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Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2017 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 25: THE BEAUTIFUL ONES: My Little Secret Part 2

I can't believe I didn't review this chapter! Humblest apologies!

Another great one as usual. Justin is now getting a tad bit of the necessary information needed. Ethan is realizing time is now over for him. what he does now is anybodies guess. Michael is going to be on tenderhooks if he's not careful. Brian is going to realize just how awful a person michael really is adn just how involved in everything he is. He actually had teh audacity to call Justin toxic!? Well, if that's teh pot calling teh kepple black I don't know what is! 

Ted was....impressive! I mean...wow! Boy did he piss Michael off. Little Mikey is going off in a tailspin. SAdistically fun to watch really, knowing what the end result will inevitably be. :)

Wow...what in incredibly out of the blue explanation from the Petersons! I was NOT expecting that in the slightest! (Mind you, neither were B&J...) those truths they spoke of, regarding Lynette's previous marriages...how aweful! Lindsey in a league all her own for Bitch of the Year. Very worthy of the title "C-word" 

I can't tell you how thrilled I am about Clarence!! O..M...G!! He is quite teh schemer, and that he and ron discussed Lindsey in great detail, and he knows Henry, and everything that Lynette had to put up with...Oh this is going to be GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD! (insert evil laugh)

Does anyone else besides Daph see B&J having their own fun? :)

Off to the next chapter.

Cheers

Elaine

 

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2017 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 26: TOXIC- My Little Secret Part 3

I love the last pararaph with the PITA-A (Pain-in-the-Ass Association) quote.

Score points for Justin and Daphane!!  Both Michael and Lindsey deserved the beatdowns they got.

Reviewer: LauraB725 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2017 1:28 am Title: Chapter 25: THE BEAUTIFUL ONES: My Little Secret Part 2

Another most excellent chapter, thank you! I loved Teds interaction with Michael and what a sleaze Lindsay is! I'm glad Ron and Nancy came around and I can't wait to see what Clarence have in store for Lindsay! Looking forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2017 9:02 pm Title: Chapter 25: THE BEAUTIFUL ONES: My Little Secret Part 2

I loved this line about Daphne: "the girl will probably make the ‘canines in law enforcement' look like amateurs when it comes to sniffing the skeletons in his proverbial closet" and also this one from Ted "she's currently trapped in WASP-ville USA, with Mommy and Daddy so far up her flat ass, she can't even fart without them knowing about it"

Justin and Brian's interlude before Michael barged in was preparing some hot moves that might come later.

Ted dealing with Michael: he definitely grew some balls since being close to Brian. It suits him well.

Michael complaining about Ethan's voice... Priceless!!!

Brian and Mel: such an interesting exchange; for once, they understand each other, let the other talk; as for the secrets Brian let out, it was funny how he tried to cover them.

It was funny how Justin let know the Petersons that he knew they spied on them.

Ethan and Brian in the backroom: he must have been really high to let the rat chin suck him off (or trying to); at least, Ethan was able to see what attributes Brian had and how he was able to use them.

I loved the way you wrote with each character's perspective.

The revelations about Lindsey blew my mind: what a mean, evil, calculating bitch!!!

The last scene thru Daphne's eyes is everything. Did everyone see it?


Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2017 2:48 am Title: Chapter 25: THE BEAUTIFUL ONES: My Little Secret Part 2

lovely long chapter-  interesting about Ron and Nancy-  and I love that the guy Linds is "
dating" is in on the payback.  Lindsay is a bitch and I'm glad she's going to get what's coming to her.  Now only if Michael and Ethan will also get theres, the tale would be awesome.  Can't wait for another new chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2017 3:07 am Title: Chapter 25: THE BEAUTIFUL ONES: My Little Secret Part 2

What a fabulous chapter.  We learn why Lynette had so many divorces.  Brian and Justin have Melanie, Daphne, Ron and Nancy and so many others on their side, even Lindsay's soon to be ex-fiance.  Lindsay and Michael as well as Ethan are on their way out.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2017 12:40 am Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

Voyeur indeed- very interesting-   I hope Justin listens to Melanie and pushes for Ethan to pay-  he ended up in the hospital and it was Ethan's fault.  So glad to see an update and I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2017 8:54 pm Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

Ok, first of all . . . Ewwww! Nancy was the one watching? Icky! And second, I see that whole lawsuit being a total mess. Poor Brian and Justin returning home from their blissful retreat to that. TAG

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2017 1:57 pm Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

Why and how are Ron and Nancy spying on Justin? Scary  and just gross .

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2017 4:24 am Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

Another great and key chapter: they talk and decide together; Brian has regrets about the way he made Justin miserable. Let's hope he will act to avoid that again.

I agree: they should show they are back together as it will be obvious they are.

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2017 3:39 am Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

I need more, everything is leading up to the big confrontation... Write faster!!!

Hugs Kathleen 💟

Reviewer: 7Wildwaysup Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2017 3:17 am Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL

Great chapter Darling! So great to see new chapters posted...

Hugs Kathleen 💟

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2017 1:51 am Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

Sweet Jesus! At first it was hot hot hot! Oh my...then, out of nowhere, holy shit! Seriously? Ew ew ew...fucking Nancy & Ron?! Sickos! That was so wrong of them on so many levels. I mean, I loved the chapter, as usual but I never would have thought it was them...yikes! And then oh my goodness, once the boys get back, some serious shit is going to hit the fan. Poor Ben & Mel, I hope their taste in potential mates gets better. 

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2017 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

Okay so I had to stop in the somewhat middle to say this...NANCY WAS THE FUCKING WATCHER?!? LAWD HAVE MERCIFUL! Now back to my scheduled reading.

Reviewer: LauraB725 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2017 6:40 pm Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

Wow the B&J scene in the beginning is probably one of the best I've read which says a lot since there are soooooo many to compare it to lol. Definitely Hot as Hell! The voyeur...you saw my comments on FB... I agree with emac, brain bleach is an order!! The shock hasn't worn off yet. I'll have to reread the rest of the chapter when I settle down lol. Can't wait for the next update!!

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2017 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

Ummmmmmmm...gotta say, that first part...B&J, HOT AS HELL! I mean the whole scene of them together sounded really beautiful. I was wondering who it was watching them. the idea kinda creeped me out a bit. I had various names running through my head. Sam?? Dr. Dave?? I even considered Dixon, but he doesn't know lindsey. etc. then it occured to me it could be a woman. I though, Mel perhaps? Obviously it was someone who knew Lindsey as the witch she is. Then out of the blue.........EEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKK!!!!!!! Brain bleach!!!!!!!!!!!! OMFG! Nancy?!?!? then Ron was there too?!?!? GAH! I get being turned on my those 2 (B&J I mean...not R&N *shudders*), really I do. But holy shitballs man...that'd be like knowing your parents are watching you in a home porn video. GAH!! Give a girl some warning! LOL!!

So Phoebe did tell Mel everything thankfully. Now Mel has to figure out how to proceed. At least Ben is there too. Sadly they have both come to the realization of what their true places were int their partner's lives. Placeholders. How devestating is that?!?! they both are dreading having to tell B&J what's been going on. Don't blame them. I hope it doesn't effect Justin's progress. Hopefully he just gets pissed off enough to make him fight back. I like that Mel wants to get Lindsey in as a co defendent too. Oh this is going to be great! Now I wonder what carl is going to do. What is Deb going to do/say about Michael's involvment?

B&J are heading home. I'm a bit nervous for what lays ahead for them both once they get back. Glad they've talked a bit about what they both expect from each other. All justin as really asking for is some respect from Brian. Plain and simple. Something that one should expect from anyone really. Brian sees that and understands and appears to be very open to the "don't do stupd shit" rules. I think...I hope that going forward, their relationship is going to be stronger now. That this time away wasn't just a blip, and that people around them are going to see them both in a new light. soemthing that is NOT going to please 3 of them. Will there be some kind of confrontation coming up? I'm a bit on pins and needles just thinking about the possiblities.

EXCELLENT update. I'm so happy that you posted. Pretty sure I need a drink though thinking about Nancy and Ron watching B&J. LOL!! (It's only 9:30 am)

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2017 3:56 pm Title: Chapter 24: MY LITTLE SECRET

Things are coming to a head.  It's time Justin and Brian learned what has been going on behind their backs.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL

*grabs some popcorn and settles in* I wonder who has been watching them all this time?

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 2:57 am Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL

Such a great story- all the intrigue and the edge of your seat writing.  Glad Phebes had a change of heart, but who is watching Justin and Brian?  Can't wait for more

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2017 1:44 am Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL

So, why don't they just turn off the computer or even simply turn it a different way? Lol. TAG

Reviewer: LauraB725 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2017 2:49 am Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL

OMG Talk about a cliffhanger!!! That came out of left field!! Who in the world is watching them?? I doubt it's Michael because he simply doesn't have the brains to pull that off. Probably not Ethan either because he clearly doesn't know B&J are back together. Now Lindsay is possible but something tells me no. I think if it was any of those three they would be way more frantic. I have a feeling it's going to be the last person I suspect. I really hope the next chapter will be posted soon because I can't wait to find out who it is!

I love Phoebe and wonder why she's childhood friends with the chin rat. I didn't think him capable of having such a friendship. I'm happy that she gave Ethan some food for thought although I don't think he'll listen especially when he finds out Justin and Brian are back together. I'm also so so ecstatic that she decided to tell Daphne what she knew about the three stooges. Hopefully we'll get to dispensing some justice to the psycho freaks!

Thank you for the update and I'm looking forward to reading the next installment. I'm a huge fan of your writing and am in the midst of a Nichelle marathon, even the WIPs! Keep up the good work.

Laura

 

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2017 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL

Omg who in the hell has been watching them?! Wtf?! 'Enjoy the free porn', love it! Lol

Phoebe is cool, finally coming clean about Ian, good for her! Daphne is always the best! Get 'em girl! 

Michael & Lindz are fucked, and not in a positive life affirming way....please tell me we're getting another chapter this weekend??

Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2017 8:07 pm Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL

Ewwwwww.....don't like the idea of a video of B/J being forever on the internet. Like it even less that the voyeur could be Ethan, Michael or Lindsay. Awesome story. Been waiting through 5 chapters for Brian to learn that Michael stole a used condom from his Loft. Hope it happens soon. I enjoy your stories soooooo much I've read and reread several of them...even the wip ones ( which I hope are updated soon). 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2017 6:07 pm Title: PROLOGUE... AT THE END...

Hi Nichelle!

Thank you for the clarification!

I know there is a risk of that and I always put something on the webcam; I didn't think about Justin's use of skype for his business and what you wrote made it clear.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2017 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 23- UNFAITHFUL

I was wondering if/when Phoebe will tell what she knows to someone. I can't wait to read Mel's reaction.

I didn't get at the end why Justin didn't disconnect the skype session before going to bed. Was it intentional?



Author's Response:

Hey Claire,

A strange thing with computers in general is that if one knows what they're doing, it's not hard to access the webcam on a computer, even with bypassing the firewalls set up. If Justin is always signed in and available, which in the context of this story he is, it makes it easy to tap into Justin's camera via the Skype feature. So saying, it definitely wasn't intentional- at least not in that context. A lot of Justin's business takes place on Skype since he has clients based all over while he's been stationed in Pittsburgh. Video conferencing is primarily how they keep in touch without Justin having to travel every few days, especially since he's in California working. Don't worry though. We'll know exactly who received the free porn next chapter and whether or not they will keep Brian and Justin's secret.

Happy Reading and HUGS,

~Nichelle

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