Date: Feb 08, 2017 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 44 - PC Missing.
I forgot : thank you for the quick update!
Author's Response:
You're welcome! I'm at the point in this story where I'm dreaming about it at night even, so the chapters are coming pretty quick. If only I didn't have to work or sleep . . . TAG
Date: Feb 08, 2017 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 44 - PC Missing.
OK, one pitcher of Mimosas for tonight; I wouldn't want to stop your creative flow, would I? It's a too sensitive part of the story!
I vote for Rex, in a cellar where the gps signal won't get thru...
As for Lindsey, I suggest to make her walk almost naked on liberty avenue, with a collar and a chastity belt; she is so prude in public; and then, at night, to make her stay on her knees while the others have dinner and fun!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the return of my Mimosas! As for the other person in the cell with Justin . . . not gonna give that one away just yet. Sorry. You'll have to wait to see which of the other PCs are going to help our Justin. As for Lindsey, it looks like she's universally unpopular and therefore she's going to have to go down big time. Let's see what I can do . . . TAG
Date: Feb 08, 2017 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 43 - PC Poaching.
No more Mimosas for you!!! This is a horrible cliffhanger!
I want to punch Lindsey so much, and punch her some more. She doesn't realize how Brian will ban her for life.
You're taking away my Mimosas? *sad author pouting* TAG
Author's Response:
Date: Feb 08, 2017 6:37 pm Title: Chapter 43 - PC Poaching.
OH - MY - F*cking - God -TAG! This chappter has me sick to my stomach. I cannot handle reading about Justin being hurt (especially the sweet, vulnerable, incredibly damaged Justin you portray in this story.) And even worse at the hands of that bastard Bellweather!! PLEASE do not let him get that chance!! I am horrifyingly heart broken for Justin.
I would like to skin Lindsay and poor salt all over her and leave her in the sun. That GOD DAMN F*cking *&^%&*!!!!! No punishment is severe enough for her. i hope you sick both Brian and Cynthia on her!!! I am beside myself on this.
It is amazing how emotionally charged I can get from reading about fictional character! That is a true testiment to your incredible wriring skills!!
Lisa
Author's Response:
I love that you're as angry at this story as you seem to be from your comments. It means that I'm doing this writing thing correctly. I happen to agree with you about how horrible they all are. I'm working on fixing it. Just hang in there. TAG
Date: Feb 08, 2017 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 43 - PC Poaching.
Hi,
I finally caught up, and I don’t know what to say. Where we are
now is simply terrible, awful, ……. How can Justin ever trust, ever
hope again? How are we as readers ever to hope again. If Justin
is further tortured, I don’t think we can.
I hope you take this as a complement that I care enough to
make a plea for Justin’s physical and mental health. At this point,
I don’t see how that I possible.
Well -- I may as well also ask that Lindsey gets %&%)>. I don’t
have words to describe how angry I am with her.
DavidR
Author's Response:
I'm sorry that last chapter was truly so horrible. I had a hard time even writing it. But don't write Justin off yet. He's stronger than he seems and so is the spirit inside him. Plus, I have some things in my bag of tricks that will help him hold on to a bit of hope. It's great to hear how riled up all the readers are over this, because it means I've done something right. If you're not upset over this kind of wrong, then either I didn't write it very well, or you're not human. And thank you for the compliment as well as for reading my stories. Now, off to figure out Lindsey's demise. TAG
Date: Feb 08, 2017 3:58 am Title: Chapter 43 - PC Poaching.
I have no words...
Author's Response:
Okay, now I REALLY feel bad. I've reduced my readers to speechlessness. Better hurry with the next few chapters. TAG
Date: Feb 07, 2017 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 43 - PC Poaching.
This is too much...now that they have Justin, there is nothing stopping Bellwether from using him and really doing some damage. Lindsay has no fucking idea of what she's done. There is no way that Justin is getting back to Brian unharmed....
Author's Response:
Ye of little faith . . . I promise the no Evil Politician will ever win in my universe. But, yeah, that Anti-Lindsey tag was for real. TAG
Date: Feb 07, 2017 6:58 pm Title: Chapter 43 - PC Poaching.
THAT FUCKING BITCH!!!!!!!! SOMEONE SHOULD PUT A COLLAR ON HER AND SHOCK HER ASS TO HELL!!!! Jealous, insane, territorial BITCH!!! OMG!! Please fix this one Tag! QUICK!!
~Chelle
Yep. Told ya you'd be screaming at me . . . I agree with the sentiment though. #CollarLindsey TAG
Author's Response:
Date: Feb 07, 2017 6:31 pm Title: Chapter 43 - PC Poaching.
Ok, Lindsey needs one of those chips in her neck with Brian controlling the remote!!!!
What a BITCH!!!
Author's Response:
Great idea! The author approves this idea! TAG
Date: Feb 06, 2017 7:34 pm Title: Chapter 42 - PC Play Time.
I had to skip most of the chapter. Too difficult to read.
I can't imagine what Lindsey will do to help them.
Author's Response:
I totally understand the skipping thing. It was a tough chapter to write too. TAG
Date: Feb 06, 2017 1:07 pm Title: Chapter 42 - PC Play Time.
Oh Tag, holy Christ this hurt my heart, this made me sick, yes you're very talented writer but oh my God these guys are so evil...poor Rex! He's going to be permanently damaged isn't he? I can't even imagine the torture those PC's are having to put up with. This chapter completely horrified me I don't know what next chapter is going to do, I better have some Patron ready... I know they're fictional characters but I'm still going to pray for them anyway
Author's Response:
I know it was a really harsh chapter. I apologize. But we are talking about de facto slavery, and I was trying my best to protray how I think modern day slave owners would behave. I think it's necessary for the story to make it believable. I'll try to keep this kind of stuff to a minimum though. I swear that it will all be okay in the end. No evil politicians will ever win in my universe. TAG
Date: Feb 02, 2017 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 41 - PC Morning Fun.
This was one of the best chapters so far. It was funny and sweet.
Author's Response:
Thanks! That was exactly what I was going through. With a little sexy throw in. TAG
Date: Feb 02, 2017 7:45 pm Title: Chapter 41 - PC Morning Fun.
TAG this chapter was a hoot! I was always amazed on the show how he never let the phone go to his answering machine lol I am amazed Brian handled the situation as well as he did with all the interruptions keeping him from hot and horny boy.
I am glad that Justin is able to benefit from his talent and that Brian gives him the respect so he can make his own decisions. That right there is what pulls me towards the story. They are so perfect for each other. Justin keeps brian human and balanced and Brian gives Justin a great balance between pushing and not over doing it , so Justin can grow into himself.
I want to tape Lindsay mouth shut lol She frustrates me to no end in this story. I hope someone puts her out of her misery lol But of course not too soon because she adds to the angst which makes the story that much more interesting.
I love how you portray Michael in this story lol It was funny hearing his embarrassment over barging in and finding them having sex lol
Alright again to brace myself for the bad guys BS. I look forward to more :)
Lisa
Author's Response:
Thanks, Lisajean. Glad you're enjoying this so far. I totally agree with you on the telephone thing - why doesn't Brian just not answer that damned phone?!? LOL. But it worked well for my story, so, I guess I can't complain. As for Mikey intruding at the wrong moment, that was pretty much canon too. I'm giving Michael a bit of a break in this story though, I've been mean enough to that character in other stories so I thought I'd take a break and let him be a good guy here. He's still a bit of a comedic foil though - I can't help that. As for Lindsey, though . . . She's not going away yet. In fact, I'd keep my eye on her if I were Brian. *wink, wink*
Thanks for reading. Off to write more about my slimy bad guys. TAG
Date: Feb 02, 2017 5:49 pm Title: Chapter 41 - PC Morning Fun.
Great mix before some more angst.
Lindsey won't let Brian get away like this; she will try again and I hope Mel will do something.
Happy the paintings were well sold: it will help to pay the contract, even if Brian will certainly refuse to do so.
Author's Response:
It WAS a nice little respite chapter, wasn't itl And it makes it seem like everything is getting better . . . (cue the evil author laughter). LOL. Thanks for reading. TAG
Date: Feb 02, 2017 3:23 pm Title: Chapter 41 - PC Morning Fun.
"Nope, no time to fuck" Cynthia is the best! Poor Brian, all he wanted was a little TLC. Lol Clueless Mickey....people should really get a clue & Brian needs to get all his keys back!
Author's Response:
I'm really enjoying my Cynthia here - glad you approve. And I totally agree about the keys thing. Thanks for reading. TAG
Date: Jan 27, 2017 7:30 pm Title: Chapter 40 - PC In Art.
Ummmm....speechless here.
Author's Response:
I take it I'm hitting all the prejudice marks right on target? Sorry. TAG
Date: Jan 26, 2017 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 40 - PC In Art.
Bad combination Lindsay and Craswell!
She won't back down until someone demands her to do it!
Author's Response:
You're not wrong about what a bad combo these two are . . . TAG
Date: Jan 26, 2017 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 40 - PC In Art.
Lindsey is a piece of shit....that is all...go Brian!
Author's Response:
Agreed! TAG
Date: Jan 25, 2017 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 39 - Bouncing Back.
Yeah, Kinnetik is born!
Cynthia is so much fun when she pushes Brian.
Key chapter; can't wait for the show!
Date: Jan 25, 2017 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 38 - Helping PC Hands.
A little bit depressing, but they are together and strong for the other one when there is a stressful situation. We can feel some hope somewhere in the future!
Date: Jan 20, 2017 6:54 pm Title: Chapter 38 - Helping PC Hands.
This chapter really cracked me up, TAG. I love how Bulldog Sunshine did not let up on keeping Brian in line lol Imagining Sunshine growling at tricks was hilarious! I also loved the how Brian wanted to tell him justin the coloring the blush produced was pretty lol Then kicking himself in the ass for thinking that way lol He is soooo in love :D
As for the angsty part my heart goes out to Justin. I understand his apprehension. He feels he has to start protecting himself that the horrors he believes is coming, so he can numb hiself out. I have a feeling his art will help in more ways than one in this story ;)
I absolutely love Cynthia in this story she is badass!
Still embracing!
Lisa
Author's Response:
I'm glad you got both the humor and the pain I was trying for on this chapter. It was a lot to try for in one small chapter. I like how the boys are working together to help each other already - that was the primary message I wanted to get across. And, yeah, I'm loving Cynthia in this too. She's a lot of fun to write. Just wait till you see what she's up to next! Happy reading. TAG
Date: Jan 20, 2017 10:41 am Title: Chapter 38 - Helping PC Hands.
Hi TAG 😊...after the previous chapter I have to say I was really concerned about how our boys were going to get out from under this s***storm but now, after reading this installment, I'm confident they are going to make it through just fine. Especially with Cynthia and Theodore's (I'm guessing he'll be brought in to help at some point) support. There's was just enough humor here to offset the angst and despair. The last chapter was more angsty IMO by far and had me chewing my nails! Protective PC Sunshine, and big bad Brian's reaction to him, is priceless. I am very much enjoying reading this fic and looking forward to the next installment! Thanks for the update.
Laura
Author's Response:
Humor in the face of despair was precisely what I was going for here. And also, showing that the boy's have become a team that supports each other when it counts. It's no longer just Brian saving Justin. Justin's going to have to save Brian sometimes too. Especially considering all that's still coming . . . Happy to hear you're still enjoying this! Off to go write more! TAG
Date: Jan 19, 2017 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 37 - VanGuard Fallout.
Nothing good is going to happen with Brian current mindset...
Author's Response:
You might be surprised. This Justin may seem meek and ineffectual, but he's not going to let Brian brood too much. Together, they're quite the team. More to come on that topic soon. TAG
Date: Jan 18, 2017 9:06 pm Title: Chapter 37 - VanGuard Fallout.
I have faith you will work this out in the end Tag and look forward to how you will navigate through this, but I am bracing myself for more angst! I also really hope Vangard gets his due!!
Lisa
Author's Response:
I think 'bracing yourself' is a good plan. I WILL make it alright in the end, but you should be prepared for a lot more nastiness in the meantime. Sorry. Glad you're still hanging in there though! TAG
Date: Jan 17, 2017 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 37 - VanGuard Fallout.
Wow.....I wasn't expecting that at all. At this point I don't see Brian getting the rest of the capital he needs to keep Justin....looks like Bellwether just might win after all.
Author's Response:
I think that's the third review in a row from you where I got a big 'Wow" at the start. LOL. I must be doing something right. Sorry about the nailbiter chapter, though. Things do look bleak, don't they. I hate when stories do that. Don't you? TAG