Date: Oct 31, 2016 1:37 am Title: Chapter 70
What a PERFECT ending to a wonderfully crafted story! I'm so happy that everyone is leading the lives they were meant to lead, Dumb and Dumber nonwithstanding. It's funny that even given another chance, Lindsay and Michael remain self-absorbed, self-serving little cretins. Whereas one of them will get another chance to get it right (although I doubt he will) the other is on a one way street of open highway straight to hell.
Vic was reborn to be Hunter's son and Kira's soulmate- my heart weeps with joy because of that! Emmett has his Lulu, Brian has his Jenny back and they all are Co-parents to the next generation! I'm also happy that Ben left Michael and went on to find someone who truly deserves him. Brianna was just too adorable with her brothers at the wedding.
Looking forward to your next work!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 31, 2016 1:10 am Title: Chapter 70
Just wonderful. Very satisfying ending.
Date: Oct 31, 2016 1:06 am Title: Chapter 70
I did like the ending. You tied up all the loose ends nicely. I love the epilogue that shows what happens in the far future.
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2016 12:17 am Title: Chapter 70
No fair making me all teary-eyed and happy with the life Brian and Justin got to live of their own choosing.
Michael chose his destiny that is why he is never happy perhaps one day he will get it right, the Connor James twist was very surprising and I do wonder if they really could work?
Not surprised about the Lindsay situation she never learned from her mistakes and no one can fix stupid.
I just love how everyone found happiness in their lives most especially Brian and Justin they are truly two people who are destined to be together in every life.
I can't wait to read it all over again.
Thank You So Much :)
Date: Oct 30, 2016 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 70
Beautiful fic, with a beautiful ending!
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Date: Oct 30, 2016 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 70
What a beautiful ending to a sweet story. I loved this and am glad there were only HAPPY moments in this last chapter.
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 70
What an ending. We not only get to see Kira born, but we learn about their futures. I'm going to enjoy rereading this story start to finish all over again. Lucking forward to whatever you come up with next!
Date: Oct 30, 2016 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 69
Wow...Lindz is seriously delusional. So glad they caught the bombers!
Date: Oct 30, 2016 11:27 am Title: Chapter 69
I just love this story. I know I say it every chapter but it is so true. I'm so excited to see where their future goes.
Date: Oct 30, 2016 2:29 am Title: Chapter 69
YES! I cheered as Mel handed Mitch the paper revoking his rights. Michael would kill a cactus, so I can only imagine how he would screw up a child. His threat of making enough money someday to sue Mel for custody was laughable. The first question that popped into my head was 'Doing what?' I doubt Red Cape makes enough to pay for itself much less provide a substantial income. Hell he's such a mama's boy that Debbie is STILL supporting him! If I was Carl, I would have gotten up and left the room too to keep from knocking the bastard off the chair. Trying to knock sense into Michael would be the equivalent of swimming in lava- absolutely impossible!
As for Lindsay: call me a heartless bitch but I don't feel sorry for the drugged-up idiot at all. She shouldn't have made that deal in the first place. And with Cunty Claire of all people? I think she would have stood a better chance of making a deal with Jack instead and we all know he's burning in hell. 'Why can't I go back to purgatory' indeed!! This is a classic case of reaping what one sows and the 'Three strikes' rule. Lindsay has to pay the piper and it's about time!
Loved the fact that no one was injured because of a bomb this time! All of those hypocritical heretics should receive long prison sentences for conspiring to commit a hate crime. Also loved the fact that Brandon tried for Justin and got shut DOWN! He's not even in Justin or Brian's league, thinking he can play with the King and Crowned Prince of Liberty Avenue. Boy Toy please!! Have several seats and pay attention...SMH!
WRITE On Star!
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 1:37 am Title: Chapter 69
Michael found out he had to actually pay support and couldn't wait to sign his rights away, Mel has nothing to worry about when it comes to Michael cause he will never have the money to support Jenny, he couldn't even support himself.
Glad they were able to prevent the bombing so no one had to die due to others hate.
Lindsay wasted her chance to change her history so this time she has to deal with the consequences, Claire is sending visions of Hell to Lindsay to provoke her to help change her destiny but that will never change.
Deb got out of purgatory she finally admitted that she was wrong so now she and Vic are both out.
Will Lindsay try again?
Will Michael ever get a clue?
Date: Oct 30, 2016 1:14 am Title: Chapter 69
I hate saying this, but poor Lindsay. Michael will never change. I love that it was just some random wacko bombing Babylon. This is a very sweet story.
Date: Oct 29, 2016 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 68
I don't understand Ben, he could have left and ground a happier life. Instead he whines? Maybe he loves Michael more than he's saying, I guess it's possible.
Date: Oct 29, 2016 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 68
Brilliant update, love how it follows the actually show's verse, but a great twist of AU.
Thanks for sharing>
JoAnn
Date: Oct 29, 2016 2:12 pm Title: Chapter 68
I'm glad that everyone was there for Deb to help with Vic's funeral. I'm still sad about it. As for Michael, he is selfish and self-centered as always. I don't blame Hereafter Ben for trying to stop Here-and-Now Ben from repeating the mistake of asking Michael to marry him. I think Michael only proposed so that he could be the center of attention. God forbid that his mother steals his thunder for even one moment to be happy and get engaged to a man she loves. Michael is truly naive if he thinks that it should have been an automatic response when in fact agreeing to marry someone should be planned and well-thought out. To tie lives together is serious business and Michael seems to believe that just because he wants something he should have it. Spoiled much? I, for one, am happy they didn't get married because honestly, I don't think they'll last. I could just imagine Michael's face when he was told Brian proposed to Justin. Yep both him and Ben are definitely using each other as consolation prizes.
WRITE On Star,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2016 4:29 am Title: Chapter 68
Love what you did with Vic's death. Much better. The ride from Canada and Michael proposing, now that was funny and painful. I feel Ben's pain. Not getting married is probably for the best.
Date: Oct 28, 2016 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 67
Two fantastic updates!
Thanks for sharing.
JoAnn
Date: Oct 27, 2016 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 67
Michael is the most pathetic and selfish person ever. Brian was right not to tell him. I was always pissed that he knew in the series and that he broke Justin's trust by selfishly blabbing to Brian that he knew. Brian ended up taking care of him and Michael's need for sympathy while Justin got kicked to the curb. Even typing that I feel my hackles rise all over again! So glad that even though they had to redo this arc, Brian and Justin got it RIGHT!
Emmett is such a darling and as friends go, so different from Michael. Not only does he respect Brian but he also respects Justin's place in Brian's life. Sure he could have pitched a bitch for being one of the last to know about Brian's condition but as a true friend, he didn't care about the whys, hows and wheretofores just about Brian being okay. Is there any wonder why I love him and love writing about him? Emmett is definitely the Anti-Mikey!
Speaking of rightness.... The scene with Brian and Kira....<inhaling deeply and trying to stop the tears> It was so emotional regardless of how brief it was. My dad was my BFF and I would like to imagine that if I was going through something as traumatic as Brian, that God would give me those few moments to be with him again. Definitely a beautifully-written scene and one that is sure to stay in Brian's memories for a very long time.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 27, 2016 7:34 pm Title: Chapter 67
The way you have worked out what can change and what can't is uncanny. It boggles my mind how you are able to do that. that Darren's attack is so significant in Emmett meeting Drew. So impressive that you've been able to do that. Starting to feel bad for Mailyn. LOL. Poor girl is really taking the brunt of their frustrations isn't she? Ah well...thus is teh life of a conduit between this world and the next. ;)
Nice moment between Brian and Kira.
Good grief. Can Michael BE more selfish?! ARG! I just want to reach through and kick his sorry ass!! Thankfully it seems nobody is really siding with him at the moment. Lord help us when/if Lindsey finds out! What's going to happen when Michael tells absolutely everyone, whining about how Brian should've come to him rather than Justin. What will Deb do? Hmmmmmmmmm
Still continually amazed at you attention to detail in this. I look forward to this update everyday! Between this on and your other, how do you even have a life???
Cheers and Thank you!!!
Elaine
Date: Oct 27, 2016 1:02 pm Title: Chapter 67
How is it Mikey still thinks they are best friends? Justin isn't invisible and Brian has made it clear again and again that he is with Justin. Mikey's delusions and Lindsay ridiculousness are astonishing!
I think the direct tough love is the best.
Date: Oct 27, 2016 10:54 am Title: Chapter 67
I just want to punch Michael. It's so true that everything always seems to be about him. The world doesn't revolve around you dummy!
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2016 4:07 am Title: Chapter 67
Michael and his it's all about how I feel and not about Brian having cancer. I'm with Emmett on this. Get over it, Michael.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2016 3:48 am Title: Chapter 67
So sorry that while Brian and Justin were dealing with Brian's cancer they didn't take your feelings into consideration, they were just dealing with something traumatic and decided to put their feelings first....Sorry Michael.
Yeah Sorry You're a Selfish Dumbass!!!
I am so happy he doesn't know where Brian and Justin live so they can get some peace from his whiny voice.
Good that Deb won't live with regret this time when Vic dies she has the support she needs to help her through this sad time.
Emmett telling Michael to get over himself was good too bad Captain Pea-brian won't listen.
Just loved the part with the chicken soup it was so sweet and so Brian and Justin, it was good this time they were able to share this together cause it just strengthens their love for one another.
Wonderful Chapter :)
Date: Oct 26, 2016 10:59 am Title: Chapter 66
I just love each scene you let us relive. Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2016 1:59 am Title: Chapter 66
Well you officially went through the Stockwell phase and everyone but Stockwell came out on top. Fantastic.