Yes!!!!! More soon please

Great

okay, I'm enjoying this.  Brandon and Brian, how did that occur?  Love how Emmett got rid of Deb and how Ben told her off.  Now we find Michael with Hobbs?  Interesting.

I LOVE this story.  Wow this long chapter was really amazing.  You are doing such a fantastic job with writing it.  Can't wait to see where it goes.  Just happy that Brian & Justin are together.  Love happy endings.  Happy Thanksgiving

What a delight! Justin is a shark and doesn't hesitate to show it. I bet Brian is horny as hell after such demonstration.

WOW this was one hot chapter! The opening scene was epic! I love when Justin takes charge, so incredibly hot. These two are combustible. Phew! 

Lindsay’s world as she knows it is spiraling out of control. She’s so Delusional just like her partner in crime and his mom. I love Nancy and Ron in this too. She really has no one to turn to. 

The courtroom scene was so typically Michael. Dumb as the day is long. Disrespectful beyond reason. I still can’t wrap my head around the fact that he thinks he is justified in what he did. I think they need to lock him up with the most dangerous of criminals and throw away the key!

I enjoyed the boys’ talk when they woke up. How could Brian think that Justin would be the same way with Ethan? Pfft... unheard of. Brian’s reaction to the clothes and how Justin got them was priceless. Sunshine doing some name dropping and basically handing him two huge accounts was hilarious.

Justin will always be the ultimate King of Babylon. That closing scene was amazing! I have no other words about that!

Thank you for treating us with three chapters back to back to back. Looking forward to the next!

Whoa what a chapter! WTF is wrong with Deb. Regardless of the overwhelming proof of Michael’s guilt she is still blaming Brian and Justin. I suppose it’s easier than admitting to herself that she raised such an awful human being. She will soon realize all she is losing and will live the rest of her days alone because Michael will be in jail and she alienated her liberty ave family. I have no sympathy for her. I thoroughly enjoyed Jen’s smackdown!

OMG Lindsay, that interaction with Clarence followed by her new wardrobe disappearing was priceless. It’s only the beginning. Her life is going to come down like a house of cards soon enough. I can’t wait for that!

As for Michael, where do I begin?! Good Lord, what a sad individual. A more stupid, narcissist doesn’t exist. Being a reasonably sane person myself, I find it hard to believe that he feels justified in what he’s done and is delusional enough to believe he’s getting out of jail. He’s going down and I want a front row seat! 

Now off to see what the next two chapters hold! Thanks for the update and take care of you and your family. Take your time, update when you can.

The first scene after Vic and Deb are gone is way hotter than any make up sex scene ever! Justin was on fire!

Lindsey is starting to freak out, but still thinks she will be a trophy wife very soon.

The "altruistic" scene and the whole courtroom part was hilarious, yet, I felt so bad for Deb as she must realize her son is intellectually challenged.

I loved when Justin explained that Ethan couldn't compete with Brian, not that we needed the confirmation, but Brian did.

Then the "Balmain" scene, when Brian demands Justin to explain himself: Justin loves teasing Brian so much! Yet, Brian didn't expect to get a few contracts this way (and what contracts!).

The Babylon part was burning my screen and I just wanted to read how it ended: did Justin get his crown back?

Great chapter!!!

You are spoiling us Nichelle! Thank you so much!

Both Lindsay and Michael don't seem to realize they are in the hot seat.  Will Deb be joining them?  Everything Brian and Justin was so HOT I had to turn up my air conditioner.

So glad they ditched Deb!

thanks for the three new chapters!

It's great that Vic was there to witness Deb's arrival and support the boys during her scene.

Justin did the right thing with her house and it's clear that it's the last thing he will do for her, ever.

Thank you for the double update this week!

Wow you wrote fast. The Brandon thing was unexpected.

I'm percolating right now ready to explode! So bloody angry at Deb! As a parent, I of course adore my daughter, but I am definitely not blind to her faults adn I also call her on them. If she doesn't learn from my lessons, then she learns teh hard way on her own. Deb needed to do that with Michael. She hasn't and I don't think she will in teh future either unless she really gets a serious wake up call. Either way, I do't think teh gang is going to welcome her back with open arms. A tiny part of me feels sorry for her knowing what that outcome will be for her, but the larger part knows that she has it coming. Mel we awsome! Telling her to get out of her house. Jenn telling her off like she did. wonder if there is anything that can be done or said to her to make her see the truth of it all. I simply hate it when she says that "they owe her". UGH! Now thatvic knows about what's goign on...will he get through to her or will she get thrown to the side by Deb as well?

Michael is a freakign idiot! OMG!! While I'm glad he can't seem to keep his mouth shut, he is such a complete and utter idiot! My goodness, he openly admitted to paying them all off, and all the other devious shenanigans he and Lindsey were up to. He also was foolish enought (thank goodness) to not read teh contract even after being asked about reading the previous one...sigh...DUMBASS! He deserves everything he gets! i hope we get to  see what happens in court. Wonder if Deb shows up. LOL. that could be funny. Wonder if that actually lets her know how far her precious boy has gone adn done.

Oh this was such a bloody good chapter! LOVED IT!!!!! Am so excited for the net one!!

Cheers,

Elaine