Date: Jun 27, 2017 9:41 pm Title: Chapter 29: MY SECRET ENEMY
Wow! So, Ethan gave them all up. Interesting.
I KNEW they framed Justin...freaking asshole scumbags!!
Michael is going to waiting awhile for mommy to come help him out I believe. At least i hope!! she better not!
I am really really looking forward to Lindsey getting ass put away! Michael doing so is great, but there's an even better visual of Lndsey being put behind bars. Especually with her high and mighty attitude.
So enjoyed this update. thank you!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jun 27, 2017 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 29: MY SECRET ENEMY
Even when Michael is in an 'unfortunate circumstance', he doesn't get it. His sense of entitlement is overwhelming, so glad he's gonna be up shit's creek without a paddle! Same for dear Ms. Lindz, wow! Ron & Nancy are really setting her up good. Glad their not my parents! Glad Ian is singing like a canary, plead deal or not, Michael & Lindsay are getting what they deserve, woohoo! Great chapter my darling!
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2017 3:30 am Title: Chapter 29: MY SECRET ENEMY
So Ethan is singing like a canary? GOOD!!!
Serves Michael and Lindsey to be infested with a thousand fleas for doing that to the guys.
Love this story!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Sandy Darling! LOL! Yep, Ethan gives new meaning to that Caged Bird singing! Lindsay is in for a very rude awakening. She just keeps digging herself deeper and deeper... it's truly a joy to watch/write! As for Michael, he'll find out just how dispensable he really is in the grand scheme of Brian's life.
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2017 3:29 am Title: Chapter 29: MY SECRET ENEMY
Woah, you give us a lot and have us looking forward to your next chapter. Can't wait to find out how Lindsay feels about being charged with stealing a credit card. Michael is in more trouble than he thought possible.
Author's Response:
Hey Phyllis! Gotta love it when Lindsay digs holes for herself; she never does anything halfway. She has such an inflated sense of importance here that it's no wonder everyone is out to get her. I would probably feel sorry for her but... nah, my feelings aren't set up that way LOL. As for Michael, I would feel sorry for him but... nah my feelings aren't set up that way either! The way I see it is if he wasn't trying to hurt Justin in the first place, then he would never have been in a place to be so easily influenced by Lindsay. It's a true case of Karmic justice.
Happy Reading and HUGS Darling!
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2017 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
Craig and Mr Mayweather, what a hypocrite!!! Brian and Brandon brothers? Squeals! Jail time for Michael, Lindsay and the Fiddlefuck... I'm loving this fic!
Hugs Kathleen
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2017 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 25: THE BEAUTIFUL ONES: My Little Secret Part 2
Yes! It's time for this charade to come crashing down around all the weazels... I'm so happy Brian and Justin are finally getting their relationship back on track...
Hugs Kathleen
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2017 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 25: THE BEAUTIFUL ONES: My Little Secret Part 2
Yes! It's time for this charade to come crashing down around all the weazels... I'm so happy Brian and Justin are finally getting their relationship back on track...
Hugs Kathleen
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2017 1:15 am Title: Chapter 20.3 REFUGIO de AMOR (You Are My Home) the FIRST Date Part 3
Wow! That was fantastic!!! It was great to reread it again... Now onto the new chapters​. Have I mentioned that I'M loving this fic...
Hugs Kathleen
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2017 8:30 pm Title: Chapter 20.2 LOVE IS.... TEENAGE DREAM: FIRST Date Part 2
I have a lot of catching up to do... So many chapters to read, I'm in heaven!
Hugs Kathleen
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2017 8:55 am Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
Boy, you sure weave intricate plots. How do you keep track of all this? Lol. TAG
Date: May 10, 2017 7:12 pm Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
Whoa!!! What a dense and key chapter!!!
The news about Craig is hilarious if not dramatic knowing what he did to Justin. Molly has some reflex and I loved how she explained what happened and why!
The other major info is Molly knowing Brian and why!
What I didn't get was about the father having an other son that could be Brian; I don't get the implication(s).
I loved the "baby whisperer".
Author's Response:
Hey Claire!!
Molly is a MESS! It was so much fun to write about her discovery. She is definitely Justin's sister. Brilliant and BALLSY! LOL
To answer your question about Brian, you have to go back to Chapter 21, which is the first part of the date. Brian isn't sure who his father really is, although by all accounts Jack was believed to be. Joan had a drunken one-night stand with her brother-in-law (who was Jack's twin brother)- a situation similiar to how Brian and Lindsay ended up in bed during college. A few days later when John left, she was forced to have sex with her husband after they fought. And that, my dear, is where the implication lies.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: May 10, 2017 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
OMG!!!! WTF!! Girl, You are killing me with all these twists and turns! So, Nancy and Ron Peterson being Brian and Justin's voyeurs and buying the Rage paintings was a huge shocker in and of itself but Craig Taylor a closeted gay man??? Again, WTF??? And Ewww not a sexy visual!!! Lord almighty! I need some brain bleach!! I have no sufficient words for this turn of events!! You have once again succeeded in sending me into a tailspin for the rest of the day and possibly tomorrow! Thank you for that!
On another note, I'm glad that Taryn knows about Michael and Lyndsay's deception and she has met the boys. And I'm more than thrilled that Ethan the chin rat confessed everything but I'm curious what kind of deal they want to offer him.
As always, great update! Can't wait to see how this all plays out! Thanks for the update Nicole and looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
Hey Laura!
That whole Craig thing was.... is.... YIKES! The stuff that happens in this story is just WOW! Save me some of that brain bleach because I'm sure to need it, LOL
Taryn is just as much a victim of Lindsay and Michael's lies as Brian is. But I think that she will still come out on top just as the rest of them will. I can certainly see a friendship developing between her and the remaining members of the family. After all, look at Brian and Mel and how they are developing now that Lying-lips Lindsay is out of the picture.
Ethan's confession will be addressed in the next chapter or so, including getting Justin and Michael's reaction to it. The deal hasn't been offered yet since the victim's rights to seek restitution has to be honored. Either way Ethan will definitely see a punishment of some sort; it just depends on how gracious Justin is willing to be.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: May 10, 2017 5:04 pm Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
Woah!! ther are a few jaw dropping moments in this chapter!! Nancy's complete disdain for herown daughter is...actually pretty freaking funny! Her reaction to Lindsey's meltdown was priceless. Everyone else laughing it up downstairs was great too. Lindsey seems to think that she's in the "circle" just because of her parents. She's stuck between a rock and a hard place and it's completely her own doing. Don't think she's going to have to worry about where to live for very long. Pretty sure the state will happily provide her with housing, 3 meals/day and will even outfil her in soem very nice orange garments. :) ;)
Now...the next and ABSOLUTE BEST jaw dropper!! OMFG! Molly outing her dad!!!!!!!! I freaking well nearly died laughing! (when I wasn't bleaching my eyeballs at the visual I had) that was...that was...EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that she hit him in the nards with a fry pan!! I'm DYING HERE!!!!!!!! LMFAO!
And Brian's secret is out now. Justin now REALLY knows how much Brian cares. always did. Nice to see Molly and Justin reuniting too.
anticpating the DA seeing the family. So much info. Ethan I think really saved his own bacon here, but that won't help him in teh least with Justin. Hopefully he'll just slink off like the snake he is.
Very happy to have this to read. Was so excited ot see it. Am anticipating the next one now!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
Hey Elaine!
I really like writing Nancy and Ron this way! It's nice to see a change instead of them buying into Lindsay's foolery. As for Ms. Plans, herself, she's going to receive several wake up calls during the rest of this fic. Now that Annette is out for revenge, I think she is really going to find out what it's like to face the consequences of her actions. She's offended so many people in her quest to be Queen Bitch that watching her downfall will be satisfying to say the least.
Molly is DYNAMITE! She is definitely her brother's sibling in that she's brilliant and ballsy to boot. Craig deserved that shot to the nads and so much more... which he will be getting if he tries to mess with any of the other Taylors. Let's hope he does...LOL
I always thought that if Molly and Brian were able to meet, they would have done it this way. It's wonderful to write them as building a rapport with one another without the initial opinions of the parents between them. Considering the bio-sister that Brian had, I think the relationship between Molly and Justin will show Brian that it doesn't always have to be a source of contention. Considering that Brandon is in town asking about Brian, this may be a really good time for him to see that.
Ethan's fate will really rest in Justin's hands, even though he doesn't know it yet. It depends on how gracious Justin feels like being when faced with the opportunity to throw the book at the Vacuous Violinist.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2017 5:18 am Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
What an interesting twist. Craig is gay! Molly is amazing. I'm betting at least one of the babies is Justins. This gets more interesting with each chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Phyllis! I love writing intricate plots but there is so much that is surprising me in this storyline. Every chapter is a surprise! In this one, Molly was mine, LOL I knew she would make an appearance but that girl...!!! WHEW! Still laughing at that scene!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2017 4:56 am Title: Chapter 28: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 2
All I want to say is NICE SHOT Molly!!!
ROFLMAOPIMP!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
That was seriously too much FUN to write!!! I couldn't even stop laughing! ROFLMAOPIMP for real!!
HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: May 06, 2017 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 27: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 1
Go Justin & Brian! Finally coming together...love it!
Ethan is a friggin imbecile...although it's true, Michael better be ready for a rude awakening!
Lindsay is such a piece of work! 'See what I did there'....art...piece of work lol I wish I could have seen her face....heehee
Date: May 04, 2017 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 27: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 1
Pretty broken up for Brian. All that reflection he did. Realizing just how much L&M are NOT his friends...and haven't ever really BEEN his friends. Poor guy. To suddenly have the blinders taken off and see how they used him. The fact that he compared them to, and saw them as worse than Joan, Jack and Claire...I want to rip those 2 a new asshole!
Ethan sees that he's a sinking ship finally. He's still feeling sorry for himself. Not sure what he feels the worse about losing though. Job or Justin. I'm not so sure he really loved Justin, or the idea of a muse. He's going to put M&L under the bus before they can do teh same to him. I hope though he's honest in his statements and takes responsibilites for his part in it all. Curious as to what Michael's reaction will be when he comes to.
AS for Lindsey...all this couldn't happen to a better C-word! :) She's going to have an ever bigger hate on for Justin now. I can only hope that with Ethan's and eventually Michael's statements, that she will get her ass thrown at her as well. Not sure how's she's going to react now that her world has crashed down around her. That all her delusions are smashed to smithereens. Will she come back fighting or will revenge be ever more present in her mind?
Excellent chapter!! Was thrilled to see and update as always!!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: May 04, 2017 3:09 pm Title: Chapter 27: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 1
I would love to see that artwork myself! Lol. TAG
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2017 4:28 am Title: Chapter 27: YOU GIVE LOVE A BAD NAME Part 1
Ethan has come a long way to nothing. At least he won't go down alone. Lindsay finally sees the truth in those paintings. Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2017 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 26: TOXIC- My Little Secret Part 3
Yay! So glad Justin finally got to punch Michael. Lol! TAG
Date: Apr 27, 2017 12:49 am Title: PROLOGUE... AT THE END...
Hi I love love love your work and have so many of your stories on my bookshelf waiting for their next update and I've read almost every work you've done. I was hoping before I start reading times up volume 2 you could please tell me if you do in fact plan on ending it because I don't want to start reading and be left wanting in the end. Thank you so much.
Gabbywithay xx
Date: Apr 25, 2017 4:19 am Title: Chapter 26: TOXIC- My Little Secret Part 3
Whoa!!! What a chapter!
Hot and liberating.
The dynamic duo of "bratty" boxers was hilarious: Michael and Lindsey didn't have a chance to avoid the punches; so good to read!
Now that Michael and Ethan are out, I can't wait to read the WASP's downfall, which I hope will be public and humiliating.
Date: Apr 25, 2017 2:55 am Title: Chapter 26: TOXIC- My Little Secret Part 3
OMG, Chelle. This was utterly fantastic! Absolutely amazing. Finally, I get caught up, and what a time to do so. It's so good to see these disgusting pigs outed. I was cheering as Michael continued to insert his foot in his mouth - in a way only he could do. Cowardly little worm as always. Him and Ethan... and let's not forget Lindsay. Ugh. What a chapter! Brilliant and so filled with emotion. I can't begin to take it all in.
And let's not forget about the scene from the roof. Phew. I don't even have to be there and still I felt like an intruder. It was so well plotted out, and the emotions felt so intensely. Loved it!
Another amazing chapter, my friend. As always, I can't wait for more.
Thanks for writing! *Hugs* Janet
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2017 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 26: TOXIC- My Little Secret Part 3
Yes, Michael and Ethan have got their just deserts. Now we just have to wait for Lindsay's.
Date: Apr 24, 2017 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 26: TOXIC- My Little Secret Part 3
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! OMG! Ok..That was pretty much one of teh best scenes ever! I pictured everything in my head. Absolutely priceless! I'm currently at work and had to bite my lips to keep from laughing out loud! Oh man...Michael and Ethan are IDIOTS! Well, it seems teh jig is up finally.
wish I had seen both justin's and Daphne's punches! Oh has satisfying that must've been and so bloody well deserved! Lindsey is lucky...for now that is. hehehe.
Oh man on man. what a THRILLING chapter! It was fan-freaking-tastic!
Excited to see what happens next! Am already salivating for the next chapter and you only just posted this one a few minutes ago. lol
cheers
Elaine