Date: Jun 10, 2016 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 1: 34th and 7th
If I remember well, something happened to Lily in New Orleans (which is a city with a rich and dark history. Many believe that the city is among the most haunted in the United States).
The visit to Eric's parents might have been odd if something happened again with Lily while she was with them.
Maybe the visit to NO started or revealed something. Maybe the parents would want to act on this while Brian was away from Eric and Lily.
A little drama to put some pressure?
That was my theory... will see in the future if it's valid or not.
Date: Jun 10, 2016 8:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: 34th and 7th
You are right, I meant New Orleans (it makes more sense for what I supsect is going on).
I'm sorry, I didn't want to put pressure on you; you wrote that you woud review the old chapters before posting them here. As they are quite long and dense, that might take time.
Please don't worry and take your time.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Oh, you weren't! Don't worry about that lol. I just wanted to give an explanation for my lateness. And ooooh, I do wonder what your theory is. Care to share? Anyway, I hope to get the next chapter done soon. I went away for a few days so I didn't get any time to actually write. I am glad I have readers, such as yourself, who are excited for the next chapter though! Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2016 1:21 pm Title: Chapter 9: East End and LaGuardia Road
It's nice to see the Taylor family together. It was a surprise that Craig was mentioned, I assume he's going to appear sometime soon.
Date: Jun 10, 2016 5:20 am Title: Chapter 1: 34th and 7th
Happy to see the story coming back to life. I can't wait to read the chapter that follows the trip to Miami.
Author's Response:
I have been working on this chapter for a while, but with two jobs, I have little time. Hope to get it up soon though. Do you mean New Orleans? Eric is working there for a month and goes to North Carolina to see his parents. Thank you for understanding and for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2016 4:06 am Title: Chapter 8: Henry and Pierrepont
I'm so glad the Brian is happy. The loft held a lot of memories, some good, some bad. Did you ever tell us what happened to Britin?
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2016 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 7: Driggs and Grand
It's funny how Justin's relationship parallel's his and Brian's. Only he's the older one and his younger lover has issues. Gotta love Emmett, insisting Justin tell Nathan about meeting with Brian, Eric and Lily.
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2016 8:39 pm Title: Chapter 6: Liberty and Church
This chapter is a little sad, what with Brian changing and the family not noticing. Eric and he are perfect together and learning how Lily came to be is heartwarming. I'm glad that Brian finally got to see someone about his problems. Hopefully if it had been Justin in Eric's place Brian would have still been able to share his life with a child.
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2016 5:12 pm Title: Chapter 5: 67th and Park
Eric is feeling a little insecure, but as he was not there for the Justin years he really doesn't need to be. Brian's a different man, ready for his family.
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2016 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 4: N 8th and Bedford
So we learn a little more about Justin's life. Nathan is musically inclinde which brings bad memories of Ethan to mind. Even their names are simular. Simularities to Brian and Justin's relationship abound. Justin being the older one. At least he's not denying that they have a relationship as Brian did.
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2016 3:39 pm Title: Chapter 3: 18th and 6th
Eric seems to be a nice guy and Lily is an adorable scamp. I can't see Brian giving that up. Justin owns a gallary, so he's not hurting for money. At this point Nathan is a wild card.
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2016 3:02 pm Title: Chapter 2: E Houston and Essex
Seven years is a long time. Enough time for Brian to decide he didn't want to be alone. When you think about it Brian and Eric have more in common. Lily seems to be a fire cracker. Who does she take after? I mean is Eric the type that would hang from pots and pans?
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2016 8:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: 34th and 7th
It's strange to think we get use to Brian being with Eric and not Justin. Justin seems selfish in a way for rejecting what could have been the best thing in his life. Oh well.
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: 34th and 7th
Love the new banner. When I have the time I'll reread this from the beginning and review.
Date: May 26, 2016 9:27 pm Title: Chapter 1: 34th and 7th
Like your new banner! TAG
Date: May 26, 2016 4:57 am Title: Chapter 6: Liberty and Church
wonderful story great job
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
Date: May 12, 2016 8:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: 34th and 7th
Will you post all the chapters that were on MW and maybe a new one as well?
So impatient to read what happened to South's visitors.
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Hello! I will be posting all chapters from MW to this website and there will be more chapters as well. But due to this being my first story in the fandom, written after a dry spell, I am editing the first several chapters along the way for tense purproses. I hope to be caught up over here in the next couple of weeks and want to get the new chapter up soon. :) Thank you for reading this story!