Date: Oct 23, 2018 4:06 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
This my kind of soon WOOHOO! Yes Debbie finally truly seeing what an evil shit Mikey is and how much she's lost
Date: Oct 23, 2018 3:09 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
So Brian has a girl and Justin has a boy. Instant family. Love that things are clearer as to the parentage of the children and that Craig will not be able to get to them. Should be an interesting continuation of the story with them raising them. ( hint, hint)- I like the perspective of Vic telling the story. Great that Mel is willing to help the guys and be the mom figure.
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2018 12:44 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
Yes Brian, Justin and Melanie are going to be Great Parents to The Two Princes and Princess!!
Lindsay is going to be Pissed!!
Then she can get pissed on when they toss her flat Ass to the curb!
Deb like Michael and Lindsay expects everything to be the same but she refuses to earn it just like Michael and Lindsay.
No One is rushing to her side because the hurt she caused is not easily forgiven, she browbeat everyone she could to make Michael happy and that bullying cost her the only family she will ever have.
"Saying I Did It For Michael" is weak and excuses nothing Brian was a fourteen year old abused kid just trying to survive, he wasn't emotionally equipped to be Michael's suedo Father, Brother, Best Friend or Boyfriend.
Deb's actions lead to this because she showed Michael that no matter what you do 'Mommy 'will Fix It', and everyone else learned that same mantra or they were shoved out the door.
Justin was really the only one who didn't immediately bend down to please Michael and that really pissed him off lol
Apart of Deb wants to be free but another part still expects everything to stay the same smh
Deb didn't answer Vic or Brian's questions which just goes to show that she isn't ready to break the chains.
Brian and Justin will figure out a way to raise their kids and still be The Best Most Successful Homosexuals They Can Be!!
After All That's What Family Is For ;)
[Report This]Date: Oct 23, 2018 12:26 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
Jennifer and Jordan what beautiful names. Melanie gets her J.R. after all. Looking forward to reading about Deb's talk with her son.
Date: Oct 23, 2018 12:26 am Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
Wonderful chapter. Thank you for making the babies belong to Brian & Justin. Fantastic writing.
Date: Oct 22, 2018 11:39 pm Title: CHAPTER 43: BABY MINE- FOREVER YOUNG Part 2
Yay! Justin and Brian are parents of newborns! Lindsay is going to have a fit! So glad they asked Mel to be mom to the twins so that Gus gets to share all his parents with his brand new brother and sister.
I hope Vic's words will sink in with Deb and she won't forget them, but I guess we'll find out when she sees Michael. Looks like she's got a long way to go still, though. *sigh* Gotta wonder if she will ever learn. At least she understands that a lot of the problems were caused by her own actions.
Looking forward to more!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Oct 22, 2018 7:06 pm Title: CHAPTER 42: FOREVER YOUNG
I'm so pleased to see this updated. This is awesome more soon?
Date: Oct 21, 2018 12:38 am Title: CHAPTER 42: FOREVER YOUNG
OMG! I love this fic so much! I'm so happy that you snatched up TAG's bunny! And you even did a wonderful twist on one of mine with Mikey hiring a surrogate to have Brian's baby! Bunnie hopping everywhere! LOL!
There is so much going on! Michael stealing from Justin; Lindsay stealing used condoms from Brian's loft; Ron & Nancy Peterson LOL! they were certainly a surprise as well as Lynette; Claire getting sober and now engaged to a man from the social circle that Lindsay longs to be in; and so much more!
You even had me wondering if there was going to be a third baby when the doctor told them 'all' the babies were fine! LOL!
Looking forward to the next update!
You ROCK!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Oct 20, 2018 7:23 pm Title: CHAPTER 42: FOREVER YOUNG
I love the "I'm going with him" remembering a very young assertive Justin in the back of the Jeep; "tic tic tic, pencils down"; Brian was wasted and horny as hell.
Lindsey's plan is backfiring big time!
I don't remember what kind of company Brian had the night before Justin and he had sex. If this person could be the father, does it mean that he topped Brian? Or was there more than one visitor?
Date: Oct 20, 2018 2:35 pm Title: CHAPTER 42: FOREVER YOUNG
Omg we have to wait for another chapter to find out who's baby is who's?? Even though....come one! lol
Okay theory time: Lindsay didn't even use her own eggs did she? Hmmmmm
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2018 3:55 am Title: CHAPTER 42: FOREVER YOUNG
How many chapters of this till it's finished so I can put it on my phone so I can reread it all the time.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2018 3:45 am Title: CHAPTER 42: FOREVER YOUNG
Please God Make It So!!!!
Those babies deserve to be with Brian and Justin because they will be loved and not used for malicious intentions.
In one hour one major question will be answered and another nail will be driven into Lindsay's coffin.
So want that Stinking Cow To Rot in a Cell for The Rest Of Her Life, along with Michael and Craig, want her to see the world passing her by as everyone forgets they ever existed (Hopefully?) while they live their lives in Happiness.
Justin knows how certain Wasps work so that means when Lindsay gets stung she will know Forever that it was in her mind a brain damaged kid with more intellect in his pinky than she has in her whole body.
Michael will be so devastated that all that money went to further Lindsay's schemes.
Lynette will achieve her Happiness as she watches Lindsay Fall!
So does Mel win the bet?
And will Joan have enough vodka when they come a knockin? lol
Date: Oct 20, 2018 1:38 am Title: CHAPTER 42: FOREVER YOUNG
CLIFFHANGER. If I didn't love your writing so much, I would be kicking and screaming, but I know you will continue this story and not make the readers wait forever for the results. Fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2018 1:03 am Title: CHAPTER 42: FOREVER YOUNG
Unless you pull a twist of all twist I think we know what the results will be and I couldn't be happier.
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2018 6:28 pm Title: CHAPTER 41: ONE LITTLE SLIP
Reread and the problem with Deb is that she has no morals anymore she lost all of that when she sacrificed everything for Michael and because of her examples he learned that if you ignore the truth then you never have to admit you were wrong.
And that if Michael wants the moon she will everyone to get it for him, she taught him if he whined long and loud enough he can get what he wants and because she never said No or taught him to grow up he would always need her and would never leave her behind.
Deb expects everyone to kneel for Michael because she has spent so many years being subservient to Michael that when they don't she gets all holier than thou and starts telling people what's wrong with their lives while ignoring that hers ain't exactly squeaky clean.
Deb, lectures, bullies and heckled everyone to follow her edits then is surprised when Michael uses that same method to lecture, bully and heckle her.
Lindsay really is exactly like Michael and what ticks her off is that because she swings both ways but refuses to admit it then Brian should too.
What happened one drunk night though I wonder how drunk Lindsay was since Brian barely remembers it and it was never repeated, especially since Brian has properly been drunker than that since being around Lindsay, even passed out drunk and high as a kite around Michael Brian never felt the urge...hmmm.
They all want the one person who bend but never really yielded to their dictates.
Jealousy, Greed and Contempt breeds all sorts of mayhem smh.
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2018 2:52 am Title: Chapter 40: CONFESSIONS Part II
Hope the babies are all right. Deb is asking for trouble isn't she?
[Report This]Date: Aug 18, 2018 2:31 am Title: Chapter 39: CONFESSIONS Part I
Things are finally hitting the fan and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: Aug 17, 2018 12:31 am Title: CHAPTER 41: ONE LITTLE SLIP
Long time no see. This was an awesome update, heads are beginning to roll. Update soon PLEASE!!!!!
Date: Aug 16, 2018 7:09 pm Title: CHAPTER 41: ONE LITTLE SLIP
Poor lawyer, having to deal with Michael; I love this quote "Hell, he could even make Martin Luther King, Junior rethink his stance on nonviolence."
Lindsey discovering that Justin is topping Brian quite often: priceless!
What Joan has to do with this? Another twist of yours?
Date: Aug 16, 2018 2:53 am Title: CHAPTER 41: ONE LITTLE SLIP
Oh wow, great chapter and fantastic writing. Happy that you appear to being well enough to continue updating. Just take care of yourself and know that you are in my thoughts and prayer at all times.
Date: Aug 16, 2018 2:44 am Title: CHAPTER 41: ONE LITTLE SLIP
so happy to see an update on this grand story. YOu've put so many plot twists and turns in there to keep it going.
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2018 4:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 41: ONE LITTLE SLIP
What The Hell Did Joan Do???!!!!!
Lindsay is her quest to ensnare Brian and get rid of Justin she left herself wide open by one not keeping her legs close and having too many people apart of her schemes.
It doesn't take a genius to see that Lindsay set herself up and by keeping a record of her plans, lovers, along video of her many, many conquests she has given the DA everything they need to make sure she is prosecuted to the fullest extent of the law.
Gus and his siblings will be expecting their own children by the time she gets out, if she ever does get out that is.
Michael is so Stupid but if he wants to go to trial then he will get his wish, if Deb tries to put the blame on Brian and Justin for Michael's idiotic behavior then she deserves whatever is coming to her.
Chris better just face what is coming to him like a man because no one will be saving him this time.
Daddy will be to busy trying to save himself.
Craig might want to start counting his pennies because he is paying Justin back every cent he stole from him with interest.
Fantastic Update!!! So Worth The Wait As Always ;)
Date: Aug 15, 2018 4:22 pm Title: CHAPTER 41: ONE LITTLE SLIP
How many more chapters of this story are you going to be doing?
Author's Response:
Hello Amy,
To answer your question honestly, I'm not sure. Since I am one of those writers who work from the most basic outline you can possibly imagine, I allow everything within the story to occur organically, even though I know where I want them to end up. The main goal continues to be to grow the characters according to their individual and collective situations. All I am certain of at this moment is that I'm aiming to finish all of my open WIPs by the last day of the year. It doesn't give me a lot of time, but rest assured that the stories will still be quality entertainment. I want you all running the emotional gamut the same way I do while I'm writing, LOL.
Thanks for your inquiry! HAPPY READING and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Aug 15, 2018 2:50 pm Title: CHAPTER 41: ONE LITTLE SLIP
Ok. Super great chapter. Lots of great detail.
Date: Aug 15, 2018 12:21 pm Title: CHAPTER 41: ONE LITTLE SLIP
OMG! I am loving this! So many twists and turns! I can't wait to find out how Joanie fits into all this!!! You write the best fics!!
*HUGS*
Deb