Date: Sep 21, 2016 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
That was a great story. I'm going to read it again right now.
I hope Lindsay will steal Justin's condom and got herself pregnant and Justin will get the baby at the end (just a suggestion from me to you).
Author's Response:
Questions will be answered in the sequel we are writing.
More to come
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 21, 2016 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
Michael and Lindsay working together???? That's a recipe for disaster lol
Author's Response:
Yes, they certainly can be 'idiot twins' when they get together
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 21, 2016 5:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
So easy and relaxed... Just what both needs and deserves!
Author's Response:
Their story will be happy because we love them
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 21, 2016 4:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm already hooked... I like that this Brian is ready to be a different Brian...
I also love that both Brian and Ted are keeping Mikey at a distance lol
Author's Response:
We like to put out a different take on the characters. It keeps the story fresh, although there isn't going to be a change to certain people because it just seems to be much too much of a change and not the least bit realistic.
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 21, 2016 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful story but I couldn't be more disappointed and surprised to see "The End" when we seem to be mid-story. Have you ended this with the intention of continuing in a sequel? I sure hope so and have my fingers crossed. This is too good to end here, please reconsider:-(
Author's Response:
Relax, the sequel was planned from the beginning.
Much more story to tell
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 21, 2016 1:28 am Title: Chapter 10
Will there be a sequel? This ending seems a bit abrupt. That said, I am definitely enjoying this story.
Author's Response:
Yes, we are doing a sequel.
Much more story to tell.
Thanks
~Lorie and Chelle~
Date: Sep 21, 2016 1:16 am Title: Chapter 10
OMG, I hope this story gets a sequel!!!! That was to juicy of an ending to NOT have a sequel!!!!!
Author's Response:
Working on the sequel.
Glad you liked the story
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 21, 2016 12:54 am Title: Chapter 10
Sequel that's all I see is sequel I can just smell it lol I enjoyed this very much I'm just sad it finished already awesome story Lorie and Nichelle I just loved it
Author's Response:
We are working on a sequel.
Much more to tell
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2016 12:43 am Title: Chapter 10
Laura got a cosmic smack down that she will feel for years, glad that Jen gave her a physical one to shut her up, Harriet gave her idiot husband his smack down with both barrels.
Michael getting served was quite appropriate cause he never knows when to think or keep his mouth shut, I bet in court his mouth gets him in more trouble.
I wonder how Deb, Ben, Emmett took the news that Michael is being sued??
Mel and Lindsay are so pathetic and their reasons for wanting Brian to father not one but two children is so selfish, vindictive and inconsiderate of anyone else's feelings but theirs.
Children are nothing more than a Pay Day for them they make me want to smack them both, then beat their heads together to see if there is any rocks cause neither one has a brain.
I wish Justin had been there but thankfully Brian was strong enough to resist Lindsay and walk out.
I hope there will be more Craig still needs to get his come uppence, want to see Michael make a fool out of himself in court, and I want Mel and Lindsay to be destroyed.
Plus I want to see Brian and Justin get stronger in their relationship, also want to get more about Glenn and Daphne, also think Harriet and Jennifer will be useful too.
Can't Wait to Read it All Over Again :)
Author's Response:
Laura got the Karma she deserved.
Michael will get what he deserves for being a selfish, lying, busybody.
For some people that is all children are.
Brian is stronger because he knows that he is finally not all alone in the world. He knows that he has someone who will stand up for him no matter what.
Karma is still working on Craig and on the girls. Some things take more time
Daphne, Glenn, Harriet, and Jen still have stories to tell.
Brian and Justin will continue to grow and nuture their new relationship
More coming
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 21, 2016 12:11 am Title: Chapter 10
The end! What??? Loved this story and really really really hoping for a sequel!! I want to know what happens with Michael's lawsuit, what B&J have planned for Craig, and of course how the moochers...I mean munchers plan to steal Brian's sperm and how B&J will handle that disaster. Oh and of course I'd love to see B&J raise a family. OMG, please, I'm begging you for a sequel!
Author's Response:
Calm down. We had already planned to do a sequel before we started the first story.
No begging needed, although it is appreciated, it means you like our work.
More coming
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2016 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Opps. I didn't notice THE END! Maybe another story? I was wondering though were Lindsay and Melanie planning on being pregnant at the same time? Not to mention you have to get even with Craig! Please don't end this here!!!
Author's Response:
Your answers will be in the next story.
More coming
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2016 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love how you wrapped this up, BUT I have to say, I was looking forward to more D/s and some more Toppy Justin. I get why he didn't fuck Brian in his office, but holy shitballs, that would have been HOT lol.
Author's Response:
Sally,
More for you in the next story.
At this point in their relationship Justin feels that it would be disrespecting Brian to top him in his office. Things may change later on.
More coming
Thanks
~Lorie and Chelle~
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2016 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG! Love how you got Laura out of the way. Now what do you plan to get even with Craig. Michael has been served! Good for him, what will Ben's attitude be I wonder? Now we've found out what Lindsay and Melanie are after. I see another lawsuit in Lindsay's future and because Mel's going along with her, her job could be on the line. Love how fast you are with new chapters, because I can't wait for the next!
Author's Response:
This is the end of this story.
Your questions should be answered in the sequel.
More coming
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 20, 2016 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh Kip, you're a piece of work.
Author's Response:
Sally
Kip always was a conniving bastard.
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 20, 2016 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 10
WTF?!?!?!?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the End?!?!?! Holy Shitballs! I can only assume that his is the first part in a series correct?! You seemed to have wrapped a lot of this up nicely, but I really wasn't prepared to see THE END! You're going to give us all a bloody coronary!
Anyway....(breathing deeply)
Great chapter! Karma finally came to meet Laura up close and personal. I was chuckling through much of that and CHEERED when Jen got in there. That was awesome. thank goodness she's out of that social circle. Her mouth and hautiness alone would've eventually had her removed anyway. nevermind her sleeping habits. ;)
I have to see what happens with Michael's lawsuit. I'm curious as to what Mom is going to say about it all, or teh rest of the family. He brought it upon himself. I have zero sympathy.
I was a bit surprised by Mel. I though her hatred had receeded a bit. Apparently not. If she hates him that much, why insist that he be the father? all about the $$ huh? Bitches!! Looking forward to them getting theirs in teh end as well!!
Great and thanks for the update!!
There's more right....a 2nd part??
Author's Response:
We're glad you enjoyed the end of this first story in our series.
Working on the second one now.
Many interesting developments will be seen in the next story.
More coming
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 20, 2016 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
What a great chapter. So many details ,and characters. This ia becoming a really neaunced piece.Keep going. I love it.
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying the story.
Last chapter is up now.
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 20, 2016 3:47 pm Title: Chapter 9
What a chapter loved it wow the twist with Glenn and Daphne I wasn't expecting that. I'm so excited when stinky Laura gets it. Its going to be epic
Author's Response:
Yes, not only does Laura lose her mealticket but it goes to the best friend of the person she is trying to hurt.
Final chapter is up.
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 20, 2016 2:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
The excitement is building waiting not so patiently for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Lorna
The last chapter is up now.
Laura finally meets Karma.
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 20, 2016 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 9
Love love love all this 'cleaning out the clutter' their doing! Now for her most self-righteous, cunning, supercilious majesty-cannot wait to read the next one!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the story.
The final 'removal' was just posted.
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2016 3:05 am Title: Chapter 9
That was such a good start to a Monday morning and it looks like it is going to get better just as soon as Laura Wright is dealt with and we find out more about Daphne and Glenn.
I just love the fact that Glenn is more like his mother instead of his father and that he had plans to make Laura pay after they got married, but now that he can avoid that miserable sentence I want to know more about him and Daphne.
Kip is an idiot who really should have known better than to play Brian for a fool or hurt someone he cares about.
Justin taking care of Brian is so wonderful since his suppose friends never did it, they were too busy trying to use Brian to their advantage.
Daphne and Cynthia are scary when people hurt their friends I would not want to be on their bad side.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter :)
Author's Response:
Karma's working, but not finished yet.
Glenn is not stupid and now he can try for what he really wants.
Justin is a very caring person and Brian is perfect for him.
The boys will always have their women behind them.
More soon
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
Date: Sep 20, 2016 3:04 am Title: Chapter 9
I loved this!
Author's Response:
Thanks JP,
:-*
More soon
~Lorie and Chelle~
Date: Sep 20, 2016 2:24 am Title: Chapter 9
This is really interesting. I love tough Justin and Brian when he appreciates being loved.
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response:
Brian and Justin make a great couple and their love always shows through.
More soon
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2016 2:16 am Title: Chapter 9
Well done. Daphne has a suitor! Hogan blew his chances by lying through his teeth. Kip doesn't have a leg to stand on, though I do like the comparison of Mikey to Kip. Now on to the big game.
Author's Response:
Daphne deserves to be happy.
Maybe he won't be so stupid at his next job.
Karma has been busy, but she isn't finished.
More soon
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~
[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2016 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love how there are so many connections with Laura, no wonder that woman is such a bitch, she's clearly been raised by wolves LOL
Author's Response:
Sally
The bitch certainly gets around.
More soon
Thanks
~Lorie and Chelle~
Date: Sep 19, 2016 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 8
Go Daphne! She is hysterical! Molly is too much, what a riot!
Cannot wait for that meeting to fire those assholes!
Author's Response:
Daphne and Molly will always have Justin's back
The meeting will be interesting, with a few surprises.
More soon
Thanks
~Lorie and Nichelle~