[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2018 12:07 pm Title: CHAPTER 41: ONE LITTLE SLIP
Woah! This chapter is just chock full of good stuff! Keep up the good work.
Date: Apr 10, 2018 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 40: CONFESSIONS Part II
Great chapter. Glad that Mikey & Linds will get what is coming to them. Great writing.
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2018 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 40: CONFESSIONS Part II
Deb is in real need of help. Maybe a little time in a psychiatric institute would help.
Date: Apr 10, 2018 9:46 pm Title: Chapter 40: CONFESSIONS Part II
Holy shit! I really hope Deb let's go of her delusions where Michael is concerned but probably not. Carl was bring such a sweetheart with her even though he didn't have to. I wonder what else they found at the house. Hmmmm and poor Taryn! I hope it was just her water breaking & she wasn't bleeding.....
Date: Apr 10, 2018 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 40: CONFESSIONS Part II
Debbie has a hard choice to make and it's her last possibility to do so.
I'm curious to see what new element Chris has to make a deal for and what they found out at Debbie's.
Thank you for the update!
Happy writing!
[Report This]Date: Apr 10, 2018 7:15 pm Title: Chapter 40: CONFESSIONS Part II
True Deb does have a different set of rules for herself, Michael and Everyone else.
What she did is okay because she was a single mother and Blah, Blah, Blah.
Deb was always good at calling others out on their Crap, but couldn't stand when anyone flipped the script and threw her lies back in her face.
Deb is another person who will have to live with the consequences of her actions, no longer will she be able to hide behind her Saint Mother of Everyone Act
I would like to think Deb is ready to grow up but groveling without asking for more is not her thing.
Michael is doing the full twenty cause he is arrogant enough to believe he is justified in his actions.
Lindsay is the exact same way (Swear she and Michael are twins with the same IQ & brain cells smh) she will excuse her behavior because she was trying to save Brian.
So Craig is involved too, why am I not surprised he will do anything to punish Justin for not following his rules and tarnishing his image.
Oh the next chapter us going to be Gooood!! :)
Date: Mar 25, 2018 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 39: CONFESSIONS Part I
Great update. This is a good story and I can't wait to see where you go with it next.
Date: Mar 24, 2018 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 39: CONFESSIONS Part I
Wow wow wow!!! What a chapter! Would love to see that potential scene Brian spoke of.....him not walking straight haha, love me some Bottom Brian!
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2018 2:21 pm Title: Chapter 39: CONFESSIONS Part I
Well things are looking up for some and not so much for others.
Date: Mar 24, 2018 10:43 am Title: Chapter 39: CONFESSIONS Part I
The group gathered around Brian and Justin is getting pretty close; even Nancy is melting right in.
Did Microwavable Bitch and her sidekick hide a camera in Brian's room? How did they get the videos? That's so creepy.
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2018 3:53 am Title: Chapter 39: CONFESSIONS Part I
Brian is surrounded by people who have his back and won't let anyone hurt him again.
Brian has to confront Joan with Claire and Brandon in order to break the final hold she has on them both, Joan spent years hiding behind her bible and bottle while she had this secret that could have saved Brian and maybe Claire too.
Sprouting all that Crap about how she valued the sanctity of marriage and keeping the family together, What A Hypocrite!!!
Michael and Lindsay abused Brian and so did Deb they used his life to keep him down, never noticing that though he may give in he was leaving them all behind, they weren't friends they were leeches who tried to suck him dry and would've succeeded if it wasn't for Justin.
Justin saved Brian by loving him and his flaws while also encouraging him to see that his past isn't his destiny, Love, Real True, Honest Love With No Strings Cann Eclipse All Darkness.
Lindsay makes a Deb's wig look smart but that stupidity is her, Michael's and anyone else involved downfall.
Hope Deb has the money for a good lawyer?
Justin and Brian will take Rage into a whole new Stratosphere :)
Date: Feb 17, 2018 1:08 am Title: CHAPTER 38: SECRETS
Fantastic chapter. Finally Michael & Lindsay will get what they deserve. They are such idiots and you write them perfectly.
Date: Feb 16, 2018 5:31 pm Title: CHAPTER 38: SECRETS
so awesome- hopefully all that merchandise that Michael order can be sent back- 12K is a lot of money- they are both where they belong - in jail for a long time
Date: Feb 16, 2018 4:31 am Title: CHAPTER 38: SECRETS
Yeah, gotcha!!! The bitch is out and ashamed in front of the neighbours; that should calm her.
As for Debbie, now she has proof that her son is a bad person. Her baby is a mean one.
Date: Feb 16, 2018 12:30 am Title: CHAPTER 38: SECRETS
The perfect update! Lindsay gets busted!
Deb
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2018 8:22 pm Title: CHAPTER 38: SECRETS
Oh My Gawd, Oh My Gawd, OH MY GAWD!!!!
Michael and Lindsay are in so much trouble they better hope Brian and Justin don't ask for five minutes alone with them cause they will not survive.
They robbed Brian's lift and let Justin take the blame...Assholes!!!
Deb must be on crack if she thinks everyone is just going to gloss over her behavior towards them, that is why Michael and Lindsay got away with so much because everyone glossed over instead of always calling them out on the Shit!!
It is going to take more than tears and I'm Sorry for everyone to forgive her.
Time to break the pattern of Michael, Lindsay and Deb doing the fake apology and promises of never doing that again, then five minutes later going back to their selfish ways.
Deb may feel bad now that she knows what Michael was up to, BUT how sorry will she be when she hears that more charges have been added??
Looks like Brian and Justin will need to work off some anger lol ;)
Thanks for updating this story it is one of my favorites :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2018 8:10 pm Title: CHAPTER 38: SECRETS
Even knowing what she knows about Mikey, Deb is still backing him! Now that Brian knows about the card, thanks to Ted, Michael is in for trouble. Lindsay was set up perfectly too. Loved this.
Date: Jan 20, 2018 3:52 am Title: Chapter 34: CLOSER Part 2
Oh my goodness...
Date: Jan 01, 2018 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 20.3 REFUGIO de AMOR (You Are My Home) the FIRST Date Part 3
Justin remembers! I loved when Brian kissed him, pulled back, went to kiss him again but paused, just looking into his eyes before he kissed him again. The thoughts you could tell were swirling around in Mr. Kinney's head. And Justin gasping that he remembers, swoon.
And I love Dijon filling in Connor, who I admit, I don't particularly care for, LOL!
Date: Jan 01, 2018 1:25 am Title: Chapter 37: SORRY, NOT SORRY
What a great chapter. I am amazed by your writing. I truly love your stories and the one thing that really amazes me is how you can have so many WIPS going on at once. I would be lucky to keep one going let alone as many as you have. And, each story is so good. I anxiously await updates on each of them. Hope you have a very Happy New Year. May 2018 be good to you.
Date: Jan 01, 2018 1:03 am Title: Chapter 37: SORRY, NOT SORRY
Great and long chapter to start 2018 with an amazing firework!
Happy New Year to you too Nichelle!
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2018 12:33 am Title: Chapter 37: SORRY, NOT SORRY
Such a lot going on. Lindsay thought she would have things her way and found out she was wrong. Clarence isn't really planning on marrying her is he? So much more to learn. Must say I'm enjoying this immensly.
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2018 12:16 am Title: Chapter 37: SORRY, NOT SORRY
My Goodness You Know How To Bitch Slap Goodbye 2017 and bring in 2018 lol
Lindsay might want to get use to being bodily escorted off premises Brian, Justin and the others own cause she has a lot of enemies and gaining more every day.
Especially if the wives of her former lovers decide to sue her for emotional distress and other stuff ;)
A judge is looking into the Hobbs case Uh Oh!!!
Justin proved Lindsay's edit wrong about leaving Pittsburgh and Craig wrong that he wouldn't amount to anything, I doubt Adrianne would consider Lindsay a friend after her behavior towards Justin or like that Lindsay is trying to ride her coattails.
My goodness with Brian and Justin getting back together and becoming stronger, their businesses becoming more influential and Their family growing it is not going to be a good year for Lindsay, Michael, Deb and Craig lol
Fantastic Update!
Happy New Year!!!!! :) <Hugs>
Date: Dec 30, 2017 4:20 am Title: Chapter 18: DON'T ASK MY NEIGHBOR
Isn't it amazing what happens when you just flipping talk to each other boys?
Date: Dec 29, 2017 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 10: FOR THE LOVE OF MONEY: Justin (and others)
Good Lord Michael and Lindsey are all sorts of delusional. Brian is going to flip the F out when he finds out.