Date: Oct 11, 2016 7:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
How to make your very own Sargeant Pain in the Ass:
Add plans to exclude your partner but entrap a reluctant sperm donor
Insert Captain Pain in the Ass and then proceed to enforce rules and state opinions which again exclude your partner but thrusts said sperm donor into the role of full-time dad (for appearances of course)
Insult Captain Pita using a sugary honeyed voice so that the passive-aggressive sarcasm so that it sounds like a backhand compliment and goes over an idiot's head
Use unchecked Bitchiness as a preserver and sprinkle it liberally over reluctant sperm donor and his jealous sidekick. And now you have:
LINDSAY- SARGEANT PAIN IN THE ASS!
Lawd Brian..with 'Friends' like these, how did you keep your SANITY?!
Then that little whiny weasel takes the opportunity to play Peeping Tom while Brian's changing... Brian has always had too much self-restraint when it came to Michael's stalkerish tendencies. He should have kicked him out as soon as he noticed the pint-sized pervert with his all-too-seeing eyes!
Thank goodness Brian has an ally in Marilyn! I doubt he will put a foot wrong as soon as he moves out of the prison of friendship that Michael and Lindsay built for him.
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2016 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 52
Love the differences here. Mother Taylor laid it on the line and told Joanie what she'd always needed to hear. Wonderful chapter.
Date: Oct 11, 2016 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
This first chapter has me hooked. If Gus has a grandbaby, then Justin has been waiting for Brian a long time. Great start for this tale.
Date: Oct 11, 2016 4:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
How to make Captain Pain in the Ass:
Add a clingy Michael and make him CLUELESS
Then add in an unhealthy dose of Obsession and Jealousy
subtract common sense, independence and courage to have a sense of self
Remember to Add at will incessant whining and petulance with the IQ of a Q-tip and there you have it:
MICHAEL NOVOTNY aka CAPTAIN PAIN IN THE ASS!!
Off to review the next chapter!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 11, 2016 4:46 am Title: Chapter 52
Go mama Taylor. Loved it I have always wanted to her in her place. Ty for another great chapter
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2016 3:40 am Title: Chapter 52
I Love Jennifer for standing by her sons while putting Joan in her place along with her sanctimonious objections.
Come on Joan don't stand there acting like the paragon of Motherly Virtue when you let your husband beat your son while you drank and spewed your hate, don't also stand there spouting the bible while you are twelve sheets to the wind, especially since you aren't paying for the funeral or helping to plan it.
Brian is doing this as the last goodbye to Jack Kinney and his failure as a father after this Brian can finally put to rest the stigma of being anything like Jack or Joan.
I love that Brian is being more open to Justin and he is finally ready to embrace that not all relationships have to be like his parents.
I hope Michael doesn't come to the funeral he will just whine and ask why Brian didn't come to him, no one needs that drama Joan and Claire will be supplying enough.
Good to hear that Peter like Brian got away and also broke the cycle of abuse, he deserves to be happy too though he was barely mentioned on the show, I would like to think he was more like Brian and ran as fast and as far as he could without looking back.
Can't Wait For The Next Update :)
Date: Oct 10, 2016 9:04 pm Title: Chapter 50
Wow, finally Mikey gets what he deserves from Brian aand the rest of the family their to witness it, Great!
Fantastic update, thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Thank you for sticking with me.
Date: Oct 10, 2016 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 50
That was a great chapter. I love that everyone heard what Michael said. It was funny that no one came to Michael aid. Marilyn is to funny. I would have wanyed to see it too.
Author's Response:
Thanks for enjoying it.
Date: Oct 10, 2016 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 51
I really enjoy this story- the alternate reality where they both remember but try to make it better this time. This is only teh first season- are you going to rewrite the entire series until Justin leaves?
Author's Response:
I'm still debating how to do that without this becoming too long. Nothing is going to be the same because it changes with how they change. Maybe I'll turn this into a series, and work it from that.
Date: Oct 10, 2016 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 50
OMG!!! Loved it! Did not expect Mikey to get hit, certainly not twice, but -- yay!!!! And having Marilyn just show up was perfection!
Author's Response:
We all wanted to see that, I was hoping up and down to write it.
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2016 3:53 am Title: Chapter 51
Michael trying to get pity isn't going to work if Emmett has anything to say about it. The Mikey and David show seems to be running it's course. That Michael has to go to Brian to figure out what to do is par for the course. That he still thinks that Brian is the one for him is delusional. Love Ted in all this. That Michael is all buddy buddy with Justin after saying he wished him dead is signs of bipolar. Now we have a problem with Chris. Pulling Justin into a bathroom? Come on, if anything says he's a fellow fag that probably did. Daphne is having too much fun with screwing with Hobbs. Love what you've done with this recycle.
Author's Response:
I always wondered about Chris, I mean what straight guy let's another guy give him a hand job. All the guys I know would have freaked the minute another guy tried, but he didn't until someone could have found out?
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2016 2:49 am Title: Chapter 51
Michael running to Brian to fix his problems with David and to finally say the words he has been longing to hear since he was fourteen.
I am surprised he can get up in the morning without calling Brian to find out what he should wear? (Would help him look like an adult instead of questions child pretending to be one), he really is a child who feels everyone should just fix the problem while he plays with his action figures.
Proud of Brian for facing his father's death with Justin by his side instead of Michael, I always felt Justin should have been there cause the kiss in the bowling alley made me cringe and it helped Michael hold on to that myth that he was more important than Justin and that Brian would choose him one day.
I do wonder if Chris will actually stand before the school and speak or will have chicken out like, he also needs to figure out himself maybe this time he will figure it out so everyone can avoid the bashing.
Hope Michael leaves with David even a few months peace is worth the whining if he stays and his constant chasing after Brian.
Another Great Update, Can't Wait To Find Out What Happens Next :)
Author's Response:
I think with the changes Brian would have cringed too. Thanks for your review.
Date: Oct 10, 2016 2:24 am Title: Chapter 51
Wow another chapter...yay. ty so much. Looking forward to more of this great story.
Date: Oct 10, 2016 12:35 am Title: Chapter 1
I've got to agree with Marilyn...nothing like Miley getting hitðŸ¤
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2016 12:22 am Title: Chapter 50
They changed how they acted before and still Michael acts like an Ass and humiliated Deb, I love this time they are all realizing that by always letting Michael get away with acting like a selfish jerk they are just feeding into he can do wrong and get away with it.
Deb is seeing how selfish and self-absorbed her son really is and how just forgiving him just means that he has free reign to continue to say and do whatever he wants, she is seeing how her babying and coddling him while blaming others for his actions has given her a spoiled, conceited man-child with no real remorse.
Brian, Ted and Emmett taking a step back is good they are letting Deb figure out that Michael is not the Angel she always told herself he was.
I just loved when Michael crossed the line by attacking Justin and this time everyone got to hear his vile words and understand why Brian hit him, also like that he got thrown out on his Ass and everyone comforted Brian instead.
Brian and Justin are trying to give Michael the chance to change his story but he enjoys the loop too much and he loves that old broken record of Brian will finally choose him.
He just continues to ignore that Brian will never choose him and that the only person besides Gus that Brian loves is one Justin Taylor.
Michael is going to up the whiny now that he has been hit by Brian, I wonder what David is thinking now that he has seen Michael in action?
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter:)
Date: Oct 09, 2016 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 50
So in love with this story. Ty for another great chapter... you just made my day. I reallly do not like Mikey or lindz in the show so this just tickles me pink. Ty
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2016 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 50
Love your turn of events. I would be surprised if David sticks with Michael after this. A few little changes and still Mikey makes an ass of himself. Saying that everyone should hope that Justin dies was a death wish for Michael. At least everyone heard this time. Love the punch in the face and looks like Marilyn did too.
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2016 3:21 am Title: Chapter 49
Having Daphne around to help makes this even more amusing. They might want to draw him pictures just to remind him. This party is going to be soooo embarressing if he messes up.
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2016 8:28 pm Title: Chapter 48
Love this verse. If I haven't mentioned, I'm not a Mikey fan or Linz.
Fantastic update, thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2016 4:47 am Title: Chapter 48
Now that was an interesting birthday. I wonder where David got the idea for getting Mikey the action figure and comic book?
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2016 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 47
I'm really worried about Daphne. What is Chris going to do since we know they are going to keep him from bashing Justin? Where is Mysterious Marilyn when you need her? I love that Justin is finally getting his picnic and on his birthday no less. Go Emmett!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2016 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 46
Mikey's birthday sounds like it's going to be interesting. Having Jen looking after Gus will solve a lot of problems. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2016 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 45
Glad to see Ted taking Jennifer under his wing. He's smart about money. Emmett and Justin seem to have found not only Drew but Ben as well. Want to know where you take them in this timeline.
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2016 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 44
Mikey wants Brian to love him that he's not considering any other possibility. Craig and the Conversion Therapy was new and thank goodness for the art club it didn't work. Just goes to show that Justin had more friends then he knew.
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2016 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 43
David is definately not a jackass this time around. That right is reserved for Mikey. Shame that Deb had to clean up by herself, but no one wanted to stay around Mikey.