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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 22, 2020 9:28 am Title: CHAPTER 47: BARELY BREATHING

thanks for update.  did read it from the start again

Reviewer: Shaz254 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2019 10:15 am Title: CHAPTER 47: BARELY BREATHING

I love how unapologetically anti Micheal and Lindsay this story is! And I love this version of Brian and Justin. And the Emmett/Ben pairing is also pretty cool.

 

I hope you will update it soon 💞

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2019 8:17 am Title: CHAPTER 47: BARELY BREATHING

You have to love Justin he is so on to Brian and knows his every fetish and turn on! He knows that today is going to be so hard 🤣’ pardon the pole’ so he has his own unique way of keeping Brian focused on the prize 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2019 8:03 am Title: CHAPTER 47: BARELY BREATHING

Justin is the king of colors! I can not wait to see the meeting with Joan. Great chapter as always!

Reviewer: bec2224 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2019 8:16 pm Title: CHAPTER 47: BARELY BREATHING

Another wonderful chapter...

BUT...IN MY OPINION (So no one yells I'm telling you how to write, which I'm not) no man should ever wear a marigold suit...it's just a bright yellow suit and no, especially not the Brian Kinney of my world, lol

Thanks for sharing your words with us again.  

bec  

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2019 6:38 pm Title: CHAPTER 47: BARELY BREATHING

Justin is on fire! I love how he managed to get Brian to follow his ideas. His theory about the colors is very interesting. His way of thinking about the control is very revealing of his mastermind and young adult "horniness" (I'm quite sure this doesn't exist, but you get my gist).

I don't really remember why they have to meet Joan and why they have to prepare themselves so carefully.

These quotes are genius:

I’m always ready to jump your bones despite what you’re wearing.

Justin bent over, not only showing me my own personal version of Heaven, but what would also become a version of hell for me as the day went on.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2019 1:45 pm Title: CHAPTER 47: BARELY BREATHING

So, Justin has learned the art of turning Brian Kinney into a big pile of goo. Nice!

I'm looking forward to the meeting with Joan. She withheld Brian's real father, allowing him to take the abuse from Jack that would have otherwise been directed towards her. I hope Brandon and his real father show up and give Joan a piece of their minds too. Let her be truly alone in the world now. Someone should anonymously send a letter to Joan's parish highlighting all her shortcomings, and non-Christian values. Because whatever would she do without being able to lord her religious mumble-jumble over everyone?

I'm so glad you were entertained by my previous reviews. I do get on some rants occasionally, don't I?

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2019 11:34 am Title: CHAPTER 47: BARELY BREATHING

There are only two things I have to say, first very HAWT chapter my friend. Second as soon as I saw the title for this chapter I started singing LOL  so thank you for already making my day a little better.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2019 3:17 am Title: CHAPTER 47: BARELY BREATHING

I am so looking forward to your next chapter.  Joan won't know what hit her.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2019 11:26 pm Title: CHAPTER 47: BARELY BREATHING

Yes Brian and Justin do know each other well and together they are quite the force to be reckoned with.

Arming each other for battle all definitely show Joan that her past tricks have no away over Brian he overcame the Kinney Curse and is now forging a new life with beyond their abuse and need to control him.

Brian Aiden Taylor-Kinney beat them all who tried to own him and with Justin by his side he will only bend for his children and the love of his life who will have him wrapped around their fingers.

Joan Should Be Very Afraid!

Once they get rid of Joan then they can move on to Michael, Lindsay, Deb and anyone else who tried to destroy them.

Wonder if Brian's Father will be showing up?

Always Worth The Wait!

Thanks For the Update 😃

 



Author's Response:

OMG! OMG! OMG! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MY 400TH REVIEW! I swear this feeling of indescribable gratitude never gets old. From the very first review to the last, they ALL mean so very much! So again, I thank you all for this... this VALIDATION and belief in my work enough to hold on tight with me for the ride.

And now for the review itself: Blue.... How are you in my head? I swear you gift of WIP-telepathy is truly AMAZING! I really need to have you on my shoulder at all times as the QAF Oracle. I'm sure that I'm not the only writer here who feels the same.

LOVE YOU, Darling!

HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2019 11:12 pm Title: CHAPTER 47: BARELY BREATHING

Great update.  Oh these two are just so much fun to read about.  Wonderful writing as usual. 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2019 7:32 pm Title: CHAPTER 46: EVERYBODY WANTS TO RULE THE WORLD

Deb Like Michael and Lindsay is just looking for any excuse so Michael will continue bit be innocent in her eyes, despite everything she is finding out she is still blaming Brian and w for not bending to get will like Michael blames her for not getting the others to do the same.

Deb should be in a cell right along side Michael she showed him how to be this way by bullying everyone else and now it is all coming back to bite her in the Ass.

Confronting Lindsay won't change the fact that Deb doesn't deserve forgiveness no matter how contrite she may seem cause she will go back to her bullying ways the second it effects Michael.

With the trials coming up Deb will get worser with every new piece of evidence that is revealed so it is best of everyone protects themselves against her even The Avenue will feel her wrath.

No One Will Ever Be The Same Again.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2019 11:53 am Title: CHAPTER 46: EVERYBODY WANTS TO RULE THE WORLD

First, isn't MR. EDWARDS straight? How is it Debbie thought he was wanting to get together *that way* with Michael in order to pay for his legal fees? And I thought Debbie earlier said she was paying for Michael's attorney? Now we find out it's Pro Bono? How did Debbie figure she hired him and is paying him?

It amazes me that Debbie is actually starting to see that Michael IS at fault. As much as she wants to blame Lindsay for putting all these thoughts in his head, after visiting him and hearing from his own mouth just what he's done, well... she can't help but see the real Michael.

And as much as she doesn't want to see Lindsay, and knows she will try to make herself the victim, she realizes Lindsay will tell the truth of Michael's involvement.

But I think that the mention of Craig and Chris Hobbs is what really tipped Deb off that Michael was more involved than she thought. But how awful that Craig has been embezzling from Justin from way back. I think Craig is in a world of trouble.

I do believe their conversation was taped at the prison?

HUGS  ~Cathy

PS... I'm all caught up, and now I'm sad, sad, sad.



Author's Response:

Good Morning, Cathy! Thanks for all of your reviews. They were beyond entertaining. In fact, even this one made me hiccup with laughter at times. A couple of things:

First, about Galviston Edwards: He's definitely gay. In fact, Back when he was introduced as a character, he and Annette had a conversation about his friend, Tom... as in THE Reverend Butterfield, who Brian had an encounter with. Gal was the man, who Justin was plowing right next to them. Nice twist on an extra in the show without an actual storyline beyond a grunt or groan, right? LOL

Secondly, as for Debbie and paying for Michael's attorney: In this she is sort of like Michael. I took the outright lie that Michael spouted about how Brian 'begged' him to go to the hospital with him to see Gus the night he was born, and applied that sort of selective memory to Debbie. It also stems from how she thinks Brian 'owes' her for all she's done. Don't get me wrong, I don't hate Debbie as I do Michael. But there are certain aspects of her character I disliked immensely. And let's face it, Michael had to have learned a few of those unbecoming traits from her. In this case, it's how they make themselves seem so important and indispensible, when really they are emotional bullies, intrusive and forgettable when it really counts. It's why she's lauding to everyone who will listen that she's paying for Michael's defense attorney, when in reality, Michael's 'assets' were frozen, and since Legal Aid has been called in the case has been passed on to Galviston.  

Thirdly, you are absolutely CORRECT in all you've said about the Michael-Debbie-Lindsay arc of things. And yes, Craig is going to be in a world of trouble. The question is: how's he going to save himself, if that's even possible?

I'll have another chapter up soon, but I have to get what in my head out of it regarding my other 'babies' first.

HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2019 10:32 am Title: CHAPTER 45: SHAKE IT OFF

OKAY... THAT BITCH IS SICK, SICK, SICK!!!

So, Sap's party was HER idea! Hopefully, something comes out regarding Sap, and he's brought in and discloses exactly WHY he did what he did to Justin that night!

Now we have two more we have to watch out for... Raeford and Tamara Charles. Do they have anything to do with Lindsay? Or is that a separate situation, and just has something to do with Taryn? But if it has Ronald that upset and angry... well, I guess we will find out.

Brian and George. Yes, I am putting them together. or is it Brian and Malcolm. Which one is Brian related to?

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2019 5:59 am Title: CHAPTER 44: NO HOLDING BACK

Brian, Justin and Mel co-parenting and living together sounds like a very good idea. And as Justin said, without Lindsay in the mix, I don't see Mel and Brian having a problem with each other. Aw heck, move Lynette in too. She's not working. Might be a huge asset with two infants and a toddler. At least until they all get into a routine. With Justin leaving for Cali, they might need the help. But, please have Nancy bring a pic of the house to Lindsay.

As far as Debbie goes, I wouldn't even give her the info, nor the directions to the new house. Can they do third parent adoption for Justin of Gus? Can they strip Lindsay's rights away too? Can Brian get his rights reinstated? Questions, questions...

BTW, who's SUV were B/J using in the parking lot for their moment away from the others?

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2019 5:06 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2

Well, after a much-needed seven-hour nap... I'm back...

Jennifer Renee and Jordan Raymond... both have the initials J.R. ... intentional, or not? So very happy they included Melanie as the mother to all the babies.

How Debbie thought anyone was going to let 'bygones be bygones' and welcome her with open arms, is beyond me. By them not acknowledging her as a grandparent, that should have told her that her words cut them to the core. The only reason for Brian's existence in her world was to cater to and love Michael. How can she expect to be a grandparent, when she didn't love and accept the way a mother should? And just how much money is Debbie shelling out for Galviston? She should have admitted to herself just what Michael was, and saved herself thousands of dollars! Idiot breeds Idiot. But her thinking they could have cut a deal with Michael, wouldn't have saved him from the state going after him.

I hope they will hand-deliver the DNA results to both Lindsay and Michael. Let them both stew, each for a different reason. I can hear Lindsay's screams, even now, that she provided Justin a son. And Michael's rant when he finds out Lindsay double-crossed him. How funny to think he thought he had the perfect tie to Brian, to learn he never had a chance. Michael just might start singing a different tune.

And did Debbie not catch what Mel said about Brian's actual father?!? I was waiting for a scream of "what are you talking about" from Debbie!

One thing I have to wonder is, the fact that the credit card had Justin's name on it, did Michael not realize that it was actually Brian's? It was, after all, in Brian's loft.

And OMG, wait until Brian finds out about the live video feed in his loft, and exactly how long that has been going. If it was a very long time ago, even before Justin, who even paid for that? And Debbie doesn't even know that yet!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2019 6:54 pm Title: CHAPTER 42: FOREVER YOUNG

Well, the bright blue eyes and the scowl almost are dead give-aways. Me thinks Brian is the proud daddy of a little girl!

Btw, I was thinking of something, I do hope it comes out to Hobbs, Sr and Russo about Craig and Mayweather.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2019 5:48 pm Title: CHAPTER 41: ONE LITTLE SLIP

What tangled web are you weaving now? St. Joan is responsible for Lindsay being the way she is? And then we have Michael's idiocy:

“I’m not even sure of all you just said, but I think you called me stupid.” And saying Debbie is going to MAKE Brian... As if Brian doesn't have a brain of his own. He apparently isn't aware of what his mother is dealing with.

Then this business with Brian... a man who wields a helluva lot more power than they think, or even he, himself, knows he has at the moment. What The Heck!?!

And they were going to give the children to CRAIG?! My gosh, good thing they all found out about the babies. I also think both Lindsay and Michael are going to be fairly old before they see the outside of a prison cell. And I'm hoping Hobbs, SR, Craig, and Russo go right along with them.

Loving the plots you are weaving.

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2019 3:44 pm Title: Chapter 40: CONFESSIONS Part II

I live approximately 360 miles south of you... be prepared to have *Cathy* in *Debbie* mode pounding your door down and yelling at the top of my lungs!!!!!

You will get a PM from me explaining why!

UGH!!! So Craig Taylor is involved in all of this. It doesn't surprise me when Justin revealed earlier that Craig and Lindsay slept together.

I'm looking forward to Hobbs' testimony. Do the police not know about the babies, yet?

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

LOL! Already hiding! As for what the police know, you'll be surprised at what's being revealed in a just a few more chapters. The nets and nooses are definitely beginning to come down on the two major players in this. And they're certainly NOT ready!

HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2019 2:44 pm Title: Chapter 39: CONFESSIONS Part I

Oh hell no! Is Debbie still sitting in the dark surrounded by Michael's boxes of collectibles? I'm not sure if I'm hoping she gets fried, or if she would have called Carl...

I really like the name for the new store. Very Fitting. Are they going to give it a new face-lift? That's sad that Brian has been funding Michael's store all these years. I have to wonder if he will tell Justin about that.

Christ Almighty on a Crutch! Video-taping??? Sick mothers. It's actually too bad they didn't see that Justin was making a solo appearance lately.

It's kind of nice writing Claire in a good role once in a while. Just like Joan (Jt2U)... It's not done very often, and I've only read that scenario a few times, so when it IS written, I enjoy reading it. But, I think St. Joan is in for a rude awakening.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2019 12:33 pm Title: CHAPTER 38: SECRETS

All I know, is: I HOPE YOU ARE HAVING FUN WRITING THIS!!! This is such a classic!

Debbie now knows more about the trouble her widdle boy is in... I presume Michael stole the credit card when the loft was robbed.

Oh, I know they will all forgive me- they are just those type of people- but they will never forget what I’ve done. Has she lost her marbles???

Lindsay... I think she officially lost it. But funny for her... she actually realized she had been set up!! Her destruction and rage was unreal. I read her charges VERY carefully, and I DID notice STATUTORY RAPE! I know I asked some reviews ago about Chris' age... I guess this answered that! BUT... the police officer she hit in the head with the knife... did she kill him? That's all she needs is a murder charge to add to her already LONG list.

But, seriously... Mrs. Brian A. Kinney and Mister Michael Charles Novotny-Kinney?

Lord, how your mind operates!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2019 11:22 am Title: Chapter 37: SORRY, NOT SORRY

Boy, you are one crazy... hmm... lady!

This was, again, an awesome chapter. So much happening! Annette should have whipped out her phone and caught the looks of Lindsay and Michael while watching Hobbs walk in. And they are willing to plea bargain with Hobbs? That should kind of seal Lindsay's fate, as she was the one who orchestrated everything with him, slept with him., and paid him. I hope he sings like a canary!

It's too bad Clarence didn't have Lindsay go over with him and congratulate her protege on his accomplishments. But she seems to think that in bed tonight she will lay the law down to her fiance. Yeah, good luck with that Lindsay. I think he'd just assume to take Ursula to bed. (What's with all these Disney references... oh, that's right... GUS!)

Hmm... however will Lindsay get home? I presume she has no money...

I loved the sizzling heat of Mel and Leda. The waving was classic you!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2019 8:58 am Title: Chapter 36: THE SONG THAT NEVER ENDS...

I'm not done reading, yet, but I'm starting this review so I don't forget a minute of the whole Debbie, Ben, Emmett, and Hunter section. So very happy Ben let Debbie have it with guns drawn, and Emmett walked in just in time (in the open door, I presume) to grab the raised hand, and finish with guns blazing. Hunter was probably dead on... we'll have to see how it plays out. I for one, am pro *Bemmett*

By the way, are Ben and Michael legally (U.S.) married, or just their Canadian wedding?

I was trying to sort out all the things Annette was listing that Lindsay would be charged with... was Lindsay trying to blackmail... Henri? And then her being slammed once again by Nancy, Claire, and Lynette... fun times for all. What really would have been funny, was when Claire said Nancy allowed her to have the clothes altered, is if she would have told Lindsay, 'I had to have them DOWNSIZED two sizes, they were so big!' I can hear the sputtering just thinking of it! Then her visit with Michael... oh, god! Will Hobbs have to share a cell with Michael?

You had me laughing with the three mouthfuls of cum comment, and the very next instant I'm choked up with tears at the news of the show sellout... then you couldn't stop there, and Connor and Brett show up with said painting! (Thanks for making me cry!)

Oh, fuck! What a day! - I agree, or at least... What a chapter!

Fuck and Double Fuck!!

HUGS  ~Cathy

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Date: Aug 10, 2019 7:06 am Title: Chapter 35: ALL ABOUT US

The Unmentionables. Ethan should really be informed about his etch-a-sketch pencil line reference. Oh well, Prince Wannabe should have had no problem walking afterward. Criminy... the stuff you come up with is legend. I loved the Gollum and Maleficent references too. Perfect.

Be it may that you referred to Brian as incorrigible, I always think of Mikey with an incorrigible behavior/child. I do think Smartass fits Brian pretty good. But with good reason.

The Garden of Eden... maybe they should take a trip to the Fairy Capo. LOTS of Nakedness there. Let it ALL hang out!!!

All that said, from the moment Tory walked into Justin's office to the end of the chapter, I was thoroughly entertained. Quite a few chuckles happened to escape. And at 3 a.m., lord, but I was trying to be quiet! I don't know how you manage to do that time and time again!

“Crystal, Mr. Taylor,” he hoarsely whispers. 😂

HUGS ~Cathy

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2019 4:37 am Title: Chapter 34: CLOSER Part 2

You gave us a little of everything in this chapter.

Lindsay's webs of deceit... you just know they are all setting her up to keep digging herself deeper. That lie regarding Gus' college fund is going to come back and bite her in the behind. I have to really wonder where her head is at with her thinking these lies aren't going to catch up to her, and the fact about still marrying Clarence. Him telling her he expects her to work, was Classic.

Mr. Idiot himself. He should have also tried saying *altrujism* to the judge.

Then we had an even hotter version of King of Babylon. It was described so well, I could see the dance in my head.

HUGS  ~Cathy

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