nicely. Daphne however wasn't fooled for a minute. Sharp as a tack that one. Her reation to the actual truth was funny though. I can just see her trouncing out with  "Whatever...." coming out of her mouth. Will she be forced to believe the truth eventually? Hmmmm.

While the convo between Ted and Jen was natural and all, I could just imagine Ted's, or any male's reaction to Jen's breastfeeding comment. LOL! nice touch there.

HEY!! I'm a bank teller! One thatwill happily help screw over Craig. Hmmmm amazing how well you know me after such a short period of time. ;) HAHAH! 4% bucks per account. I can't wait to hear about Craig's reaction to that. At least it's for the kid's. Is the full amount there or has he been dipping into it?

Justin and Emmett together is always a good time. Emmett gets to see his future honey, and knows now that he's going to have to make Drew work for it. He w on't be a push over this time, waiting in the wings for the guy to grow up. Nope. Emmett knows he deserves more than that.

Whew..glad justin laid it out to Ben that he has a boyfriend. I can totally see Ben being attracted to Justin. They seen a much better match than Ben and Michael. I remember Ben noticing him at Babylon that one night. I guess he thought he'd found his opportunity. He gracefully backed off at least.

Terrific chapter. Off to read the next one.

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 06, 2016 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

Even though I know that Brian and Justin get together watching Mikey try to convince Brian that he doesn't do blonds is just ecky.  Michael ordering Brian around as if he owns him is funny.  He insists Brian go into the store, which was a good thing, because Brian got to be up close and personal with Justin, and then getting angry because Brian behaved, well, like Brian makes me want to shake my head. 

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 06, 2016 1:13 am Title: Chapter 46

Great update. Like all the little changes.

thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2016 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 12

Fuck me....that whole insurance thing drove me nuts in the show! It's what really made me begin to question them, and semi dislike them. Thankfully Brian is on to their games and called them on it. He's not going to put up with their shit since he sees them for who they really are, and their motivations. Entitlement, selfishness and greed.

Lindsey's little blow up is sure to make mel wonder even more than she already is. Teling brian that Justin isn't moving in?! Really?!? Pretty nervy if  you ask me adn then just trounces away. She and Michael both are petulant children.

LOL...Michael telling Brian that "he'll handle the kid" I think Brian will prefer to do his own style of handling. :) At least Justin didn't listen and still went over to the loft.

cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: MissMerlot Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2016 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Huzzah it's back...and as fantastic as ever!

Author's Response:

Don't ever hit delete. Lol

Reviewer: Angelhead Devilbed Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2016 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, yay! I was afraid this was gone! Really enjoying this, although I do get a bit confused at times, lol!

Author's Response:

Me too lol