Date: Jul 09, 2020 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please, don't let this not be completed. Is this story posted some where else?
Date: Oct 23, 2016 3:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
My heart dropped when Michael's shirt was inside out...I was thinking, no freaking way! Thank God I was wrong in my assumption. lol Yay, their going to have some serious bonding time in the Bahamas!
Date: Oct 23, 2016 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh no, why didn't Justin find a safer way to use his power? Then again if he had they wouldn't be going in a trip. I can't wait til they all get there's. Extorting poor Justin to hurt Brian what awful people.
Date: Oct 23, 2016 6:34 am Title: Chapter 12
Whoa! Definitely a dark and intense chapter!! I love that Justin stood up for himself to Brian... well as much as he was able to. He's accepted that realistically, Brian holds all the cards and has taken steps to ensure that he gets a fair deal should their arrangement crumble.
My heart really went out to him. That he felt that he could only control his fate by allowing a trick to abuse him, spoke volumes about Justin's state of mind. At least Brian didn't berate him like he could have but instead offered him a way to escape the weight and aftermath of his decision for a few days. If anyone understands pain management, Brian does. His compassion in that moment was a welcomed surprise. Hopefully it will last since they really need to on one accord to deal with the sleazy likes of Connor and Eck!
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Oct 21, 2016 1:03 pm Title: Chapter 11
This was so heartbreaking! Poor Justin but at least out from under that rat bastard Craig and won't be physically abused. Yet the emotional abuse Brian is planning on inflicting will be much worse. I have a feeling that although Justin's physical state will improve, he'll start to close himself off to almost everything and everyone around him. And that can't bode well for him in the long run. The big question now is what's to be done about Connor and that pariah Ethan?
Looking forward to more soon!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
Next chapter starts pretty dark. Sorry. Connor and Ethan will come into play soon again. Thanks for commenting.
Date: Oct 21, 2016 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 11
Well, that was a nasty dash of cold water. Better yet, that was just plain fucked up. I couldn't imagine being in Justin's shoes and having EVERYONE treat you like disease infested trash. Sorry, but I'm really not liking your Brian here. It's one thing to be upset about the Ardan situation, but to stoop so low as to want to subject Justin to helping him soothe his bruised ego....not cool at all.
Author's Response:
I'm kinda not liking him either. Thanks for pointing out he was being very unlikable, hopefully I can help him get better.
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2016 7:32 am Title: Chapter 11
Awwww. Poor Sunshine. TAG
Author's Response:
Yeah, I really have trouble writing happy when I down.
Date: Oct 21, 2016 5:27 am Title: Chapter 11
Brian is such an asshole I like this chapter
Author's Response:
Yes, he was. Thank you for liking it. I was worried people wouldn't
Date: Sep 14, 2016 1:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh my God! Get out of that doctor's office Sunshine! Craig will always be an ass!
Still trying to get used to Joan being a sweet woman...wow! She definitely called it when she told Brian, "And you slept with him. That says more about you than me" Way to go Joannie!
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I know, nice sweet Joan, hell froze over and all that. I'm sorry it's taken so long for new chapter.
Date: Sep 12, 2016 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 10
Nice cliff hanger! TAG :/
Author's Response:
Thanks. Sorry it was a long time inbetween.
Date: Sep 12, 2016 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting starting premise. TAG
Date: Sep 12, 2016 6:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
OH MY GOOD GRAVY!!!!! Justin is about to either be back on the street with the baby or Craig, the slimy snake, is going to hurt him!!! I really hope that Joan takes the initiative to find him since it's obvious that Brian won't. At the very least, I hope Mrs. Gentry protects him and Ciaran from Craig. OMG!!$This cliffhanger is truly evil! My anxiety is all the way up!
Come on story, reveal yourself to Pam already so she can put me out of my misery!!
Anxiously awaitng the next update,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I'm sorry. Cliffhangers just come to me and they are usually evil. I'm sorry it's taken so long for new chapter. I hope you like the new one.
Date: Sep 12, 2016 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
Craig will try to find a way to get rid of the foetus so he can get part of Justin's liver.
I just hope Brian will react in time or that Justin will understand why his father is acting so nice.
Author's Response:
Craig is vile. New Chapter up.
Date: Sep 12, 2016 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 10
That's a major cliffhanger and not a good one. Update soon, please
Author's Response:
So so sorry for it taking so long. Hope you like the new chapter.
Date: Sep 12, 2016 1:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
I did not see that coming. Brian needs to get his ass off his shoulders because Justin is really going to need him right now. Joan had a good point about Brian sleeping with him when he thought Justin was Brandon. At this point Brian really needs to think about whose lies hurt the most...because he sure has quite the teether ball himself.
Author's Response:
I know, Brian doesn't really get what he does I think, well in my story I know it. LOL.
Date: Sep 12, 2016 4:35 am Title: Chapter 9
I was almost happy Justin was welcomed by his father, but the evil planned something that's so wrong. I hope Justin will see the truth before it's too late and that his kid won't be another target if Justin isn't compatible.
Author's Response:
I felt bad for making him nice then mean but I had too. Thankfully the baby is much too small to be a donor or partial donor to a grown man like Craig.
Date: Sep 12, 2016 4:30 am Title: Chapter 9
Poor Justin, now it seems that the real hard life begins. I hope Brian can reflect on his action and the whole Kinney family help Justin
Author's Response:
Too bad Justin thinks everything is wonderful with his dad.
Date: Sep 12, 2016 2:55 am Title: Chapter 9
Out of the frying pan, into the FIRE!!! From heaven to HELL, Poor Justin. He is just being tossed out and tossed around from pillar to post. Craig is just as despicable as ever. Wouldn't it be something if Justin really wasn't his son?! I find myself HOPING that is the case. Brian was cruel. I mean, I understand but still.... My heart is breaking and yet it's racing watching all this unfold!
More Soon PLEASE!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
I know, I tried to make Craig as sweet as possible then BAM. LOL. Brian was cruel. I wrote this next chapter rather quickly, hope it doesn't disappoint.
Date: Sep 12, 2016 1:42 am Title: Chapter 9
You were right....
Author's Response:
Sorry.
[Report This]Date: Sep 12, 2016 1:17 am Title: Chapter 9
I feel so bad for Justin he just can't seem to catch a break and now he and Ciaran are in danger from Craig, lying was wrong but he was just doing what he had to do for his baby and now that Brian knows, he has walked into a whole new situation that could end with his life.
Brian really needs to stop acting like such a hypocrite and just own up to the fact that the reason why he hates liars is because he is one.
Can't Wait for The Next Chapter :)
Author's Response:
It seems he is paying for the lying double. Brian is going to take a little work to get over himself. He doesn't like looking like a fool.
Date: Sep 10, 2016 9:27 pm Title: Chapter 8
Well damn
Author's Response:
Sorry
Date: Sep 10, 2016 9:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
Why does Justin have to be this way. God
Date: Sep 10, 2016 1:47 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh my what an intense ending my God!
Author's Response:
Lol, i know. I couldn't help it.
Date: Sep 09, 2016 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
If you were going for shock value, congratulations! Job well done. Seriously though, there is no possible way that Justin’s situation could get any worse. Brian fucking him for the wrong reasons was messed up, but having done it and not allowing Justin to tell the truth could cause irreparable damage.
Author's Response:
I usually don't go for shock value but I do try not to be predictiable. You're going to be so mad with new chapter.
Date: Sep 09, 2016 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
OH Sweet Georgia Brown, this is MESSY!! In a way, I can understand why Justin would beincredibly scared to tell the truth to Brian and the family; he has a lot at stake. But at least he could have warned Brian to some extent of what Ethan and Connor are planning, right? Oh Poor Justin, his house of cards is collapsing FAST and there really isn't any way to stop it.
To top it all off, he and Brian have now done the DIRTY. I certainly didn't see THAT coming yet (and don't think I'm not tickled pink at the pun here). Misconceptions, misinterpretations and misdeeds doesn't even begin to describe all that you are weaving in this tale! I'm so enthralled and invested in this fic, I'm tempted to harass you to write more RIGHT NOW! But I'm willing to be held in suspense until the next AMAZING chapter which will hopefully be soon!
Happy Writing and HUGS, Pam
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
LOL. I told myself I was going to get a new chapter in before the end of weekend. I'm currently got a writers block with Be Good to Him so i'm working on this one while I can. Yes, he could have warned Brian, but were would the fun in that be.