Date: Oct 18, 2016 3:19 am Title: Chapter 37
Chris is a nuisance! Why doesn't he just jump out the closet and admit that he's BI already? There is no way that he is 100% straight. As for Mark...that boy barking up the Brian tree will get you hurt! No way Brian would have been into some cookie cutter Twink. Even at the tender age of 17, Justin wasn't that.
Glad that Justin was able to talk to Vic. He definitely needs some restoration of his self-esteem. I can't imagine living with micromanaging Mama Deb has been easy for him. She was good for infantilizing the people around her unless it involved Michael. Then he remained her grown ass infant and it was everyone else to take care of the 'baby.' With Vic occupied with Em, Debbie will have to raise her grown child to a man.
Date: Oct 18, 2016 2:23 am Title: Chapter 60
Oh wow....I didn't see that coming.
Date: Oct 18, 2016 1:18 am Title: Chapter 60
I loe how Jennifer gets to see Justin and hopefully change the life he had the last time around. I've always liked Jen in the later seasons
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2016 1:08 am Title: Chapter 60
Got me all teary-eyed cause Jennifer is back to help her boys as much as she can, so happy that she stepped in to help Hunter that custody battle is going to be very interesting.
I see Michael still hasn't learned his lesson and is trying to get Brian to admit to something he never felt, so Ben wants a chance with Justin too bad that will never happen.
It is his own fault that he never stood up to Michael loving someone doesn't mean you have to be subservient to them and their temper tantrums, I never understood the attraction Ben had for Michael, I can understand why Michael chose him cause he is willing to do anything to have someone who will take of him?
I Look forward to more :)
Date: Oct 18, 2016 12:53 am Title: Chapter 60
Awwww the ending so sweet
Date: Oct 18, 2016 12:03 am Title: Chapter 60
I am in tears...so touching! God I love Jen!
The first time she said 'Hunter', I knew....so great!
Date: Oct 17, 2016 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 60
OMG OMG Jenn! What a nice twist!
Date: Oct 17, 2016 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 60
I love that you brought back Jen. The big guy upstairs must really want Justin and Brian to get the life they were suppose to. And I bet Kira has a lot to do with that too.
Great writing.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 60
Soooo, I'm writing this in tears. That was such an incredibly amazing wonderful chapter! thank you for bringing back Jen. I really don't have much more to say about this one. It was perfection. Hunter is going to be safe with Jen, so that Brian and Justin can battle on.
I'm going to re-read this when I get home from work tonight.
Loved this beyond measure!
JEN IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2016 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 60
Ahah! I thought her knowing Hunter's name was a little hinky. I'm glad she was able to come back to help.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on another finished story. I am in awe of how fast you write. Keep up the amazing work! TAG
Date: Oct 17, 2016 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 59
I have so much catcing up to do with reviews. Sorry!!
This is a very interesting twist you put in there! If Brian weren't in teh picture, Ben would be a very complimentary partner for Justin in some ways. Like many, I never understood the attraction to Michael on Ben's part. I never understood him putting up with Michael's assumed place in Brian's life. Mind you, I never understood Brian putting up with it. all very strange when you think about it and extremely unhealthy in so many ways. The fact that Ben is being so "forthcoming" with his advances is really strange. I hope he gets the picture quickly!! Curious if he ends up diciding to Michae la chance in this life, but with obvious adjustments. I won't put up with Michael's shit. but will Michael want Ben? So far it's not looking so good.
Great idea for them to look for Hunter and to put him with Jenn is utterly brilliant!! she's perfect and Hunter won't become the little asshole. (I mean that with affection)
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2016 2:00 am Title: Chapter 59
So where does that leave Ben? I like that you thought of them getting to Hunter before he gets HIV. Remember how Deb was when she found out Ben was positive?
Author's Response:
Ben is still going to be end up with Michael, but I don't plan to have him role over to Michael's whims. Deb isn't going to be any better, she's a mom, I'd have a hard time with my child wanting a relationship with someone who could kill them with a broken condom. I understand where she was coming from.
Date: Oct 17, 2016 12:27 am Title: Chapter 58
Very interesting. If I didn't love Brian and Justin together I could so wrap my mind around a Justin/Ben pairing.
Date: Oct 16, 2016 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 58
Wow the ending I wasn't expecting that lol god i love this fic
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2016 8:07 pm Title: Chapter 58
Boy is that a change. I like it. So ghost Ben has decided what we all know that Michael isn't the one for him. Love, love, love where you're taking this.
Date: Oct 16, 2016 3:58 pm Title: Chapter 57
Michael really is pathetic. He cannot make a damn decision on his own. I don't know why anyone would want to have their life dictated to them.
Mel, Brian, and Justin are Gus' parents whether Michael wants to believe that or not.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Michael doesn’t shift much in the show, it was all about him. If it wasn’t he couldn’t accept it.
Date: Oct 16, 2016 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 57
He's back already? Ugh lol. I'll say it again unless he finds a way to change why would Mel have Jenny with him?
Brian and Justin deserve happiness even with a cheat sheet.
Deb is finally seeing Mikey, it won't Matt really. I've found that mothers and sons have strange dynamics, in the end he's her little baby regardless of what he does.
Author's Response:
Michael is always going to come back, he resists change, through out the whole show.
Date: Oct 16, 2016 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 56
Ok no one scream but poor Chris. I get it, seeing someone that shakes your foundation, and seeing that they are happy while happiness illudes you. Coming to terms with being different can take a lot -- no it shouldn't take violence and a baseball bat but... Let's hope he rides a d*ck and learns to live with who he is.
Awww, the painting was perfect! We made it they the prom!
I am enjoying this. Thanks so much!
[Delete]Author's Response:
Why scream? We aren’t seeing the same Chris. I get what your feeling, he is confused. The writers of the show seem to make everyone but Chris gay. Yet kept putting him in places someone straight wouldn’t have gone too, like Liberty Avenue. Why purposely go somewhere you could get outed in front of his friends? Chris could have been an example of someone who was scared of his sexuality, but instead they let that story pass them by, to show a bashing. People like this Chris exist and live dual lives to hide from the truth. It would have been a contrast to Justin not caring what the world thought. At least that's my take on it.
So I appreciate that you read my version and saw a new perspective. Thank you, I think it’s a great compliment.
Date: Oct 16, 2016 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 54
Hey those tidy whities made Justin the favorite -- it's was very Catholic School boy. Mikey is so thick. He just sees what he wants to see. I have no idea how Jenny is going to be born.
Author's Response:
Brian wants Jenny back, so he is going to make it happen.
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2016 5:19 am Title: Chapter 57
Boy you can spell things out and still Mikey doesn't get it. Glad to see that Justin graduated with his class and is going to Carnigie Mellon and NOT doing a comic with Michael. Of course with Michael's attitude, David was going to send him home anyway.
Author's Response:
I've always seen Michael as a child looking for someone to take care of him. In the show he linked his identity to who he had relationships with. The only problem with doing that is he was denying who he was.
Date: Oct 16, 2016 3:38 am Title: Chapter 57
Aw too short is my only complaint lol A part from that good chapter
Author's Response:
Sorry I'm working on two storiesat the same time. I wanted to leave Michael and Ben for the next chapter, because the guys are going to have to convince Ben to take Michael on.
Date: Oct 15, 2016 2:16 pm Title: Chapter 56
Awwwww that last scene was so sweet! "Dad come play with me" Love it!
It was so great hearing Emmett tell the cunty jock what he likes about being a gay man. Of course he got hard! lol Even better when Brian punched the fucker! Hope that's the end of Chris...
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Chris isn’t going to be back, he’s not relevant to this new life. If I put him in, I think he distracts from the changes that happen, because he's no longer, Justin torment and Brian regret.
Date: Oct 15, 2016 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 56
It was always very clear to me that Chris was in the closet but wanted to blame someone else for how he felt.
Author's Response:
It made more sense than him being straight, but still going after Justin all the time.
[Report This]Date: Oct 15, 2016 4:32 am Title: Chapter 56
The prom went better than I would have thought. Not only was the art class behind them, but Emmett and Ted were as well. Emmett really went after Chris. I'm so proud. I'd be more worried about Dixon. That something he says are does changes things with Chris once again. It is so nice that Brian's getting to know Kira.
Author's Response:
Don't you think it was strange that Justin only had one friend? I get they couldn't write in a hundred characters but he had to have other people in his life.