Date: Aug 31, 2016 5:37 am Title: Chapter 1
I wouldn't mind watching them... I wouldn't mind having Brian showing me the loft either... I won't comment on the spanking, otherwise, a cold shower would be mandatory...
Great story!
Author's Response:
I want the apartment across the street and expensive long distance video equipment.
Glad you enjoyed the story.
Cold showers suck, but are sometimes necessary
Thanks
~Lorie
Date: Aug 30, 2016 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hiya Lorie,
Painting with words = defenitely your speciality.
Hot, smutty porn. How could I resist this one.
Now after reading this one I need a long COLD shower and a nice glass of wine to wind down again.
Thank you for this amazing short story.
XOXO
Soirsa
Author's Response:
Soirsa,
So happy you enjoyed the story.
Thank you for the sweet comment.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2016 6:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooooooh that's some shower! That was ridiculously hot, thank you!!!!
Author's Response:
Sally,
I think of showers like that as party showers.
Glad you liked it
Thanks
~Lorie
Date: Aug 30, 2016 6:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
So freaking hot!
you need a side story to go with this... someone who looks out their window and sees one of the shower sessions... :)
Author's Response:
I love that you always want me to expand my stories. It's a great compliment.
Thanks
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2016 2:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
You did the painting with your words. I'm jealous of that loft.
Author's Response:
You would need to be a millionaire to afford a loft like that in NYC.
I just like to close my eyes and type what I see.
Thanks
~Lorie
Date: Aug 30, 2016 5:32 am Title: Chapter 1
YEEEEESSSSSSSS!!! And now I NEED a shower... A COLD ONE!
Loved this!!
~Chelle
Author's Response:
Chelle,
I was going for hot and porny, guess I got it right.
Thanks
~Lorie
Date: Aug 30, 2016 1:49 am Title: Chapter 1
When I grow up I want this shower. Loved the story too. Star
Author's Response:
Star,
It would be nice to have, but even more fun to watch them in.
Thanks
~Lorie
Date: Aug 30, 2016 1:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Pretty damn hot Lorie!
Got me wishing for a shower like that!
Ok time to cool down!
Author's Response:
Lorna,
I'd rather watch the two of them in that shower.
~Lorie
Date: Aug 30, 2016 1:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay! Your new story is up! Can't wait to read it! TAG
Author's Response:
Tag,
Read it when you need smut.
Thanks
~Lorie