Date: Oct 10, 2017 4:40 pm Title: Chapter 32: NO EASY WAY OUT
Michael fell in the trap and good luck to him to get out!
I loved how Lindsey was managed by Clarence and how she lost her new clothes: her WASPiness is quite all gone.
Deb's scene at Mel's was so dense and tense that I feared something dramatic might have happened. Everybody is going to feel sad/depressed about what Deb is doing.
Great chapter! Thank you for posting it!
Happy writing Nichelle!
Date: Oct 10, 2017 4:18 pm Title: Chapter 32: NO EASY WAY OUT
Wow wow wow...omg! What a chapter! Holy shit! Amazing Nichelle! Well done babe! Michael & Lindsay are so screwed! Thank God! Deb has got to see reason at some point. Jesus...everyone is so sad that they've lost her...go Jennifer! Wow, talk about a mama bear!
I hope you're doing better sweetheart, I'm worried about you...much love & hugs!
Date: Oct 10, 2017 2:32 pm Title: Chapter 32: NO EASY WAY OUT
Hi,
Great update. Loving this story.
Sad though that Debbie have reverted back to being as she is. She already going to lose her house because we all know that micheal will not pay the mortgage and even now since he in jail. I do not see Carl taking her in either if she continues to harras Brian and Justin to drop the charges.
I like the back story on Kiki. And although she and Deb have been friends for a really long while she does not fully trust her either.
Keep On Writing.
Date: Oct 10, 2017 5:59 am Title: Chapter 32: NO EASY WAY OUT
Wow. You covered alot in this chapter. It was great.
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2017 2:19 am Title: Chapter 32: NO EASY WAY OUT
Wow! Will Deb calm down once Justin gives her back her home? or will he? With her attitude the way it is, I wouldn't if I were him. Michael and Lindsay are not getting out of this even if they think they are.
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2017 1:16 am Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
Can't wait for whats next
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 11: THIEVES IN THE TEMPLE: Justin (and others)
OK I hate Ian now...I know I know Ethan
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 9:50 pm Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)
Excuse me !!! Holy crap !!!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 9- TEENAGE SENSATION: Brian
Have I said I can't stand Michael, never have,never will. Brian and Justine are driving me crazy. Great story.
[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2017 9:25 am Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
It's nice to see a 'good' Claire for a change. TAG
Date: Sep 15, 2017 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
Thank you for the update!
Brian is going to suffer a lot during the coming weeks/months; he will have to work on "forgetting" his friends betrayal and Deb's reactions.
Now that he made his choice, Justin knows where he stands and will be able to help and support him.
I can't wait to see how Lindsey will have to give her new clothes back.
Date: Sep 15, 2017 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
I was just thinking about you and WHAM! There you are. I hope all is well with you.
What an incredible update. I ws so excited to see it. Duplicitous doesn't come close to M&L's behaviour. I'm over the top angry, disgusted and heartbroken all at once. So looking forward to their cumuppence.
All that Lindsey was thinking was....ugh...gotta say, gave me the willies! What a manipulative C-word! Her and Vance?!?! YICK! Lynette showing up, and the fact that Claire is turning over a new leaf was brilliant! I like how they are both working together to help bring down Lindsey.
Curious as to how Deb is going to react to everything happening. glad that Brian was so assertive in his insistance that he won't be helping, no matter what Deb does or says.
what a glorious chapter. Readit at least twice now. :)
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Sep 15, 2017 1:27 pm Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
Oh yes, my pleasure as well! This is very interesting...Claire & Lynette...hmmmmmm cannot wait for Lindsay's arrest and how Deb will react to all of this. Hopefully she'll know when to let go. Now my dear Nichelle, I've been concerned about it honey. I hope everything is alright, missed you girl! xo
Date: Sep 15, 2017 10:06 am Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
Good grief... Lindsay is a harlot of the first order. Her seducing Vance (among others) is proof of that. Yuk! Not the image I wanted to start my day with lol.
Lindsay is so psycotic and delusional it's a bit frightening. I'm so glad everyone is on to her otherwise she'd be much more dangerous. It's great to see Claire and Lynnette helping with her demise. I cant wait for her arrest.
I feel a bit sad for Deb and what is coming her way in regards to Michael. I have to wonder how he turned out like this, did she smother him way too much? Deb is going to have to decide if she's going to support him now or let him go. There is no hope for Michael, he's not getting out of this hole he has put himself in. I do hope she makes the right decision.
Thank you for your update and looking forward to the next!
[Report This]Date: Sep 15, 2017 6:34 am Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
It's my pleasure too.
Saje
[Report This]Date: Sep 15, 2017 2:08 am Title: Chapter 31: ENEMY Part 2
Can't wait to see how Deb takes things. Looking forward to Lindsay's come down. She's finally messed with the wrong people. Knowing that she was conspiring with Gardner just makes it all worse.
Date: Aug 28, 2017 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 30: ENEMY Part 1
My mind is blown by how involved Mcichael and Lindsey are with all the schemes they've perpetrated against Justin. Unreal. From the robbery, involving Ethan, the prom, Hobbs...my goodness. Justin is out for blood now and rightfully wo. Seems like Brian is fully supporting him as well. I hope he does get the house and then signs it back over to Deb. (depending on her reaction to all that her son has been up to and what Justin is doing) There's no way she can excuse his behaviour at all. No way she can lay it at Brian's feet. At least I hope not. My goodness I am really excited about what you will have happen next!! It's a real nail biter.
Looking forward to Emmett and Ben living together. Even if it's just friends at first, I've always thought that they have a neat dynamic and would love to see something happen between them. I've always enjoyed fics that have them together. They would balance eachother out nicely and Emmett is far more intelligent than many people give him credit for. I think Ben already knows that. Ben will just need time to get over the fact he married an asshole.
Am REALLY excited for the next update!! I hadn't caught up with a few of the updates, so had to go back and read the whole thing. Oh such a chore... NOT! So wonderful. Have always been such a massive fan of your writings. No idea who many times I've read them over and over again.
Till next time.............
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Jul 25, 2017 4:51 am Title: Chapter 30: ENEMY Part 1
I NEED MORE!!!!!! So good.
Date: Jul 25, 2017 2:36 am Title: Chapter 30: ENEMY Part 1
This should be very ineresting- glad that Brian is supporting Justin in his efforts- now if this time the courts actually support Justin and Brian- all will be good- I know that folks sometimes feel for Debbie but in many ways she is maniupulating and does as much harm to Brian as Mikey does to him. By making Brian feel guilty and not act based on what "she did" for him as a teen, she is just as bad as the rest of them. No one should hold Brian's actions or reactions as something he "owes them" based on their acts when he was a teen. ( hopefully that made sense)
Date: Jul 23, 2017 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 30: ENEMY Part 1
Whoa! What an interesting plot. You had an amazing story-line for the whole Chris period.
The WASP's reactions are so funny, despite the facts that are exposed.
Date: Jul 23, 2017 1:37 pm Title: Chapter 30: ENEMY Part 1
Wow! Cut throat Sunshine! You go baby! Michael & Lindsay are toast! Of course they set Justin up...assholes!
I really enjoy the Emmett/Ben dynamic
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2017 8:14 pm Title: Chapter 30: ENEMY Part 1
Oh, I love this. You've tied everything together and added a lovely bow. Can't wait to see how the next chapter comes out.
Date: Jul 07, 2017 2:49 am Title: Chapter 29: MY SECRET ENEMY
I am enjoying reading this story, I hope the next chapter will be up soon.
lah
Date: Jul 02, 2017 2:46 pm Title: Chapter 29: MY SECRET ENEMY
I guess it goes without saying that both Michael & Lindsey deserve everything they're gonna get, right? Lol. TAG
Date: Jun 28, 2017 1:45 am Title: Chapter 29: MY SECRET ENEMY
Still loving this story. Love the scene with Molly and Mel- really Craig is a closet homosexual- awesome. Lindsay is a real bitch and Michael is just plain stupid. Can't wait for the next update. Serioulsy- Ethan robbed Brian- and what about Taryn's children/ Justin or Brian's child- that will be the uttimate question