[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2016 6:22 am Title: Chapter 13: THE BOY IS MINE: Ethan (and others)
What are the chances of the woman carrying Brian's supposed babies would talk with Ben letting the cat out of the bag. I'm so loving this. Can't wait to see how Brian takes it. Bet the sperm was Justin's. hehehe.
Date: Nov 07, 2016 3:07 am Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
Thank you for not just one but two awesome new chapters tonight!!! Once again, of course, you leave me on the edge and immediately wanting more! I'm so anxious for our boys to find out what Michael and Lindsay have been up to and I'm so happy that Justin recovered so quickly! I can't wait for the next update!
Date: Nov 07, 2016 2:39 am Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
WOW!!! These last two chapters, all I can say is WOW.
I keep coming back to what exactly do they think will happen? Brian is going to open his arms and welcome these two after that type of violation. This is the plan of a deranged mind.
Cannot wait for another update to here what Ben & Mel are going to say.
Date: Nov 07, 2016 2:01 am Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
Write fast Ms. 'Chelle. I want to know what Brian and Justian's reaction is to the news.
Sandy
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2016 2:08 am Title: Chapter 12- AT YOUR BEST: Brian (and others)
Go Daph! I sure wish she could have taken a swing at Ian too... I hope Brian's presents helping Justin see that he's in it for the long haul. I hate the idea of him going to LA, unless of course Brian goes with him... I'm all caught up, I need more chapters...
Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2016 1:40 am Title: Chapter 11: THIEVES IN THE TEMPLE: Justin (and others)
Damn, I mean Damn Lindsay and Michael, Lindsay and Ethan... All Hell is going to break loose! I hope Brian's still #1 on his phone.
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2016 1:12 am Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)
Oh God... I feel sick to my stomach, but not as sick as Brian and Justin will when they find out. Can Michael be arrested for theft of sperm? Who knows, maybe it's Justin's sperm? Wouldn't that be a bitch... Either way, someone's going to kill him!
Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Date: Nov 05, 2016 12:35 am Title: Chapter 9- TEENAGE SENSATION: Brian
At least Michael showing up will keep him from leaving, he'll have to hide in the bathroom... Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2016 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 7: DIRTY LITTLE SECRET
Okay I understand Justin needing some space to become his own man. But please tell me he can do it without the greasy fiddle-fuck... ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2016 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 6: LOVE CHANGES: Brian
There more than one rat n the burgh, and they both have a nasty bite... Hurry Brian, go claim you boy back!
Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2016 7:07 pm Title: Chapter 5: AS WE LAY: Justin
"But after last night, all I know is that I can't do without him." You're damn right you can't, and neither can he!!!
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2016 6:13 pm Title: Chapter 4: SOMEBODY ELSE'S GUY: Brian
Yes! Now I need more...
Hugs ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2016 5:29 pm Title: Chapter 3: CRY ME A RIVER: Justin
Anger = Extreme Emotions = Passion = Make-up Sex... Or so I hope, I'm keeping my fingers crossed... By the way I guess I haven't read this before... I'm Loving It!!!
Later Darling ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Nov 04, 2016 4:51 pm Title: Chapter 2: WHEN I WAS YOUR MAN: Brian
I started re-reading this on my phone. (But I can't seem to leave a comment? Who knows?) I forgot where i left off, and I guess I needed a refresher... I'm loving this fic, I can just imagine Lindsay drawling Rage, she'll probably get caught up in her fantasy and draw herself into Rages lair... Poor Mikey, caught embezzling Justin's profits, maybe Lindsay can cough up those funds too? Now Justin's on his way to the loft... Maybe in your reality him and Brian will be overwhelmed with passion, realizing that the flame is still smoldering. Now Justin needs to leave the Chin-Rats ass in his decrepit hovel... Okay, on to the next chapter!
Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Date: Nov 02, 2016 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 12- AT YOUR BEST: Brian (and others)
Omg the tears and the feels...so many feels!
Yay Daphne! Beat the shit out of Michael! Wow, everyone was pissed at him, rightfully so of course. Glad they all know now about why Brian punched him before...
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: Nov 02, 2016 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 12- AT YOUR BEST: Brian (and others)
Love this story. Brian cares so much and shows how much he loves Justin by the way he takes care of him. Now that the scuzzy chin rat knows what he caused, I wonder if he will just keep making it worse by doing more things to scare Justin. I hope the son of a bitch gets caught and has to pay for what he's done.
~Lorie <3
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2016 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 12- AT YOUR BEST: Brian (and others)
Yes! Brian's gonna win his Sunshine back! Which should be easy once they see the security tape showing Ethan smashing the car! More, please. TAG
Date: Nov 02, 2016 4:11 pm Title: PROLOGUE... AT THE END...
I think I missed the last chapter. :( sorry!
Heart was in my throat in this one! So much happening in it and so many emotions are raging.
Brian shows everyone his true self here. Showing them all his heart, and that justin is the one who owns it.
Michael. Dear lord. I really have no words. I think I even felt bile seep up reading that. A part of me wishes that Brian had heard that so he could end any kind of friendship with Michael once and for all. At elast everyone else heard him this time, and actually realized the reason for Brian punching him before. Daphne was incredible! I was cheering away. Michael at this point deserves the worst in life, and I can't wait to see what you do to him! lol. I so love your devious mind when it comes to Your "anti" characters. Ethan I HOPE doesn't last much longer. Hopefully folks find out that it was him who caused this to happen and that Lindsey had her hand in it as well.
YES!! Brian has finally gotten his head out his ass and realized that Justin is it for him. They are in for a rocky road together considering the 3 folks who will be out to split them up by whatever means possible, but they are always stringer together. We know as well that Jen and Daph will be supportive of them. The rest of their frinds as well. I'm always hesitant about Deb. He is her son and it's always instictive to protect them, but after what she just heard come out of his mouth, I don't see any way she could support or even be sympathetic to Michael in anything.
another excellent chapter!! Love yourupdates. nice long chapters full of emotion.
Cheers!
Elaine
Date: Nov 02, 2016 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 12- AT YOUR BEST: Brian (and others)
Wow Mikey and Lindsay aren't even smart enough to be subtle. At the risk of sounding childish I'll say they make me sick. Why come to the hospital to whine? Seriously, how does that help Mikey? Don't even get me started on Ethan, ugh!
My poor Sunshine. I'm glad he called be for he passed out and so glad the Stud followed his gut feelings.
Thanks for the updates!
Author's Response:
Good Morning Gretchen!
LOL! Don't worry about sounding like a child! Honey you should have seen me rolling my eyes and sucking my teeth while writing Michael, Lindsay and Ethan's parts....LOL I guess they inspire that kind of churlishness in all of us from time to time.
Brian is definitely learning to follow his instincts a lot more instead of relying on someone else's opinion or view of what he should be doing. I'm glad that Mel and Ted were with him and not the Leeches of Liarsville- Michael and Lindsay. They would have done everything in their power to stop Brian from going to help Justin.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Nov 02, 2016 11:52 am Title: Chapter 12- AT YOUR BEST: Brian (and others)
OMG...great chapter! I love reading Mel and Ted's POV's and how they see the real Brian and depth of his feelings for Justin. I see a lot of Brian in Ted when he takes charge and it's a wonderful thing. Now Daph, omg love her! I wish Ben didn't intervene and let her kick Michael's whiney a**. It's about time Ben sees Michael for who he is and kicks him to the curb. As for Ethan, ugh there are no words to express how much I despise him. I can't wait until they discover that he is responsible for this along with Lindsay (don't even get me started on her ugh). There will be consequences and pay back, as they say, is a bitch. I'm so ecstatic that Brian is by Justin's side. I think it's going to be a long road to recovery this time for Justin but he'll make it through, they both will. Thank you for a fantastic update and can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Good Morning Laura!!
Ted and Mel's POVs here were so vital because they were unbiased opinions of the situation between Brian and Justin. They both tend to observe closely and gather some facts before forming opinions and engaging in discussisons. Thanks to the influence of Brian and Mel, Ted is coming out of the shadows and asserting himself. It's really a joy to see it all unfold. I really loved how he handled Ethan for Brian.
Mel's situation is a little different primarily because of the promise she made to Brian to be there for Gus. It's going to be interesting to see how Mel handles this situation while trying to keep her sanity. Honestly, I don't know how she put up with Lindsay (even during the show). She was either wheedling, whining or weilding guilt like a sledgehammer to beat people into submission. Mel has some very hard decisions to make regarding Lindsay especially when the inevitable fallout from Lindsay's Sperm-stealing Adventure comes to light.
Ben will have his own revelations revealed from the most unlikely of sources...SMH I really feel bad that he got saddled with Michael. I'm not sure if it was the whole 'Opposites Attract' theory or that Faux 'Boy Next Store' Vibe that Ben fell for but the blinders are coming off for Ben and what he sees is definitely not pretty! I agree that he should have let Daphne continue with the ass-whupping...Hell he probably should have joined in and delivered several punches in advance himself for what's coming up for him.
Stay Tuned! Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Nov 02, 2016 11:09 am Title: Chapter 12- AT YOUR BEST: Brian (and others)
All I have to say is.....DAAAAAAAMMMMMMNNNN, MICHAEL GOT KNOCKED THA FUCK OUT!!!! Gotta love Daphne for doing it and Emmett for putting together why Brian did it in the past.
Author's Response:
I LOVED writing Daphne this way. I think if she had her way in the series, Michael certainly would have been put in his place a million times over. And now that Em has put the two occasions that Michael said the same thing together, I think everyone will really start to view Michael for what he is and no longer brush his comments off as harmless and thoughtless. He can certainly be malicious too!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Chelle
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2016 4:33 am Title: Chapter 12- AT YOUR BEST: Brian (and others)
Wow! An action packed chapter. Love how Ted, Emmett, Mel and Daphne circled around to boster Brian. Daphne did the best when she tackled Michael and Emmett really let him have it. I'm glad that Ben is distancing himself away from the creap. Lindsay messed herself up with calling both Ethan and Michael. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
LOL! Gotta love Daph!! She really let Michael have it. I think Deb is right when she said if Ben hadn't grabbed Daphne, Michael would have needed his own hospital bed. Ben is definitely beginning to see Michael for who he really is and it's not pretty. There are more revelations ahead for the Professor in the most unlikely of places. Lindsay tends to forget that old adage that what one does in the dark always comes to the light.
happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 30, 2016 3:01 pm Title: Chapter 11: THIEVES IN THE TEMPLE: Justin (and others)
ARGH!!!!! A cliffhanger. I hope Brian can save Justin from whatever the hell Ethan/Lindsay/Michael have planned for him. Please update soon.
Date: Oct 30, 2016 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)
Holy shit! So was not expecting that bombshell. I do hope the baby/babies are Michael's. Brian is going to flip a nut if they are his.
Author's Response:
Stay tuned, Jessica!! There will certainly be surprises in store for Lindsay and Michael!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2016 4:24 am Title: Chapter 11: THIEVES IN THE TEMPLE: Justin (and others)
Deb Tanner is gonna love that you used her PB! LOL! TAG
Author's Response:
LOL! Between you and her...Jeez Louise! I can't get away from the them, LOL They just keep hopping around and multiplying; they won't even let me sleep little old mean, intrusive bunny bugaboos!
HUGS,
~Chelle