[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2016 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 30: St. Mark's Place and 1st Ave
Reading again how Justin and Nathan meet and how Nathan was raised was just as heartbreaking the second time. You've given us an emotional chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2016 8:14 pm Title: Chapter 29: 2nd House Rd and South Eldert Lane: The Reception
“If it’s meant to be then they’ll work out. Maybe things will change one day for them and they’ll be in the same place.”
Let's hope it doesn't take too long before Justin and Nathan are on the same page.
It had to hard to leave a crying Lily for Brian and Eric.
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2016 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 28: 2nd House Rd and South Eldert Lane: The Wedding
So many good things in this chapter. But one thing that stikes me is how much like Brian Nathan is. Brian didn't think he'd be a good father until Gus, and didn't think he could love someone. Perhaps a talk with Nathan about Gus would be a good thing.
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2016 5:12 pm Title: Chapter 27:Long Island Expressway and 80th Street
So Gus is having sex. Lindsay is such a prude, I'm glad that Brian called her on it. Poor Lily, learning how to play fish the hard way. At least she had her dad there to chase away the bad dream. Brian is truely happy that they are going to be married.
[Report This]Date: Jun 26, 2016 12:36 am Title: Chapter 26: 79th and West Drive
Lily soaking wet. Justin and Brian having a talk about Rage. So much here to like. The birthday party and the great gifts from Justin and Nathan. Sad that Nathan doesn't think he can be a father and that Eric's parents are dicks.
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2016 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 25: 50th and 9th
The Brian that knew Justin would never insist that they talk. This Brian cares.
Date: Jun 24, 2016 9:07 am Title: Chapter 9: East End and LaGuardia Road
Nice bedtime reading. Great chapter. Hope Molly becomes part of the story
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2016 7:08 pm Title: Chapter 24: Metropolitan and Lorimer
Duncan and Lily. What a pair. When this tale comes to an end you have to take us into their future so we see if they make it or not. I think Brian could have been happier earlier in life if other people hadn't of gotten envoilved.
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2016 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 23: Pierrepont and Clinton
Are you sure Lily is only thee? She manages to talk her way into getting a pet, and not just one rat but two! What will Brian say?
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2016 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 22: 24th and 2nd
Brian and Justin are doing their best to be just friends. Not an easy thing.
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2016 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 21: Henry and Clark
Poor Lily, feeling so sick. Brian has changed to where he'll admit that he wants Eric and that he's happy.
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2016 2:49 am Title: Chapter 20: 23rd and Madison
It's good that Eric is aware of Brian and Justin's talks. I guess the same can't be said for Nathan. Love, love, love Duncan and Lily. Too cute. Getting Coke is a BIG deal.
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2016 4:35 am Title: Chapter 19: 44th and Broadway
We all knew that Brian should tell Eric and Justin should tell Nathan. Nows the cats out of the bag. Can't blame Nathan since he was very understanding about Justin's dad.
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2016 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 18: Waverly and Christopher
Now this chapter was surprising. Not the Craig we are used to. Perhaps this can be the start of something good.
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2016 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 17: 23rd and 5th
A new year is shown in and there are changes in the wind. Emmett and Drew will be fathers. Mikey is rebooting Rage. Just how will that work out? Brian's getting married. And Justin... well he's met Lily so maybe he wants to be a dad too. It's been awhile since I've heard anything about Nathan and Broadway.
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2016 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 16: 44th and 7th
Brian and Justin may never be lovers again, but they are at least beginning to be friends again. And we have Deb to thank for that.
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2016 9:36 pm Title: Chapter 15: 48th and Lexington
Very well thought out day with Gus. He did a great job with the birds and the bees.
Date: Jun 13, 2016 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 42: Chartres and Saint Ann Street
Imagine my surprise as I was srolling through the web looking for a story to read. Kinnetik Dreams shows and I find you. Is this associated with Midnight Whispers. It doesn't matter.
I was worried that the story had been abandoned. Please don't give up on it. You are so very talented. I'm enjoying the angs. Thank you
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2016 3:43 pm Title: Chapter 14: 33rd and 7th
Justin is confused about his father. On the one hand he hates the way his father treated him and his mother, but he's still his dad. It looks like the start of a beautiful friendship with Molly and Hunter!
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2016 2:19 am Title: Chapter 13: 33rd and 8th
Brian is a really good dad, but sometimes he doesn't think before he says something. In a way that's normal. Maybe Nathan should ask Justin for his copy of the Brian manuel?
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2016 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 12: Hudson Place and River Road
Justin is to Nathan, what Brian was to Justin. Nathan had it much worse than Justin and even Brian. At least worrying about Nathan keeps Justin from thinking about Craig.
Date: Jun 12, 2016 11:22 am Title: Chapter 42: Chartres and Saint Ann Street
Really enjoy how you weave together the sifferent strands of this story and keep us guessing on what is up next in the plot for Brian, Eric, Justin and Nathan. Look forward to,the next instalmentb and thank you for sharing this story.
Date: Jun 12, 2016 6:54 am Title: Chapter 42: Chartres and Saint Ann Street
Thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2016 12:51 am Title: Chapter 11: 11th and Maxwell Lane
It's obvious that Brian and Justin will not reunite, but that's okay. You've given us Eric and Nathan and turned them into real people. Then you have Craig make a phone appearance. Not nice making Justin cry.
Author's Response:
YumYumPM, I really want to thank you for taking the time to reread my story! I love that you are leaving thoughts on the chapters again! I am also thrilled you are so open to the characters being with other people and seem to like Eric and Nathan. Thank you for being so great!
As for Craig, it was a little out of left field for Justin, but for Craig it was a long time coming due to festering guilt and depression. I hated making Justin cry :( But I might too, in that situation at least. Glad you enjoyed this chapter!
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2016 12:18 am Title: Chapter 10: Mercer and Prince
Christmas! Brian is finally able to enjoy the holidays that he hadn't gotten to when he was a kid. Nathan needs to mellow. What's Brian going to do to him? Maybe I shouldn't ask. lol.