Date: Oct 10, 2017 9:56 am Title: Chapter 10 - Casserole Chats.
Debbie is great and making the tuna noodle casserole for them for one of their chats was brilliant. She will be a great mother figure for the young man if he takes up the offer and maybe it will get him to talk. Now that he got a bit of confidence to write his name, I think Justin suites him perfectly.
Im starting next chapter soon, fantastic work
Date: Oct 10, 2017 9:53 am Title: Chapter 9 - PC in Advertising.
That was a fantastic thing for Brian to do, to get him to help at work like that. My heart was beating so fast at to what could have happened if he took those tablets, thank god Brian understood what J327 was trying to tell him or this could have been a disaster.
Date: Oct 10, 2017 9:50 am Title: Chapter 8 - PC Problems.
Brian meeting his son really touched my heart and the way held him and showed his love through his eyes. I loved that he let J327 hold him, that might have given him so much confidence and trust.
grrr I wanted to punch Lindsey how dare you say that, I hope Melcan help here as I think she is thinking about what is most important. Please let this be fixed and be ok or my heart will shatter.
Date: Oct 10, 2017 9:46 am Title: Chapter 7 - Hurt and Comfort.
Panic attacks are horrible ax someone who gets them I know how it feels. Brian handled that so well, I'm very proud of him.
Date: Oct 10, 2017 9:44 am Title: Chapter 6 - Defining Normal.
My heart is breaking, the poor young man is going through hell in his head and damaged heart. Eating like that and not knowing it was ok to stop when full or going to the toilet when he needs to. What made me happy was what he did in helping Brian at work that was a. Bit of a shining light.
Date: Oct 10, 2017 9:42 am Title: Chapter 5 - Meet The PC
Brian's friends here are great and I think if he lets them help and they gain the trust of J327
Date: Oct 10, 2017 9:40 am Title: Chapter 4 - Homecoming.
Sapp needs to put in the program and shown what the poor people go through. My heart bleed for the young man here and I could feel Brian's break at what he was seeing happen in front of him.
I hope Brian can help him and to gain confidence and trust.
Date: Oct 10, 2017 9:37 am Title: Chapter 3 - Sale of The Century.
Brian's heart is huge and I was hoping that he would step in and help save J327, I know he will help him and I pray that all will be ok and to see what the reactions of the others may be.
Date: Oct 10, 2017 9:35 am Title: Chapter 2 - Far From Fair.
Grrrr that Bullweather gives me the creeps big time and add in the vile creep that is Sap as well, I need a shower to wash them off. That taser thing made me gasp and want to jump into the story and know the idiots down. I was going to use a cuss words there but thought that wouldn't be right.
Date: Oct 10, 2017 9:31 am Title: Chapter 1: The Business of Love
Wow I can't blame Brian for feeling like did while attending that and I'm sure a shower is needed to wash the filth of the handlers and owners made him feel dirty I hope Brian can do do something to help J327.
Note: I am a few chapters in and loving it, lots of tears. I just wanted to let you know because I'm reviewing the ones I have read and I didn't want to confuse you as to why I was reviewing so many in a short time.
Date: May 24, 2017 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 46 - PC Search.
Sorry Tag. You lost me. Not my kind of thing. I've always felt like I need to puke, when violence rises at this level. There's something insane in these situations. I quit
Date: May 24, 2017 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 42 - PC Play Time.
I'm reading this story and till now it was amazing... This chapter is really too much for me. Too much graphic violence: I've skipped quite the entire chapter. Hope it is the only one like this 😣
Date: May 02, 2017 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Business of Love
Congratulations for the award! Let's prepare some mimosas!
I hope your muse will be happy and will boost your creativity.
Will you work on a summer delight in the coming weeks?
Author's Response:
You should definitely sip on a mimosa or two while reading this! LOL. And yes, we do have an idea for a summer collaborative story - will probably start that in June. Get ready to write! TAG
Date: Apr 11, 2017 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 37 - VanGuard Fallout.
Fucking Vance!!
I really hope that the files Cynthia copied come in handy for Brian.
Author's Response:
I agree with you about Vance - he's almost as bad as the official bad guys. And, yes, those files will come in handy - keep reading. TAG
Date: Apr 11, 2017 4:05 pm Title: Chapter 36 - It’s All About Trust.
I literally got teary eyed at the end of this chapter.
Author's Response:
This is one of those chapters where, when I go back and read it, I'm amazed that *I* wrote that. Sometimes the story just takes over and writes itself and then I go back and read it and wonder how the heck I wrote that. Glad you liked it. TAG
Date: Apr 11, 2017 4:03 pm Title: Chapter 35 - PC Tricking and Jealousy.
Evil!David *punch, slash, cut, kill*
Author's Response:
There are just so many bad guys in this fic, how do you pick which one you hate the most? LOL. TAG
Date: Apr 11, 2017 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 34 - Nobody and Nothing.
Did this cause you as much stress writing it, as it did for me reading it? My heart was pounding.
Author's Response:
YES! Some of these chapters were brutal to write. I do love a good angsty story - especially in the depths of darkest winter - but this one . . . well, Poor Justin isn't saying enough, is it? And the really abusive parts I had to write about weren't fun at all. Especially since I was sort of dreaming about this story pretty much every night while I was writing it. But, that's the story that wanted to be written, so I didn't have much choice. TAG
Date: Apr 11, 2017 3:57 pm Title: Chapter 33 - All That PC Plot Stuff.
I'm so glad that you have switched it up and made Lindsay total anti. I wonder if she can switch it around or if she'll cause more problems for Brian and Justin.
Oh...I adore Emmett. I can actually hear his voice through your writing. Very well done. :)
Date: Apr 11, 2017 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Investigations and Manipulations.
Still binging, but stopping in! :D
Your description of Bedwetter's ugly, smegma ridden, bent 5 inch uncut dick had me chuckling and gagging (not in a life-affirming way). You are wonderful!
I HATE Stockwell and hope Rex is able to help Justin somehow.
Author's Response:
Good thing you were able to laugh through the icky parts. LOL. I HATE Stockwell and Bellweather too. And Rex . . . well, keep reading and you'll see. TAG
Date: Apr 10, 2017 5:48 pm Title: Chapter 23 - PC Therapy.
I just had to pop in and tell you how much I am loving this story. I started it last night and haven't been able to stop during my waking hours.
I'm off to read more!
Author's Response:
LOL! I love encouraging a good binge read! Glad you're enjoying this one. Happy reading. TAG
Date: Mar 29, 2017 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 40 - PC In Art.
Wonderful reaction from Brian. What will Lindsey do. Try to restore her friendship with Brian, I'm curious.
Date: Mar 15, 2017 5:17 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Hurt and Comfort.
Hopefully the birth of Gus will help Justin to talk to Brian.
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2017 12:57 am Title: Chapter 1: The Business of Love
Just finished....absolutely loved it! Bravo!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Thrilled to hear you liked it as much as I liked writing it! TAG
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2017 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 18 - The Aftermath.
Poor Justin. Poor Brian. At least Cynthia was trying to help.
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2017 2:37 pm Title: Chapter 17 - After Dinner.
I'm glad that Brian got his check. But why is Ryder spreading the rumor that Brian needs the money to pay for his PC? Shame they didn't call the cops.